DIL KA RISHTA- NAKSH FF (last part @ pg 106)

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 index  
part 1-page 1
part 2-page 2
part 3-page 4
part 4 -page 5
part 5-page 6
part 6-page 7
part 7 -page 9
 part 8-page 11
 part 9 -page 12
part 10 -page 15
part 11-page 18
part 12-page 22
part 13-page 26
part 14-page 30
part 15-page 34
part 16-page 38
part 17-page 44
 part 18-page 51  
part 19-page 60
 part 20-page 69
part 21-page 76
part 22-page 82
part 23-page 86
part 24-page 91
part 25-page 98
part 26-page 102
part 27-page 106
hi guys this is my first NAKSH FF . hope u all like it and plz plz do comment and give ur suggestions.

part 1 :

everything was settled in both singhania's and maheshwari's house.all misunderstandings were cleared. natik was very well settled in the family business and akshara was handling every thing very nicely and everyone treated her as daughter. one day daddaji was looking very happy. when bhabhi ma inquired about y he was happy , he told that his dearest friend have become grandfather when today his bahu delivered a baby boy.he said that his friend must b very happy and now he feels that he also wants a grandson.he asked bhabhima 2 talk 2 munna & bahu about this but bhabhima refused saying that she cant do it.daddaji then thought that now he only has 2 do something.suddenly an idea come in his mind that he should send his bahu and munna 4 a holiday for some weeks so that they can spend some time together and bhabhima also agreed wid him.at night,at d dinning table akshara,bhabhima&gayatri were serving Food.daddaji said 2 naitik,"munna manne thare se baat karni  hai."
naitik (looking tense):"ji daddaji kahiye."
there was silence everywhere and a atmosphere of tension was created.
daddaji:"maine socha hai ki thare ko aur bahu ko kyu na main kuch dino k liye chhuti par bhej du.waise bhi jab se thara biyah hua hai tum dono kahin saath ghumne na gaye.munna dekh office me zyada kam bhi na hai ab kyunki 1-2 mahine tak koi project na hai aur bahu ghar ka kaam thari saas aur bhabhima kar lengi , thoda kaam unko bhi karne diya kar."
there was still silence as no one can believe what daddaji just said.
naitik:"daddaji aap sach keh rahe hai kya main aur akshara ......."
daddaji:"hain hain me sach keh raha hu"
everyone becomes happy and akshara and naitik give a big smile to each other.naitik thanked daddaji alot.
daddaji:" bas kar munna ye thank u bolna ,jaldi se bhojan kar aur bahu ko jakar madad kar packing me aur bahu tu bhi jaldi se bhojan karle aur packing shuru kar de kal subah 10 baje ki flight hai tumhari kashmir ki."
naitik:"wow daddaji hum kashmir ja rahe hai."
daddaji:"ha tum kashmir ja rahe ho kyunki waha mhara khud ka cottage hai, thare ko zyada pareshani bhi na hogi.ab jao dono jaldi jakar packing karo."
naitik and akshara goes to there room.

will b updating next part soon.
guys plz do comment and give ur suggestions as it will help me alot.

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Posted: 14 years ago
rllly nice start dear......
so they r goin 4 a HM????
lukin 4ward 2 it.....
cont. soooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: Archana_Naksh

rllly nice start dear......

so they r goin 4 a HM????
lukin 4ward 2 it.....
cont. soooon

ya they r going for hm
will be updating soon
thnx 4 ur reply
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nice start yaar!!
really good update.
waiting for the next part.
the story build up is good!!
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chalo finally dadaajee ne kuch accha socha.....FF hi sahi
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good................very nice!Pls update the next part soon!
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gud yar.......plz update soon...
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very nice...
kaafi tym baad sumdng nice...
gud work..
luking 4 d next part...do post d next part soon and a very gus start...
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wow nice one plz update fast
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Originally posted by: nasco

nice start yaar!!
really good update.
waiting for the next part.
the story build up is good!!

thnx 4 d reply
will b cont. soon