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Posted: 16 years ago

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it was tooooooooooo good i love reading it update soon

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Posted: 16 years ago

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PART-7

Dharam clears his throat!!!!!!!! But not of any use!!!!!!!!! He then called out veer's name but again not of any use!!!!!! How would it be of any use when veer is not actually lost in the eyes of Durga but lost in the eyes of Naina!!!!!! Naina?????? Whose naina??? Lets see!!!

Durga opens her eyes and looks in eyes of veer!!!!!!!

Veer; Naina tum??? Yahaa??? Main jaanta tha tum yahaa aayogi.. tum bahut acchi ho aur khoobsurat ho…..

Durga very loud enough to wake up veer from his lost thoughts KYA???: NAINA YEH NAINA KAUN HAI……

Veer comes to presence and screams NAINA!!!!!!!111

And Durga falls down…

Durga; veeeeeeer…………… tum samajhta kya ho khud ko………… pehle toh mere kamre mein aate ho………… mujhse ladhte ho…….aur uske baad jaan bujkar……mujhe girate ho………….. tum samajhta kya ho khud ko??????

Jaanti hoon tum rajkumar ho magar kuch tammez sikhi hogi naa tum ne…….sab acchi tammeze aur guhn khas mein sirf tumhare dharam bhaiyya ko hi nahi mili hogi……

Dharam: durga….durga… apne gusse ko kabo mein rakho…. Aise chilane se kuch nahi hota…veer ko chodo…tum tum paani piyo…(dharam gets water) piyo aur aaram karo…. (now in a heavy maharaj voice) veer…tum chalo hamare saath….

IN THE GARDEN DHARAM VEER

DHARAM: hum ek baat puche veer tum se???

Veer' bilkul pucho!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dharam: yeh NAINA kaun hai???? Aur naina ko yui khoobsurat aur accha kehna?????

Hum toh kisi naina ko nahi jante?? Kaun haai yeh naina???

Veer; aa…………….Naina???////// kaun naina???????????

Dharam; wahi toh hum tumse puch rahe hai………. Kaun naina????

Veer; arre bade bhaiyya……….koi nahi……………. Main kisi bhi naina ko nahi janta………….. sach main…………..

Dharam' sach mein????

Veer; haaaaan……………. Naina ki kasam……..

Dharam; KYA????

Veer; Mera matlab tumhari kasam…………….

Dharam; mera naam naina nahi nai!!!!!!

Veer; mujhe pata hai… yaaar naina…..( says soo and hits him on head and runs)

Dharam; veer…………hum tumhara yeh saach jaan ke rahege ki……………. Naina????

NIVRATI MAA AND MAHARAJ TOGETHER

Maharaj : nivrati….. tumhe nahi lagta abhi waqt aaya gaya hai ki hum Dharam aur Veer ki shaadi ke baare mein ek baar phir se soche………….. jo phejle saal hua……. Uske baad hame zyaada savdhani se rishta jodna chahiye……………

Nivriti;- Maharaj…………….. phijle saal mein hamari galti nahi thi naa hi dosre rajya ka………… haalaat hi Dushman ban gaye aur hamare dushmano ne hamari dulhaan ko hi…………………

Maharaj:Nivriti………… jo hua use bhool jao…………..

Nivriti: nah I bhaiyya main us masoom chehre ko nahi bhool sakti………… mujhe yaad hai jab hum rishte ke liye gaye the toh rajkumari ne hamari kis tarah seva ki…………..

Uske saath jo hua woh bahut bora hua…………….

Maharaj; Dharam aur veer ko toh hamne joth bol diya us waqt…………magar ab rishta karte waqt hame shavdhani…………….

Dharam; pitaji……………………..

Maharaj; arre dharam aayo…………

Dharam: pitaji hum sooch rahe the ki acchi subha hai mele mein bhi abhi kaafi mauj-masti shuru ho gayi hogi toh kya hum aur veer rajkumariyo ko lekar ghum aaye

Maharaj: haha……kyun nahi…………bilkul……….

Dharam; accha phir thik…………hum chalte hai……nivi bua aap hamare saatth aayi hum mele mein kya pehne yeh batane ke liye………….. aap chaliye isse pehle ki mein pagal hojayo……kapdo ke maamle mein aap hi meri maadad karti hai…….

DHARAM TAKES NIV BUA WITH HIM

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