I love u too much to lose u#2(Rajeev)EpiloguePg-14 - Page 11

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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely Ending !!
And I just loved the Character of Ayaan !! Fabulous !! Kash aise bande real life me hote yar ! Hehehe !!
Will wait for you to announce your next Fic !! Mereko PM karna and add me to the PM list of that fic automatically ..Hehehe...Abhi se keh rahi hu ! LOL !!
Love,
Vandu
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey dear

The ending was perfect....how could have not been...after all Ayaan and Asmi's life could not have been anything less then perfect.👏

Asmi and Ayaan are most happy to be with each other. It was fun when Asmi tried learning how to cook from Mauli and ayaan wanted to pamper her and not let her work at all. 😉

The scenes with Nishant trying to talk about Mauli and his relationship with Ayaan were very funny....finally Ayaan ne nishant par reham kha hi liya aur khud hi apni sehmati de di. Ofcouse not forgetting to warn Nishant that he should always keep Mauli happy.😆

Asmi sahi kehti hai....Ayaan ki nautanki hamesha chalu rehti hai...aur isi liye he does not immediately realises that Asmi was telling him about her pregnancy...but then he was so happy and excited that he felt on top of the world.😉

God had to give them all the happiness that they had missed out on. And so he blessed them with twins....and Asmi suggested the most perfect names of their little prince and princess...names that were closest to both Ayaan and her.😳

Mauli and Nishant are happy in their life and its good to see that Ayaan and Mauli are still keep arguing good naturedly.😆

You are right Ayaan is special not just because he is Rajiv but because you have made him soo but depicting your feelings and thoughts so beautifully. And Asmi is the ideal partner that a person like Ayaan deserves. 😳

I will really miss reading your update...Can i encourage you to write another beautiful story...for you will always have and eager fan in me waiting to read it.

Thanks for your special personal reply to all of us. It was very thoughtful of you take the time to do it...your gesture touched my heart.

Thanks for sharing this story with me.

take care

Nisha

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Hinal Dii.....never miss 'liking' the post....thanks dii...

your are welcome
i could not comment because of my busy schedule but i always read your updates and press the like button to let u know i read it.
epiloge was realy fantastic,
loved the children names really good,
also liked how ayaan was teasing nishant,
hope we get to read another fic of yours in the future.
bye
take care
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Posted: 15 years ago
Happy Ramadan to u too..😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome ending dear really like he way u decrbe their life after marrige in parts glad they have twins lov ayaan n asmi relationship
u r becoming gud wrt u knw.keep writing'
pls cont wit ur new fic asap
bye tc
happy ramadan to u
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Posted: 15 years ago
hello sweetheart...................that was very beautiful.....................wow loved it completely........................ayaan is too naughty.........................yet veryyyyyyyyyyyyyy adorable.....................and asmi is the one who can control him............................perfect match..........................and the reaction he gave when asmi said about her pregnancy was funny.......................and the last scene where mauli complains and the last part was very lovely.................will surly miss this fic dear.....................hope u start a new one very soon.....................cant say cont soon so start a new fic soon...................

Advance Happy Independence Day to u too dear and Ramadan Mubarak.................
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow.. loved it sweety !!! :)
God Bless
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Posted: 15 years ago
I love you Asmi....U don't know but seriously....i love you more than Ayaan.....hehehe.....there is loads i wish to write since i know i haven't been able reply regularly....and this talkative girl has sooooooooo much to tell u.....but sorry yaar, i don't have my laptop and my sis's computer's keyboard is not working....its taken me real long to type this much...hehe😆😆😆..... B/w i'll miss my beloved fic sooooo much....Sumi promise kar tu aur fics likhegi....plzzz....plzzzz... b/w if u think this is how much i'm planning to type as my last message, then u r wrong...since u know i have a huge quota of praises jo mujhe tujhe bejna hai....so, i'll get my laptop by next week and then i'll type....lamba sa....hehehe. Love, Rajita....
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Sumi...

kamon aacho...kano je aami o tomar shange hindi te katha boli aami o sheita jaani na... but tomar shange banglae katha bolte aamar khub bhalo lage... shotti tumi ei galpo take durdanto likhecho...aar darun bhabe end korecho...karon kono ekta jinish ke shuru kara shahoz...shesh kara kintu kashto...

I will switch to English...otherwise the non Bengali readers will kill me....

Awesome ending yaar...As I said earlier...it is very easy to start but it is very difficult to stop because it is not easy to give a proper ending. You have done the job beautifully....

I love Ayaan yaar...what a man... I loved the way Ayaan and Asmi were pulling Nishant's leg.... it reminded me of AA track...how Ayaan was hesitant ot propose to Asmi....

The news of twins was icing on the cake in AA's happy married life... and the names were equally important...Arnav and Pari.... because though I loveeeeeeeeeeee Ayaan...but Arnav too played an important part in AA"s love life.... and no Ayaan lover can forget that....

The journey with this fic has been very beautiful and enjoyable.... I suggest you start another fic.... it would really be a nice venture... and do update your other fic...Ek Raja par kitni Rani...

Waiting to hear from you...

Love
Guglu
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi Sumi...

kamon aacho...kano je aami o tomar shange hindi te katha boli aami o sheita jaani na... but tomar shange banglae katha bolte aamar khub bhalo lage... shotti tumi ei galpo take durdanto likhecho...aar darun bhabe end korecho...karon kono ekta jinish ke shuru kara shahoz...shesh kara kintu kashto...

I will switch to English...otherwise the non Bengali readers will kill me....

Thank God u did...varna mein tumhe marne ke liye kuch dhund hi rahi thi....😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡Tumhari bengali ne mujhe pareshaan kar diya hai....

@Sumi...U also sent Guglu's bithday wish in bengali and now can anyone of u translate it in English so that I can understand that????????

I need it........jaldi karo tum dono!!!!!!!

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