FF - Becoz I'm frustrated part 6 and end!

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Gisel

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I really didn't want to write for a while! But this serial is driving me mad! Aargh! So I'm venting off my frustrations...let's see if I'm going to bring TT together or seperate them😛!

Becoz I'm frustrated
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Part 1

Lavanya with her baby in hand, "Ivanga panura atuliyathuku amma thaan seri ana alu. Rendu perum vanthu nala sanda podatum."

Nitesh coming inside the room, "Juju! Ena panitu irukeinga? Appa kuda car la varengala?"

Lavanya, "Enaga. Amma va konjam nall, inga vanthu iruka sollalama? Thulasi annikum konjam relief a irukum. Ammavukum kolantha kuda konja nall irunthathu mathiri irukum."

Nitesh, "Athuku ena? Kutitu vanthuta pochu. Ippo vei poi kutitu varen." placing a quick kiss on his baby and wife.

Lavanya, "Thanks ga!"

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Tamizh, "Suchi a pathi marupadiyum pesathanu ethira thadava solliruken?"

Thulasi, "Life la vangira first veedu, first car...itha husband and wife seinthu decide pananumnu elarum aasa padurathu thena? Ana ungaluku Suchi pechu thaan veitha vaku. Charu prechana ippo thaan mudijithu. Athukula iva. Cha! Ena valuka ithu?" storming into their room.

Tamizh following her, "Ei!" holding her hand.

Thulasi, "Kaiya vidunga." releasing herself from the grip There was more firmness in the grip than love.

Tamizh, "Ena pesura nee? Life long Charu va vechu ena blackmail pana poriya?"

Thulasi turned to look at his angry eyes. Where did all the love go? Where did all the promises go? Why was he accussing her when he was at mistake?

Tamizh, "Thulasi?"

Thulasi, "Huh?" still not out of the shock. How could he think that she was emotionally blackmailing him?

She silently went and sat in the bed.

Tamizh, "Odana ala arambichiratha. Kaneer matum kutrala arivi mathiri kotumai. Suchi a pathirukiya? Evalo bold? Evalo determined?" Thulasi looked at him and saw how he smiled when he spoke of Suchi.

Thulasi sarcastically, "Oru vela nanum en purushana vitu pona bold airuven." lying down on the bed and switching off the night lights.

(To be continued...)

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Part 2 - Page 2

Edited by Gisel - 12 years ago

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suhasini

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Posted: 12 years ago

gisel...
same pinch me too the same feelingu...😉

1st part sammaiya irruku continue please...

Edited by Suha95 - 12 years ago

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Pearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice Gisel!

Loved the last line of Thulz giveback to TA sarcastically.

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verisimilitude

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Posted: 12 years ago

Gisel Nice one..

Venting out frustrations through this FF wont calm us🤔.. But the way u write always amaze me.. How thoughtful👍🏼 ! Wish all your FF scenes are incorporated in the serial. 😳

I would say a BANG ON! for the last line... 👏 But sigh... nadakura kariyama athu ?😵

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Mahadevan Venkitaraman

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice to read, Gisel. You have poured your heart and feelings which really makes the FF nice.

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Esther John

@thendralfan007

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Posted: 12 years ago

T speaking boldly for what is right ... great!!!! 👏 Way to go Gisel!!!!😊

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CandyCrushh

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Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

Superb Gisel 😊 love it 😊
Ending statement s the highlight 😉

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sss283

@sss283

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome gisel

glad your back

waiting for next part

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Gisel

@Gisel

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part2

Tamizh switched on the lights, "Ei! Ena nenachutu iruka un manasula? Romba overa pesura?"

Thulasi, "Einga? Naan sonnatha nenachu ein ivalo kavala padureinga? Varatheigaluku thaan arutham illaya."

Tamizh, "Ena olara?" sitting on the bed next to her.

Thulasi, "You have never meant the words you said. Enuma la irunthu naanum apdi thaan. Varuthaikum aruthathukum samanthemai irukathu."

Tamizh, "Puriyala?", still angry.

Thulasi, "Neenga enaku divorce kuduthutu approm illa nan anaikei antha paper a kelichu potutenu sonnengalai; atha innaikum nan namburen." ; pausing to look at him intensely showing all the pain in her eyes and when he didn't say anything she reached to shut the lights only to be stopped by him. His fingers light as feathers on her hands.

Tamizh, "Thulasi?"; his voice quivering.

Though she tried her best to control herself, a tear rolled down her cheek, "Nama kolantha. Namaloda motha kolantha. Athu alingathuku karanamanavala nalavanu sonna; avan nalavala irunthalum enaku ketavathan. Ethir kolantha namaku peranthalum motha kolantheiya bali kuduthathuka vethana enaikum thirathu. Pothumga, enala ithuka mela unga kuda sanda poda mudiyathu. Nan thoonganum." switching off the lights and settling to sleep.

The moon light fell on her face. Pain clearly written all over, as she controlled her tears. He looked at her, not sure how to react; he caressed off the tears from her cheek. She hushed off his hands and turned over putting the covers over her head. As the hour was late, he settled down to sleep, expecting the morning to be a dawn of a better life together.

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Early morning, Tamizh turned over in his sleep expecting to hug Thulasi; but woke up with a start to find emptiness.

Tamizh, "Ivalo kalaila enga poirupa?"

He looked at the clock. It was 10. "Aiyayoo. Bank kila innaiku 9 maniku meeting vera undai. Enga pona iva?"

"Thulasi? Thulasi?" coming out to the hall, "Amma? Cha! Avunga thaan neithu Lavanya veetuku poitangalai. Thulasi?!" He looked around everywhere and realized that she wasn't anywhere in the house. Where did she go? He casually went to the washroom to freshen up, where he realized that her toothbrush was also gone. Washing his face, he looked at the mirror in a shocking realization. Did she? Did she leave? Did she leave without a word?

(To be continued)

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Part 3 - Page 3

Edited by Gisel - 12 years ago