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Riti

@-Reeti-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#71

Hey Rajita...Wots Up Babes...??
chalo this was a great one....but...u know....wanna tell u that...the character Of Naina in this fiction of urs...is very much similar to me..actually...I also do the same like..i dun wanna tell any lie to mah parents...but i tell her..wot m gonna do..and....who else r gonna be wid me..😊 😊..and also m very confused..about..this guys..chakkar...😆 😆 Well sorry..that..m telling..sumthn about me..in ur fiction...but just i felt it..so told it..dun mind babes...and..yup the part where...she is telling that how do u knw..that m callin u up..it was awesome....man....👏 👏 LOL....U do write good.......i mean very very good...it was a very nice update.....and..yaa.....About Raj...plzz..increase about Raj's character..u write more about raj na...😉 😉

okay baby....Take Good care of ur self..........Do update soon....😃😛😃😛

With Love Ritzi...😛

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#72

lovely, nice update. too good.
continue soon.thanks for the pm dear.......

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arwa

@awaazilicious

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Posted: 15 years ago

#73

Hey Rajita gr8 fic you've got here. Luved both ur parts and interesting story.

sorry I wont be able to keep the long elongated comments like u as im only good at writing stories. hehehehe but seriously good work and hope to read more soon.

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 15 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: sweet.dreamz

Hiii Nisha diii....yup i had to visit ur profile u work out wat to call u...hehehe😆😆😆

Thanx....i am soooo happy to know u like the way i write and find it refreshing....

The proposals are always sooo romantic...😳😳😳....i always find the prop most interesting in anyone's love story......😃😃😃

Yup, i'll continue soon....

And yes, i have sent u a buddy request....plzz accept it...

Bye...tc

Rajita....

Hey dear

It is so sweet of you to take the pains to find out my name.😊

And i have accepted your buddy request...Thanks!!

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362035

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Posted: 15 years ago

#75

awesoooooooome.....
superb......
fantabulous.......
lovely UD........
thanx for the pm........

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#76

Hi Rajita

Loved the update...its too good. 👏

What i love about your writing is that it sounds just like the way my thoughts do in my mind. wish i could also write so easily. Love the ease in your writing. 👏👏

Coming to the update....Ab naina madam ne bhav toh kha liya😉 but now she is regreting it.😆 She wants to tell Raj aas soon as possible that her answer is a Big YES....how could it be anything else.😳

Khud toh sooyi nahi aur Pooja ko bhi sone nahi diya. Par naina ki reasoning thi bhi sahi yeh sab Pooja ki wajah se hi toh ho raha tha...akhir Raj pooja ka bhai hai😉

But when she calls Raj in the morning all her rehearsals are forgotten and she starts to fumble. Sensing her nervousness Raj changes the topic. He wants to spend time with her.....and how could naina refuse to such a perfect idea.😳

Naina ne accha funda use kiya apni mom ko saari batein batayi bhi nahi aur jooth bhi nahi kaha....she is smart indeed.😉

Waiting to know about Raj and naina's first date with pooja to give them company.😉

please continue soon and thanks for the PM

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#77

hiii dear.....awesome work again😊😊😊

i really love the way you write...sooo simple yet soo beautiful...

naina sach mein bhut brave hai yaar...i mean raj...i mean RAJ ne usse propose kiya hai yaar.....to usne haan kehne ke liye ek din..poora ek din control kar liya😲😲😲😲 maine hoti to ek second bhi wait nahin kar paati😆😆😆...sach mein bhut bhaav kha rahi hai.....

and the phone call scene was amazing👏👏👏naina ne sach kaha kabhi bhi pehle se decide mat karo ki kya kehna hai waqt aane par sab pe tsunami fir jaayegi😆😆😆😆just let it flow....but raj is toooooooooooo cute usne naina ke kuch na bol paae par khud bolna shuru kar diya...really he is a sweetheart😳😳😳😳

haaye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!kaash mujhe bhi koi aisa padhaane waala milta😉😉😉😉vaise koi bhi nahin chalta sirf raj hi hona chahiye😳😳😳😳uski jagah koi nahin le sakta😳😳😳

to ab naina saj savar ke raj se milne ja rahi hai😉😉😉i m sure raj bhi usse dekh kr hairaan hoga....kyunki naina ki mom ki baaton se to aisa lagta hai naina pehle zyada sajne savarnemein kanjoos thi to zaahir si baat hai raj ne bhi usse nahin dekha hoga iss tarah se....

waiting for the next update..plzzzzz update soooon and thanks for pm😊😊

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Prerna

@prerna1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#78

that was really good
plz continue soon

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 15 years ago

#79

AWESOME....👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

naina ki raton ki neend haram ho chuki hai...raj k bare me soch soch kar...ha ha ha...!!! ab raj ne propose kiya hai toh naina ki neend toh udegi hi na...😛 😛 😛

naina subah raj ko fone karti hai...par jo bolna chahti thi vohi bol nahi payi...!!! kambakhat ishq.... ha ha ha😆 😆 😆

ab raj naina ko ghumane le ja raha hai toh sath me pooja bhi hai...!!! ab raj ko is consolation prize ki jarurat toh thi nahi...phir bhi use zabardasti mil gaya...!!! bichara raj...😆 😆 😆

waiting for d next one...😃 😃 😃

Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago

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388456

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Posted: 15 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Kool_Naina
Hii Rajita😊 Hello Naina dii...😃😃😃😃
1st one to comment😆.. i must say that was pretty quick...hehehe...but i am sorry for replying so late....i guess i already told u the reason....
nice part but its too short😔 Dii, i suddenly realized i shud be posting shorter part warna...once wat i have written gets exhausted, then i am scared the fic may bcome monthly.......😆😆😆
plz post next part long 😊.. ok, i think this time it is getting slightly delayed...so maybe a longer part next time...😉😉😉😉
but update is superb, mind-lowing, awesome, beautifull, lovely i m out of words
ur writing skill has ease n smoothness👏.... dii, i am a very lazy comfort loving person....so i write watever comes to my mind in a flow....maybe thats why its smooth...😆😆😆😆
Now naina is impatient to tell raj that her answer is yes😆 i knew it the moment she asked him to wait...how can anyone make Rajveer wait for a yes....goodness, naina has guts😛😛😆😆😆....
she n pooja rehearse till 4 😆but wen naina call raj she get out of words(lyk me😆) n become self-conscious😳.. ..U see she is shying from Raj...hehehe....or maybe toooo mesmerized by him...😆😆😆😆
raj ask her out n she said ok but aap pooja ko bhi bata dena 😆
aur tumahara beech -2 mein off-track ho jana its look cute n funny in story😊... my papa says i can never talk abt the topic...i have to go 'off-track'....maybe i've put a li'l bit of me in Naina.....😆😆😆😆
wait for next part😃
do cont soon aur is baar jaldi update karna😉.. oops...sorry, iss baar thoda sa delay ho jayega...bcos, i am stuck wid my collg admissions plus i am not at my home...i am at my cousin's place...

Love
Naina😊🤗
Love u too dii... bye....