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Posted: 15 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hey hi dear,
though u didn't add me in ur pm list but still i am here to give my views on your fic because of Suhana and my fav Raj n Naina.
Nice start.
Cute se story hai with lovely people in them, Naina likes Rajveer in her early teenage and so as Raj i think but he was just waiting for right time to propose her n yes he did it with the help of his sister Pooja.
I think no one can say "No" to rajveer na?
update soon

Hello Vertika diii....how r u???
Its soooo wonderful to see u here....😃😃😃...
I am sorry....i'll add u immediately....actually Suhana dii was sending out the PMs since till now i had none on my friend list....so she being a wonderful dii was doing it for me....😊😊
Thanx ....Rajveer naina are lovely people....and i am glad story cute se hai...hehehe😃😃😃......Siblings are soo important in one's love life...hehehe....Pooja is truly special😆😆😆.....yes...even i don't think anyone can say no to Rajveer....atleast i don't have the heart....hehehehe..
yes, i'll update soon...and PM u this time...
Bye..
Rajita....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
PART-2
I remember how restless was I for the rest of the evening...... my mother commented that it was because I was suddenly jobless as I would always be studying at this time of the day.......how was she to know what a hurricane task had I on hand.......Well, it took her almost 4 years to know the real reason for my restlessness.....hahaha.....😛😛😆😆😆😆.....
I tossed and turned on my bed the whole night.....waiting for the next day to come....as for the answer it was decided as soon as the fact sunk in....that Rajveer....i mean RAAAJVEEER had actually proposed me!!!!.... and oops I forgot to mention the reason for my restlessness....well, throughout the evening my hand itched so much to simply pick up the phone and tell him......Its a yes...yes and a YES!!!!......damn main sirf bhaav kha rahi thi.... I love YOUUUUUU!!!!!.....😃😃😃😃😃😃.....but then I had told him I would answer him at the earliest and earliest definitely doesn't mean the same as Immediately.....😳😳😳😳
So not to sound desperate....i had to keep up with yet another sleepless night, that night.....and from then on my nights have mostly being sleepless.😳😳....and before you extract another meaning out of it....let me clarify each night has held a different emotion.....😉😉😉😉😆😆😆😆

There were nights when I smiled as my thoughts revolved around his sweet actions, then there were nights when I would dream of our honeyed future....even those when I had been angry over an argument.....which I knew he would have let go as soon as it was over.... and then there were nights when I had cried and my pillow remained damp till early next morning....when I did not know if it would ever be possible...... And then there were some romantic nights with loads of tele-communicating under the quilt....😳😳😳😳. and .....ok, I am sure my proposal acceptance is more important than my nights.....because all types of nights come only once I have accepted to be with him....hehehe😛😛😛😛

I was up early the next morning [I guess I did not sleep the whole night]....saw the sunrise....and all the filmy dialogues of a new morning, a new future, a new twist in my life etc filled in my head..😍.😍.😍......But you know what I do believe in these filmy dialogues because somewhere they turn out so true...... I began considering from 6 am itself if it would be ok to call....but then each time I would explain myself to let him sleep a bit more....wait just a bit more....and finally yeh bit more, bit more karte karte I guess I finally called him at 8:30 am....😛😛😛

First I thought I should call pooja....but then that stupid sleepy-head was sleeping...🥱🥱🥱...... Not her fault I had called her at 2:30am just to tell her what I intended to do.....thankfully we had our own cells....else her parents would never have allowed me to call her ever again....hehehe.😛😆😆....first she was irritated, I had disturbed her sleep........Damn, how can this girl sleep when it was because of her....yes, because of her😡😡.....ussi ka toh bhai hai......who has left me with insomnia..😆😆😆.....but as I began with what I had to tell her.....i heard her jump up all excited.....uud gayi neend..😉😉😉😉.....she made me tell her what I was about to tell him......and then she made me rehearse it and re-rehearse it.....and then she made modifications......and then in the end she told me not to worry as she would be there only with bhai when I would be saying yes.....
What the hell, if that was so then itni lambi baat karne ka kya phayda....we spoke till 4:00 in the morning....we had an MTNL to MTNL ka free connection....lolllzzzz....becharo ki company band pad jayegi....hahaha.....oops, coming to the point...yes, so finally I called Rajveer at 8:30am....
Time was starategically decided....Papa has to leave for office that time....so Mummy is on attention mode throughout....My papa can hardly find a sock on his own.....Its really cute...hehe...ok....ok 😆😆😆...the point was I had all the privacy....😉😉😉....so picking up my mobile....my heart racing and almost competing with the Olympics champion....i dialed his number....it rang twice...and then I heard his voice....it gave me such goose-bumps......it sounded similar and yet there was something in it which I could distinguish clearly.....it was......uum it was endearing....😳😳😳
"Aa...HI...its me Naina..."

" I know Naina....Good morning .....".he said and I could feel him smile at the other end.....

"how did you know its me????...."

Now this is called a dumb question....pyaar mein logon ki buddi charne chali jaati hai....😲😲😲😡😡

"Naina ....its my cell....i..." he sounded amused "you...know I have a caller ID...."

Damn me!!!!......har chhez mein Shah rukh chahiye.......obviously he doen't know telepathy to tell when I was going to call him....har sentence romantic nahi hota Naina!!!......you know usse meri Aahat se nahi pata chalta ki main wahin hoon....the typical ekta serial kinds....i desperately need to be in a real world........🐷🐷🐷......

"Oh sorry..... actually i....i mean.....i am sorry to disturb you....actually baat yeh thi ki.....aa....remember you had asked me ...no, I mean I had said....aa..uum.."I was red with embarrassment.....and I became self-conscious after my stupidity.....and so I forgot all my well rehearsed lines....and then there was no Pooja to give me any cues as in what to say next.....

Between pyaar mein seniority ka gyaan....never ever learn what you have to say to him beforehand.....you will forget your lines the moment you hear his voice.....and then you will try to recall when you are actually supposed to be speaking....end result would be you would end up stuttering......already reduced confidence level goes down the drain..🤢🤢🤢..so let it be natural.......because you may not have a guy like mine.😳😳😳...who immediately covers up for me.....therefore let me do all the stupidity and you girls can learn from my mistakes.....howwzatt!!!😉😉😉

"Naina woh sab choro...tell me what are you doing today......i mean yaar meri leave chal rahi hai....i can't go home...[he meant jaipur]....they said they can call me any time for the formalities.....aur main seriously bahut bore ho raha hoon...i have never been so free in my life…...please yaar, dilli gumma do.....lets go out somewhere....if only you don't mind....."

"yaa...aa....ofcourse why not....i'll need to ask maa but I don't think there should be a problem....aap pooja ko bataa do...and take permission from aunty."

Hello....hum do aur humari pyaari Pooja.😛😛😛...two ke saath one free....this offer remained valid until we got married.....haha😉😉😉😆😆😆😆😆

So at 10.30 am I was off to Pooja's place on my scooty....mom did say that nothing would be open yet.....but then she didn't stop me either.....bechari unki beti ke board exams kal hi toh khatam hue the.......but she was surprised......i had told mumma about my plans as soon as she was free....and then I had got in to get ready....i finally got ready and came out at 10.15am....She asked me where was I off to itna sajh dhaj ke.😛😛😛..but then I told her ki kuch decide nahi hua tha...and jo bhi ho we would be going by the car....Pooja's elder brother would accompany us....*wink*....😉😉😉

This solved two purpose....first, she was assured that we were not on our own and safe with some badaa.😆😆😆😆....hehe...Second, I said I don't like to lie....so, I did want her to know that he too would be there.....the only difference was....i was going only because he was going to be there....but I didn't tell her that because I realized that half the truth was also truth and truth enough....hehe..😛😛😆😆😆😆....as for being all accessorized, I gave a reason...ki itte dinno se pehna nahi....ab nahi pehnoongi toh kab....hehe....this was true.....ab nahi toh kab....😃😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63

Hellooo everyone....

firstly thank you sooo much for all the wonderful comments....i really enjoyed reading each one of them....and i too have replied on each and every one...hopefully....i think i have....but if by any chance i have skipped anyone....plzzz pardon me....it would be unintentional and seriously by mistake....and plzz tell me....
Secondly this time round i have sent the PMs.....but i didn't know that i can't send more than 20 msgs together....so i had to send them in halves....i hope here also i have not skipped anyone.....i am really sorry if i have....😲😲
Another thing is i think this time the update is comparatively shorter....hehehe....nevertheless its not all that short also...😆😆😆😆
Fourthly, as u would have known by now i love to talk.....i would love to have longer comments from ur side too....only if u are willing....i really have fun replying to all....and i am good girl...u can talk to me....i am not at all scary....again hopefully..hehehehe.😛😛😛....
love,
Rajita.....
Edited by sweet.dreamz - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
Hii Rajita😊
1st one to comment😆
nice part but its too short
😔
plz post next part long 😊
but update is superb, mind-lowing, awesome, beautifull, lovely i m out of words
ur writing skill has ease n smoothness👏
Now naina is impatient to tell raj that her answer is yes😆
she n pooja rehearse till 4 😆but wen naina call raj she get out of words(lyk me😆) n become self-conscious😳
raj ask her out n she said ok but aap pooja ko bhi bata dena 😆
aur tumahara beech -2 mein
off-track
ho jana its look cute n funny in story😊
wait for next part😃
do cont soon aur is baar jaldi update karna😉

Love
Naina😊🤗


Edited by Kool_Naina - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
great part
but it was too short
i was expecting a long update
u update after such long tym
but never mind
update was superb
update next part asap
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66

Hi Rajita !!!

And u can call me mana ! 😛
Diii sun ke mujhe bahot badiiiiiiiiii hone ka ehsaas hota hai yaar ! 😆 😆 😆
And the upate was amaziiinnnggg !!! 👏 👏 👏 No other word !
you what is the best thing i like in ur writing???
THE EASE.... !!!
I can imagine what probs u might be havn while writing..😛 But while reading its just like a stream...flowing freely !😃
As if you conversing with us....
and the way you go " off-track" in midst is just soooo cuteeeee !!😛 😛
Ab bahot hogayi tumhari taarif 😛 ab UD pe aate hai...
jo ki tumhe pata hai superb, outstanding, fantastic, mindblowing tha !
No Raj has asked her out....but Pooja is wid them too ! 😆 😆 😆
Dekhte hai ....aage kya hota hai...
AND yaa.... Plzzzzzzzzz work on the " QUICKER " part ...😆 😆 😆 😆
Luv,
mana😊
Edited by Revolutionbreez - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
hey Rajita
How are you?
yeah, the ud was shorter but not that short
and it was rocking!
fantastic you know
Naina is such an adorable teenager...its really nice to see that her love turned out to be forever...the whole fic is written beautifully u know, very entertaining.
naina and pooja like all of us talkative girls are making full use of their free connections...even I talk to my best friend an awful lot when she falls for a guy...and thats very often ;)
Rajveer is really smart covering up for her like that. And Naina is smart too, telling her parents that some badaa is going with her...lol
anyways, very nice update
post the next part soon
Sur
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68

Hi Rajita

How r u???
Update was amazing...
Naina has really lost her sleep n this is not very gud..😆😉.I mean one shud atleast sleep well so that they can dream abt their loved one..Wat do u say??😉
she was taking suggestions from her friend Pooja but when she actually called Raj everything was blank...😆😆 I can very well imagine her state..😳
Raj is so excited to meet her..But Pooja will always hang out with them..😆😆😆😉

Naina is already to meet her first love

"What are you doing the rest of your life?
North and south and east and west of your life?
I have only one request of your life --
that you spend it all with me.

All the seasons and the times of your days,
All the nickels and the dimes of your days;
Let the reasons and the rhymes of your days
all begin and end with me.

I want to see your face in every kind of light,
In fields of dawn, and forests of the night;
And when you stand before the candles on a cake,
Oh, let me be the one to hear the silent wish you make.

Those tomorrows waiting deep in your eyes,
In the world of love you keep in your eyes,
I'll awaken what's asleep in your eyes --
(it may take a kiss or two).

Through all of my life,
Summer, winter, spring and fall of my life,
All I ever will recall of my life
is all of my life ...
with you.😊

I am waiting to read abt their first date along with Pooja..😆😉
Bye
Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
ohhhh it was an awesome part,can't wait for the next update....plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
hi ranjita
the up was really cool and sweet 😊😊😊😊
raj naina ko pospossed kya kar diya naina toh uske baare mein soch soch ke aapne raato ke need he kho diya haai becchare 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
naina raj ko subhe ke 8:30 mein phone karte haai 😛😛😛par raj ka voice sunke she forgets all the thing which she decided to tell him but aacha haai raj naina aur pooja ko leekar delhi ghumnne jaa raha haai😊😊😊😉😉
plz cont soon and do pm me

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