Mayur FF - It had to be you-Ch 14 (Last prt)-Pg 67

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Aparajita

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti
amazing part yaar
Absolute delightful to read :)

Cont soon please as I can't wait too long =P

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Thank u so much, Zoah!! Glad u liked it...:)

Originally posted by: mannnnnn
awww so sho cute
bht hi pyara update tha
thnx for pm
enjoyed every bit of it
continue soon
dnt take much time

Thank u so much...:)

Originally posted by: Senny
hey aparijita, hope i am getting the spelling of your name right honey.

I lovedddddd the whole update, it was all portrayed so realistically man, i have been thoroughly impressed at the way you write, its beautiful beyond any wordssssssss!

I loveddddd the last bit the most, it was so straight forward and heartfelt, just the way i wanted the MN in the show to confess, the dialogues were so apt and soo genuine.

Excellenttttttttt work!

hey senny...lol..its aparajita...:):) but u can call me appu...

Thank u so much...U found it realistic?? thnx a ton...I try hard to keep it that way...:) I'm glad u liked it!! :)

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Aparajita

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Posted: 15 years ago

#392

Originally posted by: mayurarti
Appu finally you updated.....I was eagerly waiting for this

The update was just Amazing so you are forgiven for the delay

Loved the talli Mayank he's so sweet......

the convo between them "kis ke liye.?"...it was really nice

do cont soon......Is baar no delay haan.........😆

Luv
Nidzy~

Oops nidzy...Iss baar phir delay ho gaya...Sowwie...😳

Anyway, Thank u soo much...glad u liked the update...:)

Originally posted by: mn_arti
wow!! lovely one aprajita...pplzzz pm me after writing da next part....

Thanks a ton..I'll surely PM u...:)

Originally posted by: mayurg2010
awesome update..................talli mayank is really so cute

Thank u so much...Glad u liked him...:)

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Aparajita

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Posted: 15 years ago

#393

Originally posted by: afshanafreen
wow dear was a lovely update...

Thank u so much..:)

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Aparajita

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Posted: 15 years ago

#394

Originally posted by: Mou.
appu.......amazing update..ah! here i m hating drunk mayu kissing random gals in the show.& u make me fall in love with this cute drunk mayank of urs.who said all the things that nupur wanted to hear from him.............uff! the best part was when he said..that he liked it most that he come back home to her.where she is waiting for him........no wonder nupur had tears in her eyes.she wanted to hear it from him always na!!!!!!!

& thank god it happened, other wise when mayank left home without talking to nups , i thought it may lead to a misunderstanding between these two........& yeah! i love shilpa anty's convo with nupur too.she is such a sweetheart.she is helping her to understand mayank more deeply!!!!!!!!!

loved this part..plz update next part soon dear!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey mou...aww, m glad i made u fall for dis talli mayu...:) Thnx a ton...so glad u liked this update!! :)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#395

sweety.. r u updating today????

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Posted: 15 years ago

#396

Originally posted by: fariaa70
Hi appu
at first a big hug to u for ur wonderful update
it was just mind-blowing
loved each and every bi of it.
u r really an awesome writer.
i enjoyed the whole part.
mayurs embarrassing moment, then nups cooking, m.moms teasing everything u portrayed so beautifully.
and then lastly drunken maynk and nups convo was so sweet and nice.
i just loved it.
amazing part
keep it up
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz tryyyyyyyyyyyy to update next part soon