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MM to mayur : Iss ghar k darwaje tumhare liye band hai

(sara gang mayank ki mom ki ye baat sun kar hairaan hai, k mayank ki mom jo nupur ko hamesha se hi chahti thi, pr aaj jab mayank aur nupur ki shadi ho gyi hai to wo aise react karengi kisi ne socha bhi nhi tha)

Su : per maa, tum to hamesha se yahi chahti thi k mayank ki shadi nupur se hi ho, aur aaj tum aise keh rhi ho.

MM : Pr mayank nupur ko aise shadi karke layega ye maine socha bhi nhi tha

S : Pr aunty..

MM : pr war kuch nhi, maine keh dia k iss ghar k darwaje inn dono k liye band hai to band hai..

G : pr aunty.. hume to laga tha k aap inn dono k sath ho..

(sabke chehre udas dekh kar mayank ki mom hasne lag jati hai)

MM : oye hoye mere bacho, aisa ho skta hai kya, k main apne bacho k sath nhi hu.

(sabke face pr smile wapas aa jati hai)

Su : maa, aap bhi naa… aapne to dara hi diya tha

MM : tum log drama kar skte ho.. aur main nhi

M : main tum bhi naa.. Mujhe lga tum sach me humse naraz ho aur …….

MM : aur kya…bol to main bhi sunu….

M : maa pls..

Su : chalo bhai nupur bhabhi ko ander le chalo..

MM : nhi.. bilkul nhi…

(Everyone again shocked.. k mayank ki mom ko ab kya hua.)

MM : arre sab ki tarah mere bhi armaan the k main apne bete ki shadi me ye karungi wo karungi, pr isne jis tarike se shadi ki hai main kuch nhi kar payi, kam se kam bahu ka swagat to main apne tarike se hi karungi…aur iske liye mujhe time chahiye.. to tum sare friends tab tak garden me baitho.. aur haan chaho to mere bahu aur bete ki class bhi le skte ho.

Su : maa main bhi aati hu aapke sath……

MM : bilkul nhi…mujhe pta hai ye sab drama tum sab ki mili bhagat thi.. to tum bhi bahar hi raho

(sare friends mayank k ghar k bahar garden me baith jaate hai, Sare kuch derr to chup hi baithe hote hai, tabhi sarmat ko shrarat sujhti hai, wo nupur ko kehta hai)

S : nupur tumhari dress pr chipkali…..

(as all knows k nupur ko chipkali se darr lagta hai, nupur chik padti hai

N : kahaan hai chipkali…… (nupur ekdum se khadi se ho jati hai.. aur darr k mare wo apni dress jhadne lagti hai,

M to N : relax nupur… koi chipkali nhi hai..(mayank nupur ko relax karne ki liye khada hota hai, iss chakker me mayor ka after marriage Ist eyecontact hota hai, & there is eyelock.. & mayu lost in nupur's beauty)

M : U r too b'ful dear, I can't believe it k main tumhe khone hi wala tha, agar kho deta to main khud ko kabhi maaf nhi kar pata.

N : (blushing) : mujhe to abhi bhi yakeen nhi ho rha hai k hum dono sath me hai,

(both are very closed to each other. Suddenly Adhiraj)

A : Ahem Ahem.. iss baat ka yakin dilane k liye hum hai,

(nupur & mayank feels embrassed aur dono ek dusre ki opposite side dekhne lagte hai)

S : arre sharmao mat.. ab to tum logo ko officially permission mil gyi hai, jo chahe karo.

M : shut up, samrat tumhe nhi lagta ye kuch zyada ho rha hai

S: Oh yeh zyada ho rha hai, badi jaldi bhul gyi abhi to baat ko 24 hrs bhi nhi huye hai, jo tumne kiya, uss se zyada kuch ho bhi nhi skta tha

M : haan, pr mujhe ab pta chal chukka hai k wo tum logo ki chaal thi, apni chaal me tum logo ne apne dosto ko fasya

G : Agar naa fasate… to jo tumne kiya wo  tum karte kya.. syad kabhi nhi karte

S : ye baat to thik boli chismish… waise hume thoda sa flashback me chalna chahiye… aaj to mrs. Nupur bhushan sharma chup hai, warna inki zuban to rukti hi nhi thi..

N : samrat aisi koi baat nhi hai,

A : to fir kaisi baat hai Mrs. Sharma.

Su : waise hum sabko to confirmed tha k tum dono ek dusre ko psnd karte ho, bas tum dono ko hi confirmed karwana hai

U : aur wo humne achche se karwaya. Mera to mann kar raha hai ek baar flashback me jaane kaa…

N : kya karma hai jaake (blsuhsing)

B : ab to jaana hi padega..to start main karta hu aaj se 3 din pehle jab mr. mayank sharma ko ye news mili ki nupur bhushan shadi kar rhi hai to fir

U : fir uske baad kya hua???????????

D : uske baad jo hua usse jaane k liye flash back me jaaya jaaye

 

3 days before

(mayank ko jab pta chala k nupur ki shadi fix ho gyi hai, aur shadi bhi sirf 3 din baad hai, yeh baat sun kar mayank kafi gusse me aa gya aur jiske chalte usne apna cell kafi zor se zameen pr fekha, aur uska cell tut gya. As usual mayank k sare contact cell me hi save the sivay nupur k aur apne ghar k number k usse koi aur number yaad bhi nhi tha, mayank ghar pr suhani ko call karta hai

M : Hi suhani, kaisi ho tum

SU : bhai main to bilkul thik hu. Bhai tum kaise ho.

M : Tum yeh sab chodo, aur yeh btao k nupur kaisi hai

Su : wo Kaisi hogi bhai, arre uski shadi hai 3 din baad, aur usse ladke ka naam tak nhi pta, aisa lag rha hai, jaise k usse koi khushi hi nhi hai, aur wo jan na bhi nhi chah rhi hai, tabhi to itni jaldi sab kuch ho rha hai K hum sab log 3 din tak nupur k ghar me hi rehne wale hai, sare intzaam k liye, taki uske parents ko koi problem naa ho. Bhai tum aa rhe ho naa nupur ki shadi me

(mayank phone cut kar deta hai)

Su to herself : isse kya hua????? Pr jo bhi hua achcha hua.

(mayank delhi se sidha Mumbai ki train pakad k jaane ki sochta hai, pr usse itni jaldi koi train ka ticket bhi nhi mil pata, aur jis train ka usse ticket milta hai, usme bhi uska naam waiting me hota hai, aur wo bhi next day ka)

Nupur k ghar me

G : di tum iss shadi se khus to ho

N : haan meri pyari behana

G : pr mujhe aisa lag rha hai, k tum ye sab mere liye kar rhi ho

N : haan ye to hai, jab tak meri shadi nhi hogi, tu aur samrat kaise shadi kar paoge

G : di to mayank ka kya hoga

N (with a sad tone) : kya pta.. aur kaun sa usne kabhi kuch kaha tha, aur kya pta uske dil me kuch hai bhi ya sirf ye college k dino ka mazak hai, aur kya fark padta hai, waise bhi hum kaun si itni baat karte hai, mujhe pta hai wo meri shadi me bhi nhi aayega, fir bhi mujhe uska intzaar to rahega hi

G : di, tum kam se kam jiju ka naam to jaan lo

N : kya fark padta hai, agar wo mayank nhi hai to koi bhi ho, uss se kya fark padta hai,

(nupur wahaan se uth kar chali jati hai, gunjan pure gang ko phone karke batati hai k uski nupur se kya baat huyi aur ye bhi k aaj nupur ki mehandi hai)

(nupur mehandi se pehle puja me baithi hoti hai, tab sara gang nupur aur mayank k bare me gunjan k room me discuss karte hai)

G : samrat tumhe yakin hai k tumhara plan successful hoga???

S : chismish iss bare hamare pass koi option bhi nhi hai, iss plan ko successful hona hi hoga

A : aur haan, abhi nupur ko ye nhi pta hai k bali ka bakra main hu, ye sari shadi mere naam se ho rhi hai,

Su : aur agar adhiraj ki shadi sachmuch nupur se ho gyi to????

A : to main batata hu, kya hoga, Main tum me se kisi ko bhi nupur se zindagi bhar baat nhi karne dunga, chahe kuch bhi ho jaye

B : ye to koi baat naa huyi

A : yahi sari baat hai dekh lo, kyunki mayank ka phone nhi lag rha hai,

Su : aur bhai k office me kisi ko pta nhi hai k bhai kahaan hai,

A : haan to ab tum log dekh lo kya karma hai,

S : karna kya hai, mayank aayega aur usse aana hi hoga.

(tabhi nupur k bauji aate hai aur kehte hai k unlogo ko nupur k sath hona chahiye, sab mehandi ki rasm me shamil hai, nupur bhi khus lag rhi hai k uske shadi hai, pr jaise hi ladke ki baat chalti, uske chehre pr ek udasi ki lakeer si aati, pr as always wo apni udasi chupa jati, uske liye bas yahi tha k agar uski shadi mayank se nhi ho rhi to ab kisi se bhi ho usse koi fark nhi padta.. iss tarah mehandi ki rasm bhi khatam ho jati hai)

Next Day In The Morning

G : di pls aisa naa karo

N : by god gunjan, aisa kya kar dia maine?????

G : di tum janti hona main kis bare me baat kar rhi hu

N : aur main uss bare me baat nhi karna chahti aur aaj meri shadi hai, pls tu mera mud mat kharab kar.. itni muskilo se to main shadi k liye maani hu, warna teri shadi kaise hoti

G : haan, bina ladke ko jaane tum yeh shadi kar rhi ho, tumhe to ladke ka naam tak nhi pta

N : kya fark padta hai, chal mujhe emotional blackmail mat kar, aaj meri shadi hai,

(nupur wahaan se chali jati hai, gunjan ye sari baat pure gang ko batati hai, sara gang tension me hai k mayank ka kuch pta nhi hai,ab kya hoga sabko issi baat ki tension hai )

 (sham ko nupur jab shadi k liye taiyar hoti hai, to itni sunder lagti hai, k sara gang kehta hai k uski nazar utharana to banta hai)

S to N : hey sweet heart, maine glat ladki choice ki hai, kisi ne sach hi kaha hai k ek ladki sabse zyada khubsurat apni shadi k whqt hi lagti hai,

N : waise ye compliment tha ya comment?????

S : tumhe kya lagta hai…

N : kuch bhi ho skta hai..

S : pr aaj to compliment hi hai.. sweety

N : sweety?????tumhari tabiyat to thik hai naa..

S : haan bilkul…….

N : to yahaan kyun khade ho jao aur bauji ki help karo.. ye tum sabki responisibility

S : Jo agya devi ji..

N to all : jao bhi.. meri shakal kya dekh rhe ho

(sara gang nupur k room se bahar chala jata hai, sabko tension hai k mayank abhi tak nhi aaya hai.. ab kya hoga.. tabhi samrat kisi kaam se ghar se bahar jaane lagta hai, tabhi wo mayank ko bahar garden me nupur k room ki window k thik niche kuch sochta hua dekhta hai)

S to himself : cool….aakhir mayank sharma aa hi gya.. ab plan B ki zarurat nhi padegi, abhi iske pass jau ya nhi….chalo rehne deta hu.. isne kaun sa hume bataya k ye Mumbai aa gya hai, aur jab iski behan ko nhi pta to mujhe kaise pta hoga.. yahaan se chala jaaye..dekhte hai k mayank sharma karta kya hai..

 

FLASHBACK ENDS

S : ab ye bhi hum hi bole ya tum kuch kahoge

M : guys jo cheez tumhe pta hai wo kyun baar baar repeat kar rhe ho

Su : bhai kya hai naa k agar tum time se nhi aate to hume plan B use karna padta

N : pr plan B tha kya

G : di wo bhi bta denge, pr abhi to hume ye pta karna hai k mayank jiju tumhare room me achanak se kaise prakat huye

M : achanak se nhi.. mujhe ye pta tha k agar me sidhe raaste se enter hua to jo bhi mujhe dekhega wo koi naa koi swal puchega.. aur mujhe sabse pehle nupur se baat karni thi..isliye main sidhioyo se nupur k room me gya.. Jis tarah se suhani ne  bataya k nupur ko ladke kaa naam bhi nhi pta, main samjh gaya tha k pakka syad hi koi ho uske room me. Aur uss whqt meri nupur se baat karni zyada zaruri thi, ye dekhne ki jagah k nupur k room me kaun hai ya nhi….(again eyelock in mayur)

S : ahem ahem…(mayur eyelock broken) uske baad thodi si hum sab ki tariff bhi ho jaye.. sahi whqt pr nupur k bauji ko nupur k room me bhejne k liye hume thanx bolo…

M : haan haan… kyun nhi

Su : suhani pr bhai tumne abhi tak yeh nhi bataya k room me tumne bauji aur nupur se tumhari kya baat huyi

M : to tum log mujhe nhi chodne wale..

All : bilkul nhi……….

M : jab main window tak pahucha to dekha k nupur apne room me bed pr diwar k sahare aankhne band karke baithi hai, aisa lag rha tha, jaise usse koi fark hi nhi pad rha hai, k uske aas pass kya ho rha hai, pr jaise hi main window se aander aaya, galti se vas gir gya

N : tum yahaan kya kar rhe ho, aur sidhe raste nhi aa skte the kya

M : sidhe raste se aata to tumhari vidai pr hi tumse mil paata

N : oh. To tum meri shadi attend karne aaye ho, jao aur niche jaake kaam karwao

M : tumhe kya lagta hai??????

N : mayank lagne me aur hone me bahut fark hota hai, aur ab mujhe kuch bhi lagna band ho gya hai, mere sath jo bhi ho rha hai, main bas usse hone dena chahti hu.. chahe wo kaisa bhi kyun naa ho. Ab main kuch bhi rokna nhi chahti

M : thik hai, fir jo main karne jaa rha hu, ya kehne jaa rha hu ab mujhe mat rokna.

N : mayank tum?????

M : ssshhhh… hume chod k sab jante hai k hum kya chahte hai, pr bas hum dono me se koi kuch kehna hi nhi chahta..hamesha se dono ne yahi intzaar kiya hai k pehle samne wala bole.. aur iske chalte aaj ye din aaya hai, main jaanta hu k syad bahut derr ho chuki pr per main yeh bhi janta hu k zindagi abhi khatam nhi huyi hai, pr main ek baar koshish zarur karna chahta hu(both are face to face mayank one step forward & nupur one step backward, room ki wall aane se nupur ruk jaati hai, dono behad karib hai, nupur apni aankhen band kar leti hai)

M : I love U Nupur (Nupur ye sunte hi apni aankhen khol leti hai, aur mayank jo uske behad kareeb khada hai, uss se kuch kadmo ki duri bana leti hai aur apna face bhi mayank ki opposite side kar leti hai..)

N : mayank wo wo mainnnnnnnn ( tabhi nupur k bauji nupur k room me aate hai, aur mayank ko uske room me dekh kar surprised reh jate hai)

BG : mayank tum kab aaye, maine to tumhe dekha hi nhi.. mujhe to laga tha k tum aaoge hi nhi

M : pranam bauji.. agar main aaj bhi nhi aata to syad kabhi khud ko maaf nhi kar pata

BG : main kuch samjha nhi beta….

M : main janta hu k syad bahut derr ho chuki hai, pr fir bhi main chahta hu k ek baar aap meri baat sune, fir aap jo kahenge wo hi hoga

BG ; Haan kaho beta..

M : main aapki beti nupur se pyar se karta hu, aur ye bhi janta hu k wo bhi karti hai, pr wo kahegi nhi.. bas chahta hu k aap bhi hamara sath de

BG : beta.. main to hamesha se hi chahta tha, pr ab syad kafi derr ho chuki hai, ladke wale niche baithe hai, thodi derr me nupur ko bahar le jaana hoga.

M : bauji.. aap bas apna ashirwad dijiye.. ladke se main khud baat karunga.. main koi aisa kaam nhi karunga.. jis se nupur ya aapko sharminda hona pade.. bas mujhe ek baar koshish karne dijiye…

BG : thik hai, main kuch karta hu..

A : uske baad bauji ne jab mujhe btaya k mayank aa gya hai aur wo mujh se baat karna chahta hai, bauji to tension me lag rhe the, mujhe to ussi whqt lag gya tha k hamra plan successful ho gya hai..aur jab mayank mujhse baat karne aaya to thodi si tag khichai k baad maine usse keh dia k wo jo jee chahe kar skta hai, waise bhi iss shadi me zyada log nhi the, bas nupur aur meri family k log the.. aur waise bhi kisi ko invitation card de kar to bulaya nhi tha, to kuch khas hona bhi nhi tha. Nupur k bauji se hamne haan karwa hi li

M : ahem ahem.. adhiraj tumhe nhi lagta k tum kuch batana bhul rhe ho..

A : mayank chodo naa usse…

S : aisa kya hai jo mayank ko pta hai aur hume nhi

M : yahi k adhiraj ne mujh se kaha k iske badle me usse rishwat me chahiye k main uski help karu suhani ka dil jitne me…

Su : blushing..(tabhi mayank ki maa ki awaz aati hai suhani k liye.. suhani wahaan se aise bhagti hai, jaise wo iss whqt iss cheez ka intzaar kar rhi ho.. thodi derr baad suhani aati hai)

Su : bhaiya maa ne bhabhi k sath aap logo ko bulaya hai..aaj bhabhi ka greh-pravesh hai..

(mayank k ghar pr nupur aur mayank ka puri rasmo riwaz k sath greh parwesh karwaya jaata hai, as nupur k liye wo ghar pehle se hi apna hai..nupur mayank k room me matlab k apne room me mirror k aage khade ho ke apne baal sahi karne ki koshish kar rhi hai)

N to herself : by god.. nupur.. tera kya hoga.. kuch kaam hoga teri life me planning se, jo planning hoti hai wo hota nhi, aur without planning k sab kuch ho jata hai.. hmm ab inn baalo ko hi le… uff kya hoga mera

(mayank room me enter hota hai, pr nupur apne balo k sath itni busy hoti hai k wo ye notice hi nhi kar  pati.. mayank nupur k thik piche jaa kar khada ho jata hai, achanak nupur ki nazar mirror pr padti hai to wo mayank ko apne piche khada dekhti hai, nupur apne hath me comb dekhti hai, usse jaldi se rakhti hai, tabhi mayank mirror me usse ishare se kehta hai, k jab wo aur nupur sath me hote hai to wo chahe jaisi bhi ho unki jodi perfect hi dikhti hai.. Nupur blashing..nupur mudti hai pr wo mayank se takra jati hai aur uska balance bigad jaata hai.. pr as always mayank usse girne se bacha leta hai… there is eyelock..)

M : maine to keh dia.. pr sun na baki hai

N : kya????

M : tum janti ho main kya sun na chahta hu

N : mujhe nhi pta…….

(nupur khud ko mayank se chuda kar jane lagti hai, pr mayank usse uski kalai se pakad leta hai..)

M : aaj to main wo sun kar hi rahunga…… aur ab to mujhe official permission bhi hai

N : achcha to aur kis kis baat ki official permission hai

M : thoda pass aao to main batata hu

(mayank nupur ko waist se pakad leta hai……….mayank start kiss on her neckline….)

 

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its very nice dear ........ loved reading it .............
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Wow, I was so engrossed in this OS :)

everything from the drama by mayank's mom to the friends to the indifferent to marriage nupur

I esp like the dialogue where Mayank tells nupur ki hum kya chahthe hai hum dono ke alawa sab jaanthe hai..
 
really nice Annu:)
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Really awesome...
You rock...
Can you please make on SaJan tooo???
Love youuuu,,,,,, 😳

Sana...
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wow nyc os!!!
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loved it a lot
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Awesomeeeee..............
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Heyyyy anu
Amazing os
Loved it to the core
Keep writing
N thanx for pm
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Haaye
It was sho shweet
Loved it
Mayur were really adorable here😉
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amazing ff dear
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