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Posted: 14 years ago
ok......im back............... how can maan do this to geet😡........... poor geet😭........ ridzy, arman, dutta are so nice🤗............... geet cant even show her true feelings about situation............bc tht would make her parent sad...n....she does not want tht.......... It was wrong for maan to call relationship just "friendship"😲 bc they have cross all level of friendship way back......... these is pure selfish😡...... i love how everyone come to rescue geet....when she face nakusha.......thanks for update.....n.....putting up with our stupid poetry😊 ....update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
I HATE MAAN .... how can he do this to her, forget her love her love jst like this ... she should shoot him ....
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Posted: 14 years ago
i read ur all parts.. simply amazing.. but dont understand maan character.. what type of guy he is. i hope naku betray with him.. he deserv it.. do con..
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Posted: 14 years ago
keyama..update is bestest as alwez...please please next time make maan see...how she cries for him in loneliness..please once make maan realize how much it hurts in one sided love..and make him guilty..please please please please please....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Poor geet she still love him but what about maan did he love her or not plzzzzz don't make them away for sooo long buzz am daying to see geet like that plzzzz make maan feel her agine plzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
Here iam again .. lovely update!! .. but still me crying louder!! .. is maan ka kuch karo keyama.. aisa nahi chalega.. 😛 .. koi nai entry karo .. LOL!! .. and jaldi jaldi update karo!!! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey sweets nice update,u know wat ive been crying the whole night,cant see geet suffering antmore,no matter how hard she tries i feel she'll never be able to forget her feelings for maan afterall that shameless,heartless creature was her ist love,i just wanna know are u planning to bring em together again,i want him to suffer double the pain and he shud regeret bad forr his doing but plz plz eventually maaneet shud be together for geet's sake i cant see her pain 😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
Phew just catches up with the updates and I must say here were Awsome an thu way you are handling the situation is really good I mean obviously geet won't recover quickl as she has loved maan but they way she is hanging out with her friends and being happy and composing herself infront of maan and Nakusha is amazin and i know she will need to cry him out and the pain but yeh loving how the track is going and fully trust what way you are going to take the story and for the mean time I'm going to wait for some update 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update ..now its time for maan to cry ........by marrying nakuSHA
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this suits for you maan
but now on this track its geet who sings this
time will come and maan will sing this
TUJHE YAAD NA MERI AYE KISSI SE AB KYA KEHNA DIL ROYAKI AKH BHAR AYE
KISSI SE AB KYA KEHNA
FROM KUCH KUCH HOTA (SAD VERSION) .
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 30


Ridzy Atul and Armaan walks in...
Geet smiles and three sits next to her...
Ridzy: OMG what's wrong with you Armaan?
Armaan: what's wrong with you?
Geet: what happen?
Ridzy whispers something in her ear. She bursts out in laugh.
Ridzy: don't laugh yar!
Armaan throughs a pillow at her.
Geet: umm... I think I can advice on that.
Armaan: you have told her?
Geet: let's go for a drive. My movie is nearly finished.
Atual: but where we going to go?
Geet: umm! Idk! Anywhere.

Geet walked in to her room to get change. She didn't like maan talking to her. She didn't want to be his good friend. She didn't want to see his face.
She took a top and a short out. She stood in front of the mirror. Unwanted tears started to roll down. She promised her self... She won't cry. She will not cry. He doesn't deserve any tears. No defiantly no. She looked way... And made her way downstair....


Maan stood at the side... Nun of them was even bothered to ask him... But Geet did. She didn't want to show him any type of weakness. She acted with him like she always does... But of course with a limit....

Geet: do you want to come with us?
Maan: no it's ok.
Geet: ok... Ce u later.
Armaan and Ridzy looked at her in surprise...

In the car..
Geet: I am ok with him! Don't look at me like that. I have moved on.
Ridzy: I am so happy for you.
Armaan: now she needs a cool BF.
Geet laughs: well do you have any of my type?
Armaan: nop!
Ridzy: can we go to disco to night? I haven't went clubbing for ages...
Geet: yea... Defo...

It's 11 pm... Geets security guards already waiting outside. Looks at dutta... He smiles...

All three , geet ridima and Armaan walks in to the club... It's one of the delis top one. Geet wore a pink short dress. Looking extremely pretty. All three held hands and walked in. It was extremely loud. Ridzy drags both in to the dance floor... all three danced together for a while then...Armaan and Ridzy started to dance together. Geet all alone... He smiles at them sadly...
Then suddenly two hands covers her waist... She was taken back... No man ever touched her except maan... She felt uncomfortable with the touch. He twisted her round. Geets eyes widen as his face was clear with each bright light. She smiles... Bit surprised... It's a Famous business tycoon shive kapoor. (iqubal khan) one of geets friend from Australia.
He takes her hand and rests it round his shoulder. While his hand slides on her slim waist... She was uncomfortable at the beginning then she started to get comfortable'


Shive Kapoor' Famous business tycoon' HOTEST bachelor in town'


Shiv: I don't dance usually... But I couldn't see you dance alone.
Geet laughs: how are you?
Shiv: very good. And you?
Geet: I am good to. What brings you in this dance floor?
Shiv: you of course.
Geet: how sweet.
Shiv: may I kiss your cheek?
Geet smiles: yes...
And he does...

Ridzy looked at her happily... That was doing some progress in her life. It was just amazing that how she was moving on. Controlled.

Shiv: any plan for today?
Geet: why? Are you planning to take me out?
Shiv: I was about to ask that!
Geet laughs... She have no plan to go home. Nakusha is always there with maan and she have no plan to see them again... She always looses her self. She needs to try out with someone els...

Geet was mild drunk... And sneaked out with shiv and went for a long drive...
Shiv: why you so miserable?
Geet: nothing!
Shiv: I hard you and Maan sing khurana not to gather anymore.
Geet: we were never together.
Shiv: I know media doesn't know anything. But you know me for 4 years now.
Geet smiles: he dumped me for nakusha.
Shiv: ouch!
Geet: shut up.
Shiv: I was joking!
Geet: we broke a year ago. I have moved on.
Shiv: is it that's why you still single?
Geet: I have a feeling you staking me.
Shiv: koi shak? Anyone would storks you. Pretty... Sexy... Sweet... And top of it Geet Handa...
Geet bursts out in laugh...
Geet: I like that.

It's 3am...

Shiv drops her to the mansion...
Shiv: when are we meeting next?
Geet: up to you.
Shive: dinner this Friday?
Geet: perfect. I am up for it.
Geet was about to walk off...
Shiv: at least a kiss on the cheek.
Geet smiles and Gives him a kiss on the cheek.


Next: geet working with shiv'

new entry' our HOT IQUBAL KHAn' as SHIV kapoor. he had a cool style' i was fida over that' he had a strong attitude' i just loved it' he is loyal lover' :D

NOTE: i need to rethink some of my dialog for shiv… LOL… so will update a bit later…. Bit info about him… He is a cold type of guy. very reserved. and very loyel… we will get to know more about him soon… I LOVE HIS ATTITUDE.
xxx

Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago

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