FF - Becoz I'm frustrated part 6 and end! - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful second part, Gisel. And with an element of suspense also.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hahahaha Gisel... Super ma!
Atleast nee yaavathu made Thulz to realize... lol... Hope it is just small fight to make TA understand😛.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Did T really leave 😲... Sooo saaad 😭... I hope she comes back... pooor TA🥺... but if only he had understood her pain...😕
Great continuation Gisel ... Keep going!!!!👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice continuation gisel...😉
thulasi panathu corectu than...tamil unnaku ithu theyva than...!!!

gisel ingayavathu tt irukangale😃...thanq

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woww lovely Gisel.. I'm really excited to read the next part..
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Aaww Gisel, feeling down lol. Nice parts, waiting to read the rest.
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Part3

He tried her phone.
Not reachable.
Where did she go?
College?
She had her semester holidays.
MM? Deepa? Was it possible? Where else?
He decided it was no point standing there thinking and got ready fast; grabbed his bike keys and came out of the room hurriedly and dashed into a fully dressed Thulasi, entering the house. Both of them looked at each-other, slowly rubbing their heads.
After a moment of the eyes trying to talk and failing to convey the much needed 'Sorry' and 'I love you';
Thulasi cleared her throat, "Uhm.."
He looked at her face. She seemed nervous and wasn't looking at his face.
Thulasi, "Naan.." There was a pause and she was strangling the tip of her shawl.
When he didn't utter anything; not even a, 'Where were you'; she inhaled deeply, gulped down her fear and turned to look at him, "Naan poren." Those two words hit as swords on his neck. Did she just say that or was he dreaming? To his horror, it wasn't his dream.
He just stared at her helplessly, blinking his eyes, trying to digest the thing she had just told him. Still, he didn't utter a word. He was speechless. She was leaving for real?! He pulled his shirt sleeve up and pinched himself and cried out in pain. He noticed. In other circumstances, Thulasi would have laughed at his little act. But now she was there standing looking away, lifeless. Why did she come back then? was the first question that came to his mind than pondering over the reason, which she had clearly explained yesterday to which he didn't even utter a word of comfort. There he was again not saying anything to her. He did a mind calculation as to what to do. Last time the xeroxed book had worked out. What now? Think something, Tamizh! Think before she leaves!
She took out a bundle from her handbag and handed it over to him, "Ithula 10 airum rupa iruku. Ithu veraikum neenga enaku selavu panatha naan epdiyavuthu masam masam kuduthiruren; with interest. Inthanga vechukonga."
Now; more than confused and sad, he was angry and frustrated at what she was doing.
Tamizh, "Enathu ithu? Kanaka neeya potutiya? Enga naan ithuveraikum unaku evalo selva panirukenu kanaku sollu."
She stood there silent , biting her teeth, controlling her anger. Just a word "kuttima" would have melted her; but here he was, as usual not comforting her when she need it the most.
He put the bundle on the table and turned to look at her, who was looking away. A naughty smile on his face.

(To be continued...)

Part 4 scroll down

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Edited by Gisel - 12 years ago
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Part4

He went near her. She closed her eyes wishing that he didn't do anything that would make her melt. But in her heart she knew she wanted to be with him, to hug him and cry out her heart to him; to find solace in his arms. But she hushed off those thoughts away when she remembered how he wanted her to be more bold and determined like Suchi. If that was what he wanted; she was going to show him how determined she can be. She opened her eyes, controlling her tears. She saw him lock the front door. He turned to find her staring at him and felt depressed at how immediately she turned away when he saw her. The smile back on his face, he walked towards her.
Thalaiva! Una nambi thaan try panuren. Work out airum la? He murmured a small prayer and cleared his throat, "Ena ma? Kanaka correct a vechurukiya? Eina nan correct a vechuruken." She turned to look at his playful self which angered her more or maybe deep inside this is what she liked about him. She didn't know. But she had decided to give the boldness that he had wanted.
Tamizh, "En ma? Bathilai kanam."
Thulasi, "Uhm? Hhm..Athaan kanaku correct a vechurukeyangala; neengalai sollunga. Evalo tharanum?"
Drawing some calculation on air, "Uhm..inga 4o..anga 70..2...2 ara varusham..um..motham 2497K..approm.."
Thulasi gasped, "25 latchama?" but then calming herself down, "Seri. Time kudunga. Thirupi thanthiren."
Tamizh, "Enaku time lan illa. Innaikai thirumbi venam. Ippovai. Kanakai solli mudikala...seri parava illa. Mothala itha thirupi kudu..mithiya vati oda pero vangikiren."
Thulasi, "Ippo vei venuma? Ivalo rupa ku naan enga poven?"
Tamizh, "Rupa va? Rupa lan illa. 2947 K..apdina.."
Thulasi, "2497 K la sonaiga. Athukula 500 K increase aiducha?"
Tamizh, ithula romba theliva iru, "seri ok..2497 k na 2497 kisses ma. Ithuveraikum naan unaku kuduthathu. Atha thirupi kudu. Approm nee polam."

(To be continued)

Part5 - scroll down

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Edited by Gisel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woweee!!!! Tamil at his naughty best!!!!😃😆😆 Now what will T do ... will she continue her bold act or melt down ...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tulasi is going to melt lol.

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