AR FF:~Love is Life~uptd pg 72~5th Sept - Page 11

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: aish_punk

Hey Afreen..nice FF..d concept too seems nice..n it dusnt seem lyk ur 1st FF! 😲..its pretty gud..😉

The intro of awl d characters wz nice..
so i guess Rahul n Armaan r gud frndz..tats nice..n omg Armaan's engaged 2 Sneha?!..i'm sure its gonna brk off soon!..I hope all d oda characters enter soon..
n i wonder who it was who knocked?!
anyway..do PM me wen u update..if u don hv a prob wid tat..😳
Thnx 4 d PM
update soon
-Aish

hey aish...thanx 4 commenting yaar...will surely pm ya...will update soon😳😳😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanx hun for the PM about your first FF

it was really good

please add me to your PM list 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: rinxkashsujen

thanx hun for the PM about your first FF

it was really good

please add me to your PM list 😃

thanx 4 commenting...will add u in😉😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
~ Part 2~
He sees his servant holding the regular tray of coffee
Armaan: thanx..kaka..
Servant: baba...aapko vinita bitiya pooch rahi thi..
Armaan:kahan hain wo?
Servant: kitchen mein..
He quickly runs down to the kitchen..his mum was his sweetheart and he loved her more then anything in the world
He sneaks in quietly and sees vinita engaged in cooking
Armaan(hugging her from behind) :gud morning sweety...
Vinita:gud morning beta...
Armaan:ummm...something's smelling good mom...what is it?
Vinita: kheer..
Armaan: breakfast mein kheer?
Vinita :pagal....maine rahul ke liye banayi hai...parson jab ghar aaya tha...mujhe kaha tha...
Armaan:ohhh...ok...rahul ke liye kheer aur mere liye?
Vinita: mmmmmm....
Armaan: mom...ur thinking? matlab..mere liye kuch nahi....am really upset ma...aapse yeh umeed nahi thi mujhe...
saying this he turns his face to a side...trying to act annoyed
Armaan:i can smell them...mere favourite aloo ke parathe...muahh ma...i luv u..
Vinita(cupping his face): and...i luv u too...
Armaan: waise..aapne mujhe bulwaya tha?
Vinita: haan..mandir jaa rahi thi...socha...tujhe bhi saath leti chaloon
Armaan: mom...mera aana important hai?i mean...u go ahead na...
Vinita: main aaj tere excuses nahi sunne waali..aaj tere college ka 1st day hai...bhagwaan ka aashirwaad lele beta..
Armaan: apni baat manvaake hi chodoge na aap...theek hai..main abhi fresh hokar aata hoon..
He freshens up and puts on a jeans and a black tee- shirt
On the way to the mandir...in the car*
Vinita: kya baat hai..aaj mera beta extra handsome lag raha hai...
Armaan: dont sound new mom...i always look dashing(winks)
Vinita:haan....isiliye sneha tujhe itna pasand karti hai...
Armaan( looking out) haan...shayad
Armaan and vinita are now walking towards the mandir when vinita finds one of her friend
Vinita: armaan...tu chal...main aati hoon
He moves ahead...engrossed in his mobile...
After a while..he looks up only to see a small ragged boy tripping and rolling down the stairs
He moves forward in order to help..but finds somebody doing it already..
A girl dressed in a red chudidaar bends and gives the boy her hand...she makes him sit on the stairs
The wind is blowing and her hair is covering her face...
She tries to adjust it while chatting with the poor boy
Armaan catches a glimpse of her...a sweet and pure face...with no artificiality
Girl: chot tho nahi aayi na?
boy: nahi didi..
girl: dhyaan se chalo....actually girna tho mujhe chahiye
boy(smiling): aapko...kyun?
girl: tension...tension...tension......naya college...naye log...phew..pata nahi mera kya hoga..
boy:aap kyun fikr karti ho..aap itni acchi hain..aapke saath accha hi hoga..
girl( smiling): kaash...aisa hi ho..
she slips in a 100 rupee note in his hand
Armaan is touched by her deed
Vinita: armaan..tu abhi yahin hai?
Armaan: haan...ma...wo(looks at the girl)...kuch nahi..chaliye
He follows her quietly..confused..as to why he couldn't take his eyes off the good hearted girl...was it because of her humantiy or her simplicity...or was it sumthing else...sumthing he couldn't understand at the moment..
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hope u like it
Afreen😳😳
Edited by Afreen22 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

hai Afreen❤️

such a sweet❤️ lovely ❤️awesome❤️ pleasant part yaar❤️ loved it ❤️ so finally Armaan has seen our Riddhima ❤️Armaan n Vinita's bond is very nice ❤️hope Armaan will understand his feelings towards Riddhima sooooooon❤️continue sooooooooooooon❤️ waiting to see AR's first meet ❤️
Edited by k_anjali12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey ! a very cutie and a very sweetie part...........continue soon......
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hmmm so our Armaan saw Riddhima..Cool!!!Chalo atleast he saw her!!!!Nice part sweety
Thanks for the PM!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

hey the part was really sweet......

kaash ridz jese log sach me duniya me hote.....so now deff no ragging..in colg i guess she already found a freind...
thnkz for the pm
n continue soon
luv habs
Edited by princess52 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice part sweety
Thanks for the PM!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey Afreen very nice part......thnx for the pm....n do continue soon....

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