YuNa POEMS: Updated - 25/2 pg 15 Sealed Lips

Hey Ppz....   hope you guys are doing well.. and having YuNalicious days.. And if you arent then i hope my post will help in making your days YuNalicious!! 😉😆   This is a thread i have made to collect all my poems so far!! So if i have any new poem, i will update it in this thread!!    Edited by koolaries4 - 14 years ago

Guys, this is my latest poem, in Yuvi's POV asking Naina for one chance. Hope you guys like it!! 😃

 

14 years have been a waste
that is now my fate
now its me that you hate
with hatred at its highest rate
I hope you can one day forgive me,
And that its not too late,
For you to give love one more chance
And for us to go to our own mars,
which is void of any farce
Where all that remains are our hearts!!

 

Comments and Criticisms wellcome..

 

Tc,

 

MJ

xxx

Edited by koolaries4 - 14 years ago

This is lovely MJ...this is what he would be saying to her when he will realize his love for her...and the ending is so cute.. ..just perfect !!!

👏 👏 👏

luved ur poem..........

Awwwww MJ 🤗   BEAUTIFUL

 MJ dis was so  👍🏼 goes perfect wid da present situation....... n thnk u 4r giving da links of all poems🤗Edited by 1kaarzoo - 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo

 MJ dis was so  👍🏼 goes perfect wid da present situation....... n thnk u 4r giving da links of all poems🤗

MJ...love that poem!! lol Nainzie has finally forgiven him or so we think :P

Originally posted by: princessuma

MJ...love that poem!! lol Nainzie has finally forgiven him or so we think :P

 

 

and np for the idea...lol now I can access your poems whenever i want ha ha ha!!