I love u too much to lose u#2(Rajeev)EpiloguePg-14 - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

@ Preet, Naina, Yogi:

Guys.....u forgot to 'unreserve' I guess....😆 Chalo jaldi chhuta hua kaam khatam karo.....😆
I didn't forget..Its just I was so busy with my stupid life......😭😭😭

Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Sumi,
sorry for being late.
Just read the marriage part of Ayaan n Asmi n that was beautiful. It was obvious that Ayaan was nervous that's why he was fighting sweetly with his beloved wife. The way he needed her photo in wedding dress was really nice and i liked it.
Once he had already seen her but when he saw her again in wedding attire. For the first time Asmi saw him in form of his groom n she was happy to see him as he was looking dashing. I was also confused that when she reached Delhi so fast.
Mauli was waiting them and she did all the rituals nicely and got a solid cash as neg in return. Ayaan knew very well that only in front of him she would cry and she did that exactly when she found him and he consoled her.
She was still angry with him and Ayaan was teasing her that's y she got irritated but one thing Ayaan knowas very well how to handle her Asmi. They were so passionate and sweet, finally they have become one and she is Mrs. Ayaan Rathod

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
So finally a beautiful story finished on Rajveer and a new one started. 😊 😊 😊

I think anyone who once starts to write the story, it becomes her habit to keep on writing na. Just like me.
😛 😛 😛
At a time i have 5 stories on floor. 😆 😆 😆

End was awesome and finally i reached up to here. 👏 👏 👏

Ayaan is happy with Asmi n she has changed his life so much with positiveness. 😃 😃 😃 Mauli n Nishant r with each other because of them.😉 😉 😉

They have two sweet kiddo children whose name just belong to Ayaan. 😊 😊 😊

Wonderful dear and i specially liked the way u finished this.
😍 😍 😍

fianlly coming to ur opinion about me, i catch up the fic because i want to do that.
In future i will do the same with "Droplets" too.

Once again an amazing fic by an awesome writer.
🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeee Sumi...😃

yaar kal maine tumhe dekha...jab tum apne chat par ghum rahi thi...tab achhi lag rahi thi...??? ab tum yeh sochogi ki maine tumhe kaise dekha...??? yaar bhul gayi kya...??? tum toh mere padosh me rahti ho na...??? shocked...ha ha ha...!!! yaar Bangladesh...India ka padoshi hi toh hai...ha ha ha...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
sab se pahle UD k bare me batati hun...BEAUTIFUL... SUPERBB... AMAZING...!!! aisa lag raha tha...jaise kisi khubshurat se mukam par jane k liye step by step aage badh rahe ho...!!! tum ne dhire dhire sare voh scenes ek hi UD me likh diya...jo ki ek inshan ki zindagi me khaash hote hain...!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
pura ud sirf Asmi n Ayaan par tha...bich bich me jo bhi aate the...un se mujhe koi prob nahi hua😛...kyoun ki main toh asmi n Ayaan k sath BG thi...!!! ab tumhare writing style k bare me main tarif nahi karungi...kyoun ki mujhe jo bhi...aur jab bhi...jaisa laga tha...voh maine tumhe bata diya tha PM par...!!! par haan...main itna jarur kahungi ki...main tab sahi thi tumhare bare me...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
Ayaan apne romantic drama kabhi nahi bhul sakta...aur hum un scenes ko imagine karte hue mushkurana kabhi nahi bhul sakte...!!! asmi k pregnent ka scene...thoda funny tha...ha ha ha ayaan ka reaction...ha ha ha...😆 😆 😆
n ayaan ko festival offer bhi mil gaya...twins...!!! mujhe laga hi tha ki un ka naam Pari n Arnav hoga...😛 😛 😛
Mauli n Nishant ki bhi setting ho gayi...par raj oops...ayaan ne achhi khinchai ki un logon ki...😃
cont soon.
*aadat padd gayi hai yaar...😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
okay...ab aate hain is pure fic par...!!! jis ne humain ek baht hi achhe aur talented writer se milwaya...!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
n abt d charachters...kisi k liye bhi koi complane nahi hai...😃 😃 😃
kyoun ki is fic ne mujhe hassaya hai toh rulaya bhi hai...!!! kuch pal k liye maine ayaan k dard ko agar mehshush kiya hai toh kabhi kabhi us k harkaton ki wajah se dil khol kar hassi bhi hun main...!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
par point kya hai tumhe pata hai Sumi...??? point yeh hai ki zindagi kabhi perfect nahi hoti.. ya phir hum jaisa sochte hain voh sab nahi hota...!!! achanak sab kuch badal jata hai aur hum chahe ya phir na chahe unhe dil se accept karna bhi padta hai...!!!
is fic me bhi vohi hua ayaan...arnav ban kar aaya...toh us ne bich me apni khushi apni ek lauti behn ko... pari ko kho diya...!!! par sath mila toh Asmi ka...!!!
par ek aisa bhi waqt aaya...jab asmi bhi us se dur ho gayi...!!! par kahte hai na ki khushiyan jyada dur nahi hoti...thoda sa dhundho toh baht kuch mil sakta hai...!!! toh ayaan ne bhi apni khushi dhudh li asmi me...!!! aur sab kuch smoothly un k life me hone laga...!!! khushiyan bhi aayi...aur ayaan ko us ki bichdi hui Pari bhi phir se mil gayi...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
mera ek fav gana hai jis ka ek stanza hai...
"Zindagi tere ghum ne humain
rishte naye samjhaye...
mile jo humain dhup me mile
chaaon k thande saaye...."
yehi hua tha na is fic me...raj ko Asmi ki khushi mili tab...jab us ne Pari ko khoya...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
baki k charc k bare me pahle hi kah chuki hun...sabhi bahhhhhhhhhhht achhe the...😃!!! par mera pura dhyaan toh ek hi jagah par laga hua tha...😃aur tumhe toh pata hi hai ki voh koun hai...😛!!! haan...thik pehchana...😉jis k liye main akshar gati hun...'tere naam se suru...tere naam pe khatam'😆 😆 😆
perfect ending...ya phir hum yun kahe ki Asmi n Ayaan k khushiyon ki suruwat...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
loved dis fic so much...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
n love u too sumi...🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
Sumi....
love
Priya😃
Edited by Sweet-Lioness - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

wonderful...............👏👏👏👏👏👏........awesome.................. 👏👏👏👏👏..fantastic........... 👏👏👏............ a perfect finishing to a b'ful love story 😳EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed.......Ohh....such adultation.....tum logo ne sach me adat bigad dii....ab see....main cloud 9 pe rehti hu hamesha...😆.......waise thanks haan...😆😉 ASMI-AYAANEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed.......they rocked throughout EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed........... loved how their relationship progressed from........ friends....to lovers to husband-wife............😃😃😃😃............. & now to being parents............😃😃😃😃...........the whole journey has been very intresting EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed..Arre wah....tumne mujhse behtar bayan kiya....their journey and all....sach me unhone kitne rishte nibhaye hai...ek saath...😆😳.....loved ayaan throughout..........EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed............mujhe bhi ayaan chaiye............EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed.........Awe.....☺️

asmi was also sweet simple......determined........... 😃😃..........
mauli too have been strength & support 4 ayaan.......... 😃............ each character had its own importance............ 😃😃😃😃
...I just hope...I did justice to each character....at least the leads...😆..

epilogue has been great................. really loved to see that after marriage......... Ayaan has not lost his sense of humour 😆😆😆😆😆..........he still the same teasing naughty & smart ayaan EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed..He is AYAAN yaar....sense of humour kaise lose karega...nah...not possible!! 😉😆 After all...we all love him sooo much like this..😛..

loved the name of kids........... ARNAAV..............with whom everything started........(still remember he used to wear glasses..........EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrasseddashing lagta hoga.......... nahi 😉😉😉😉 Ohh...its actually a surprise that U remember....u see....u started reading the fic later on....aur zyadatar fic ke beginning se agar padhna shuru karo along wid it....tab chhoti chhoti baatein yaad rehti hai....but still u remember it....mashallah....gr8 yaar!!😃😳)...& Pari......... who was important 4 Ayaan......... 😃😃😃............
Hmm...baccho ke itne achhe do naam the mere hath me....bas isliye twins le ayi...😆

so epilogue was almost perfect....(coz....romantic moments aur zyada ho sakte the 😉😉😉😉😉.........kids can have been grown up.......5years later TongueTongueTongueTongue....wud have loved to see ayaan as father.... EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed ...coz can expect arnaav to have got some traits 4m his father 😉😉😉..Hey pata hai....main aisa karna chahti thi....lekin sach akhu to...bas....aur likhne ka mann nahi kiya....coz if I wud start....main shayad ek ending soch nahi pati....I can just go on n on...abt Ayaan-Asmi and their life....so decided to put a stop right there..😆😳).
but never the less njoyed epilogue........ as u closed all the loose ends...........& brought it to end.........😃Am glad u enjoyed dear....and thought the loose ends were closed....😳

thanx 4 giving us wonderful FF..............🤗........U r always welcum....after all its mostly my pleasure...😉......... remember ur promise to start new one soon............ TongueTongueTongueTongue.............will eagerly wait 4 that............. 😃😃😃😃.......... lets see after AYAAN with whom i'll fall in love with........... 😆😆😆😆😆😆 Hope u hav fallen for Adil by now....if not...then I hope to make sure...😆😉😳



start new 1 soon Tongue Tongue
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Sumi😊

How r u?

Here, I come to bore u again.😆😆 Wo kya hai na, aaj mood bahut kharab tha to mene socha chalo IF pe hi time spend kiya jaye, at least kuch fyada to hoga hi; kyunki yahan par aa ke mood to theek ho hi jayega aur uppar se is achi bacha ki fics padh lo to aur bhi mazza aa jata hai, to mene socha isse pehle yeh thread band hojaye, is par comment kar hi dun.😳😳😳

Mein janti hoon ki mein bahut late hoon par tum to sab janti ho na, isliye phir se bata kar tumhe bore nahin karungi aura b apni bekar si speech band karti hoon aur comments pe aati hoon, varna tum yeh sab padh ke pakka so jaogi.😉😆

Part 33: -

Samay was so sweet in first scene. 😃He didn't want to get up because he knew that at the end of day, her sister will leave the home. Kinjal was shocked to see Asmi sleeping. Ab usse thodhi na pata hai ki Asmi ki itni pyari neend ki vajahuska Ayaan hi hai.😳😳

Ayaan was so funny bechara usse to koi importance hi nahin de raha, How can anyone do that yaar???😲😲😲

Ayaan is very sweet also. 😳😳😳He manages to get Asmi's dad on their weeding. He actually knows the importance of father-daughter relationship and also the emotions of a father to attend the marriage of his daughter. I told u before na that he is just the best.⭐️⭐️⭐️

The scene between Asmi and her dad was just awesome. 👏👏👏It explains everything. Very well written. The phone talk between Asmi and Ayaan was just awesome yaar⭐️⭐️⭐️. The starting was awesome…..jaldi se pic bhejo.oh how sweet…u know I loved this behavior of Ayaan. 😳😳😳

So, finally Asmi was able to see Ayaan, bilkul bachi hai😉😉😉. Apne nakli gusse me wo ayaan se pic mangwana hi bhool gayi, par chalo der se hi sahi usse Ayaan ke darshan to hue. Ayaan bhi kahan kum hai, usse kitni besabri se Asmi ki wait thi….This makes him more and more adorable….😳😳😳😳😳😳

Gosh!!!!!! I can write so much to praise him na, I think I should stop it or my comment on Ayaan will be much longer than the update. 😉😆😉

Coming back to update……Oops……I forget to mention that all the costumes are just superb.👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️

The Kanyadaan scene was written beautifully. All the feelings were described in an awesome way. How can u write so well yaar???😲😲😲😲😲😲

The sindoor and Mangalsutra scene was also beautifully written yaar. How can u describe each and every feeling so well Achi Bachi???😲😲😲😆😆😆😃😃😃

Asmi and Samay scene was superb yaar⭐️⭐️⭐️. I got tears in my eyes while reading it. U know, Its ur speaciality to make me cry in ur every update.😭😭😭😭😭😭 So, Asmi and Ayaan left from there and their journey was not that happy.

Asmi was so lost in her thoughts that she didn't realize that she is in Delhi and not in Mumbai.😲😲😲 Mauli and Ayaan will never stop their cat fights, but these fights make their relationship stronger.😃😃😃

Ayaan made Asmi feel more relaxed because he knew that he is the only one who can make her feel better😃😃😃 but then again they start their fights😉😆😆. Par jab ayaan itne pyaar se Asmi se baat karega to koi kaise usse naraz reh sakta hai. The whole scene was written beautifully Sumi. Loved it.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Now, I will go to the next and the final part.😭😭😭

Bye for now.

Luv Preet🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Sumi…I am back again. Is baar no bak bak and straight to comments.😃

Ayaan and Asmi are so sweet, their morning scene was so sweet and romantic too…U know I totally loved it. Ayaan is becoming more and more naughty day by day…Ah…So sweet😳😳.

And 2 months passed…wow….but still both of them just the same, asmi making faces on little little things and Ayaan just laughing as usual.😆😆😆

Nishant and Ayaan;s scene was so funny😉😆😉. I said na ayaan bahut naughty ho gaya, usne bechare nishant ko kitna tang kiya. I am sure bechare ke paseene chut gaye honge usse baat karte karte. Ayaan will never change but what to do!!! We all love him like this, He is just too irresistible. 😳😳😳😳😳😳

The birthday scene was simply superb and lovely. So, Ayaan got his birthday gift….😳😳😳

Nishant was so stupid that he didn't even realize that ayaan was making a fool of him but I loved the way he gave warning to Nishant.😉😉😉😆😆😆

The good news was really a good news for Ayaan and Asmi. Finally, Ayaan is able to have his full family. His love and his 2 new born babies, OMG just too awesome.👏👏👏

Loved it yaar. But u know, I love Ayaan and I am going to miss him now and everytime. Ayaan is a character whom I can never forget. Just awesome, superb, loving….⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Will miss Ayaan a lot.😳😳😳

Luv Preet.🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago
I Love U Too Much To Lose U

What this story is.............?
Frankly, I don't know this.

What I know is that this is a story of 2 lovers whom love was beyond any imagination. This story teaches us that Loving someone doesn't depend on the fact that who the person is and what he has done with us in our past, but its just the emotional bond that 2 persons share. This bond depends only on the understanding between these 2 people...Asmi and Ayaan.

Asmi and Ayaan have seen so much in their lives. Asmi loved Ayaan without knowing him much but Ayaan has loved him unconditionally but he was having a guilt that he has not told Asmi the truth behind his arrival and when the truth was clear, Asmi had lost her father. It was such a pain whom a girl can never forget. But still, the power of love wins here as Asmi realizes that Ayaan was not wrong for what he has done; but he was wrong in the matter of the path choosen by him. So, she finally decided to have him in his life at any cost and his brother supported him in this decision because he knew that Asmi has found someone who will be with her at every moment of her life.

From there, Asmi left her home in order to find her true love. Reaching Mumbai, Asmi got to know the past of Ayaan, the pain through which he has gone in his life. Knowing his pain, She forget her past as she realises that she is the only one who has suffered a lot. Ayaan too had suffered a lot. Basically, this is the reason why both of them such understanding because both of them have seen a lot of pain and they know the importance of family in their life. As its said that, a person who has suffered a pain is the only one who can realize the pain of any other person.

From there Asmi decided to be with Ayaan all the time and to make him cry so that he can relax. Thus, Asmi and Ayaan got together with their unsaid emotions and their unsaid emotions that witnessed their love and their unsaid promise to be with each other at each and every step of their lives.

Ayaan got the chance to take the revenge from Pari's killer and at that point of time, he thought that he can move in his life, So he decided to purpose Asmi officially. But his plan got vanished with rains and it delayed their official confession..........official because even they know that they belong to each other; and the confession was just a formality.

But Ayaan can't have Asmi without her family approval so he went and talk with them and he make them realize the importance of their relationship; to which they cant deny and finally, they got permission for the marriage.

Now, the official confession of Asmi and Ayaan was just an unforgettable moment in our lives; I will remember it for the whole of my life. Then, the re-union of a father and a daughter was just awesome. Finally, the love birds got united and that makes the most special moment in their life.

Last but not the least, Their family gets completed with the birth of 2 angels - Arnav & Pari.


This was the story of I Love U Too Much To Lose U....A story which is unforgettable, a story which is a witness of an unsaid love that has developed much before but got united only when, they were sure that their family, their friends are with them because love cant be achieved until our family and our friends are with us to support us on every step of our life.

So, Achi Bachi.......This is what I have observed in this beautiful story of love. Sorry, If I have written anything wrong but this comes to my heart when the name "I Love U Too Much To Love U" has been taken. This will always remain in our hearts Sumi and u know, I can never forget Ayaan and Asmi.

Thank u so much for giving us this story and the characters.
Luv Preet.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Preet.....didnt I say u match my thoughts?? Mere parts ko mujhse behtar samajh jati ho...kabhi kabhi....and ur patience is sumthing to watch for....love you for all the lovely comments that u hav worked so hard on....

Sumi.....That's really very sweet of u yaar, and Ya our thoughts do match....Its a big truth, and the way u have written the whole fanfic was just awesome and superb. One thing on which u will agree with me is that my comments are nothing in front of what u have given me in the form of Ayaan and Asmi and not to forget "I Love U Too Much To Lose U"....Thank u so much for this yaar.
Lots and Lots of Love
Preet

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