mayur ss (part-4 pag:-6)

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mayur ss

Concept :

Nupur(anamika) is in shimla..doing a job in khandelwal  industries..she stay's i n flat with her dahgther gul

Nupur dsn't know  about her past..after the accident her memory is lost ..now she is known as anamika

 only..on on know who is the person brougth nupur here except roshnin's mom some how nupur goes to mumbia meets myank,samrat&gunjan..lets see wat wil happen

INDEX:

 part 1-pg no. 1

part 2-pg no. 3

part 3-pg no. 4

part 4-pg no.6

Part 1

 

After 3 years..

Mumbai

Mayank standing in front of nups photos with garland..

Mayank:nupur kah tum yahna hoti toh zindagi kitni kubsurat lagti..pata nhai kyun mujhe aisa lagata ki tum ek na ek mere paas zarror aao gi..( maynak eyes were filled with tears..)

On other place gunjan is sitting with nupus photo I her hand..

Gunjan:di  main aap ko bahut miss kar rahi hoon..mujhe pata hai ki aap sirf is duniya ki liye maar cuke ho par  mere liye aur maynak ki liye nahi..

On other hand .samrat in his thoughts

Samrat:wagt kais badal jata hai ..kabhi humery zindagi main bhi kushiye hoti thi jab nupur thi ..par ab aise laga rha hai ki kushon se  hum bahut durr chaley  gaye hai..

 

Nd now the story begins..

Shimla.

A cold morning..

A girl enter the mansion  with a baby girl and greets an old man(raj khandelwal)

G:namstey papa kasie ho aap??

P:mian thik hoon beta ..bus office ke ;liye nikal raha tha

G:papa..main aap se kitni baar kaha ab aap office jana band kar dijey par aap hai ki mere baat suntey hi nahi hai

P:par beta kaam bhi..

G:par war kauch nahi aap nhai jaa rhey hai bas..

P:thik hai beta par kal se nah jaoonga aaj tho jaaney do..

G:thik hai par sirf aaj ek din hi..

The old man smiles a left for the office..

An old lady (kamini khandelwal) ..and called her..

Maa:aarey anamika..

Anamika: namestey maa..

The old lady take the baby girl.

Mumbai

Shregill mansion:

Sm(samrat's mom)on phone :haan haan main aaj hi shimal pahu jaoongi tum fikar mat karo..aur tum uska kahyal rakhti ho na..main usey kisi bhi pareshaani main dekh chati hoon..aur haan do din ki baad main usey mubai laney wali hoon taki who fir se aapni zindagi jiye..main nahi chati ki meri wajha se uske zindaigi kahraab hoo..

As smart enter the room..

Sm:acha main tumse baad main baat kati hoon..samrat aa raha hai..'

Samrat:mom aap kahi jaa rahi hoo?

Sm:haan beti aaj hi shimal jaa rahi hoon do din ki baad aa jongi..jab tak tum excel samhalena..

S:thik hia..mom..

Back to shimla:

Anamika:aur roshini kahna hai??

Maa:who ..woh abhi tak soo rahi hai..

Ana:thik hai main abhi use mail kara ati hoon

a: hmm.rosh ab utho bhi jaoo

anamika goes near the bed..

a:roshni!!!!!uthoo subha ho gayi hai aur tum bahi tak so rahi hoo..

Rosh:di subha sab ki liye hui hugi par mere liye nahi(in sleepy tone)

a:rosh..Utho'.

Rosh gets up..

Rosh ..:uth gayi uth gayi..

Rosh:par mujhe aaur sona hai di..

a:rosh tum kabhi nahi sudharey wali..

Rosh:who toh mujhe pata hai(smiling)

a:rosh tujhe koi nahi sudhar sakta hai..

Roosh:hmm haan koi nahi sudhar sakta hai'.par ek insaan ki siwa..

a:who kon??

Rosh goes nd hugs girl from behind..

Rosh :uss insaan ka naam hai anamika yani meri payri se di '

A:acha acha ab bahut hoga.ab is paayir se di ke baat mano aur . jao aur fresh ho jao..

Rosh:thik hia..

Rosh was  was abot to go..

Rosh:wasie di..

A:haan??

R:gul  kahna hai..

A:who maa ki paas hai'.

R:di aaj hum gul ko bahar le kar jatey hai

Anamika:nahi rosh aaj mujhe kuch office ka kaam pura krana hia

R:offho!! Di aaj toh aapka holiday hai..aap holiday ki din bhi office ka kaam not fair

A:par rosh..kaam bhi toh bahtu important hai na..

R:mian kuch nhai suna chati aap chal rhaey hia bas..

A:thik hai .. tum jadli se fresh ho kar aao tho hi hum gul ko bahar le ja saktey hai..

R:yes!! Thaks di thanks

R goes to bath room..

Nups goes down satirs..

Nups:maa cahlo break fast kar liya aapne

Maa: nahi beta

Rosh comes down..

A:chlo ab kae ligey

They finish they (maa& roshh)bf..anmika wsa busy with gul because she was crying

They goes out..

Park..:

Nups&rosh were playing with gul..

Jus they a girl comes..

Girl..:hi rosh..hi anamika di..kasie ho aap log..aur gul kase  hai??

Roshini& anamika:hi kuhsboo

(Kuhbo:khusboo is best frnd of roshini ..anamika&rosh &gul all girls have fun every day togther)

Rosh:aur gul bhi thik hai..

they have fun..

Nd its about 3o' clock  ..

Anamika:chalo ab hum chaltey hai luch bhi karna hai aur maa bhi intezzar kar rahi hogi..

Rosh: haan chalo mujhe bhi bahut bhook  lag rahi hia..

srry for the mistakes..

plz do comment..

Edited by angel.samee - 13 years ago

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