[MG] FF~ In Love With Enemy(I) updt new thrd? - Page 83

  hiiii reet😛

thanks for the sweet reply to my comment....infact its u who made me blush now..............😳

u always surpass our expectations with the creativity and narration skill of urs...........👏

i seriously want u to consider writing as a profession...and mark my words ur books will sell as hot cakes.....they will be literally flying off the book shelves................u do have loads of potential...sweety😃

IF ppl shud include some more buttons below each post...

LOVE, DROOL..................😆😆

i am speechless,breathless and basically hyperventilating😆

is it the character sketch, or the plot or the updates, or the writer, or the intensity that makes me blabber lose my senses after reading each explosive update........👏

i guess its the combination of all..........

each and every part of the update had its significance....the continuation was superbbbbbbbb..⭐️

the way u portray both of them completely obsessed with other's thoughts....oblivious to the world around them....makes me visualize each scene of urs.........and thats somethng very difficult for a writer to do...unless the writer is of brilliant calibre..👏

the SLAP, maan getting DRUNK........and then the brief romantic moments😳 shared by them........simply floored me ................

u simply bewitch and keep us enchanted with ur mindnumbing and mesmerising updates......👏

choice of songs is also so beautiful, apt and fabulous with wonderful lyrics.......

the best part of ur FF...so many fantastic  monologues....little talking between them....yet conveying all their emotions, feelings, through their eyes, expressions and  silence...silence is indeed golden...............⭐️

the little part of advice/message tht you gave amidst ur update was simply superbbbbbbbbbbb and apt......

i am literally falling short of words........coz words wont be able to describe the happiness and the feeling of daze that i feel after i read ur updates..........simply mindblowing..........👏

it often surprises me how can someone maintain the same intensity, passion consistently  everytime u write...coz it requires lot of thinking, imagining, efforts, time and energy...

and its always a delight  to see u getting so many wonderful comments from so many readers........... so i read ur updates and the comments given by ur readers.........and that just practically makes my day..........as if its me who is getting all the adulation....

hats off to u👏

and one more thing 

 today i wud really like to thank u  for taking so much pains to give us such delightful, fabulous updates......

i guess i can go  all ga ga over u and ur writing the whole day...

i will spare some space and comments for others...........😆😆

love u and ur ff😛

keep writing

god bless you

reva😃

U compelled me to switch on my pc and write a response coz writing my heart out using my phone seemed to be impossible.😉

Now it is my turn to be at loss, complete loss. Ur response overwhelmed me.😳

Did u seriously miss me, omg'..🤗

What should I say, I don't know''., m 2 happy to voice my feelings.😊

i was being so skeptical while writing my last response, tht hw r going to tk it😕, wht if u felt i was dissatisfied wid ur wrk😭. i just loved ur reponse, dont know hw many tyms did i read it, again n again😳

My exams did go very well, thanks 4 d wishes, wud surely tell u my result when it dawns upon.😆

Must tell u one thing reet, why do become a nervous wreck while putting up an update.😕 I m sure every one out here loves ur FF,  n v r always honest while responding back. U know wen I read it in d beginning tht u r ready for gaalis n stuff, I wonder after finishing, where d hell did u feel tht u r going wrong. Ur FF goes according to ur wish, thts d best part.😃

So stop over exerting n panicking tht u might not be able to meet d raised standards.😆

Coming to tis update, simply superb!!! 👍🏼🤗

Were u lyk awake d whole night spending it on IF'''.😉

 Every single emotion, d monologues every single thing just stood out.❤️

Although my fav was wen u went little out of track and talked abt preciousness of life, can't agree more with anything else.

N yes hw can I 4get LOVE TO SEE U CRY part, it hit me like nothing else.😊

Love to see u cry by Enrique is my fav song(I hate to hear it coz its so painful, beautifully painful. U know thts d thing wid me, running away from emotions coz they affect me really strangely. That's why my life involves 99% fiction, now I sound weird n cynical, nhi'😳)

M desperately waiting 4 d next part n witness more battles with emotions.

Tk care

With luv

Sarita😊