Hey guys! I'm Janhvi aka Janu, I've had the Idea for this FF for a long time'
This is my first try so please be gentle!
I am going to keep all the characters same, but I am going to introduce a new character so watch out for that = )
A big shout out to my MJHT Forum friends:
Zarwu! ( MyCK!!),Ash, Raee, Caro, Neha, Kavz, Pallu
And always indebted to my friends Rima, Wida, Ravs! I β€οΈ you guys!
Also a very big Hugg to my FF soul-mate Mimi, who proof-read the first draft and is my inspiration1!
Love you Mimi!!
Okay So Here Goes!
Part I:
At Mayank's House
As soon as the door slammed shut, Maithili Sharma knew that her son had forgotten the task she had given him and was obviously in a bad mood.
Cautiously, she went to her son's room:
Maithili: Mayank beta, whats wrong?! Itna gussa, but why take out your anger on my poor door!
Mayank: Yes Mom, it's nothing to joke about, that Nupur really aarrgghh!!
Maithili: Ha! I knew it; nowadays there is only ONE name on your lips NUPUR. It's either Nupur this or Nupur that'*giggles*
Mayank: Mom! Bas bhi karo!
Maithili: Achcha baba okay, but Mayank, do you remember what date it is today?
Mayank: Obviously mom, it's the 7th of '.October'.(his voice trails off) OH SNAP!! I CAN"T BELIEVE I FORGOT, MOM! She'll kill me for sure!!
Maithili: It's too late, her flight landed an hour ago, and she'll be here any minute, so there's no use hiding! [Starts laughing]
The Front Door opens and we hear a girls voice shouting loudly
BHAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mayank: Oh, NO! She's here!
Maithili: You have to deal with here, I don't want to see any blood!
Mayank: Hi Mallika, umm, how was your flight??
Mallika: Filght? Bhai, you FORGOT TO PICK UP YOUR ONLY SISTER FROM THE AIRPORT, and you're asking me about the flight????
Mayank: I'm really sorry Mallika!!
Mallika: SORRY?? What if something would happened to me?? *sees her brother's sorry face* Okay fine, I forgive you.
Mayank: Its all because of that Nupur!!
Mallika: OOOOO, A girl, I can't believe it!! Bhai forgot about me because of a GIRL!! Omg, this is such a happy day!! MOM MOM MOM, where are you??? You heard what bhai said??
Maithili: How's my baby? How was your flight? 4 years is a long time baby, I missed you so much!
Mallika: MOM yaar, senti mat bano (hugs her Mom)I missed you so much even your Aloo Ke Paranthe, waise bhi Canada is so cold!
Maithili: Mera bachcha don't worry, I'll stuff you with paranthas right away!!
Mallika: Mom, paranthe choodo, what's this thing about Bhai and a girl???
Maithili: Oh, you mean Nupur??
Mallika: Omg, You know her? Baat itni aage bad chuki hai???
Maithili: HAHHA, According to me it has, but you're brother will never accept it! You know how he is na'
Mallika: Don't worry about that Mom, now that I'm here, I'll see how Bhai doesn't see sense!
Maithili: What are you going to do beta *laughs*
Mallika: Wait and watch mama! *muhahhahahhha*
So how was it guys?? Liked it? Please offer any comments, suggestions, criticism!
Should I continue ?
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Part 1 -- Pg.1
Part 2 -- Pg. 5
Part 3 -- Pg. 8
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