updated- My fan fiction!!! KISMAT KA KHEL(K3)!!! S - Page 3

Liked your update. Is dharmi opposite veer. It feels as though she is like shera.

I AM POSTING BOTH PART 5 AND 6 TOGETHER

Part-5

In Gauri's room

Dharam: hum kya under aa sakte hai?????

 

Gauri: arre aap?????? Aayi naa!!!!! Aapko humse ijaazat mangne ki kya zarrorat hai. Yeh                         toh pura mahal hi aapka ka hai

 

Dharam; beshak yeh mahal hamara hai par jitne dinno tak aap se mahal mein hai tab tak                       yeh karma aapka hai, toh aapki ijaazazt ke beghair hum se kamre mein nahi aa sakte!!

 

Gauri feels very good with this attitude of Dharam and shy away

 

Gauri: ji kahiye… kya kehna chahte hai aap

 

Dharam: hum woh…….. ji. Aap se…

 

Gauri:  ha ha.. kahiye…..

 

Dharam; ji…. Bahar jo hua uske liye hum aap se mmafi maagna chahte hai!!!!!

 

Gauri: ji… bahar… kya hua….. arre haaaaaaaa….. who….. afrre aap toh bas yuhi……

 

Dharam; nahi nahi hum sach mein maafi……

 

Gauri: maafi ki kya zarrorat hai. Hum aap aur veer toh bas mazak kar rahe the… bas durga….

 

Dharam; bilkul durga…… veer ne bahut bura kiya. Hum jante hai ………. Veer bada hi batameez ladka hai……

 

Gauri: bura nahi kiya bas thodi masti ki…. Is mein burai kya hai????? Yeh toh bas masti hai aur yahi toh veer ki, aapki, meri aur durga ki masti karne ke din hai……

Aur durga toh bas har baat par ruth jati hai…… chahe koi uski tareef kare ya phir koi uske saath mazak kare….. ha magar shayd aaj ke din veer ko toh durga ko manana chahiye

 

Dharam: aaj ka din???///

 

Gauri: aap ko bhi yaad nahi…… woh kya hai na….  durga ka aaj janm din hai…isliye hum uska janmdin manane ke liye Aryanagar aaye the… pitaji shaam tak aa jayege!!!!!!!

 

Dharam; hum toh bhool hi gaye!!!!!!

 

Gauri; apki ki baat hum samajh sakte hai….magar veer kaisa bhool gaya hume samajh nahi aata???/

 

Dharam; matlab???

 

Gauri: aap ko nahi pata??????? Veer toh har saal durga ke janmdin usko phool, patr, aur tofe Awasi mein bheja karta tha!!!!

 

Dharam had widened his eyes in shock and had almost half opened his mouth!

 

Dharam in mind; veer???? Durga ke liye?????/ tofe???? Phool??/ ptr??? Veer ne itna sab kar liye aur hume pata tak bhi nahi???

 

Dharm to gauri: accha?????/ veer ne yeh sab kiya???/ kya aapko pata hai patr mein kya tha???????

 

Gauri: haha… woh toh durga ke liye kavitaye likha karta tha!!!!!!

 

Dharam; kavitaya???/ aur kuch???

 

Gauri: nahi!!1 hume toh bas itna hi pata hai!!!!!! Par aap kyun itna pooch rahe hai,… aap bhi toh hamare janmdin par hume part likha karta the!!!!!!

 

DHARAM  IN A MAHA- GREAT SHOCK

Dharm; KYA?????

 

Gauri bechari daarrr gayi!!

 

Dharam in mind; maine kab patr likha gauri ko????? Yeh zaror veer ki badmaashi hogi!???  Veer ab toh hum tumhe chodege nahi!!!!!!! Tumhari toh jaan li kar rahege!!!

 

Dharam to gauri: ab hum chalte hai…… bahut kaam hai…….

 

DHARAM LEAVES

 

PART 6

Part-6

Veer with durga

 

Veer; durga kah ho tum……. Durrrrrrrrgaaaaaa… durga.. durga

He started singing durga. Durga and jumping up and down

Suddenly he turned and………

Durga uske saamne with a lot of anger and gussa

 

Veer; durga!!!!!!! Meri pyari si dost.. yaar.. saathi… aur hum safar!!!!!

 

Durga; kya?????/ saathi??/// humsafar????

 

Veer realises  that he said alot and said

Veer; matlab…… acchi dost… bachpan ki dost,…. Aur bachpan ki saathi!!!!

Hahahahaha

 

Durga; hahahaha…. Bahut has liya aur ab MERE KAMRE SE BAHAR NIKHLO

Veer bechara daarr gaya…. Kya karna aaya aur kya ho raha hai!!

 

Veer; ba… baah.. bahar????/

 

Durga; HAHA… KAMRE SE BAHAR!!!!!!! ABHI!! ABHI ISI WAQT!!!

 

Veer; kyun????

 

Durga; zyaada baat mat karo aur bas abhi abhi yaha se bahar nikhlo warna dakhe mar kar bahar nikalogi

 

Veer; oye….. nakchadi, batameez ladki chup raho warna……

 

Durga; warna??? Warna kya?? Ha??? Warna kya karo lo ga tum??? Tum mera kuch nahi bigaad sakte….. samjhe tum… tumhe itni himmat nahi mujhse ladke jeetni ki samjhe tum????

 

Veer; aayye…. Main kuch bol nahi raha uska matlab nahi ki tum kuch bhi bolti jao… samjhi……

 

Durga; tum bologe bhi kya??????? Maine kaha na tum main itni himmat nahi!!!!!!!!

 

Veer: tum samajhti kya ho khud ko!!!!! Haaaa????? Jhansi ki rani ya Aryanagar ki maharani

 

Durga: veeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

 

VEER AND DURGA WERE FIGHTING WHEN SUDDENLY DURGA SLIPS AND VEER GETS HOLD OF HER!!!!!!! AND WOW WHAT A SCENE???????????

 

DURGA'S HAIR FALLING ON CHEEKS AND FOREHEAD!!!!!!

DURGA'S TIGHTLY CLOSED EYES AND HAD CLUTCHED VEER VERY TIGHTLY

 

VEER EYES STUCK ON DURGA'S BEAUTIFUL FACE!!!!!!!1

 

PAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

 

ENTRY HUI DHARAM KI AND HE WAS SHOCKED AND AGAIN DHARAM'S MOUTH HALF OPENED AND EYES WIDE OPEN

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PART-7

Dharam clears his throat!!!!!!!! But not of any use!!!!!!!!! He then called out veer's name but again not of any use!!!!!! How would it be of any use when veer is not actually lost in the eyes of Durga but lost in the eyes of Naina!!!!!! Naina?????? Whose naina??? Lets see!!!

 

Durga opens her eyes and looks in eyes of veer!!!!!!!

Veer; Naina tum??? Yahaa??? Main jaanta tha tum yahaa aayogi.. tum bahut acchi ho aur khoobsurat ho…..

 

Durga very  loud enough to wake up veer from his lost thoughts  KYA???: NAINA YEH NAINA KAUN HAI……

Veer  comes to presence and screams NAINA!!!!!!!111

And Durga falls down…

 

Durga; veeeeeeer…………… tum samajhta kya ho khud ko………… pehle toh mere kamre  mein aate ho………… mujhse ladhte ho…….aur uske baad  jaan bujkar……mujhe girate ho………….. tum samajhta kya ho khud ko??????

Jaanti hoon tum rajkumar ho magar kuch tammez sikhi hogi naa tum ne…….sab acchi tammeze aur guhn khas mein sirf tumhare dharam bhaiyya ko hi nahi mili hogi……

 

Dharam: durga….durga… apne gusse ko kabo mein rakho…. Aise chilane se kuch nahi hota…veer ko chodo…tum tum paani piyo…(dharam gets water) piyo aur aaram karo…. (now in a heavy maharaj voice) veer…tum chalo hamare saath….

 

 

IN THE GARDEN DHARAM VEER

DHARAM: hum ek baat puche veer tum se???

 

Veer' bilkul pucho!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Dharam: yeh NAINA kaun hai???? Aur naina ko yui khoobsurat aur accha kehna?????

Hum toh kisi naina ko nahi jante?? Kaun haai yeh naina???

 

Veer; aa…………….Naina???////// kaun naina???????????

 

Dharam; wahi toh hum tumse puch rahe hai………. Kaun naina????

 

Veer; arre bade bhaiyya……….koi nahi……………. Main kisi bhi naina ko nahi janta………….. sach main…………..

 

Dharam' sach mein????

 

Veer; haaaaan……………. Naina ki kasam……..

 

Dharam; KYA????

 

Veer; Mera matlab tumhari kasam…………….

 

Dharam; mera  naam naina nahi nai!!!!!!

 

Veer; mujhe pata hai…  yaaar naina…..( says soo and hits him on head and runs)

 

Dharam; veer…………hum tumhara yeh saach jaan ke rahege ki……………. Naina????

 

NIVRATI MAA AND MAHARAJ TOGETHER

 

 

Maharaj : nivrati….. tumhe nahi lagta abhi waqt aaya gaya hai ki hum Dharam aur Veer ki shaadi ke baare mein ek baar phir se soche………….. jo phejle saal hua……. Uske baad hame zyaada savdhani se rishta jodna chahiye……………

 

Nivriti;- Maharaj…………….. phijle saal mein hamari galti nahi thi naa hi dosre rajya ka………… haalaat hi Dushman ban gaye aur hamare dushmano ne hamari dulhaan ko hi…………………

 

Maharaj:Nivriti………… jo hua use bhool jao…………..

 Nivriti: nah I bhaiyya main us masoom chehre ko nahi bhool sakti………… mujhe yaad hai jab hum rishte ke liye gaye the toh rajkumari ne hamari kis tarah seva ki…………..

Uske saath jo hua woh bahut bora hua…………….

 

Maharaj; Dharam aur veer ko toh hamne joth bol diya us waqt…………magar ab rishta karte waqt  hame shavdhani…………….

 

Dharam; pitaji……………………..

 

Maharaj; arre dharam aayo…………

 

Dharam: pitaji hum sooch rahe the ki acchi subha hai mele mein bhi abhi kaafi mauj-masti shuru ho gayi hogi toh kya hum aur veer  rajkumariyo ko lekar ghum aaye

 

Maharaj: haha……kyun nahi…………bilkul……….

 

Dharam; accha phir thik…………hum chalte hai……nivi bua aap hamare saatth aayi hum mele mein kya pehne yeh batane ke liye………….. aap chaliye isse pehle ki mein pagal hojayo……kapdo ke maamle mein aap hi meri maadad karti hai…….

 

DHARAM TAKES NIV BUA WITH HIM

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