updated- My fan fiction!!! KISMAT KA KHEL(K3)!!! S

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let start off, hre it goes hpe u all lyk it!
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Characters Sketch
Aryanagar<1st largest, powerful kingdom>

Rajkumar Dharam:- rajkumar of Aryanagar, down to earth, loving, kind, responsible, shy, soft,poet believes in equality of people, 2b next king of Aryanagar

Rajkumar Veer:-
younger brother of dharam, loving, kind, equality of people, naughty, free bird, talkative, waiting 4his "SAPNO KI RAJKUMARI" but pretends as he doesnt believe in love,

rani ma Nivriti:- real mother of Veer (character same as serial)

maharaj Aryavardhan:- father of Dharam (same as serial)

Jayvardhan(same as serial)

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Kingdom of Sumaina <2nd largest, powerful kingdom>

Maharaj Gyan Pratab Singh:- very intelligent, soft at heart, needs rule in order, a gr8 warrior loves her eldest daughter the most.

Maharani Shikha:- step-mom of Krishna Ganga, bt loves her the most, b4 her real children

Rajkumari Krishna Ganga:-Eldest daughter of king, very beautiful(jo dekhe fida ho jaye)Kind, loving, soft, sober, simple, helps other whether elder or small, big or small in status, good dancer, knows little defence (sword fighting, horse riding, archery), agyakari daughter of king, loves her siblings, waiting for her Sapno ka rajkumar!.

Rajkumar Shiv:- proud of himself, next 2b king, good warrior, thinks himself gr8, treats people below him as useles. Dis s wat his father hates bout him

Rajkumari Kaveri:- beautiful, has alot of attitude and ego, proud of her beauty, thinks all people below her status are her servants.Edited by kiyudnive - 15 years ago

Ur fic looks interesting.Plz start it asap.

Kingdom of Awasi
awasi and Aryanagar are family friend

Maharaj Vansh Meet Chauhan:- can say a bit of Maharaj Aryavardhan

Rajkumari Gauri:- beautiful, kind, soft bt a little rude to down status. Loves her sis. Loves Dharam since childhood bt hasnt told yet.

Rajkumari Durga:-Quiet, beautiful, soft and kind at heart bt rude at face, whenever she tries to expres her gud feeling it cums out a little bit rude. Loves her sis and Veer.

---Extra character
Dharmi- a village girl, expert in defence, poor, doesnt smile (reasons wil be told later)

Rajkumar Vikraj of Surmagad who loves Rajkumari Gauri

Shera
Karan
a bunch of chota bhacha

In a village before sunrise in a hut

voice in dream: Ma, kyun aap itna pareshan ho hamari shaadi ke liye, hum khush hai aapki pasand se
2voice:mera beta kitna khushkismet hai jo tumse shaadi
3voice:aryanagar ke rajkumar
4voice:tumse kitni baar kaha mere saman ko haath na lagana
the girl in sleep:MA! Ma! Pitaji, sainik aa rahhe hai.
Voice:Aryanagar ke maharaj ka hukum.
Maharaj ki jai. Maharaj ki jai.
Other voice:bachao bachao ma, pitaji bachao, bachao, ma
The girl gets up and scream:MAAAAA!!!

The girl was sweating and panting and said in soft voice Ma, wid little tears.
MAN on other bed: DHARMI!? Wahi purana bura sapna dekha?
The man was middle aged bt right hand side paralysed and very ill.
DHARMI: baba! (goes to man, holds his hands and says) ha baba wahi purana sapna, wahi purana sapna jo kabi haqeeqat thi hamari har waqt dil mein..
A Knock at door.
DHARMI: shayad karan hoga main dekhti hoon.
She opens the door, a person wid mask say:jaldi karo der ho rahi hai!
Dharmi gets hold on her dagger and says:kaun ho tum?
Man:uff dharmi! Main karan!(removes mask) jaldi karo, jungle mein ja kar lakdiya katni hai, aur is baar sambhal kar, pichli baar sainik..
Dharmi:shhh! Baba ko nahi pata ki pichli baar kya hua,chup rahna, andar aao!
Karan enters and touches baba's feet.
Dharmi: main aaj jungle mein nahi aarahi, baba ki tabyat, kharab hai.
Karan:thik hai, me phir tumhare liye paise la donha din ke liye
baba:karan ruko, waha wo lathi othao aur dharmi ke haath par maro aur uske kaho, Kamchor!
Dharmi was shockd:kya magar kyun?
Karan:baba ka hukum sar ankkho par. Happily picks the stick.
He starts running behind her wid the lathi,chasing in the whole hut
dharmi:khabardaar jo maara tumne
at last gets her hold n hits her 4tym sayin Kamchor
dharmi in a very irritated way:baba ye kya tha!
Baba:insan ko apna kaam khud karna chahiye, jao tayyar ho. Meri fikar mat karo, me thik ho
Dharmi:ji baba!
She goes n dresses up, lyk a man so dat no one recognize her coz in dat village females r nt allowed to work lyk men

wow.. Udi.. u have started a fanfic😊

Lovely start,it's very interesting.
plz continue asap.

oh wow Yudi....u started...great!!

Part-2
dharmi&karan leave4d jungle
Dharmi:tumne mera haath ko bahut zur se maara, dekho nishan aagaya
Karan:kaun samajhdaar itna accha mauka gawayega tum jisi akdoo, gussail, batamiz, nakchadi, ghamandi ladki ko maar...
Dharmi:zaban par lagam do Karan!
Ka:galat kya kaha maine batao?arre ha tum toh kahi ki rajkumari ho...
Dhrmi shouts:karan! hum kahi ki bhi rajkumari nahi hai hum sirf apne baba ki beti hai!
ka:thik hai, me tume rajkumari nahi kahuga par apne wajud ko to mat mitao tum...
A girl screams DHARMIIII!! Dharmi, dharmi, tumhare baba. Dhrm:baba. The girl cums2her&says tumhare baba ki tabyat bigad gayi,bula rahe hai apko. Dhrmi runs so does karan. In hut dharmi goes screaming Babaaa,babaaa!
Dhrmi:baba kya hua? Vaidji baba thik hai na?
Baba:dharmi mera waqt aagaya hai, me jarahu, mera badla zarur pura karna
dhrmi:nahi baba aapko kuch nahi hoga, dhrmi apko kuch hone nahi dengi
baba:sach mat jhutlao, me ja rahahu, aryavrato ke vansh se apne parivar ka badla zarur lena, wada karo, karo wada mujhse
dharmi:baba me wada karti hu par unke vansh ka aanth aapka haato hi hoga.baba, baba
she realizes dat baba is no more, she say: aryanagar ke rajkumar ka anth tai hai, baba me apne parivar ka badla zarur longi, mera wada hai aapse

VERRRRRRRRRRRYYYY interesting.... plssssss continuee......

ur ff seems very iteresting😛....keep cotinue.............