Update ......... 2nd November

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The owner thinks that Adit is under some big burden for trying to steal in front of his son. He calls Abhi and offers him some money. He tells him never be a thief like his father. What gall!!!!! Abhi looks at the 100 rupee note menacingly and glares at the fatso. He throws down the note and screams at the man that his Papa is not a thief. He points his little finger threateningly (like A Bachchan often did as an angry young man). The man is a bit taken aback. The little boy goes to his dad and says, "let's go". The shameless owner is just watching with his mouth wide open. The devil take him!!! Adit stares at the man wanting to respond angrily. He remembers his folly and decides to keep quiet. He and Abhi start walking away. Along the way, Adit loses heart and sinks to the side of the pavement. He is heartbroken. Abhi asks him what the matter is and asks him if he should get him some water. He sees tears on his father's and tries to reassure him. He is soooooo sweeeeeeet. Adit hugs him and takes comfort from his little son. Abhi keeps telling him he's done nothing wrong since he's returned the money. He finally looks skywards and asks God if He thinks his father is wrong and to forgive his father. After a moment, he tells Adit that God has forgiven him. He tells him that they should be going home coz mummy would be waiting. He takes his hand and urges him to get up. Adit is stiff after the thrashing but gets up. They begin to walk but Adit is limping. Abhi tries to humour his father with a joke. He tells him he must laugh at it. Adit agrees. In this way my little braveheart restores his father's mood.

They return home. Adit gets a glass of water for Abhi. But Adit's head is still swirling. Abhi asks where mummy and Antara are. Adit starts to make a call when they return. Vidya has a fat envelope and Abhi wants to know what's in it. She gives it to him. She sees the bruise on Adit's forehead. He says it's the reward he got for speaking the truth. He explains the events to Vidya in Abhi's words. Abhi smiles. Adit says someone asked God to forgive me and He did. Father and son exchange a knowing look. He ruffles Abhi's hair and kisses him. Adit takes the envelope from Abhi and opens it. It is full of money. He looks at Vidya questioningly. She tells him she has encashed the FD and asks him to repay the loan. Adit says this was for Abhi. She says it is better to have a secure today and doesn't want them to live in fear. She says the thugs are unscrupulous and will harm the kids. She urges him to return the money to the hoodlums. But Adit doesn't agree. He doesn't want anyone to suffer because his bad decisions. Vidya tells him to forget everything and not think about it. It will bring more heartache. Put it behind you like a bad dream she tells him. She says they should treat it as a closed chapter and never talk about it again. They decide to fight the obstacles in life together. They smile at each other. Vidya says she's hungry, so why not have something sweet?

The whole family is going out and are hailing an auto. Angel sees an icecream stall and walks to it saying Antara icecream. She changes her chant to Vidya icecream. Vidya realises that Antara knows that Vidya wants something sweet to eat. They have icecream. How nice……

Adit goes back to the bank and meets the pig who is boss. He begs him to reinstate him. Adit is desparate and the pig is just as nasty. I will not go into the details of the scene in which Adit is treated like dirt.

Precap: Antara and Abhi are playing in the clinic when they knock down the vase. The odious secretary sounds off Vidya.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks Skep - wonderful update. I love the simplicity of the Verma family - finding joy in the simplest of things like eating ice cream, so pure, so touching & these emotions, events, moments are absolutely beautifully captured & shared with us by you Skep...thanks again!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I loved the icecream scene...well bonded family...
Thx skepti
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thank u it was an awesome update⭐️..i could just visualize the scenes by just reading ur wordings😳

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