~*~Prida Romantic Scene Thread~*~

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Welcome, writers and readers, to the beautiful world of Prithvi Saxena & Damini Gujral!

Many members tend to write short scenes (mini fanfics), poems, and even caption stories on Prida and even more enjoy reading them. Since it becomes hard to locate these beautifully created pieces it was thought that perhaps they could all be posted on one thread. So everyone, please, make sure that if you write any type of fictional piece on PRIDA, be it fanfic, mini-dialogue, poem, or even a captions story, that all of you post them HERE so it is easier to find them!!

This thread brings you the brilliant opportunity to create and share your own scenes for our beloved pair of Prithvi & Damini filled with lots of love, emotions, drama, action, suspense, etc. 

So let's start creating the best scenes possible and make it enjoyable for everyone.
 
 
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~Prida Up-to-Date Storyline~
(All credit and thanks for the summary goes to Who-I-Used-2-Be (Sarah).)

Is it a fairytale? Is it a beautiful dream? PriDa's story is simply mesmerizing, and it has gripped countless hearts around the globe, cast a spell on so many people, and made them live, sleep and breathe these characters. We are so into their journey that it feels like its our own tale, our personal story. We dream their dreams, fear their fears, are angry during their rages, think their thoughts, feel their feelings, and fall in love with them and love every time we see them weaving magic with the poetry in motion these two create together . PriDa are no more just two fictional characters to many of us, they're like real people, and we care about them to such an extent that sometimes we scare ourselves. PriDa and time are out to charm us with this tale which has come to life with GauCha's wonderful portrayal of these two characters with so much spunk.

Fate brought these two face to face when his brother was about to kidnap her sister. Their first encounter set the perfect stage for a love story to cherish in the days to come, and their chemistry crackled, burned and sizzled. Half of his face was hidden, they just looked at each other, and there was nothing there, no emotion, because they had just met, and that too in the most bizarre of situations, but the moment was enthralling and the air trembled. Then their first proper meeting happened, and nobody could miss seeing the admiration for each other on Prithvi and Damini's faces initially during their first official meeting, but they stayed true to their characters, and their pride and ego won the race. There started a battle of wits, which saw them mostly at loggerheads, then and afterwards, both of them trying to outplay the other, trying to come out as the winner of every argument and situation .There were sparks, there were mad rages, there was fire, and the atmosphere burned with their chemistry. The attraction they felt for each other was undeniable, but they hated each other's guts and the thick veil of anger, ego, and hate kept their attraction and the remains of their former minute-long admiration for each other buried deep.

Then a stage called 'The knight in shining armour, and the falling princess' made an appearance. This phase involved the hand of fate and some beautiful and mysterious incidents trying to bring these two closer in spite of their own plans. The princess couldn't help but trip or end up being in awkward situations in his presence, and the knight was always there to lend a helping hand, to save her from falling and other disasters. But she still hated him apparently, and he seemed to be softening towards her, though he didn't let go of the tough exterior. The next stage was the start of a sense of companionship between these two. He started to feel her pain when her fianc hurt her, and he admitted his confusion to himself and asked the question why he couldn't help but stare at her. She began warming up to him too because he had been there for her in her tough times, and he became a kind of companion to her. They shared an awkward phone call, which clearly showed the tension between them, and how two people act when they are starting to put their initial resentment aside and suddenly find themselves softening towards someone they have mostly had a difference of opinion with.

But the death of his father changed everything, and he embarked on a journey of destroying her mother to avenge the death, because he held her responsible for it. He was all set to hurt her in order to hurt her mother. He suppressed his feelings for her, and vengeance shadowed and hid his budding affection. He came back in her life with a dark purpose, but he should have known better. He started acting according to his vengeful plan, but he could not stay businesslike and hard when she was involved in the equation, and when his plan began hurting her, he felt her pain too. They shared their first hug; He got to witness her vulnerable side, her tears and her pain. He couldn't help it and tried to comfort her. She was sad, broken and emotionally shattered because of her fiance, and he was confused about his feelings and his plans, and suffered with her when she was suffering. This established his battle within himself, a battle he would have to fight no matter what. He took a bullet for her too in the process. She started feeling the distant footsteps of the first stages of the thing called love. The following days saw Damini Gujral softening towards him, attending to his wounds, and him not being able to resist her softer side. He had come back with plans to destroy her emotionally, but he couldn't help caring about this girl. She was falling more and more for him, and he was getting impressed with her guts, was starting to admire her strength, and couldn't help getting lost in the feeling and gazing at her. She made him forget all about his revenge plans whenever she was in the same vicinity, and he couldn't help but lose himself. They shared a fairytale ride on Toofan, their cupid, which only made it clearer how happy his presence made her feel, and how he couldn't remain himself, and stay true to his plan, when she was in close proximity.

One fine day, her mom sent them on a date. They had their first date and bonded. Even though he remained mysterious and she was the one who mostly opened up, but he still couldn't help getting involved and living the moment, and showed his jealous and possessive side when someone else tried to dance with her . They shared their first dance and some moments where they got lost into each other's eyes, but in the end he remembered his mission and freaked out. A heated argument brought them back to square one, and on the surface, they again became an employer and an employee. In the following days, they went back in their shells, and some lines were redrawn. Formality and distance entered their relationship again, though deep inside, both of them knew that they had never been an employer and her employee. And then there was time for some awkwardness, and they started behaving like teenagers in love around each other.

Her mom had other plans, and she asked Prithvi if he would like to marry her daughter, Prithvi couldn't believe his ears and his stars and left. PriDa had a battle of wits again and were back to their old snarky selves. Then he saved her life again from the horse on the loose, they had their silent moment when the songs of silence told tales and time stopped when they got lost into each other's eyes. She took care of his wound again, and they exchanged some meaningful lines. The time that followed witnessed the best of PriDa ever. There was cuteness, there was awkwardness and there were these two proud people, in a beautifully uncomfortable situation which left them tongue-tied at times..They had a marriage talk where she questioned him about the proposal, and they couldn't even dare look at each other. He emotionally supported her when the news of her mom's illness shook her, and they shared some poignant moments when he promised her he would always be there for her. They found comfort with each other and then they both said 'yes' to the wedding in front of her 'mom'..One more milestone in their relationship was achieved when she wanted him to drop the 'Aap' and start calling her 'Tum.'

One month passed which the world didn't get to witness. In that one month they have come closer than ever, he isn't sure whether he is going into this marriage for love or for revenge, but he deeply cares about her and respects her, and is touched by her concern for his family..Damini Gujral has come a long way from where she started. She seems like a lady in love, and is positively glowing these days. She respects him and seems like she (almost) loves him. He is still fighting a battle within, between duty and his feelings for her. And they are about to get bonded in holy matrimony.

They got married, but circumstances didn't allow them to be much with wach other. It was fate's own plan to keep them close, yet far apart, and one after another, things came up.

Her feelings for him knew no bounds, and she was all in. Her marriage to her beau made Damini look more beautiful than ever, and nobody could miss the glow of love Prithvi's presence added to Damini's face. But Prithvi's demons didn't let Prithvi come close to his wife, and he did everything possible to resist her, despite yearning for her, despite caring about her, and loving her.


One fateful night, Prithvi could no longer keep playing 'resistance-resistance' and he surrendered to his feelings. PriDa came quite close to becoming one, but Prithvi's demons came back to haunt him and he pulled away before they could go all the way.


He decided that he couldn't let this happen again because of the complications surrounding them, and that he would drive her away from her. Hurting her pained him too, but he thought he was acting in her best interests.


Damini's love for Prithvi didn't let her see and investigate the real reason why her husband was acting strange, and she came up with one excuse after another to justify his actions. She was hurt by his indifference, but did everything to please him and even started changing herself, or rather trying things she never imagined she would try for the sake of love..


Prithvi came to know about his mother-in-law's innocence, and this realization changed everything. Finally, it was time for him to repent and make up for the lost moments. But by that time, Damini had decided to leave him.


He tried to win her back, and PriDa finally admitted their love for each other and became one. He decided that he would tell her the whole truth.


~To be continued~


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Edited by Erutan99 - 14 years ago
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~Index~

Erutan99 (Ivy)- pgs. 2, 10, 32, 33, 77
Hapinezz13 (Honey)- pgs. 2, 7, 31, 57, 82
Diya86 (Diya)- pgs. 2, 4, 5, 7, 14, 18, 22, 37, 51, 62, 72, 81
Rankanrock (Maham)- pgs. 2, 4, 78, 98
Mridhu- pgs. 3, 12, 24, 47, 78
Kheerni (Nisha)- pgs. 3, 8, 15, 21, 63, 79
Achuman (Achu)- pg. 3, 27, 59, 78, 84, 93
Soapbubble (Bubble)- pg. 4
Current (Zainab)- pg. 4
Mihirmishrafan- pg. 4
Dawn Idol- pg. 4
Sistu- pgs. 5, 12, 13, 17, 26, 30, 34, 43, 65, 69, 83
Who-I-Used-2-Be (Sarah)- pg. 5, 35, 54
Maleka.QN- pg. 6
Shwetha- pg. 6
aish_punk (Aish)- pg. 38
Lifez_Beautiful (Niki)- pgs. 40, 45, 79, 106
kwaii hime (Maisooma)- pg. 50
nikita_88 (Nikita)- pg. 80
nature (Nids)- pgs. 86, 102
adventure_gurl (Sonali)- pg. 88
liv2laugh (Jhan)- pg. 89
leaves45- pg. 95
rachel.fds- pg. 95
MMM1 (Mru)- pgs. 98, 103
Shruti14- pg. 101 
Snehakapoor- pg. 104
Viddu- pg. 105
maziya.ibrahim (Maz)- pg. 102

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~Scene Ideas~
  • (Credit goes to Diya) PriDa are on a business trip when their car gets a flat on the way and so they have to stop in the middle of nowhere. Prithvi attempts to change the tire, while Damini is yelling at him the whole time...
  • (Credit goes to Krups) Prida-Rosh irritating Damini scene where Rosh sides with prithvi and almost calls him jeej!!!! and Prithvi supports Rosh's naiviety to irritate damini...
  • (Credit goes to Ektaj) Prida play some sort of game, either Anktakshri or Truth & Dare and reveal their feelings for each other during the course of the game...
  • (Credit goes to coolfire) Write a scene where Roshni raves about Prithvi's looks in front of Damini...
  • Pick a holiday no matter how remote or unheard of and write a scene for Prida relating somehow to the holiday. The holiday can be a prominent part of the story or just mentioned slightly. The whole point is to write a scene where Prithvi and Damini are celebrating the said holiday in some sort of way. Here is a list of holiday you could write about or you could go to the Official Holidays Site for ideas.
  • Profess your love day-June 9th
  • June 14th --- Loving day
  • June 18th --- reccess at work day
  • June 21st --- father's day
  • "Unique names day"
  • Recesses @ Work Day
  • First Nights Day - Dec 31
  • "Lips appreciation Day" is on March 16th
  • "Awkward Moments Day" on March 18th.
  • proposal day March 29th
  • "make up your own holiday day march 26th
  • national she's funny that way day march 31st 
  • National fun at work day-april 1st
  • poetry and the creative mind day-april 1st 
  • reconcilation day-april 2nd
  • that sucks day-april 15th
  • blah! blah! Blah! day-april 17th
  • national dance day-april 29th
  • Decide to be Married Day on June 27th
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**Writing by Erutan99**

 
 
 
FICTION 1
(My version of the scene where Prida are discussing/arguing about the qualities Damini's new body guard needs to have.)
 
 
"Why?" Even as she sarcastically asked this her eyes once more slid down to glance at his bare chest. Forcing herself to look back up at Prithvi and focus on their conversation she willed herself to not start blushing. "If u can be perfect..." ...is it just me or is his shirt more unbuttoned than usual..."then why can't someone else be as well..."
 
She barely noticed as Prithvi rolled his eyes and glanced heavenwards in exasperation as once again her eyes slid to his muscled chest. Swallowing hard she glanced in the opposite direction. But a split second later her eyes were once more on his chest even as she forced herself to look at the ground, towards the horses, anywhere but him. God, why is it getting so hot all of a sudden...Swallowing again she resisted the urge to fan herself.
 
"Actually I needed to talk to u about something...." Damini quickly glanced back at him in surprise...He looks really good in this shirt-NO-Come on, Damini! Focus! "....The thing is that-" God, how much does he work out...?
 
Damini let out a growl of frustration cutting the surprised Prithvi off midsentence. "Err...Daminiji...?"
 
Frustratrated and tired of not being able to focus Damini took two steps closer to Prithvi and grabbed the shocked man by his unbuttoned collar. "Damin-wha-why-...?" The handsome COS stuttered even as Damini quickly and efficiently buttoned up his shirt until only the last two buttons were left...debating on whether to leave them alone or not she decided to let them be as she didn't want him looking too prudish...just didn't want him distracting her is all...
 
With a smile she patted him on the chest and backed away. "Sorry, it was distracting me." Brushing back her hair and crossing her arms over her chest she cooly nodded at the still gaping man in front of her to continue. "You were saying...?"
 
"Um...yes...that is...I mean....the thing is..."
 
"Sir! The other applicants for the bodyguard position are here." Prithvi quickly pulled himself together as he nodded at the man. "Should I send them out here?"
 
"NO! I mean no I'm coming." Pulling his act together he turned and nodded at Damini and quickly strode away his thoughts racing a hundred miles per hour...just what the heck had happened back there?
 
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**Writing by hapinezz13**

 
 
 
FICTION 1
 
Pri: "aapko mein perfect lagta hoon?"
Da:" Kya?...maine aisa kab kaha?"
Pri :"Aaj subha.."
Da.." Woh woh as a BG...haan"
Pri: "Sirf BG?"
Da."Matlab?"
Pri : "Matlab yeh ki Damini ji main toh personal n professional main difference samjhta nahi....toh perfect kaise?"
Da: " Isiliye toh....Kyunki ab tum professional se mere personal BG jo hone wale ho?"
Pri " Matlab?"
Da " Matlab yeh Prithvi ji ki..ki.."
Pri.." Ki?"
Da" Kuch nahi kal baat karenge...aaj boss ka mood nahi hai!!"
 
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