Mayur FF - It had to be you-Ch 14 (Last prt)-Pg 67

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Annie

@annie07

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#361

LOL, Appu.....................it was fun to read.................esp the kiss the kissa.................and drunk Mayank is always fun..................

I m so glad that he blurted all those things out.................and he aw well may remember....................

Update soon................will be waiting...................

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..pebo..

@..pebo..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#362

appu u finally updaated

im soooooooooo happy

this part was too good yarr
im totally in love wid it

specially the part when mayu is drunk

and he reveals his heart out

even i was happy when nups was happy

loved your part

love pebbzzii

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#363

what an update yaar??? truly rocking...

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#364

it was utterly delighful update to read!

i loved each bit of it!

especially when mayu was drunk and he said so much to her! haaaye!

beautiful update!

loved it totally!

do update soon......

love,
Mahak

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SunshineGirl6

@SunshineGirl6

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#365

Loved the part...it was amazing..........totally awsm.........

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Rabi

@rose.mn

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#366

Awww what an update Appu, love you yaar. I was dieing to read this ff and finally finally u updated. I was so angry loking your pm after suc a long time, ulta reaction na, i know but i really was😡 bu after reading update i can't help but saying you that i love you for such an amazing update. Mayank was so damn cute, haaye loved him and that kiss k liye, by god that was hillarious but cutest ever. After that those word of Mayank and their hug was heavenly, i loved the update to core. and yeah i forgot to say i looveeeeee shilpa aunty, she is rockstar.
And now one request plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update next soon.

Luv you😊

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Marium

@maloo19

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#367

it was fabulous

mayu is so cute

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Rabia

@.Rabia.

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#368

great update
loved it
loved the kiss confusion
and last scene was best
do cont soon

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mannnnnn

@mannnnnn

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#369

awww so sho cute
bht hi pyara update tha
thnx for pm
enjoyed every bit of it
continue soon
dnt take much time

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#370

hey aparijita, hope i am getting the spelling of your name right honey.

I lovedddddd the whole update, it was all portrayed so realistically man, i have been thoroughly impressed at the way you write, its beautiful beyond any wordssssssss!

I loveddddd the last bit the most, it was so straight forward and heartfelt, just the way i wanted the MN in the show to confess, the dialogues were so apt and soo genuine.

Excellenttttttttt work!