SR FF ~Tum Mile~(PART 26 p144) - Page 4

Originally posted by: RehanSinha_XR

😃Please pm me when you start...😃

no prob😉

Originally posted by: JATINTHAKKAR

Noorya,😊

 

Why are u asking?

Just Do It.😊

Nice VM in B/w.👏👏👏

You tried to Include all the Romantic Moments of Siddhima includig Your Avatar Pic.

But it was just 1:34.😭

thanks a lot Jatin😳

Originally posted by: divi4u

hey Noorya🤗 (think m ryt)😳

neki aur puch puch😉😉

very nice concept 👏👏

plz post d 1st part really soon.....as I m always ready to read SR OS/FF😃😃

cont soon 👍🏼

PM me whn u update plz😃

Originally posted by: monty22

naki aur puch puch .plz  write FF. my   r with u. 

thanks for the wishes dear😳

Originally posted by: Pragzie

Nice concept
and the vm is fab...do pm me when u update =)

thanks a lot😳

Originally posted by: yokosona

waiting to read!!

its comin soon😛

Originally posted by: -DazlingAngel-

Noorya,
love the concept
start it soon
I will definitely going to read this one
do pm me when you update

-Tasheen-

thanks Tasheen😳

So guys😛

PART 1

 

Its morning at sanjeevaani and all the interns are waitin for Dr Kirti for breathing. Sid looks quite upset and his friends notice it.

 

Sue: bro kya hua? Itna upset kyun ho?

Sid: I don't know sue….par mujhe aise lag raha hai ki Dr kirti meri duty uss….uss riddhima ke saath lagaayegi…

Yuvi: kyun?

Sid: coz I hate that girl! Aur Dr kirti yeh baat janti hai

Naina smiles: c'mon sid riddhima didi itni bhi buri nahin hai…

Yuvi: haan sid naina is right…infact she is very nice…

Sid gets annoyed: whats wrong with u guys! Yeh didi…nice…? Tum log mere dost ho ya uss riddhima ki??...(meanwhile Dr comes n all of them stop talking)

Dr kirti: good morning interns….im sorry main toda late hui tho aur time waste naa karne ke liye main sida breathin doungi….so Dr yuvraaj and Dr JP aap dono general ward mein hai…Dr Naina aap aaj ICU mein ek patient ki tests karvaayenge aur usse observe karengi…Dr suvarna and Dr Raj aap dono aaj mujhe assist karenge….and Dr Siddhant aap aaj……Dr Riddhima ko assist karenge…(all the interns look at sid with amusement)

Sid: yes m'am…

Dr kirti: so interns get to work…(n she left…JP walks toward sid with amusement)

JP : arre wah sid bhaya apne tho bilkul sahi kaha tha…….enjoy enjoy…bohut acha din rahega riddhima flowerji ke saath (sid looks at him with anger)

Sid: tu jaa raha hai ya main…..(and jp runs from there and all of them went for their duties)

 

Sid was waitin for riddhima for 20mins now but she was still not there so he decides to go in her cabin. He knocks at the door and enters. Riddhima looks up and findin sid she comes to her chudail mood

 

Ridz: tum?...kuch chahiye?

Sid: shayad aap bhool rahi hai ki main yahan ek intern hoon aur mujhe kuch kam diya gaaya hai…tho agar apka break khatam hua hai tho hum kam pe lag sakte hain? (ridz takes few steps toward him)

Ridz: kyun tumhe aur koi kam nahin hai kya? Jo mere peeche hi pade ho

Sid: ya right…tum naa din mein sapne dekhna band karo…..Dr kirti ne meri duty tumhari saath lagvaayi hai

Ridz: oooo aisi baat hai…tho phir pehle bolna chahiye tha naa…..yeh lo (givin him some files) yeh files incomplete hai….blood test karva ke saare files ko complete karo (sid took the files n leave from there with anger) have fun….

 

 

Sid was doin the blood tests n completin the files and about after one hour ridz join him. She started checkin the files sid finished n he was curious to know what she was writtin so without lookin at what he was doin he suddenly cuts his hand n it starts bleedin.

 

Sid: ouch! (ridz looks up to see sid hand covered with blood. She just panicked holdin his hand)

Ridz: siddhant tum….(she was completely shocked n didn't knew what to do at the moment so without thinking she wanted to tear up her duppata but sid stopped her)

Sid: rukho….(ridz looks up at him) yeh karna zaroori nahin hai….ek ladki ke liye uski duppata kitne maayne rakhta hai mujhse ziada tumhe pata hoga naa…..isse samhal ke rakho mere liye pharne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai…(ridz just realize what she wanted to do) aur vaise bhi…hum ek hospital mein hai aur yahan kafi cheezein hai iss chot ko treat karne ke liye (sayin this he wanted to leave but ridz stoped him)

Ridz: siddhant plzz….mujhe bandage karne do

Sid: its ok…main khud kar lounga

Ridz: siddhant dekho chot kafi gehri hai aur agar abhi bandage nahin kiya tho infection bhi ho sakta hai…..plzzz

 

Sid noticed ridz concern n agrees. Ridz rushes to the cupboard n took the first aid box n sits beside sid heelin his wound. Sid was lookin here n there but his eyes stopped on riddhima who was heelin his wound…

 

Sid to himself: kitni ajeeb ladki hai yeh…mujhse itna nafraat karti hai aur apna duppatta pharne chali thi…..aur doctor ho ke yeh chot dekh kar itna daar gaayi…(ridz bend n blow a lil bit on his hand n sid felt something in his heart n stared at her)…vaise…yeh itni bhi buri nahin hai…gussa nak pe hai aur chudail ki tarah chilati rehti hai…..par kabhi kabhi normal bhi baan sakti hai….aur dikhne mein bhi……(he comes back to his sense) Dude! Whats wrong with u? tu yeh kya bol raha hai…aur voh bhi iss riddhima ke bare mein…(ridz looks up at him after the bandage was done)

Ridz: ziada dard tho nahin ho raha hai?

Sid: heum…nahin…thanks (n he stood up n went back to his work. He was not able to write anymore due to his wound so was struggling with his pen)

Ridz: file mujhe do…main likhti hoon

Sid: no thanks main khud kar dounga

Ridz: sid tumhare haath mein chot aayi hai…likhna tho door tum pen theek se nahin pakad sakte…..

Sid: maine kaha naa…main khud manage kar lounge (n he starts writin again but it was hurtin him…so ridz took the file from his hand angrily)

Ridz: Dr siddhant…aap yahan ek intern hai….so plzz behave like a responsible intern…aise bachon ki tarah kyun behave kar rahe ho?

 

The word "bacha" starts ringin in his ears….he remembered when Tamana said he was a kid and he angrily looks at riddhima…ridz felt a sudden fear lookin into sid's angry eyes…sid slowly took few steps toward her n ridz was not able to move that surprised n scared she was.

 

Sid: aaj phirse kaha…par yaad rahe dobara galati se bhi mujhe bache kehne ki himmat mat karna…varna main bhool jaounga ki tum ek senior doctor ho…isse ek warnin samjho ya ek advise I don't care…lekin mere baat pe ghore zaroor karma…

Sayin this he left the cabin n ridz was surprised n confused. She wanted to know why a simple word could boil his blood and make him sooo angry…

Sid was sittin in the locker room holdin the ghanpatti tamana gave him before leavin…

 

Sid: aaj phirse uss riddhima ne mujhe bacha bulaaya...jaise tumne mujhe bulaya tha…main jitna bhi koshish karta hoon tumhe aur tumhare baton ko bhoolane ki par humesha koi mujhse kuch aisa kehta hai jo mujhe tumhare bare mein sochne pe majboor karta hai……main tumse mila hi kyun tamana?

Naa tum kabhi meri life mein aati…naa aaj main aisa hota…har choti baat par gussa karta rehta hoon kyunki tumhari yaad aati hai…tum tho chali gaayi par…yeh saare yaadein chor ke gaayi…kyun?...kyun tamana?...(a tear runs on his cheek n he covers his face with his hands….he felt a warm hand on his shoulder n looks up to find naina)

 

Naina: kya hua sid?

Sid wipes his tear: kuch nahin…voh bas…

Naina: tamana ki yaad aa rahi thi ? (sid stood up n went to his locker)

Sid: nahin naina…aisi koi baat nahin hai main bas shirt badalne aaya tha…

Naina: sid mujhse jooth bolne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai….yeh bhoolo mat ki main janti hoon ki tum tamana se kitna pyaar karte the…aur tumhare chehre se saaf dikhta hai ki tum ussi ki bare mein soch rahe the…(ridz was searchin for sid to apologize n stopped at the entry of the locker room hearin him talking with naina)

Sid: main uske bare soch nahin raha hoon naina…main sochna hi nahin chahta…..lekin humesha voh riddhima kuch aisa bolti hai jo mujhe uske bare soch ne pe majboor karta hai!

Naina: par sid tum riddhima didi ko tho blame nahin kar sakte naa….i mean voh tamana ke bare mein kuch janti bhi nahin hai…(ridz gets confused by tamana's name)

Ridz to herself: tamana?...siddhant iss naam ko lekar itna pareshan hai? Par yeh hai kaun?

Sid: naina plzz mujhe iske bare mein baat nahin karni…lets just forget it

Naina: ok fine baba….ab chalo apni shirt badal lo aur lunch pe chalte hain…(sid smiles n nod ridz saw him enterin the changing room so she enters in locker room)

Ridz: naina…

Naina: hi didi

Ridz smiles: naina…kya main tumse ek baat pooch sakti hoon?

Naina: of course didi poochiye naa…

Ridz: voh actually main siddhant ko dhoond rahi thi…aur galati se tum dono ki baat sun li…yeh tamana kaun hai??

Sid: tumse matlab? (both ridz n naina turns to sid direction n he came toward them) tumhari apni koi life nahin hai kya jo humesha doosron ki life mein interfer karti rehti ho?

Naina : sid plzz riddhima didi sirf tamana ke bare mein pooch rahi thi

Sid: kyun dude?...kyun jaan na chahti hai? Naa hi voh yahan ki patient hai aur naa hi isko jaan ne ki koi zaroorat (lookin at ridz) shayad tumse kisi ne kaha nahin hai ki har kisi ki life mein interfer karna achi baat nahin hai…

Ridz: siddhant main sirf….

Sid: humari baatein sun rahi thi naa?...let me make one thing very clear…meri life mein interfer mat karo…got it?.....chalo naina ( he left from there n naina looks at ridz then follows sid).

The break was over and everyone get back to work exept Sid…he didn't want to work with riddhima so he was walkin in the corridors of sanjeevaani and dr kirti saw him from her cabin. She comes out and calls him.

 

Dr kirti: Dr Siddhant…(sid stops on his track feelin caught n turns to face her) aap yahan kya kar rahe hain? Apki duty khatam hui hai?

Sid: no m'am…main bas…(dr kirti notices sid's injury)

Dr kirti: aur yeh apke haath ko kya hua hai?

Sid: kuch…kuch nahin yeh…

Dr kirti: Dr Siddhant mere cabin mein chaliye…(they enter her cabin) dekhiye Dr siddhant…main janti hoon ki aap aur Dr riddhima ek doosre ko ziada pasand nahin karte aur naa hi main aap dono ko force kar sakti hoon…aur main yeh bhi janti hoon ki Dr tamana ki jaane se aap bohut ziada affect hue hain (sid looks at her surprised) Dr siddhant aap ek doctor hain lekin aap ek insaan bhi hain jiska ek dil aur feelings hain. Par jab hume dard milta hain uska matlab yeh nahin ki hum zindagi se har jaaye aur apna career barbad kare…..aap ek bohut hi kabil doctor hain lekin apne iss behaviour se aap apni life destroy kar rahe hain siddhant aur bhool jaate hain ki Dr riddhima yahan ki senior doctor hain……aap riddhima ko bilkul pasand nahin karte kyunki voh humesha gusse mein hai…main janti hoon uss gusse ki waje…par kya apne yeh jaan ne ki koshish ki hai ki voh kyun aisi hai?...

Sid: voh baat kare tab hi kuch jaan sakunga naa…lekin Dr riddhima ko sirf apna gussa dikhana aata hai…

Dr kirti smiles: Dr siddhant apko nahin lagta ki aap aur Dr riddhima kafi ek jaise hain? (sid looks at her confused) Aap dono ka gussa…nafraat…bachpaana bilkul ek jaisa hai….main doctor riddhima ko janti hoon aur yeh keh sakti hoon ki voh ek bohut ache insaan hai aur dil ke bohut saaf hai…par halaaton ki waje se voh badal gaayi hai….usne apni iss choti umar mein bohut kuch saha hai….Dr siddhant main apse ek request karna chahti hoon….main chahti hoon ki aap Dr riddhima ke saath theek se baat kare unse normal behave kare….dost ki tarah naa sahi par ek colleague ki tarah…apne senior doctor ki tarah unse baat kar sakte hain naa…….yeh mat sochiye ki yeh ek order ya ek duty hai…par main yeh apse request karti hoon…(sid looks at her)

Sid: theek hai m'am…agar mere behaviour se kuch bhi badal sakta hai tho main try karunga…lekin main apse vaada nahin kar sakta ki sab normal ho jaayega….

Dr kirti smiles: thank u Dr siddhant…..now go back to ur work

Sid smiles back: yes m'am…

 

Sid left the cabin but he was lost in his convo with doctor kirti about riddhima's behaviour. Not lookin in front he did not noticed riddhima comin to his direction busy reading her file n in hury. Suddenly she bump on him her file falls n she lost balance but sid hold her. Riddhima was lookin at him surprised but sid was lost in her eyes unknowingly tightening his grip on her waist….riddhima feels his touch n tries to stand up properly. Sid comes back to his sense n looks away feelin akward…

 

Ridz: tum….tum dekh ke nahin chal sakte kya? (sid looks at her surprised)...bhagvaan ne aankhein di hai tho unka istemaal karo…niche kya dhoond rahe the?

Sid: tum….(he wanted to reply back but remembered his convo with dr kirti n controls himself) im…..im sorry…(ridz get shocked hearin this)

Ridz: what….?

Sid: ab galati meri thi…tho sorry bhi main hi bolounga naa….

Sayin this he left and ridz is completely shoched n confused with his behaviour…Dr kirti saw everythin n was quite happy with Sid…she did the same thig with ridz…called her in her cabin told her about Sid n requested her to behave normaly with him n ridz agrees.

 

Both sid n ridz were lost thinking about each other…tryin to understand what must have happened in their lifes that both are soo alike….

 

 

I seriously hope it was not

too borin😆...

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First to comment! Yaaay! :))

Okay, so first of all I'd just like to point out that everybody was so in character. I don't know how else to define it, but while I was reading your FF, I could imagine the characters saying the exact same thing in my head. It was scary, but I liked it! :D It was like the chapter got turned into an episode.

Anyhow, away from my blabbing, I'd like to say that this is a brilliant FF. I really wanna know what happens next. I really, really, really wanna know! :)

I can't wait for Siddhima interaction, but I'm a little disappointed. Their fights and their nok-jhoks really entertained me, but oh well. Guess I'll have to settle for your way since I like this FF too much! :]

Update soon! And thanks for the PM! :) I'll be looking forward to those. Ahaha! I sound so damn formal! :D
Edited by xxdevilishxx - 13 years ago

HEY Nooriya !