NEW FF: ~:~Jab Dill Miley!~:~ Pt6-pg16 25/11

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Posted: 14 years ago

~:~:~Jab Dill Miley~:~:~

This is a story about four individuals, with there own story, tragedy and dreams... They meet and become friends but they dont realise how and when there hearts meet... but when there hearts meet what happens?

INDEX:

INTRO: Page 1

New Characters: Page 2

PART 1: Page 5
PART 2: Page 8
PART 3: Page 11
PART 4: Page 14
PART 5: Page 14
PART 6: Page 16



INTRO

Its 6:00am and you see a guy sitting in the mandir praying.

"Bhagwanji please mujhe bohot acche distinctions se pass karadena, maine parayi to bohot ki hai lekin aapto jaante ho kuch bhi ho sakhta hai, shayad maine koi galat jawab dediya ho, please please mujhe pass karadena, okay, Thank you" he finishes and gets up.

"Armaan puttar chal nashta tayar hai" he's mother screams from the kitchen.

"aaya maa" he says and leaves to the kitchen.

Armaan Modi:

the bookworm, he loves to study and always come first in studies' He's very cute and average class guy... many girls get bowled over him but he is so not interested, thats why bharti likes to chat with him, he also enjoys her company. He was very ill in his childhood because of which he couldn't study, he would always be sick and mostly hospitalized, he started school after 6-7 years of normal time, at first all the kids would tease him then he made it he's motto to be the best and got double promotion and finally he was with students just two years younger then him, which was not at all bad since some of them were even nineteen because they were repeating'

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You see a huge room with curtains shut, the room was in a mess, with balls and sports stuff lying all around the room, lots of trophies on one shelf on the left corner of the huge room. There was a figure lying on a bed'

Theres a knock on the door, he covers his head [ears with a pillow] "Oye Ranbir Uth' nau bhaj gaye hain, aaj tera Graduation hai" he's Biji shouts and he gets up "Oh shit! Nikki aur Bharti to mujhe kacha chaba jayengi" he thinks and gets up in a jiff "aaya biji"

Ranbir Ragvansh

The basketball champ and Bharti's best buddy, They were in one class from standard two' he's rich, hot and happening, one of the most sort after guy in school and later in college, he hates studying but at exam time he studies day and night and finally always passes. He's a good guy but could be mean at times.

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You see a girl dressed in a school uniform but trouser and shirt instead of skirt and shirt' she's fighting with a chor on the street "Oye tujhe kya laga, mera purse chori karke bhag jayega?" bharti says kicking the guy on the floor.

"mujhe maaf kardo meri maa" the goonda who snatched her purse was pleading to her.

"haan yeh sahi hai, tum logon ko bhi doon?" she tells the other guys and they move back "haan to ghoorna band karo" she says and walks away.[stop staring at me]

Bharti Malhotra:


A very sweet and naughty girl but a total tomboy, she loves playing basketball and hanging around with guys' her best friend is ranbir but she likes to chat alot with armaan aswell because he always listens and gives her a possible solution' she's a daughter of a drunkard "raj Malhotra" always cursing her for being a girl, he had lways wanted a son which he even got but a tragedy changed all of there lives, The malhotras were quite rich and Raj's father was a very strict and double standard man, he always wanted sone which he had "three" but one of he's son died in childhood, Raj and he's brother Abhishek were there fathers ladla's, he named everything' meaning everything [all he's property] on the name of he's grandson or grandsons if not then all the property would go to the trust.

Raj was the elder son and had twins "Bhaskar and Bharti" he was very happy that he had a son first, he always ignored the little bharti and gave everything to bhaskar, bharti eventually started hating bhaskar because he would also treat her like trash in the house' She started behaving, talking and walking like bhaskar just so that her father might like her someday because she will be like his son but that day never came, but when they were 7 years old bharti's mother 'Rashi' along with bhaskar and raj went to the mela and when returning they had a car accident, raj was saved but bhaskar and rashi died' and raj started drinking because now the property would either go to he's brother abhishek or in the trust, he was a lazy man and always depended on the property' now since he was broke he would beat bharti, and curse her day and night'

Bharti was working at a dhaaba [cheap restaurant] after school so she could pay for her school fees but she never expected anyone to sympathize with her that's why hardly anyone knew; only Ranbir knew her story. Now she liked being a guy atleast no one could take advantage of her, she didn't want to suffer like her mother did with her father who always beat her aswell' but there is something that even bharti doesn't know about her mother and herself, something which she could never guess in her wildest dreams' [it will be revealed in part one]

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St. Columbas High school

"Oh shit aaj to tu gaya kaam se" Ranbir thinks as he stands outside the empty school hall, there was no one in it, he looks at the time "lekin abhi khatam kaise hogaya?" he thinks there was still two hours before the ceremony ends, and he was supposed to perform with nikkita'

"oye raghu'" he calls one of the peons he sees "yeh sab kahan hai?" he asks.

"wo to sab grounds par hain, ceremony wahin to hai" he tells him and Ranbir remembers "oh yess' thanks raghu" he runs out to the grounds'

"Oh god yeh Ranbir kahan reh gaya?" nikki walks around the back of the stage that they created with blue curtains covering it, the trustee was giving some lectures, bharti looks at her and smirks "tere saath dance karne ke bare me sochke bhag gaya hoga" she smirks.

"Oh just shut up" nikki says annoyed.

 "oye apni zabaan sambhal samjhi, saali'" she holds her hand up in punching position.

"chill girls, mere liye larne ki zaroorat nahi hai,  I'm here" Ranbir smirks looking at the two beauties in front of him. They both turn and sigh in relief.

"tu kahan reh gaya tha, pata hai mujhe Mr. Amarjeet se kitne jhoot bolne pare, kitne bahane banana pare" bharti starts and nikki looks at her annoyed "Ranbir darling jaante ho main kitna darr gayi thi?" she says in a flirtish, feminine tone touching he's face while bharti frowns. "come on Ranbir, chalo ab last minute practice karlein" she pulls him away while bharti frowns behind them.

"Iss nikki ki to main'" she stomps her foot and goes back to her seat "oye champu, ab tension lena band kar aur khush reh, tu pass hi hoga" bharti tells the guy sitting with his graduation coat and hat, biting his nails. He looks up at her "yeh champu kaun hai?" he asks annoyed and she smiles "accha baba, champu nahi, Armaan theekhe" she smiles and he still looks worried.

Tumhe to koi tension nahi lekin mujhe to pass hona hai, bharti kuch karna yaar" he says worried and she smiles "tere liye kuch bhi" she winks and goes to the stage in her manly andaaz.

"sir'" she whispers and amarjeet looks at her and asks with he's wyes "kya hai?"

"yahan aayiye" she calls' after a little hesitation he goes upto her "sir inn lectures se sab pak gayen hain, dekho saare students tension se paagal ho rahe hain, jaldi se dance announce kijiye na aur phir graduation ceremony' yeh log bohot paka te hain sab aapko sunna chahte hain, yeh to aise behave karahe hain jaise yeh boss hon, come on sir, after all you're the boss sir" she keys him and he nodds his head in agreement.

"sahi keh rahi hai tu, jabse aaye hain yehi bak bak kiye jaa rahe hain'" he goes back to the stage and takes the mike "thank you sir!" he indicates the trustee to go back he's seat, everyone wakes up finally' "now welcome Ranbir aur nikkita for a hot and sizzling dance" he smirks and they all whistle, bharti gives him a thumbs up and he returns it with a smirk.

"ab to mood theekh kar, bas yeh dance phir tere pass hone ki khabar" she tells Armaan hitting he's shoulder.

Nikki and Ranbir come on the stage and bharti gets up and whistles for her best friend then touches armaans hand by mistake, Armaan just looks at her strangely when she touched he's hand he felt something all he's tensions vanished. She sees that she was touching he's hand; she narrows her eyes then moves it without giving the feeling a thought. After the successful dance amarjeet announces the students who passed'

"'. Rohit, Mehul, Mohit, Nikkita, Bharti, Raj, aur mushkil se lekin Ranbir bhi pass hogaya hai" he smirks at him while Ranbir feels embarrassed and bharti gets excited "Oye tub hi pass hogaya" she hugs him [like guys do] Armaan is drowned in tension, bharti looks at him and wonders how come they didn't annonce he's name, he was the cleverest in the hwol class "aur iss saal ka sabse behetareen student jo sabse highest distinctions se pass hua hai, 5As, and 3A*, Mr. Armaan Modi" amarjeet announces and Armaan jumps up with excitement, bharti has that cute smile on her face she claps hard and whistles, he looks at her and smiles' then goes on the stage and receives he's certificate, and medal. Then joins his class mates, who are all excited, they all throw there hats together and scream.

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Inside a massive palace, you see a petite figure running around in a white chudidar, she was following a eight year old kid... "Rahul rukh jaa" she says but he turns around and takes out his tongue, they keep running and she bumps into someone "Rajkumari aapko dekh kar chalna chahiye" he says and she smiles.

"Bhayya aap bhi ab shuru mat hojao" she says annoyed and he smiles and pulls her cheek. "pehle main iss rahul ko pakarloon phir aapse milti hoon" she runs again, he smiles behind his sister Finally she catches him they both sit on the swing outside the palace in the porch, they laugh eat chocolate, while a girl is running around the house looking for them panting "Aap yahan hai? aur hum aapko saare raj mahal mein doondh rahe the" she says catching her breath the petite figure smiles she was a beautiful young girl, nineteen year old, her eyes glittering with innocence, her hair left loose and a small silver bindi on her forehead' "Maharaj abhi teen ghanton mein padharne waale hain aur agar unhone aapko aise dekhliya to'" she says and the smile on the beautiful young girl vanishes, she gets up and straightens herself "wo aaj aa rahe hain?" she asks worried.

"haan rajkumari"

She makes an annoyed face "Nimmi humne aapko kitni baar kaha hai ke aap humari dost hain aur aap humein rajkumari mat bulaya kijiye, hume accha nahi lagta" she instructs.

"Hum aapki daasi hain aur agar maharaj ne sunliya to'"

"aap humare liye rakhi gayi hain aur aapko wahi karma hai jo hum kahein aur hum kehte hain ke aap humein Rano bulayengi sirf rano" she smiles and nimmi also smiles back.

"theekhe hai ranoji, ab jaldi chaliye warna to aapki kher nahi" she tells her and they both head to rano's room'. its a huge room decorated in pink and white, lay a water bed the bed was in the centre of the room, surrounded by pink curtains' on the left side of the bed was a set of costly sofas with a coffee table in the middle, on the right of the sofa set was a indoor shahi swing with gold pillows on each side' further down was a huge bathroom, with a huge bath tub filled with pink rose petals, it was steaming rano wears her bath suit [some short white dress] and a few girls join in to bath her, one washes her hair while the other rubs soap on her hand, the other on the other hand etc'

Rajkumari Ratnalekha Nandini (beauty of jewels goddess durga) aka Rano

She comes out and dresses into a cream princess dress, with her hair tied up and a small silver/gold crown on her head, she was looking beautiful... she leaves her room.

"Raguveer, rajkumari kahan hai?" a young man in his thirties asks one of the employees.

"sahib mujhe lagta hai wo tayar hone gayi thi' oh wo aayi" he says as he sees her coming towards them complaining to nimmi about her hair.

"maine kitni baar kaha hai humare baal itne tight mat banda kariye, lekin humari to koi suntan hi nahi"

"rajk' I mean rano aap jaanti hai na maharaj ko khule baalon se sakht nafrat hai"

The young man turns around and smiles "hmmm bohot sundar lag rahi hai humari raj kumari" he smiles and circles few notes around her head and distributes it among the three workers present, she smiles "bhayya' aap hamesha humari nazar utarte hain iss haveli ke andar hume kiski nazar lagne waali hai?" she asks annoyed, and he smiles "humari pyaarisi choti si rajkumariji' wo sab chodiye aur humein aake gale lagayiye" he tells her, she smiles and hugs him.

"aur ek aur baat, humara naam yuvraaj RajShekhar Singh rathod hai, agar maharaj ne tumhe bhayya kehte huye sunliya to hum dono ki kher nahi" he tells her and she frowns'


"haan hum apno ko naam se nahi pehchaan se pukarte hain, shok se nahi majboori ki wajah se'" she frowns.

"ab chalo, maharaj aur rani maa abhi padharenge"

"lekin bhabi kahan hai?" she asks.

"hum yahan hain" a pretty young woman dressed in a red and green banarasi sari, with her bum length hair curled and pinned half, shekhar and rano smile at her as she walks to them "kaise lag rahe hain hum?" she asks smiling and they both share a grin.


"ati sundar" shekhar says "ab chalein" the other two nodd there heads and they start walking down the stairs.

"Rajkumar Shekhar Singh Rathod, Rajkumari Siddeshwari Rajshekhar singh Rathod aur Rajkumari Ratnalekha Nandini padhar rahi hain" the guard standing at the edge of the steps announces so that everyone in front is ready. All the employees stand in two lines on each side of the stairs and throw rose petals as the three walk down.

"Yuvraj Rahul Singh Rathod padhar rahe hain" the guard announces and the three look up and smile at Shekhar and Siddeshwari's only son "Rahul" the life of the house.

They all wait for a while and the announcement is done that Maharaj and Rani maa are coming, the three of them wait at the door and meet there parents like the employees do just standing on the side and bending a little while they pass to sit on there throne' Rano just looks at her mother having the feeling to just go and hug her tight but she couldn't, why was her life so complicated? Why couldn't she just live a normal girls life?

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Posted: 14 years ago
me 1st yay🥳lolz
nice intro
poor bharti😭
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz conti soon
n thanx a lot  for pm
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Hi Nadz...... it is awesum just awesum ⭐️👏⭐️
I m luvin it......😊Woww......Amarjeet is there tooooo.......😉.......A very gud start.......U  can perhaps add Vinita too.......😉
Keep it up.......👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: karan-shilpa

me 1st yay🥳lolz
nice intro
poor bharti😭
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz conti soon
n thanx a lot  for pm



WELCOME to ~:~:~Jab Dill Miley~:~:~

Awww Thank you sweety for being first😳😳

Firstly i want to thank you for reading and levin such wonderful comments🤗

Im just glad u liked it😉 hmmm but she'll be ok😊

will do and you're welcome😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Dew-drop

Hi Nadz...... it is awesum just awesum ⭐️👏⭐️
I m luvin it......😊Woww......Amarjeet is there tooooo.......😉.......A very gud start.......U  can perhaps add Vinita too.......😉
Keep it up.......👍🏼



WELCOME to ~:~:~Jab Dill Miley~:~:~

Firstly i want to thank you for reading and leavin such wonderful comments🤗

Im just glad u liked it😉 and thought it was awesome😳 hmm amarjeet is there😆😆 with he's words of the day😆😆 im glad u like the star😳

I'm trying to add all the characters of BB there since there all so good😉 I'll post the other characters really soon😉

will do 😉

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WELCOME to ~:~:~Jab Dill Miley~:~:~

Firstly i want to thank you for reading and leavin such wonderful comments🤗

Awwww im just glad u liked it😉 I'll post the other characters really soon😉

will do 😉

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Wah very cool yaar Lovely work honey keeep it up the good work:)
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Wah very cool yaar Lovely work honey keeep it up the good work:)



WELCOME to ~:~:~Jab Dill Miley~:~:~

Firstly i want to thank you for reading and leavin such wonderful comments🤗

Awww im just glad u liked it😉

will do 😉

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