[MN+SG] Opposites Attract FF NEW Part 3 Pg.8!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey guys! I'm Janhvi aka Janu, I've had the Idea for this FF for a long time'

This is my first try so please be gentle!

I am going to keep all the characters same, but I am going to introduce a new character so watch out for that = )

A big shout out to my MJHT Forum friends:

Zarwu! ( MyCK!!),Ash,  Raee, Caro, Neha, Kavz, Pallu

And always indebted to my friends Rima, Wida, Ravs! I ❀️ you guys!

Also a very big Hugg to my FF soul-mate Mimi, who proof-read the first draft and is my inspiration1!

Love you Mimi!!

Okay So Here Goes!


Part I:

At Mayank's House

 

As soon as the door slammed shut, Maithili Sharma knew that her son had forgotten the task she had given him and was obviously in a bad mood.

Cautiously, she went to her son's room:

Maithili: Mayank beta, whats wrong?! Itna gussa, but why take out your anger on my poor door!

Mayank: Yes Mom, it's nothing to joke about, that Nupur really aarrgghh!!

Maithili: Ha! I knew it; nowadays there is only ONE name on your lips NUPUR. It's either Nupur this or Nupur that'*giggles*

Mayank: Mom! Bas bhi karo!

Maithili: Achcha baba okay, but Mayank, do you remember what date it is today?

Mayank: Obviously mom, it's the 7th of '.October'.(his voice trails off) OH SNAP!! I CAN"T BELIEVE I FORGOT, MOM! She'll kill me for sure!!

Maithili: It's too late, her flight landed an hour ago, and she'll be here any minute, so there's no use hiding! [Starts laughing]

The Front Door opens and we hear a girls voice shouting loudly

BHAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mayank: Oh, NO! She's here!

Maithili: You have to deal with here, I don't want to see any blood!

Mayank: Hi Mallika, umm, how was your flight??

Mallika: Filght? Bhai, you FORGOT TO PICK UP YOUR ONLY SISTER FROM THE AIRPORT, and you're asking me about the flight????

Mayank: I'm really sorry Mallika!!

Mallika: SORRY?? What if something would happened to me?? *sees her brother's sorry face* Okay fine, I forgive you.

Mayank: Its all because of that Nupur!!

Mallika: OOOOO, A girl, I can't believe it!! Bhai forgot about me because of a GIRL!! Omg, this is such a happy day!! MOM MOM MOM, where are you??? You heard what bhai said??

Maithili: How's my baby? How was your flight? 4 years is a long time baby, I missed you so much!

Mallika: MOM yaar, senti mat bano (hugs her Mom)I missed you so much even your Aloo Ke Paranthe, waise bhi Canada is so cold!

Maithili: Mera bachcha don't worry, I'll stuff you with paranthas right away!!

Mallika: Mom, paranthe choodo, what's this thing about Bhai and a girl???

Maithili: Oh, you mean Nupur??

Mallika: Omg, You know her? Baat itni aage bad chuki hai???

Maithili: HAHHA, According to me it has, but you're brother will never accept it! You know how he is na'

Mallika: Don't worry about that  Mom, now that I'm here, I'll see how Bhai doesn't see sense!

Maithili: What are you going to do beta *laughs*

Mallika: Wait and watch mama! *muhahhahahhha*

 

So how was it guys?? Liked it? Please offer any comments, suggestions, criticism!

Should I continue ?

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Part 1 -- Pg.1

Part 2 -- Pg. 5

Part 3 -- Pg. 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
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nyc start .............
continue soon..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey sedna,  i really liked it, its sooooooooooo interesting and the best thing is that it has mayur in it. please do conitune jan. its was amazinggggggggggggggg.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Senny

hey sedna,  i really liked it, its sooooooooooo interesting and the best thing is that it has mayur in it. please do conitune jan. its was amazinggggggggggggggg.



Thank you Senny πŸ€—

Yep, I'll try to continue as soon as possible!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I really liked it so far!! It''l be nice to see Mayu's sis playing matchmaker..
Please do continue....and PM me when you update!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: hgrhr

I really liked it so far!! It''l be nice to see Mayu's sis playing matchmaker..

Please do continue....and PM me when you update!



Thank you for liking it!

Well she's gonna play matchmaker to someone else too but lets keep that a secret πŸ˜†
Sure I'll PM you !
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Saas Bahu and Sazish πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
 
 now  naand ,   Bahu Aur Saazish ....
 
 this seem interesting
 
Mother inlaw + sister inlaw  +  Nupur = >>>>Mayank bicharaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanaSarwar

Saas Bahu and Sazish πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 
 now  naand ,   Bahu Aur Saazish ....
 
 this seem interesting
 
Mother inlaw + sister inlaw  +  Nupur = >>>>Mayank bicharaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†



πŸ˜†πŸ˜† yep bichara Mayank!

I'm glad you found it interesting = )
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG JAAANNNUUUU!! choooo chweeet...
i just got out of IMCU and u put me back in there..
mayuu is sooooooooooo cute.
very nice ff love.
do cont soon.
: )
hugs.
xxSonia
 
ohh and don't forget to pm too
ily.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely start...will try to keep up wtih it,..if i forget then just PM me plz

i liked this mallika character lolz
mayank is as usual