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Posted: 17 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

very nice dear very good i hope u will cont soon i will be waiting


Hi Tanya..thank u so much dear..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
its awesome pls continue soon!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
hey rani just read this ff from the begining aand it is as everyone write really good.i love how you have alot of premeer interactions,hope monday ko bhi aisa kuch ho and the week is good.looking forward to the next update marica
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: fijiana

hey rani just read this ff from the begining aand it is as everyone write really good.i love how you have alot of premeer interactions,hope monday ko bhi aisa kuch ho and the week is good.looking forward to the next update marica

thank u dear for liking it..will try to put up soon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: blushpink13

its excellent..cont soon.

luv iqra


hey Iqra..thank u..will try to cont soon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
very nice update...plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37

I loved them as usual!

Can't wait till the next parts!

?xXx?
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
great scenes, thanks for including the ring, exactly what i had in mind.... the name is fatima, i'll look forward to reading more from u
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
hey rani ,again very well written yaar plz cont👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
Ok..here goes the next part..

Prem is still staring at Heer..who is now walking down the stairs..Gaya3 comes to Prem and puts her hand on his shoulders..and smiles..Prem smiles back to his mom..Heer comes to Lalit and Gaya3 and take their blessings..she knows Prem is looking at her still..but she couldn't see him because she was feeling too shy..

L:hmm..Gaya3 kitne sunder lag rahen hain dono..

Gaya3:haan haan..bahot..sagaai ke rasam shuru karen..yeh lo Prem Heer ko yeh ring pehnado..saying this she gives the ring to Prem..

P:ji..he takes the ring from his mom..and he looks at Heer..who has her head bowed down..

Pr:arre bhaabhi..apna chehra toh dikhaaiye..Prem bhaiyya intezaar kar rahen hain..

Heer slightly looks upto Prem who is still staring at her..and he takes her hand which is on her lap..and makes her wear the ring..on the other hand Meher gives the ring to Heer..and Heer takes Prem's hand and puts the ring on his finger..all clap..and all flashback of their first meeting..their first hug..and the conversation that they had earlier today..are all flashing before Prem and Heer.All congratulate them..and there is some music..and all start to dance..Preet starts dancing and he pulls everyone one by one to the dance floor..Prem and Heer are still sitting on the couch..sharing glances here and there..Preet comes to his bhaiyya and bhaabhi and pulls them to the dance floor with him..they r refusing but he doesn't budge..he pulls them anyway..and now Prem and Heer are left alone on the dance floor and a slow music is played..Tum se hi from jab we met..and Prem and Heer start swaying to the music..they r so engrossed in the music that they don't even realise they r being watched by the family..they continue to dance until the music stops..and then they realise they were dancing all this while until they heard the claps..

L:aaj mein bahut kush hun..aakhir kaar mere aur mere dost ki sapna poora ho gaya..aaj usse mein bahut miss kar rahan hoon..aur mein jaanta hu ki iss waqt woh inn dono bacho ko apna aashirwad de raha hai..he goes to Prem..Prem..aaj mein tumse ek waada aur maangta hoon..mein chaahta hoon ki tum Heer ko hamesha kush rakho..usse kisi bhi cheez ki koi kami nahi honi chaahiye..

P:mein waada karta hoon baoji..and he hugs his father..

L:ab chalo bhai sab enjoy karo party ko..

K:yeh lo Heer..apne haaton se Prem ko khilao..yehi sagaai ki rasam hai..kehte hain ki ek hi thaali se khaane se pyaar aur badta hai..saying this she places a plate full of food and sweets to Heer..

H:mein kaise..looking at Kulraj..
K:mein kaise se matlab kya hai..yeh lo aur khilao usse..

H:ji..she takes a peice of sweet and lifts her hand to feed Prem..who is smiling naughtily..she feeds him feeling all shy..

K:ab prem ki bhaari..lo Prem tum bhi khilao Heer ko..

P:ji di..saying this he too feeds Heer..they both go away to another couch to feed eachother..they sit there and are fully engrossed in each other..

Ash:Preet!Preet!

Pr:kya hai Ash?

Ash:tum bhi mujhe khilao na..

Pr:kya?

Ash:uff oo Preet..Khaana aur kya?

Pr:Kyun?tumhare haathon ko kya hua hai?

Ash:woh dekho..Prem kaise Heer ko khila raha hai..saying this she points out to Heer and Prem..who r forcing each other to eat..and laughing and smiling..dekha..kaise khila raha hai?

Pr:toh mein kya karun..unki sagaai hai..toh ek doosre ko khila rahen hain..
Ash:ek doosre ko khilane se pyaar badta hai..toh mujhe bhi khaana khilaona..

Pr:sorry..mujhe aur bhi important kaam hai..aur tum apna khaana..khud khaalena..

saying this he starts to walk away..Ash feels bad so she keeps the plate..there is a pat on her shoulder..she turns around to see who it is..to her surprise it's Preet..she opens her mouth to talk and he stuffs a laddoo in her mouth..she is not able to talk..and he walks off all smiling..she somehow gulps the whole laddoo and smiles to herself..
H:bas karo Prem..ab kitna khilaoge..Prem is just feeding her so much

P:hmm..yeh sab mujhe shaam ko pareshaan karne ke liye hai..lo khao..

H:acha..toh tum bhi lo..saying this she stuffs some more sweets..

P:hm mm..bos..bos karo..

K:yeh kya ho raha hai yahan..meine toh thaali bhar ke khana diya tha..aur yeh kya sab khaali kar diya?itne bhooke the?aur laaon?

Heer-Prem:NAHIN!!
K:kya hua?
H:bas di..aur nahi..bahut ho gaya..
K:acha teek hai..ab jao mehmaano se baat karlo..
P:thanks..smiles to her..

H:thanks?kisliye?

P:mujhe itne pyaar se khaana khilaane ke liye..

H:ab chalen..mehmaano se milne?

P:haan..ek minut..
He walks upto her very close..takes his hand towards her lips..

H:yeh kya kar rahe ho?

He says nothing but wipes of a little bit of sweet which was on her lips and gives her a naughty smile..she feels embaressed..and they both walk off to meet the guests..

ok..tell me how it was?will be waiting for good replies..

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