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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Noorya...

Hi jaan!!!....sorry ek bar phir replying late😕
but as i said to Naz Di tumhe bhi pata hoga reason😭😭

anyways the part was MINDBLOWING FANTASTIC AWESOME!😛
the beggining was very funny with Rajiv and yours cute fight😆😆

haila Naz Di😲...what r u doing???
poori raat soyi hi nahin sirf bechare su ko tang karne ke liye😲😆😆
yaar this is sach mein Naz Di!!......humesha apna kam raat ko karti hai aur roz soti hai😆😆

awww this time maine su ko tang kiya😳...sorry voh Rajiv ne mujhse kaha😆😆
kyunki usse room assignments achi nahin lage the naa😆😳

haila su parents already poonch gaaye😃😃....matlab ab su bhi poonch jaayega😛
aur shaadi ho jaayegi......arre nahin uss se pehle sukk will be shocked to see each other naa😛
OMG im soooooo excited!!!...

ufffffffffff meri jaan ab jaldi next part post kardo....
mujhse raha nahin jaata😳

sorry once again for replying late sweety

Love u🤗

Oh it's COMPLETELY FINE...Hun hum sab hi jante hain kay aaj kal we are sad about Kumkum naa...but I am really happy that you still read the part...Awww thanks for liking SaRa fights hehe...I know Naz di raat bhar jagti hain hehe...Haan tumhe bhi toh tang karna hi tha naa Sumit ko hehe...Ok I won't make you guys wait a lot...I will update SOON
Luv Alwayz Sahar😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: JAMBO

what a ff. you havemade our day. thanks and please do not let us wait too long for wedding of su/ku.

Awww thanks I am glad you liked it...I will update SOON
Luv Alwayz Sahar😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: juhuti

Finally aaj mera last paper bhi khatm ho gaya

and i couldn't stop my self from reading the ff
so jaise hi class khatm huwa main paagal tumhara ff padhne ke liye a gaye...........haina ye pura paagal pan of sukk................kia karoon pehli baat ye ke sukk hai hi itni pyare and upar se tumhara ff to kamaalllllllll ka hai....................ok bahut ho gaye bakwaas now its time for the comment

PART- 32
OMG.......OMG........OMG...........
i am speechless!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.........i totally loved it..........its really nice the way u have introduce everyone in ur ff...............................its really good to read.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.........and ur ff will be a HISTORY⭐️.... jis tarah hum Kumkum ko kabhi nahiin bhool payenge.....usi tarah kkoi bhi tumhare ff ko to kabhi nahiin bhool payega!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

omg i loved the way u have introduced naz di and Gaurab.......aisa lag raha tha ki i am actually watching a cute sa scenes between them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was a really vey nice scenes totally loved it...........haiiiii main marjawaaan.......gaurav ki batein sun kar.......i love the way he say ke mujhe tumhare aankhon mein thori der ke liye doobne dooo😳😳......ise padh kar mere jab hoosh ur gaye to just think Naz di ka kia haal huwa hoga....................ise padh kar to naz di zaroor behosh ho gaye hongi😆😆

and what a cute and sweet sa scene between simmie and raj........................it was really nice...and i loved the way raj comes from back and hug simmie😳😳!!!!!!!!!!!!! uffffffffffffffffffffffff it was really very cute scene.....and I really like the part when Raj say to simmie ki woh kitna bolti hai😆..it was really funny....and galti to raj ne khud ki aur bekaar mein hamari simmie pe ilzaam laga dia...and how swweet of simmie to not say anything..............sahar dear ur seriously an amazingggggggggggg writer....hatts off to u

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED the convo between us............it was really nice....and mujhe aisa laga ke hum reality mein ek dosre se mil rahe hai...........and i will pray ke hum ise tarah kisi ke shaadi mein real life mein bhi mile😆😆 ...............sorry for annoying u and creeping u out..........kia karti ghar mein sabko pareshaan karke thak jati hoon to sooncha kyun na tumhe hi thora sa pareshaan kar loon.......................seriously it was a really very nice and cute convo.............and it was a lottttttttttt better than my idea...and my stupid dialoges....................gosh i don't even know how to link up the dialogues.....but i must say that u have written the part soo nicely.............................

the nook-jhool and all the jokes were mindblowing...........and i like the thing Norrya say to sumit ke mera pati suri (noorya ki shaadi bhi nahiin huwe aur uska pati bhi ho gaya😆😆...thanks for this imagination) srk lagta hai and yes mere sis ka rajiv to seriously Shahid dikhta hai😆😆

OVERALL amazing............superb..................outstanding part...totally loved the part...now can't wait to read the ext part..............but i might read it before tomorrow....................thanks for writing an amazingggggg part

love u sis a lotttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
afreen🤗

Haila Afreen Sis I really did got my answer to the question I was asking you yesterday...THANKS SO MUCH for your BEAUTIFUL comment...Arre yaar tujhe toh rest karni chahiye after exams mera toh ff baaad mein bhi padh saakhti hona...Thanks for liking everyone's intro...yaara also thanks for liking my comedy hehe...Oh yeh hum milein gaye well Sumit ki na saahi may be kissi aur ki shaadi par...Once again thanks for liking the part
Luv Alwayz Sahar😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: juhuti

Finally aaj mera last paper bhi khatm ho gaya

and i couldn't stop my self from reading the ff
so jaise hi class khatm huwa main paagal tumhara ff padhne ke liye a gaye...........haina ye pura paagal pan of sukk................kia karoon pehli baat ye ke sukk hai hi itni pyare and upar se tumhara ff to kamaalllllllll ka hai....................ok bahut ho gaye bakwaas now its time for the comment

PART- 32
OMG.......OMG........OMG...........
i am speechless!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.........i totally loved it..........its really nice the way u have introduce everyone in ur ff...............................its really good to read.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.........and ur ff will be a HISTORY⭐️.... jis tarah hum Kumkum ko kabhi nahiin bhool payenge.....usi tarah kkoi bhi tumhare ff ko to kabhi nahiin bhool payega!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

omg i loved the way u have introduced naz di and Gaurab.......aisa lag raha tha ki i am actually watching a cute sa scenes between them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was a really vey nice scenes totally loved it...........haiiiii main marjawaaan.......gaurav ki batein sun kar.......i love the way he say ke mujhe tumhare aankhon mein thori der ke liye doobne dooo😳😳......ise padh kar mere jab hoosh ur gaye to just think Naz di ka kia haal huwa hoga....................ise padh kar to naz di zaroor behosh ho gaye hongi😆😆

and what a cute and sweet sa scene between simmie and raj........................it was really nice...and i loved the way raj comes from back and hug simmie😳😳!!!!!!!!!!!!! uffffffffffffffffffffffff it was really very cute scene.....and I really like the part when Raj say to simmie ki woh kitna bolti hai😆..it was really funny....and galti to raj ne khud ki aur bekaar mein hamari simmie pe ilzaam laga dia...and how swweet of simmie to not say anything..............sahar dear ur seriously an amazingggggggggggg writer....hatts off to u

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED the convo between us............it was really nice....and mujhe aisa laga ke hum reality mein ek dosre se mil rahe hai...........and i will pray ke hum ise tarah kisi ke shaadi mein real life mein bhi mile😆😆 ...............sorry for annoying u and creeping u out..........kia karti ghar mein sabko pareshaan karke thak jati hoon to sooncha kyun na tumhe hi thora sa pareshaan kar loon.......................seriously it was a really very nice and cute convo.............and it was a lottttttttttt better than my idea...and my stupid dialoges....................gosh i don't even know how to link up the dialogues.....but i must say that u have written the part soo nicely.............................

the nook-jhool and all the jokes were mindblowing...........and i like the thing Norrya say to sumit ke mera pati suri (noorya ki shaadi bhi nahiin huwe aur uska pati bhi ho gaya😆😆...thanks for this imagination) srk lagta hai and yes mere sis ka rajiv to seriously Shahid dikhta hai😆😆

OVERALL amazing............superb..................outstanding part...totally loved the part...now can't wait to read the ext part..............but i might read it before tomorrow....................thanks for writing an amazingggggg part

love u sis a lotttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
afreen🤗

Haila Afreen Sis I really did got my answer to the question I was asking you yesterday...THANKS SO MUCH for your BEAUTIFUL comment...Arre yaar tujhe toh rest karni chahiye after exams mera toh ff baaad mein bhi padh saakhti hona...Thanks for liking everyone's intro...yaara also thanks for liking my comedy hehe...Oh yeh hum milein gaye well Sumit ki na saahi may be kissi aur ki shaadi par...Once again thanks for liking the part
Luv Alwayz Sahar😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ArmaansGirl

Arre sahar?? kahan kho gayi ho tum?? mein puri raat nahin soyi aur poora din intezaar karrahi hoon nex part par ne ke liye..lolz...ab ye bekaraari besabri ban ne lagi hain! :P lolz....but dnt wrry if ur bzee dan tke ur tym..we canu nerstnd school n all! gawd i h8 school..its soo annoying...i hve soo much work 2 do aur mein yaha bak bak karrahi hoon kaam karne ke bjay! :( lolz

xoxo
sadi<3

awww sorry...school nay busy rakha hua tha but I will be updating in a minute
Luv Alwayz Sahar😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Irika

heyy nice part waiting for the shaadi

Thanks yaara I will update SOON
Luv Alwayz Sahar😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey guys..THANKS SO MUCH...for reading even though we are STILL depressed about Kumkum...Acha NOW finally I am posting the part you all have been waiting for SUMIT KUMKUM KI SHAADI...Acha I hope I didn't let you all down...After A LOT of research by Afreen I finally managed to write this part...I hope kay kuch galti nahin ki...and if I did please forgive me...ENJOY
Luv Alwayz Sahar😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
I am so sorry that the part is LONG...lekin kya karoon I wanted to include the whole wedding in one part😃😃😃
Part 35: Shaadi

It's still nightime and everyone is enjoying the festivities

Kumkum: Aye Naz

Naz: Kya hua

Kumkum: Kya tu mere saath mandhir ah saakhti hai main shaadi se pehle eik baar phir mandhir jaana chahiti hoon

Naz: Of course tu chal main apna purse lekar ati hoon

Kumkum: No need main lekar ayi hoon

Naz: Toh tujhe paatha tha kay main haan kahoon gyi

Kumkum: Of course😆

They both leave...In mandhir

Naz: Acha tune jo manghna hai mang main zara wahan se Gaurav kayliye shubh dhanga lekar ati hoon😳😳😳

Kumkum: Theek hai...Hai bhagwan tu toh janta hai na main yahaan kyon ayi hoon...Main bus apne hissey ki khushiyan tujh se mangne ayi hoon...Main bus yeh chahti hoon kay shaadi kay baad main apne naye parivaar aur apne pati ko khush raakh sakoon...Bus apka...😃😃😃

Rahul: Aur jo khushiyan main chahta hoon unka kya😡😡😡

Kumkum turns around in shock😲😲😲

Rahul: Kya hua tu chup kyon hogayi...

Kumkum: Kyon aye ho yahaan😡😡😡

Rahul: KUMKUM yeh kya mujhse itni gussa kyon ho...gussa toh mujhe hona chahiye naa...TUNE MUJHE TAPAR MAARA aur US DIN MERE DOSTOON KAY SAMNE SHARMINDA KIYA...Haan(he comes closer to her) Toh phir tum kyon kufha ho mujhse...haan KYON😡😡😡

Kumkum: DOOR raho mujhse kareeb maat ana mere😕😕😕

Rahul: Arre kya hogaya hai tujhe jis kayliye tu bani hai usi se bhag rahi ho tum haan...(he holds her by the waist)...Kya hua mujhse kyon sharma rahi ho😡😡😡

Kumkum (she struggles to get away): CHODHO MUJHE😡😡😡

Rahul: (touching her face) Aur agar na chodha toh...Kya karlo gyi hmmm

Kumkum: Rahul dekho humara rishta khatum hochuka hai and you need to UNDERSTAND that😡😡😡

Rahul: Nahin understand karna mujhe tu meri hai aur kiski nahin samjhi😡😡😡

Kumkum: Rahul main tumse pyar nahin karti hoon😡😡😡

Rahul: Maine tumse kab pucha all that matters is main tumhe pyar karta hoon aur main tumse hi shaadi karoon ga😡😡😡

Kumkum: Uper wale ko humara rishta nahin manzoor main tumse kabhi bhi shaadi nahin karoon gyi

Rahul: Acha dekh lete hain...OMG hum abhi mandhir mein hi hain isey zayaada behtar waqt kya hoga tumse shaadi karne ka...

Kumkum: Rahul tum yeh nahin kar saakhte😡😡😡

Rahul: Oh my dear main aisa hi karaha hoon...Ufsoos tumhare parivaar wale is shaadi par nahin asaakhte haina...chalo baad mein milayein gay unse😆😆😆

While holding on to her arm he starts to set the fire in order take the phere

Kumkum: Rahul...aisa maat karo please main😡😡😡

Rahul: Chup tum janti nahin kay tum chahti kya ho...Dekhna main tujhe kitna KHUSH rakhoon ga shaadi kay baad

He forcibly makes her take the pheras...As they are about to take the last phera...Naz hits Rahul on his head with a metal rod...

Naz: Tu theek hai na Kumkum

Rahul (almost fainting): Main tumhe apni banakar rahoon ga yeh mera wadha hai tumse

Kumkum: Yahan se chalo please

They rush back home...Kumkum tells the whole story to her parents and expresses her fear that Rahul might ruin the wedding

Mr. M: Tu fikhar maat kar humne sooch liya hai kya karna hai...(he leaves and makes a phone call to the Wadwa family)

They talk

Mr. W: Arre yaar humari bethi ki safety se zayaada kuch important nahin hai...yeh shaadi bhi nahin...Aur tumhara khayal bilkul theek hai hum yeh hi karein gay

Mr. M and Mr. W decide that it is too dangerous to have the wedding in Dehli because psycho Rahul is still out there...So they move the wedding to Mumbai and leave for Mumbai immediately...All the guests were provided with flight tickets so they are not bothered as much with the whole situation...The Mishra family already have a house in Mumbai so all their guest reside there and Wadwa family are in their own house😃😃😃

Everyone gets there safely and most of them are confused why there was a change of venue but they continue to enjoy the shaadi atmosphere😃😃😃

Feburary 14th, 2009: Shaadi

5:20am

Everyone is up at the Wadwa house except for the boys(Sumit, Raj, Rajiv, and Suri) obviously hehe...All the people are busy making the shaadi arrangements

Mr. W: Arre pandit ji ko phone kardiya tune

Mrs. W: Subha kay 5:30 huey hain...main 8 baje phone kardoon gyi

Mr. W: Arre sab ladke nazar nahin arahe

Sahar: Oh hum lekar ate hain unhe uncle

Simmie, Sahar, and Noorya go to their room

Noorya: Guys utho it is the big day

Suri: Noori thodi der aur😆😆😆

Noorya: Noori umm Come on utho naa

Simmie: Haan Raj tum bhi utho come on hum sabko late kara dayein gaye

Raj doesn't respond

Sahar: Sumit come on utho naa (Still not talking to Rajiv)...Aur dosre bhi jo ab tak soo rahe hain woh bhi uth jaayein😆😆😆

The girls leave

Raj: Kitna tang karti hain naa😡😡😡

Rajiv: Arre tum loogoon ko kisne uthaya toh humein toh kissi nay uthaya bhi nahin (making a sad face😭😭😭)

Sahar hears this...she comes back in with a glass of water and pours it all over him hehe😆😆😆

Sahar: Satisfied now

Rajiv: Haan isi bahane apne hum se baat jo ki😃😃😃

They hug🤗

Sahar: Acha seriously abh sab utho warna der hojaaye gyi

Rajiv: Der na hojaaye kahin der naa hojaaye😆😆😆

Sumit: Ahhhhhhh ab toh uthna hi padhe ga kauwa ney ghana jo shuroo kardiya😆😆😆

Everyone laughs and they start to get ready

At the Mishra house

Naz: Kumkum tu theek hai na

Kumkum: Mujhe kya hoga

Naz: Woh jo kal raat

Kumkum: Don't worry tu jab tak hai na meri guardian angel mujhe yaakeen hai mujhe kuch bhi nahin hoga😃😃😃

Naz: Thanks

Kumkum: Aur waise bhi is tarah thodi excitement agayi naa meri shaadi mein😆😆😆

They both laugh

Naz: Acha chaal tayaar hona hai naa

12:00pm

Everyone is ready and are having fun there is only 5 more hours to go

Noorya: Hai kitna pyari lag rahi hain naa decorations...they are just too beautiful

Suri: Haan bohut sundar hai

Rajiv: Arre decorations ko chodho mujhe toh yahan ki ladkiyan bohut sundar lagrahi hain 😉😉😉(he annoys Sahar on purpose)

Sahar: Ahh rea...

Rajiv: I mean woh dekho jo abhi enter hoi hai...ahhh😆😆😆

Sahar: What😡😡😡

Rajiv (ignoring Sahar): Kya bhaal hai uske😉😉😉

Sadi walks up to him; he was talking about her

Sadi: Hi guys...I am Sadi Sumit kahan hai main usey dekhene kayliye itna excited horahi hoon😃😃😃

Rajiv: Woh toh abhi kamre mein tayar ho raha hai but I am here😆😆😆

Sahar: And so is his girlfriend hi I am Sahar (pushing him out of the way)😆😆😆

Sadi: Hi nice to meet you

Noorya: So ap bhi Sumit ko janti hain

Sadi: Haan lekin main shaadi par nahin asaakhti thi pehle due to work...but maine adjustment ki and I am here for the most important event

Simmie: Good we are happy you are here

Rajiv: Kissi kay saath aye hain app

Sadi realizes that he is trying to tease Sahar

Sadi: Nahin mere liye toh eik hi hai Shahid Kapoor main uska intezaar karahi hoon😃😃😃

Rajiv: Waise loog kehte hain that main bilkul Shahid jaisa dikhta hoon😉😉😉

Sadi: Lekin mujhe original chahiye naa😆😆😆

All laugh and Sahar leaves because of his behavior😡

Raj: Tu toh mara

Rajiv: Janta hoon kuch zayaada hogaya😕😕😕

Simmie: Kuch

Noorya: Yeh it was TOO MUCH

At the Mishras

Kumkum is dressed in all RED and GOLDEN...She is looking SO BEAUTIFUL😃😃😃

Pavitra: Bohut pyari lag rahi ho

Priya: Arre Kumkum bus is ki kami hai (she hands over the charm bracelet that Sumit had gifted her in Goa)

Kumkum feels a little sad lekin phir pehn layti hai😃😃😃

Naz: Arre pyari si pari lag rahi ho...Acha barati to ane hi wale hongaye

Kumkum is excited and happy that finally everything is working out😃😃😃

4:30pm

Wadwa House

Raj: Arre Dulhe raja ko bhulayo humain nikhalna hai na

Simmie: Main jati hoon...Sumit kahan...WOW

Sumit: Kya hua

Simmie: Kuch nahin bas BOHUT handsome lag rahe ho😃😃😃

Sumit: Simmie

Simmie: Nahin really teri dulhan toh fida hojaaye gyi😃😃😃

Sumit: Ok stop chal chalein

As he is coming out of the room wearing CUTE white suit...He sees somebody in front of him

Simmie: TUM😲😲😲

Sumit: Pr....😭😭😭

Preeti: Kyon main tumhari shaadi mein shamil nahin hosaakthti

Simmie (sees that Sumit is stunned): Umm haan chalo tum bhi ajao naa...Barat nikhalne hi wali hai

Preeti: Oh toh main time par agayi...By the way Sumit BOHUT ache laag rahe ho

Sumit's happiness vanishes away...Abhi toh woh khush hone shuroo hi hua tha but he becomes sad again😭😭😭

They all leave and arrive at Kumkum's house at 5:00pm exactly

Nazia: BARAAT AGAYI...OMG woh sab agaye hain😃😃😃

Kumkum feels something inside...Nervousness mixed with HAPPINESS😃😃😃

Naz: Chalo unhe kirkhi se dekhte hain chalo naa

Kumkum: Nahin tum log dekho main theek hoon

Pavitra: ARRE wah Kumkum teri toh life bun gayi munda bada suna hai😃😃😃

Naz: Haila itna CUTE lagraha hai...Ahhh na Kumkum dekh usey😃😃😃

Kumkum finally decides to see him but it was too late the baraat has already entered the house

Arya: Khair hai sari zindagi usi hi ko toh dekhna hai tujhe😆😆😆

They all laugh

Mrs. Mishra does arti of Sumit and then he is sitted in the mandap...Preeti on purpose sits right behind him

Preeti (to herself): Karle shaadi lekin main tujhe khushi se yeh shaadi nahin karne doon gyi kabhi nahin (to Sumit) Sirf kuch hi time reh gaya hai shaadi mein naa😡😡😡

Sumit: Preeti please

Preeti: Kya Sumit main toh supportive hogayi hoon

Sumit: Tumhara yahaan hona bohut takleef dey raha hai mujhe😭😭😭

Preeti: Chalo tumhe paatha toh chala mujhe kya feel hua jab tum mujhe chod kar chel gaye😡😡😡

While this is all happening...Dosre naughthy loog are busy trying to play pranks on the barati yes I am talking about Naz Di hehe

Shafoo: Kya karne wali hai tu

Naz: Shhhh bus yeh pani ki balti naa yahaan hang karni hai😉😉😉

Shafoo: Lekin kyon

Naz: Just wait naa...oh chup ummm oh Raj zara yahaan ana

Raj: Ji

Naz: Woh is kamre mein naa ladoo padhe hain tum nikhal kar kitchen mein rakh do please

Rajiv: Arre main karta

Naz: if you want tum dunno karlo

As soon as both of them open the door, the water drops all over them😆😆😆

Naz and Shafoo run away

Sahar: Arre tum dunno wet kyon ho😕😕😕

Rajiv: Arre tumne suna nahin wet hona naya fashion hai😆😆😆

Sahar: Oh really

Raj: Haan

Simmie: Tum dunno budho baane naa

Raj and Rajiv embarassed😳😳😳

Raj: Haan aur ab tum dunno bun gayi😆😆😆

Sahar: Kaise

They both hug them and they become a little wet too...Ok everyone continue to have fun😆😆😆

Pandit: Muhrat ka waqt guzara ja raha hai...Dulhan ko bhula ligiye😃😃😃

Mr. M: Main bhulata hoon...(in the room) Chalo betha pandit ji bhula rahe hain

Naz, Priya and Pavitra take Kumkum to the mandap...There is a twist her face is covered with the dupatta😉😉😉...

Rajiv: Lo dulhe raja agayi dulhan

They seat Kumkum right next to him and pandit starts...before you know it is time for them to take the pheras😃😃😃

Sumit (to himself): Khash main tujhe khushiyan desaakhta lekin mera dil kabhi kissi aur ko swikhar nahin kar saakhta😭😭😭

Kumkum (to herself): Hai bhagwan meri ane wali zindagi ko khushiyoon se baar dena😃😃😃

Pandit: Ab ap unko mangalsutar pehnaiye😃😃😃

Jaise hi Sumit Kumkum ko mangalsutar pehnata hai...Kumkum feels something

Kumkum (to herself): Yeh ehsaas mujhe apna apna sa kyon lag raha hai...yeh ehsaas main pehle bhi mehsoos kar chuki hoon😕😕😕

Pandit: Ab yeh sindhoor lagaiye

Kumkum uncovers her face...Sumit was not looking at her yet since he is already busy thinking and looking at Preeti...Kumkum is still looking down...As he is done putting the sindhoor he looks at Kumkum and Kumkum too looks up...Everyone else is throwing flowers at them but they both are SHOCKED😲😲😲...Preeti is FURIOUS and she leaves IMMEDIATELY...They both stand like statues at the mandap😲😲😲

I am sorry that I am ending in suspense par kya karoon...it is no fun if there is no suspense naa...I will update SOON😃😃😃
Luv Alwayz Sahar😳
Edited by Sahar18 - 16 years ago
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OMG FINALY!!!!!!😃😃

yaar Sahar thank god i read the part before going to sleep varna so nahin paati😳
omg it was FANTASTIC AMAZING!!!!!

soo sweet before the shaadi kk goes to mandir😳
but haila vahan tho kameena Rahul poonch gaaya😲..
and OMG how dare he touching kk!!😡😡...
kute kameene zabardasti kk se shaadi karna chahta hai....aur last pehra lene hi vaala tha😲
thank god Naz vahan thi....aur kya maara usse dande ke saath😃😆...
awww acha hua kk told her parents about that😳

hehe all boys are still sleeping...but yaar main uss time pe uth gaayi😕...
real life mein naa main bhi vahan so rahi hoti😆😆...

awwwww poor Rajiv kisine usse uthaya nahin..
but yaar Sahar bohut zalim ho..bechare pe pani phek diya😆😆

OMG Sahar u know when i was reading the part my mom was sleeping on the couch....
yaar when i read su's line when he said " aaaaahhhh ab uthna hi padega kauwa ne gaana jo shuru kar diya" 🤣
omg i laughed soooooooooo much but yaar
i tried to control myself varna mom ko utha leti😆😆


yeh Rajiv bhi naa kuch kam nahin nahin hai bohut hi badmash hai...
kis tarah tumhe tang kar raha hai😳

haila and the girl is none other than apni Sadi😃....
lekin bad luck usse originalSahid chahiye😆😆


omg i can imagine kk in her dress😍..
she must be looking like a pari😳

aww she remembered su when she saw the bracelet😭..
but no worries yaar voh tho uss se shaadi kar rahi hai😃


haila Preety bhi aa gaayi😲😲..aur upar se su ka mood kharab kar diya🤢
omg i hope voh kuch karegi nahin shaadi mein....agar usne aisa kuch kiya
tho yaar iss bar main dande se marungi usse😆😉

uffffffffffffffoo tum naa suspense ki master ho!😛...
uff i really thought kk su ko khirki se dekh legi

lekin main bhool gaayi ke yeh humari Sahar ki ff hai😆

omg loved the prank😆😆....and once again bechara Rajiv vahan tha Raj ke saath
yeh Naz bhi naa....
and omg when Rajiv said "wet hona naya fashion hai"🤣🤣🤣..
ufff has has ke naa mera bura haal ho gaaya tha
i run to the kitchen taki mom ko jagah naa doun😆😆


OMG voh pal..voh lamha jiska itne waqt se intezaar tha akhir aa hi gaaya😃😃
sukk took the pheras😳.....omg yeh scene
main imagine kar rahi thi yaar i even had tears

i was soooooooooooo happy😳...
and omg kk feels that she knows the touch when put the magalsutar.....
ufff that was awesome😳

omg when they look at each other shocked.........
ufff even i was shocked with my khula mooh and a smile on my face like this==>😲😃


yaar kyuuunnnnnnnnn........
kyun hume itna tadpa rahi ho😕

aise scene pe end todi karte hain...
yaar its dagerous heart attack ho sakti hai😆😆

yaar u dont know jab sukk ki scene read kar rahi thi
tho mera dil itne zor se dhadaak raha tha even i was hearing it😆😆


anyways cont sooooon meri jaan next part zara
jaldi post kar varna mujhe sach mein heart atack ho jaayegi😆😳

Love u🤗


PS : CONGRATS for your 100 pages jaan!😃


Edited by ...Noorya... - 16 years ago
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Finally
omg god waited for this part so much..
and now so nervous to read whats gonne happen
ok..before reading....kuch cheezen check karloon..
snacks ready, (when the story gets twisty..😲)
juice ready, (jab haste haste gala sook jaayegi..🤣)
rumaal ready, (jab emotional hojaawungi..😭)
cushion ready, (jab gusse scream karna pare to moo pe lagane ke liyee..😡)
AC ready, (jab romantic scenes se gharmi lagne lage..☺️)
haan to saare samaan ready to now im starting to read..
OMG the beginning already so dramatic..
i could imagine and see the whole mandir scene
the dialogues were fabulous..in each word the drama was there
totally perfect yaar..sab kuch mujhe saaf saaf dikh rahi thi
wo Rahul uff khutta, kameena, usko kirre pare,
chalti car uske uppar aajaye...😡🤢🤬
aeroplane uske uppar ghir jaaye,
uff i hate him so much..itna himmat usko
hamari Kumkum ke saath phera lega wo..usse zabardasti karega wo...
pyaar wyaar kuch samach mein aata nahin hain aur chala aaya shaadi karne
ufff i felt so good when I... mera matlab Naz hits him on the head..
uff thank god Naz bhi gayi thi mandir...
thank u for writing that Naz hits him..uff thoda chain to aaya mujhe
and im so glad that Kk told it to her dad and they changed the venue for the shaadi
ab us kameena bhootni ke..sarre gah delhi mein...😡
🤣 love the morning scenes at Su place yaar
all the guys being lazy bones...and the girls wakin them up
🤣
loved the khitpit of rajiv and sahar
🤣 love it when she pours the water on his face🤣
🤣 and the Der Na hojaaye song
omg that is my fav song and now rajiv sings ufff
haste haste na meri to bura haal hogayi..
and omg when Su says ab kawwa ghaana ghaa diya 🤣
uff haste haste meri awaaz badalgayi.....
Sahar yaar ur amazing
i really love the sweet little convo betwn SuKk and the dost yaane ki hum sab
yaar u bring us in another sapno ki duniya...
mujhe waaki mein lagne laga ke main Kumum ki dost hoon
awwww ye rajiv na kitna satata hain Sahar ko..
and haila apni Sadi bhi entry maar diya story mein
uff yaar im loving this ff so much main apni fanfic bhoolgayi..
and yaar 🤣 love the nokjhok of sahar and rajiv
Sadi ko original chahiye 🤣 bechara rajiv
and awwwww Sahar ko sad kardiya... 😭
and waw could totally imagine SuKk in their shaadi attires
and OMG ye kameeni kyon wapas aagayi..😡
uff zaroor kuch karegi wo...arre koi usse bhi sar pe maro yaar..
haila finally baraat arrives
hai yaar almost almost Kk usko dekh leti..uff
yaar u really can torture like the Kk creatives 😆
uffo yaar ye preeti na wapas kyon aayi hain..🤢
hee bhagwaan ye ladki kuch ghalat na karde😕
ufff koi to usse wahaan se nikhalo..😡
🤣
the shararat with the barati
yaar ye balti aur paani wala idea to bahut gr8 tah
omg i almost fell from my couch...
and then rajiv says wet hona fashion hain🤣
and then when both guys caught hug the gals..uff so cute
omg enjoyed it to the bits
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
when reading the pheras, the mangalsutra part my heart was going
and omg both sees each other
uff that moment mera mooo khulla ka khulla rehgayi
the moment we have been waiting for soo long..
yaar u completely satisfied us...ab bas ek hug hojaaye..
koi twist na hojaaye yaar....
SuKk cryingly hugs each other
tab hi dil ko thandak mile ga...
ufff jaise Kk was shocked lookin at Su
me also shocked lookin at my laptop screen..
aggar kissi ne mujhe iss halat mein dekh liyaa na
to paagal hi samdje ghaa..
lekin yaar aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
kahani khatam kyon hogayi😭
nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii itna zyada suspense
mujhse wait nahi hoga....uffoooo khuda ne suspense kyun banaya..
ufff Sahar ur amazing..jitna main bolun utna kam hain...
i really enjoyed it soooo much...yaar ab jaldi se next part send karo...
ur to good yaar..ur so talented..u should really show this story to some PRO's yaar
this is totally a real serial material...this should be really filmed yaar
please yaar kissi bhi tarha karke tum ye serial banao
ab to HuJu ke paas bhi time hain..😳
the whole part is
really waiting for the next part...
Love u lots
-Naz-

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