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Posted: 15 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: rituka7

great part
but it was too short
i was expecting a long update
u update after such long tym
but never mind
update was superb
update next part asap

Hey Rituka....
sorry yaar, i didn't realize it was TOO short...hehe...i thot it was comparatively shorter๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†.....
Sorry, dear but i am a li'l stuck at this time...with my collg admissions...i'll try to update asap...
Thanx anyways for liking the part....
Bye....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
Thanx...dear...!!!...great to know u liked it...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
pleaseeeeeeeeeee write the next part as soon as possible,,,,,,,we can't wait any more.......๐Ÿ˜”
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
Hiiiii Rajita...
I am soooo sorry for commenting so late
Lovely n sooooo sweet part ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
Naina ko restless dekhke her mother is thinking becuase she has no work ...ab unhe pata nahin hain ki asli reason kya hain
Naina ki haal dekhkhe mujhe badhi hasi aayi ...bechari kitne mushkil se apne aap ko roka raj ko phone karne se ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†..ab uska bhi koi dosh nahin hain ...akhir raj ne use propse kiya...to its natural ..ye naina to pooja ko bhi sone nahin diya ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†..pooja is really a sweet friend..ye donon en MTNlL ka free connection ka accha fayda utaya ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
Itni reharsal ki naina ne aur wo bhi aadhi raat ko ..aur sab bhulgayi when she called ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
Finally naina madam raj ke saath ghumne jaarahi hain ..aur wo bhi bahut sajdhaj ke
Loved the whole update yaar ..please continue soon
Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
NOTE
I know it hasn't been more than two updates but i am here with a note basically to apologize for the delay....hehehe๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†.....Guys, i am really sorry for not being able to either update or reply to yr comments....trust me, i'll do it both....its just that as of now i am big time stuck....my college admissions began from 22nd June....so, i have got to wait in queues longer than all the queues added together in my entire lifetime of 17 yrs.....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†....and trust me its tiring....then i have to get admitted to a hostel also since my father is posted to Assam....and then i am even waiting for the 2nd cut off list hoping it gets me to as better college as can be....๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›....you know wat the day i got my results i was in a train for a vacation....i checked my result on my cell...and myself and my sis were jumping as if i have topped the country....[i have topped my stream nevertheless..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†.]....but at the time of admissions i feel.. if only i would have studied a bit more....its killing....i've a best of four of 95% and still a college refused me admission in its hostel....wow...๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก.....its sooooo frustrating..๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ..Thanx for the Army women's hostel...it has given me a residence but can u beat it, it doesn't even allow laptops....i'll have to beg them to let me have one...... nevertheless, i hope they do allow me to take my lappy along...but by chance...i hope that chance never comes...if i am not allowed lappy in the hostel..๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ.. i'll be winding up the story....it won't be as i had wanted it to be....but i'll make sure i'll write it in a way that it seems like a extra long one shot....i don't want to leave it incomplete....its too dear to me....๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
Maybe the fic is destined to be a micro mini fic....hehehe....just hope its not!!!!....
Waise...i am sooo scared...i've never been without family....and then they'll be soo far....its killing me already.....
PS: do let me know that u have read the note either by leaving a comment or by clicking the like button....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86

oh myyyyy god dear..this note has made me sooooooo sad๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ....i mean this was the last thing i hd expected๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ....such a beautiful story should not be a small fic๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ......but u r right that something is better than nothing....i just don't know what to say....this is soooooooooooo bad.....and then u living in a hostel is tooo frustrating in itself๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข...i can understand ur situation........but i still hope that they'll allow u to take the laptop with u....but i know the chances are negligible considering that it is an army hostel๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ........

plzzzzzzzzzzzz reply sooooon and that too with a good news....

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Posted: 15 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Hi Rajita !!! Hello Mana diii....how r u ????

And u can call me mana ! ๐Ÿ˜›
Diii sun ke mujhe bahot badiiiiiiiiii hone ka ehsaas hota hai yaar ! ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† hehehe....no u r my sweet Mana 'dii' only....u see as i said no partiality...hehehe....dii, ek time tha jab ladkiyon ka famous dialogue tha 'Aunty mat kaho na'......generation badal gayi hai...now its 'didi mat kaho naa...'....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
And the upate was amaziiinnnggg !!! ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ No other word ! thank you...hehehe....waise sachi mein acha tha na...ya bachi ka mann rakhne ke liye consolation prize de rahe ho....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†....just kidding...
you what is the best thing i like in ur writing???
THE EASE.... !!! hehe...dids thats bcos i am a very easy, lazy female....i write wat comes to my mind....par pata hai...its a problem....wenever i am engaged ya busy and uss time par 15mins free milta hai and i feel ki main abhi thodi story continue karu, then i am not able to do it.....the flow just doesn't come....thats why its been a week since i wrote anything......due to these stupid collg admissions...
I can imagine what probs u might be havn while writing..๐Ÿ˜› But while reading its just like a stream...flowing freely !๐Ÿ˜ƒ... hehe...koi problem nahi hoti...hehehe....mazza aata hai....u know to think abt rajveer๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰.....complications jahaan bhi jyada hote hai wahaan se main kalti maar leti hoon....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
As if you conversing with us....
and the way you go " off-track" in midst is just soooo cuteeeee !!๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›... hehehe....its my pagal stupid mann...hehehe which is highly restless....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Ab bahot hogayi tumhari taarif ๐Ÿ˜› ab UD pe aate hai... ok ok...focussing back on the target...not that i mind the li'l diversion above at all...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
jo ki tumhe pata hai superb, outstanding, fantastic, mindblowing tha !
No Raj has asked her out....but Pooja is wid them too ! ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
Dekhte hai ....aage kya hota hai... kuch kuch hota hai!!!....oh god damn pata nahi why i wrote that....i think it rhymed...hahaTongueTongue๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
AND yaa.... Plzzzzzzzzz work on the " QUICKER " part ...๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†.. oops, sorry....iss baar toh bahut jyada late ho gayi....dii, i did leave a note on pg-11....i hope u read it!!!....u'll know galti meri nahi thi...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Luv,
mana๐Ÿ˜Š
love u toooo...
bye...

Edited by sweet.dreamz - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

hey Rajita
How are you?
Hii Sur...i am doing good....just that its a hectic week going on....i think i was better off in my school...college admissions are difficult and tiring..phew๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
yeah, the ud was shorter but not that short.. Thank god it was reasonable and not that short...hehehe...we think alike..lollzzz๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
and it was rocking!
fantastic you know... hehehe...thanx...not that i knew but now that u r telling me i am ready to believe...hehehe๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Naina is such an adorable teenager...its really nice to see that her love turned out to be forever...the whole fic is written beautifully u know, very entertaining.. I'll tell Naina that u complimented her...hehehe.๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›......thanx that u liked the fic....
naina and pooja like all of us talkative girls are making full use of their free connections...even I talk to my best friend an awful lot when she falls for a guy...and thats very often ;).. arre i have this connection.,...thats why i wrote it that ways...u know none of my friends call me...my phone has more missed calls than received calls...infact ek point par toh even the other connection friends jinka free nahi padta tha, then began giving me missed calls so that i can call back....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†... even i am really interested in my friends love story....i just love my friends' love story...!!!....hehehe
Rajveer is really smart covering up for her like that. And Naina is smart too, telling her parents that some badaa is going with her...lol... Same level of intellect u see...tailor made for each other...hehehe
anyways, very nice update
post the next part soon
Sur.. Bye, and thanx again....b/w sorry for the delay...and do read the note on pg-11.,....

Edited by sweet.dreamz - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Rajita Hiiiiii Suhanaaa diiidiiiiiiii....hehehe๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†!!!!

How r u???
Update was amazing... thanxxxxxxx ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ.....if my critic found it amazing then i'm ready to believe its gud....nevertheless my critic is not at all critical....she is full of compliments...hehehe๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†....
Naina has really lost her sleep n this is not very gud..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰.I mean one shud atleast sleep well so that they can dream abt their loved one..Wat do u say??๐Ÿ˜‰ Done....Message will be relayed to Mrs Shekhawat....to sleep a li'l more so that she can dream abt her dear husband....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†....but if that is the case, trust me Naina will be sleeping all day long....Rajveer can be pretty intoxicating....!!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
she was taking suggestions from her friend Pooja but when she actually called Raj everything was blank...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† I can very well imagine her state..๐Ÿ˜ณ
Raj is so excited to meet her..But Pooja will always hang out with them..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰ haha....ek ke saath ek free....God bless Raj....how is he gonna handle two females...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†....woh baat alag hai ek toh usse dekhte hi blank ho jati hai...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Naina is already to meet her first love who ends up as her last love....hehehe...
"What are you doing the rest of your life?
North and south and east and west of your life?
I have only one request of your life --
that you spend it all with me.

All the seasons and the times of your days,
All the nickels and the dimes of your days;
Let the reasons and the rhymes of your days
all begin and end with me.

I want to see your face in every kind of light,
In fields of dawn, and forests of the night;
And when you stand before the candles on a cake,
Oh, let me be the one to hear the silent wish you make.

Those tomorrows waiting deep in your eyes,
In the world of love you keep in your eyes,
I'll awaken what's asleep in your eyes --
(it may take a kiss or two).
I soooo love this stanza.....and the above two lines.....i think your poems are one of the reasons i write....i love u for such amazingly romantic lines....
Through all of my life,
Summer, winter, spring and fall of my life,
All I ever will recall of my life
is all of my life ...
with you.๐Ÿ˜Š

It was sooooooooooo beautiful....SmileSmileSmileSmile....
I am waiting to read abt their first date along with Pooja..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰ yaa its going to be soon dii....i don't have much time left wid me....i have to shift...so i'll wind up earlier than that....maybe by 7th july or soo...!!!
Bye bye bye diii
love
Rajita...

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Posted: 15 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: FULTUSI

ohhhh it was an awesome part,can't wait for the next update....plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon.....

Hey Thanx....i am glad u liked it...b/w i am sorry i am making u wait soo long for the next update...!!!! i'll update soon....

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