Sur sweety.......
Finally finally u updated this fic......sirf is update ko padhke hi nahi is fic update hua ' is baat se hi hum dhanay hogaye 😆 😆 😆..... bhala ho priya ka aur uski wo beautiful note ka jis ki wajah se tum underground se bahar nikli aur jhat se update bhi ki.......thanxxxxxxxx priya 😃
Now about the update......its awesome as always 👏 👏 👏 👏.... superb.......fabulous part 👏 👏 👏 👏
Naina is confused about rajs behaviour n raj is confused about his feelings aur main ye baat soch soch ke confused hun .....is fic ki writer kab is fic ki suspense clear karegi 😕 😕
naina ki chot raj pe kya asar dikhayee.....raj .....a ruthless don kya se kya bangaya ....i think he knows about his true feelings towards naina.....but he thinks pyaar word uske dictionary mein nahi hain....he is so confused.....wo jitna bhi confused ho last night .......but in the morning .... the dangerous raj is back .....aur usko dekhthe hi john is so scared 😆 😆
the thing i liked the most (ofcourse after raj nainas bandage scene) in this part.....wo hain naina ka expressions......pehli baar naina ka cold look ke alawa aur bhi emotions reveal hua hain is update mein... usne softly smile bhi ki..... lekin uska haal bhi kuch tikh nahi lag rahi hain.....there is a fighting going on between her heart n mind......shayad wo ye soch rahi hogi .......ki jo aadmi uski itna parwa kartha hain she is plotting against him.....u wrote that part so beautifully
The idea of phone tapping was amazing......after all idea kis ka hain........hamare raj ka .....to wo superb hogi na.... karan ko is baar bhi naina ke against koi clue nahi mila.......naina is too smart... Pata nahi mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hain ki naina is some how involved in the attack........naina s nick name suits her perfectly
Its good raj went with his professional instincts n he decided to talk with naina........but naina ki bleeding arm dekh the hi wo sab bhulgaya n itna pooch taach nahi ki us incident ke bare mein..........the dressing scene was so nice n cute
Us driver ko maar diya raj ne...........aur jab karan ne naina se kaha thats what we do with traitors ...........to naina had a stange expression...............wonder what she is thinking?????
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