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sinak

@sinak

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#461

Awesome. Finally Preet came to know the truth. Y dont they tell Veera the truth. Y hide from her.

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Angie

@angel82

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#462

Originally posted by: suryavni
toooooooo isshhmmaaaarrrtttttt👏
should I change the story line😆

thank you ange....and abt so many couples....well heer is the main axis....and Prem-heer romance will not take the story any far....

so just for a change..🤢

🤗loved your comment

are you getting bored dear????🥺

oh no dear, me not at all getting bored...ur right now that premeer are together with everyone's consent the story wont go far with just their romance...so xtra couples are needed...and its not boring at all trust me coz all the characters are interlinked and yes heer is the main axis.that makes me wonder if gauri is by any chance inderjeet's baby sister.

its just that in all the fanfics , i skip reading about characters other than premeer , i even skip meet scenes in most of them but here i am forced to read about all couples coz they are all interlinked and tell u what ,u are a very smart writer for doing that..u keep their parts limited , short yet significant .

plus usually its only prem who's my hero and heer my heroine but here though heer is the only heroine,

balraj and inderjeet are also heroes for me along with prem. but honestly i did skip the pratham -gauri , prateek -malini-meher parts earlier and now i have to go and dig them out to know what happend to gauri

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441240

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#463

another fab update........⭐️

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Dolly

@kptl

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#464

awesome....so preet knows.. im loving this father son bond its really touchy...update soon..

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sukrutha

@Sukrutha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#465

awesome update
i expected premeer scene but no probs
😊

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kavya

@premeer

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#466

Hello di
It's awesomeeeeeeeee ⭐️
Woww. ..itne saare stories ek saath...
kya baat hai!!
I hope premeer ache se ek saath rahe...
i like pratham-gauri tooo but you killed pratham na 😔
Waiting for the next update..Update sooon....

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@0577jj

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#467

Good update.

Now Preet's feelings towards Veera turns or not?

Want more Premeer also

Update soon.

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surya

@suryavni

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#468

Originally posted by: amu142
wow! so Preet knows...now this Anushka Chudail is also in! And poor Gauri.....how is Shiv related to her?

thank you amu!!!!

yeh....now Preet knows and is soon for another surprise too

anushka....🤔 will have to wait a bit to see her entry in her 'mission Prem'

you will get to know shiv and gauri's relation in the next update...

so keep urself ready for the first comment❤️👍🏼

luv

surya

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surya

@suryavni

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#469

Originally posted by: nspn.92
awsome update.
Waiting to read preeth's reaction.

And pls...dont let that anuskha enter in b/w premeer.

Update soon....

Thanks for the PM.

thank you nspn.92(i donno ur name dear...)!!!!

yeh....now Preet knows and his reaction ..umm...

anushka....🤔she will enter premeer life with her 'mission Prem

don't worry...how hard she may try....she'snot gonna get him..😃

luv

surya