Originally posted by: suhana_dixit
Hi Sumaiya Hello Dii...π
A wonderful end to a beautiful story or rather I say its a beautiful beginning of their life...Yeah...u can say that....as life moves on....π
Epilogue was just mindblowingπππ..I wonder where u learn to write like this..π Awee....its such a sweet compliment Dii...thank you soooooo much...and as for the writing concerns....its you all...that makes it look so wonderful....so thank you all for that...π
Ayaan as usual was busy in his dramas but he loves Asmi a lot..The whole update was full of romantic moments..π Yeah....just slight moments from their life....only to show...how it has moved on....π
Then when Asmi was pregnant he was the happiest person..He was blessed with twins...π
Even their names were cute Pari n Arnav.. Glad u like the names....I was just trying to connect them together...π
Mauli n Nishant were made for each other but I loved it when Ayaan wa pulling Nishant's leg..π
How can Nishant b so stupid..He shud have known dat Ayaan is full nautanki..πππ Hehe...yeah he shud hav guessed that....but then guess he was too nervous to think of anything....and Ayaan being the convincing one....he surely knew to tease Nishant well...π
I missed Samay n Kinjal in the last part...Yeah...even I think that was a gr8 miss from my side....but it wud take too much out of me...and guess I was trying to draw the end...π
Life cannot b more perfect for Ayaan n Asmi with their beautiful babies...π
" I never knew there would be a better tomorrow
But you've come into my life and taken away all my sorrow
My days of sadness are a thing of the past
Because I have found true love at last
My days of emptiness are gone for good
Because you fill a void in my heart that you should
You've opened a window
You've shown me the light
And my love for you
will continue to burn bright."
Thats a beautiful poem to describe it all....just perfect!! As always!! ππ
Now coming to this perfect story all the characters were down to earth nothing special abt them n yet their simplicity captured my heart..Am glad it did....π
Ayaan he was my favoutite character in this fiction..I loved his name a lot..very unique..Thanks Dii...πThen I loved all his nautanki n dramas..πHe was such a darling with a heart of gold...He was a perfect bhai ,son,son-in-law(yes I can't forget how he win over his mom-in-law),husband,friend and father..π Awweeeee....when I started this fic...I knew Ayaan is going to be my prime concern...yet I cudnt keep Asmi aside...as being a girl makes me think from a girl's POV....yet tried my best to portray Ayaan in the nest way possible...and now when I get to read...U loved Ayaan The Most.....it makes my day....everything seems worth of it....ππ
he was so lonely after the death of his parents n sister ...πππ
Then God gave him Asmi.π She brought all the happiness in his life.
At one time he was confused abt his feelings for her but then it was already tp late ..he was head over heals in love with her..Hmm...no matter wat....true love cums to ur doorstep...and without ur knowledge enters ur heart....π...one cant do anything abt it...π
Asmi was a really sweet n shy girl..Ayaan taught her to live happily..Before him she was so lonely but Ayaan made her realize that her family loves her dearly..
It was beacause of her that Ayaan was able to forget his past..She was lucky to get some1 like Ayaan in her life..Yes...life always had Ayaan in store for her....thats why she didnt get to be that happy earlier...only becoz life ahead was going to fill her wid ecstatic pleasure...π
Samay n Kinjal were perfect bhai n bhabhi..They supported Asmi in her tough times..Samay never ever blemed Ayaan for arresting his father..he knew that watever Ayaan did was right..
It was beacuse of him that Asmi got the courage to go after her love..Yes...if there was no Samay...there wud hav been no Ayaan-Asmi...π³
Mauli n Nishant were really sweet..They both fight a lot but still they love each other..n most of all they were true friends to Asmi n Ayaan..Mauli n Nishant's support was very vital in Ayaan n Asmi's life..Yes....coz Mauli was the one to think of bringing Asmi into Ayaan's life...and Nishant....well...wat more cud he do....than telling the truth abt Ayaan....and of course...he told Asmi to think over Ayaan again....He loved her yet had the heart to say all this.....he surely is a nice guy...π³
So finally this fiction ends on a happy note..Yeah....a happy ending it is....hoping that....life always shows its happy side...brightly over its sadness...hoping that...we all get to look at the brighter side of everything!! π³
When will u start your another one??? Pls do include me in your pm list..π
Can u send me the word doc of this fiction??
Bye Thanks for this lovely comment Dii...loved ur analysis on the fic...and it was a gr8 pleasure to hav u by side thruout the journey!! π
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