YuNa POEMS: Updated - 25/2 pg 15 Sealed Lips - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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If she allows our relation to advance,
We shall continue our Romance, In France...
 
ROFL!
 
Great poems MJ!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Starry_night

Aww MJ, that was so cute and funny.....lolz....true, true....he is gonna do the happy dance now.....and even her.....now just waiting for them to go to France in the show too.....lolz....

 
Thanks Priyanka! Yes, they are internally doing the happy dance!! hehe.. Imagine them together in france, beneath the eiffel tower - btw, dont these charachters ever take holidays? just a thought!! 😆

 

Originally posted by: Jenifer.

If she allows our relation to advance,
We shall continue our Romance, In France...

 
ROFL!
 
Great poems MJ!

Thanks Jennifer.. i was ROFL when i wrote that part too.. it just happened, like all the others too !! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey thats a great one MJ
been some days that i saw DMG ,,,
was really excited to see Yunas confession in a pool
very situational great!!!
sri:-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sri_4

hey thats a great one MJ

been some days that i saw DMG ,,,
was really excited to see Yunas confession in a pool
very situational great!!!
sri:-)

 
Thanks Sri.. 😳 You should definately watch all YuNa scnes.. even today, they are just rocking.. pool or no pool - they are fire!! 😳😉😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys..

this is the poem i have written following Yuvi's confession and Naina's obeservations and her questions..
 

Mine to take?

He said he loves me,
and that he wants to be free,
i saw that he had hurt his knee,
fighting those goons,
so he could save me.

I hugged him back,
going on the same track.
I know his love is not a fake,
This is what i make,
from his eyes lake,
And so i ask him,
Are you all mine to take? 😉

 

Comments and Criticisms wellcome.

MJ
xxx

Edited by koolaries4 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
You are so awesome.....Thats all I have to say !
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
oh my u were talking abt dese poems i read d first one by mj its really good
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
lol mj
dat was fab nd crazy

looking forward to more
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ Leah: Thanks alot.. 😳
 
@ Anshu: Yes, this was what i was talking about.. lol, They are all by me! hehe.. Thanks for replying and i am glad you liked it and found it funny too !! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It is so light yet deep in meaning........you are amazing......seriously......it holds so true for them......exactly what they are going through at the moment.