teri sajni*AR+SaJan* FF..Updated part 2-pg. 10

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My 1st eva FF! Just hope u guys like it..inspired by many people!!!
Its a SaJan + KaSh FF

starring: Armaan-Riddhima, Samrat-Gunjan
Rahul-Muskaan, Mayank-Nupur

som changes: armaan & gunjan r in sam college whereas oders r in diff colleges & nupur is of sam age as gunjan is
scene: final xams on head!

1 sence: clock strinkin at 10p.m.
a guy is doin push ups & readin d book...he kept his book down on floor & while doin push ups he's readin it..
guy: hey bhagwaan! ye kya hai..?? mera sath aisa q hota hai..ye konsi musibat hai..muej kya farak padta hai agar patient ko......*he's ph rings..he stops d push ups & picks up d ph.*
guy: hello chasmish
gunjan: hey armaan...armaan wht u doin??
armi: aamm! push ups
gunjan: u aint studin
armi: do u think i wil b studin....it dont go wid my image
gunji: armaan u need 2 study...2moro is our exam dat 2 last exm...so do study
armi: chasmish....ye kehne k liye ph. kiya tha
gunji: arre!! vo acc. i wantd 2 ask u dat if u need sum help...den i will do your help
armi: let it b chashmish..i m not studin so no need of help
gunji: so tumne mere notes padhe nhi?? *voice turns bit sad*
armi: abhi padh lunga...u dun worry
gunji: wht dont worry...armaan i dun wan u 2 spoil your yr. plzz
armi: arre stop thinkin abt me & start thinkin abt yourself ok..study well!!..k bye! *hangs up*...kya armaan gunjan se juth bola sirf image k liye..chalo! phir haal study here notes
*armaan is now sittin besides d sofa resting her back & studin gunjan's notes & gunjan revises her book..til den her sis comes in
nupur: gunjan!! meri madad kar!! main marr jaungi
gunji: di! kya hua..
nupur: arre muje ye kuch samaj nhi aa rha..by god! ye padhai jisne banai hai na ek baar vo mil jaye.....
gunji: di!! relx relax..aur batao kya nhi aa rha
nupur: sab kuch
gunji: di! ab relax karo aur mein apko imp ques. mark kar k deti hu ap vo padh lo..thik hai
nupur: kash meri jagah tu xams de sakti
gunji: mein meri xams kab dungi..wel ye lo & dont worry k
nupur: isme worry na karu aisa ho sakta hai..in sab ko to main.. blah blah!!*sorry 2 ryte blah but i wan u 2 imagin d scene she is talkin wid her & deir talks cant b heard & camera is closin its zoomness*

2nd scene
A girl can b seen who has appplied face-pack on cums in her room..her face & is studin..thinkin in her mind.."oh god! ye kya hai..how can i help it out..isse acha to main xms hi nhi dungi"
aftter a hr she washes her face...& her dad cums in
dad: beta! so jao..raat ho gai hai
gurl: dad plz!!...thodi der mein
dad: riddhima...now on bed
gurl: oh k papa...gud nite..*she offs d lite & her dad leaves & she agn switch ot on & studies*
riddz: srry dad but i need 2 do it...sorry agn..but u ll b happy 2 see my marks den!

3rd scene:
A guy is sittin on d bed & jus revising evry thng..he speaks"gr8 i know evrything..i m so smart"..til den his mom cums
mom: mayu!! itna mat kaho..kahi khud ki nazar lag gai to..??
mayank: aisa kuch nhi hoga bcoz i know m d best..aur har baar ki tarah is saal agn i wil top
mom: itna bharosa
maynk: isse bhi zayada..mom meri coffee??
mom: agar tumhe sab aata hai to raat bhar jaagne ki kya zarurat hai
maynk: zarurat hai..agar ek din sone se CJ mujse aage nikal gai to...no ways mom meri coffee lao
mom: abhi tak to bahot bol rha tha..m d best..i'll top..aur ab dekho......thik hai baba main lati hu.

4th scene
a guy is sittin on d study tble & his frnd is sittin on bed & both r readin a huge 468pgs bk
guy: ridiculous...i mean mere 467 pgs or baki hai
frnd: sam! iska matlab tune ek pg hi khatam kiya hai
samrat: ha par dekh na benji..ye to dimaag kharab kar rha hai..ek pg kase ghussa hai ye bhi nhi pata.
benji: but u need 2 dude nhi to tera doctor banne ka khawab khwab hi reh jayega
sam: kash humare pass xam paper hota..atleast is sub. ka
benji: kashh!!*sam givs a wickd luk*..no sam! u cant think dat plz cmon
sam: but...benji...
benji: no ways..paprs leak karega..no ways
sam: benji main vo nhi soch rha tha
benji: to.......
sam: jaane de..abhi tu padhai kar *benji starts studin agn but sam is jus thinkin "if ..." & not abl 2 study*

5th scne:
a gurl wid one hand is pressin her dress & wid oder hand is reaidn a bk.
gurl: *yawing* yaar! ye to kamal hai....pehle khud ye medicin suggest karte hai phir khud hi bolte hai ki ye use nhi karne ka..mammu samza hai inhone hume..muskaan q...q tuje doctor banna hai..upar se tune practicals bhi nhi di hai..so double mehnat karni hogi...muje kya pata tha vo log frog ko cut karne ko bolege aur uske parts...eeww!!..main to dekhte hi behosh ho gai thi...but its f9 mera usually to sab ho gaya hai so itna tension nhi hai..abhi to muje tania ko ph. karke puchna hai ki usne kitna padh liya...
*sorry 2 give muskaan's part so small...but nxt time wil hav it big 4sure*

6th scene:
Rahul has a pen in his hand & is jus underlinin whtevr he is readin...so his bk luks 2 messy
rahul: aah!! meri jaan lene k liye banaya hoga 4sure...par ye ans. to bilkul samaj se bahar hai *he tares his pg. & maks d chit of it..& keeps it in his pocket* its f9 now..m sure ye ans. aayega..*by readin he geos 2 sleep*
next mornin..rahul waks up..& wht??
its ten mins 2 8!!!
rahul: shit! 10 min mein tayar hona hai...he jus movs & runs 2 bathroom & is brushin his teeth & murmerin things lik"meina to alarm lagaya tha..baja q nhi...mummy!!" & spits it on & jus taks a shower & geos 2 coll. & now is writtin d paper & he gets d sam question of which he made d chit
rahul: yes! i knew it wuld cum *he puts his hand in pocket & wht..its no where*lagta hai vo wali jeans mian reh gaya!! godddd!!
armaan writtin paper very nicly as whtevr he studied[gunjan's notes] came in questions....though he was coping a bit
muskaan writtin paper & is pokin 2 oders paper in each second as she is findin it very hard
riddz is 2 sleepy...yawnin..& all..eyes r red hot but manages 2 write her paper
mayank is vry happy 2 see d paper & writes 2 smoothly
nupur is pressin her head hard while writin it
gunjan thinks 4 sum seconds & writes d ans. word 2 word
samrat is passin chits & takin dem & all

xams r over & sam is jus out of d class
sam: Yeaaahh!!! whuuhhuuu!!!!
dia: hey sammy!! tumhara paper kasa tha
sam: tumhare jase candy.....mysterious[he hi5's benji]
dia:oh sammy!! jus expctin mein doctor ban jau
benji: nurse ban jaogi..undoubtly
sam: giggles but whn dia see's he stops...benji! shut up..aur abhi k liye hum cahte hai yaha se..bye candy

mayank out of d class thnkin.bas ab results ki w8 hai

rahul & muskaan: paper to upar se niche tak kharab tha..kya hoga??

riddz & gunjan: papaer to acha tha lets see

armaan: god knows kys hone wala hai...*he see's gunjan*
gunji: hey armi
armi: hie chasmish..
gunji: how was d ppr
armi: dunno...but cmon xams r done so sto thinkin abt dem..
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continue soon! and yeh ii read ff's they are really gd such as ur one!! Misha<3

seems relli nice pls do continue <3 dia

heyyy

heyy

awsome start yaar too many character and exams over now vacation wow cool and armaan calling gunjan chashmish that was samy trade mark just kidding looking forward to it do update soon

Originally posted by: DMG4EVER

continue soon! and yeh ii read ff's they are really gd such as ur one!! Misha<3

will try 2..
thnx! 😉

Originally posted by: angelz

seems relli nice pls do continue <3 dia

wil try 2 do it as soon as possible..
thnx!

Originally posted by: kinnari2295

heyyy

great start.

pls continue soon.

pls pm me if possible.

luv

kinnari.

hey kinnari
thnx a lot
wil try 2..
no probs iw il

Ouch...

Nice one...

different way of brining out a intro and character sketch....2 in one eh....?

nice....

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-Steffi