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MM to mayur : Iss ghar k darwaje tumhare liye band hai
(sara gang mayank ki mom ki ye
baat sun kar hairaan hai, k mayank ki mom jo nupur ko hamesha se hi chahti thi,
pr aaj jab mayank aur nupur ki shadi ho gyi hai to wo aise react karengi kisi
ne socha bhi nhi tha)
Su : per maa, tum to hamesha se
yahi chahti thi k mayank ki shadi nupur se hi ho, aur aaj tum aise keh rhi ho.
MM : Pr mayank nupur ko aise
shadi karke layega ye maine
socha bhi nhi tha
S : Pr aunty..
MM : pr war kuch nhi, maine keh dia k iss ghar
k darwaje inn dono k liye band hai to band hai..
G : pr aunty.. hume to laga tha k
aap inn dono k sath ho..
(sabke chehre udas dekh kar
mayank ki mom hasne lag jati hai)
MM : oye hoye mere bacho, aisa ho
skta hai kya, k main apne bacho k sath nhi hu.
(sabke face pr smile wapas aa
jati hai)
Su : maa, aap bhi naa' aapne to
dara hi diya tha
MM : tum log drama kar skte ho..
aur main nhi
M : main tum bhi naa.. Mujhe lga
tum sach me humse naraz ho aur ''.
MM : aur kya'bol to main bhi
sunu'.
M : maa pls..
Su : chalo bhai nupur bhabhi ko
ander le chalo..
MM : nhi.. bilkul nhi'
(Everyone again shocked.. k
mayank ki mom ko ab kya hua.)
MM : arre sab ki tarah mere bhi
armaan the k main apne bete ki shadi me ye karungi wo karungi, pr isne jis
tarike se shadi ki hai main kuch nhi kar payi, kam se kam bahu ka swagat to
main apne tarike se hi karungi'aur iske liye mujhe time chahiye.. to tum sare
friends tab tak garden me baitho.. aur haan chaho to mere bahu aur bete ki
class bhi le skte ho.
Su : maa main bhi aati hu aapke
sath''
MM : bilkul nhi'mujhe pta hai ye
sab drama tum sab ki mili bhagat thi.. to tum bhi bahar hi raho
(sare friends mayank k ghar k
bahar garden me baith jaate hai, Sare kuch derr to chup hi baithe hote hai,
tabhi sarmat ko shrarat sujhti hai, wo nupur ko kehta hai)
S : nupur tumhari dress pr
chipkali'..
(as all knows k nupur ko chipkali
se darr lagta hai, nupur chik padti hai
N : kahaan hai chipkali'' (nupur
ekdum se khadi se ho jati hai.. aur darr k mare wo apni dress jhadne lagti hai,
M to N : relax nupur' koi
chipkali nhi hai..(mayank nupur ko relax karne ki liye khada hota hai, iss
chakker me mayor ka after marriage Ist eyecontact hota hai, & there is
eyelock.. & mayu lost in nupur's beauty)
M : U r too b'ful dear, I can't
believe it k main tumhe khone hi wala tha, agar kho deta to main khud ko kabhi
maaf nhi kar pata.
N : (blushing) : mujhe to abhi
bhi yakeen nhi ho rha hai k hum dono sath me hai,
(both are very closed to each
other. Suddenly Adhiraj)
A : Ahem Ahem.. iss baat ka yakin
dilane k liye hum hai,
(nupur & mayank feels
embrassed aur dono ek dusre ki opposite side dekhne lagte hai)
S : arre sharmao mat.. ab to tum
logo ko officially permission mil gyi hai, jo chahe karo.
M : shut up, samrat tumhe nhi
lagta ye kuch zyada ho rha hai
S: Oh yeh zyada ho rha hai, badi
jaldi bhul gyi abhi to baat ko 24 hrs bhi nhi huye hai, jo tumne kiya, uss se
zyada kuch ho bhi nhi skta tha
M : haan, pr mujhe ab pta chal
chukka hai k wo tum logo ki chaal thi, apni chaal me tum logo ne apne dosto ko
fasya
G : Agar naa fasate' to jo tumne
kiya wo tum karte kya.. syad kabhi nhi
karte
S : ye baat to thik boli
chismish' waise hume thoda sa flashback me chalna chahiye' aaj to mrs. Nupur
bhushan sharma chup hai, warna inki zuban to rukti hi nhi thi..
N : samrat aisi koi baat nhi hai,
A : to fir kaisi baat hai Mrs.
Sharma.
Su : waise hum sabko to confirmed
tha k tum dono ek dusre ko psnd karte ho, bas tum dono ko hi confirmed karwana
hai
U : aur wo humne achche se karwaya.
Mera to mann kar raha hai ek baar flashback me jaane kaa'
N : kya karma hai jaake
(blsuhsing)
B : ab to jaana hi padega..to
start main karta hu aaj se 3 din pehle jab mr. mayank sharma ko ye news mili ki
nupur bhushan shadi kar rhi hai to fir
U : fir uske baad kya
hua???????????
D : uske baad jo hua usse jaane k
liye flash back me jaaya jaaye
3 days before
(mayank ko jab pta chala k nupur
ki shadi fix ho gyi hai, aur shadi bhi sirf 3 din baad hai, yeh baat sun kar
mayank kafi gusse me aa gya aur jiske chalte usne apna cell kafi zor se zameen
pr fekha, aur uska cell tut gya. As usual mayank k sare contact cell me hi save
the sivay nupur k aur apne ghar k number k usse koi aur number yaad bhi nhi tha,
mayank ghar pr suhani ko call karta hai
M : Hi suhani, kaisi ho tum
SU : bhai main to bilkul thik hu.
Bhai tum kaise ho.
M : Tum yeh sab chodo, aur yeh
btao k nupur kaisi hai
Su : wo Kaisi hogi bhai, arre
uski shadi hai 3 din baad, aur usse ladke ka naam tak nhi pta, aisa lag rha
hai, jaise k usse koi khushi hi nhi hai, aur wo jan na bhi nhi chah rhi hai,
tabhi to itni jaldi sab kuch ho rha hai K hum sab log 3 din tak nupur k ghar me
hi rehne wale hai, sare intzaam k liye, taki uske parents ko koi problem naa
ho. Bhai tum aa rhe ho naa nupur ki shadi me
(mayank phone cut kar deta hai)
Su to herself : isse kya hua?????
Pr jo bhi hua achcha hua.
(mayank delhi se sidha Mumbai ki
train pakad k jaane ki sochta hai, pr usse itni jaldi koi train ka ticket bhi
nhi mil pata, aur jis train ka usse ticket milta hai, usme bhi uska naam
waiting me hota hai, aur wo bhi next day ka)
Nupur k ghar me
G : di tum iss shadi se khus to
ho
N : haan meri pyari behana
G : pr mujhe aisa lag rha hai, k
tum ye sab mere liye kar rhi ho
N : haan ye to hai, jab tak meri
shadi nhi hogi, tu aur samrat kaise shadi kar paoge
G : di to mayank ka kya hoga
N (with a sad tone) : kya pta..
aur kaun sa usne kabhi kuch kaha tha, aur kya pta uske dil me kuch hai bhi ya
sirf ye college k dino ka mazak hai, aur kya fark padta hai, waise bhi hum kaun
si itni baat karte hai, mujhe pta hai wo meri shadi me bhi nhi aayega, fir bhi
mujhe uska intzaar to rahega hi
G : di, tum kam se kam jiju ka
naam to jaan lo
N : kya fark padta hai, agar wo
mayank nhi hai to koi bhi ho, uss se kya fark padta hai,
(nupur wahaan se uth kar chali
jati hai, gunjan pure gang ko phone karke batati hai k uski nupur se kya baat
huyi aur ye bhi k aaj nupur ki mehandi hai)
(nupur mehandi se pehle puja me
baithi hoti hai, tab sara gang nupur aur mayank k bare me gunjan k room me
discuss karte hai)
G : samrat tumhe yakin hai k
tumhara plan successful hoga???
S : chismish iss bare hamare pass
koi option bhi nhi hai, iss plan ko successful hona hi hoga
A : aur haan, abhi nupur ko ye
nhi pta hai k bali ka bakra main hu, ye sari shadi mere naam se ho rhi hai,
Su : aur agar adhiraj ki shadi
sachmuch nupur se ho gyi to????
A : to main batata hu, kya hoga,
Main tum me se kisi ko bhi nupur se zindagi bhar baat nhi karne dunga, chahe
kuch bhi ho jaye
B : ye to koi baat naa huyi
A : yahi sari baat hai dekh lo,
kyunki mayank ka phone nhi lag rha hai,
Su : aur bhai k office me kisi ko
pta nhi hai k bhai kahaan hai,
A : haan to ab tum log dekh lo
kya karma hai,
S : karna kya hai, mayank aayega
aur usse aana hi hoga.
(tabhi nupur k bauji aate hai aur
kehte hai k unlogo ko nupur k sath hona chahiye, sab mehandi ki rasm me shamil
hai, nupur bhi khus lag rhi hai k uske shadi hai, pr jaise hi ladke ki baat
chalti, uske chehre pr ek udasi ki lakeer si aati, pr as always wo apni udasi
chupa jati, uske liye bas yahi tha k agar uski shadi mayank se nhi ho rhi to ab
kisi se bhi ho usse koi fark nhi padta.. iss tarah mehandi ki rasm bhi khatam
ho jati hai)
Next Day In The Morning
G : di pls aisa naa karo
N : by god gunjan, aisa kya kar
dia maine?????
G : di tum janti hona main kis
bare me baat kar rhi hu
N : aur main uss bare me baat nhi
karna chahti aur aaj meri shadi hai, pls tu mera mud mat kharab kar.. itni
muskilo se to main shadi k liye maani hu, warna teri shadi kaise hoti
G : haan, bina ladke ko jaane tum
yeh shadi kar rhi ho, tumhe to ladke ka naam tak nhi pta
N : kya fark padta hai, chal mujhe
emotional blackmail mat kar, aaj meri shadi hai,
(nupur wahaan se chali jati hai,
gunjan ye sari baat pure gang ko batati hai, sara gang tension me hai k mayank
ka kuch pta nhi hai,ab kya hoga sabko issi baat ki tension hai )
(sham ko nupur jab shadi k liye taiyar hoti
hai, to itni sunder lagti hai, k sara gang kehta hai k uski nazar utharana to
banta hai)
S to N : hey sweet heart, maine glat ladki choice
ki hai, kisi ne sach hi kaha hai k ek ladki sabse zyada khubsurat apni shadi k
whqt hi lagti hai,
N : waise ye compliment tha ya
comment?????
S : tumhe kya lagta hai'
N : kuch bhi ho skta hai..
S : pr aaj to compliment hi hai..
sweety
N : sweety?????tumhari tabiyat to
thik hai naa..
S : haan bilkul''.
N : to yahaan kyun khade ho jao
aur bauji ki help karo.. ye tum sabki responisibility
S : Jo agya devi ji..
N to all : jao bhi.. meri shakal
kya dekh rhe ho
(sara gang nupur k room se bahar
chala jata hai, sabko tension hai k mayank abhi tak nhi aaya hai.. ab kya hoga..
tabhi samrat kisi kaam se ghar se bahar jaane lagta hai, tabhi wo mayank ko
bahar garden me nupur k room ki window k thik niche kuch sochta hua dekhta hai)
S to himself : cool'.aakhir
mayank sharma aa hi gya.. ab plan B ki zarurat nhi padegi, abhi iske pass jau
ya nhi'.chalo rehne deta hu.. isne kaun sa hume bataya k ye Mumbai aa gya hai,
aur jab iski behan ko nhi pta to mujhe kaise pta hoga.. yahaan se chala
jaaye..dekhte hai k mayank sharma karta kya hai..
FLASHBACK ENDS
S : ab ye bhi hum hi bole ya tum
kuch kahoge
M : guys jo cheez tumhe pta hai
wo kyun baar baar repeat kar rhe ho
Su : bhai kya hai naa k agar tum
time se nhi aate to hume plan B use karna padta
N : pr plan B tha kya
G : di wo bhi bta denge, pr abhi
to hume ye pta karna hai k mayank jiju tumhare room me achanak se kaise prakat
huye
M : achanak se nhi.. mujhe ye pta
tha k agar me sidhe raaste se enter hua to jo bhi mujhe dekhega wo koi naa koi
swal puchega.. aur mujhe sabse pehle nupur se baat karni thi..isliye main
sidhioyo se nupur k room me gya.. Jis tarah se suhani ne bataya k nupur ko ladke kaa naam bhi nhi pta,
main samjh gaya
tha k pakka syad hi koi ho uske room me. Aur uss whqt meri nupur se baat karni
zyada zaruri thi, ye dekhne ki jagah k nupur k room me kaun hai ya nhi'.(again
eyelock in mayur)
S : ahem ahem'(mayur eyelock
broken) uske baad thodi si hum sab ki tariff bhi ho jaye.. sahi whqt pr nupur k
bauji ko nupur k room me bhejne k liye hume thanx bolo'
M : haan haan' kyun nhi
Su : suhani pr bhai tumne abhi
tak yeh nhi bataya k room me tumne bauji aur nupur se tumhari kya baat huyi
M : to tum log mujhe nhi chodne
wale..
All : bilkul nhi'''.
M : jab main window tak pahucha
to dekha k nupur apne room me bed pr diwar k sahare aankhne band karke baithi
hai, aisa lag rha tha, jaise usse koi fark hi nhi pad rha hai, k uske aas pass
kya ho rha hai, pr jaise hi main window se aander aaya, galti se vas gir gya
N : tum yahaan kya kar rhe ho,
aur sidhe raste nhi aa skte the kya
M : sidhe raste se aata to
tumhari vidai pr hi tumse mil paata
N : oh. To tum meri shadi attend
karne aaye ho, jao aur niche jaake kaam karwao
M : tumhe kya lagta hai??????
N : mayank lagne me aur hone me
bahut fark hota hai, aur ab mujhe kuch bhi lagna band ho gya hai, mere sath jo
bhi ho rha hai, main bas usse hone dena chahti hu.. chahe wo kaisa bhi kyun naa
ho. Ab main kuch bhi rokna nhi chahti
M : thik hai, fir jo main karne
jaa rha hu, ya kehne jaa rha hu ab mujhe mat rokna.
N : mayank tum?????
M : ssshhhh' hume chod k sab
jante hai k hum kya chahte hai, pr bas hum dono me se koi kuch kehna hi nhi
chahta..hamesha se dono ne yahi intzaar kiya hai k pehle samne wala bole.. aur
iske chalte aaj ye din aaya hai, main jaanta hu k syad bahut derr ho chuki pr
per main yeh bhi janta hu k zindagi abhi khatam nhi huyi hai, pr main ek baar
koshish zarur karna chahta hu(both are face to face mayank one step forward
& nupur one step backward, room ki wall aane se nupur ruk jaati hai, dono
behad karib hai, nupur apni aankhen band kar leti hai)
M : I love U Nupur (Nupur ye
sunte hi apni aankhen khol leti hai, aur mayank jo uske behad kareeb khada hai,
uss se kuch kadmo ki duri bana leti hai aur apna face bhi mayank ki opposite
side kar leti hai..)
N : mayank wo wo mainnnnnnnn (
tabhi nupur k bauji nupur k room me aate hai, aur mayank ko uske room me dekh
kar surprised reh jate hai)
BG : mayank tum kab aaye, maine to tumhe dekha hi
nhi.. mujhe to laga tha k tum aaoge hi nhi
M : pranam bauji.. agar main aaj
bhi nhi aata to syad kabhi khud ko maaf nhi kar pata
BG : main kuch samjha nhi beta'.
M : main janta hu k syad bahut
derr ho chuki hai, pr fir bhi main chahta hu k ek baar aap meri baat sune, fir
aap jo kahenge wo hi hoga
BG ; Haan kaho beta..
M : main aapki beti nupur se pyar
se karta hu, aur ye bhi janta hu k wo bhi karti hai, pr wo kahegi nhi.. bas
chahta hu k aap bhi hamara sath de
BG : beta.. main to hamesha se hi
chahta tha, pr ab syad kafi derr ho chuki hai, ladke wale niche baithe hai,
thodi derr me nupur ko bahar le jaana hoga.
M : bauji.. aap bas apna ashirwad
dijiye.. ladke se main khud baat karunga.. main koi aisa kaam nhi karunga.. jis
se nupur ya aapko sharminda hona pade.. bas mujhe ek baar koshish karne dijiye'
BG : thik hai, main kuch karta
hu..
A : uske baad bauji ne jab mujhe
btaya k mayank aa gya hai aur wo mujh se baat karna chahta hai, bauji to
tension me lag rhe the, mujhe to ussi whqt lag gya tha k hamra plan successful
ho gya hai..aur jab mayank mujhse baat karne aaya to thodi si tag khichai k
baad maine
usse keh dia k wo jo jee chahe kar skta hai, waise bhi iss shadi me zyada log
nhi the, bas nupur aur meri family k log the.. aur waise bhi kisi ko invitation
card de kar to bulaya nhi tha, to kuch khas hona bhi nhi tha. Nupur k bauji se
hamne haan karwa hi li
M : ahem ahem.. adhiraj tumhe nhi
lagta k tum kuch batana bhul rhe ho..
A : mayank chodo naa usse'
S : aisa kya hai jo mayank ko pta
hai aur hume nhi
M : yahi k adhiraj ne mujh se
kaha k iske badle me usse rishwat me chahiye k main uski help karu suhani ka
dil jitne me'
Su : blushing..(tabhi mayank ki
maa ki awaz aati hai suhani k liye.. suhani wahaan se aise bhagti hai, jaise wo
iss whqt iss cheez ka intzaar kar rhi ho.. thodi derr baad suhani aati hai)
Su : bhaiya maa ne bhabhi k sath
aap logo ko bulaya hai..aaj bhabhi ka greh-pravesh hai..
(mayank k ghar pr nupur aur
mayank ka puri rasmo riwaz k sath greh parwesh karwaya jaata hai, as nupur k
liye wo ghar pehle se hi apna hai..nupur mayank k room me matlab k apne room me
mirror k aage khade ho ke apne baal sahi karne ki koshish kar rhi hai)
N to herself : by god.. nupur..
tera kya hoga.. kuch kaam hoga teri life me planning se, jo planning hoti hai
wo hota nhi, aur without planning k sab kuch ho jata hai.. hmm ab inn baalo ko
hi le' uff kya hoga mera
(mayank room me enter hota hai,
pr nupur apne balo k sath itni busy hoti hai k wo ye notice hi nhi kar pati.. mayank nupur k thik piche jaa kar
khada ho jata hai, achanak nupur ki nazar mirror pr padti hai to wo mayank ko
apne piche khada dekhti hai, nupur apne hath me comb dekhti hai, usse jaldi se
rakhti hai, tabhi mayank mirror me usse ishare se kehta hai, k jab wo aur nupur
sath me hote hai to wo chahe jaisi bhi ho unki jodi perfect hi dikhti hai.. Nupur
blashing..nupur mudti hai pr wo mayank se takra jati hai aur uska balance bigad
jaata hai.. pr as always mayank usse girne se bacha leta hai' there is
eyelock..)
M : maine to keh dia.. pr sun na baki hai
N : kya????
M : tum janti ho main kya sun na
chahta hu
N : mujhe nhi pta''.
(nupur khud ko mayank se chuda
kar jane lagti hai, pr mayank usse uski kalai se pakad leta hai..)
M : aaj to main wo sun kar hi
rahunga'' aur ab to mujhe official permission bhi hai
N : achcha to aur kis kis baat ki
official permission hai
M : thoda pass aao to main batata
hu
(mayank nupur ko waist se pakad
leta hai'''.mayank start kiss on her neckline'.)
Iske baad lights off ho gyi
Edited by Annudsweetgirl - 14 years ago
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