Mayur FF - It had to be you-Ch 14 (Last prt)-Pg 67 - Page 39

Originally posted by: aparajita.s

@heena: lol...i'll try n update ASAP...I was out of town thruout this week....Came bk last nyt...Will update as soon as I can...😊

Originally posted by: x.Heena.x

*sigh* Hmmmmm welll I guess your forgiven then! tchhh!! LOLL...BUTTTT will be taking that back if we don't see an update soon!! LOL im joking, but i still want upate soon. :) Your ff's keep me going during the sad times MJHT CV's bring upon us!!!

Aww, dats so sweet of u to say, Heena...I'm not promising yet, but I'll surely try my best to write the next part soon...MJHT's and specially Mayur's pathetic state kills the desire to write too...*sigh*

Originally posted by: -Jess-

Appu...Awesome update..and this time it was long... so you are forgiven for updating late.... 😃

Plus I already blessed you with 100 years of life.... 😆

The update was great.... but what's this?... here also Kiss Ka Kissa.....???........😆 but this was damn cute... (not like the one in the show...)...... loved talli Mayank.... asking for her apology.... and then slowly opening up and telling her what he liked the most about her... the words that Nupur was waiting to hear.... so cute....

The whole update was a delight to read... Nupur cooking for him, Shilpa Aunty's teasing her... and Mayank's mind missing her in the party... everything was very nicely written.... loved it....🤗

The talli Mayanks in the FFs are best... better than the one in the show... where he kisses random girls and doesn't remember later.....😆

Originally posted by: kweetrockstar

awwwwwwww awesome update loved it

Originally posted by: shivangi278

wow...appu,
this part was rocking,
tooooo cute,
loved this line of shilpa aunty-
"Chalo badhiya hai, ab mere saare kaam khatam! Subah isko impress karne ke liye Mayu khana banata hai, aur shaam ko yeh usko impress karne ke liye banati hai!" 🤣
the last part was chooooo chweet,
mayu is sooo adorable...😳
cant wait for the next part,
plzzzzz continue asap...😃

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya

Rocker.. u dont know how big smile you have got on my face.... i m so indebted to u for that.. i was dying to read the update of this FF.. Srsly.. i m not kidding... i was terribly missing this FF.. thnx a zillion for this..

And about the update.. it ws as usual MIND BLOWING.. and the talli Mayank reminded me of the last years Holi episode and all the happenings that happened at Mayu's place... and also the merger episode scene... where Nupz holds Mayu and says that she will never let him fall... and Girl ... with such a HOTTTTTTTTTTT and handsome hunk standing b4 you, even I'll get hypnotised.. toh phir bechaari Nupsi kya karti... I actually tried imaging Mayu trying to Nupsi with his tongue between his lips and teeth.. Imagine.. he looked like Sharmaan Joshi while doing that..

And the coolest dialogue of the day was : wah Subah Mayank isse impress karne ke liye khana banata hai aur shaam ko yeh Mayank ko impress karne ke liye khana banati hai".. Super cool mom.. Shilpa Aunty!!

Rocking update!!!!!!!!🤗