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Gisel

@Gisel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Deepa, his sister's friend. --> it means the person is thinking about Deepa...who is his sister's friend.

He wanted to call her his wife --> Someone who loved Deepa.

Where is my sister, Shruthi?

Shruthi and Deepa were supposed to meet him last night...there was someone who was at the subway waiting for them, remember?

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suhasini

@Suha95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

thanq gisel for clarifying my doubt..!!!😉
now continue the next part..!!

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Smiles-20

@Smiles-20

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Caught up with the last two parts and they were written really well Gisel, great job! There were so many little little moments with the detailing that was perfect.

Now I am waiting to read the rest.

Charu...hhhmmm...me still doubting about her...lol...

I'm a little confused reading the last part.

Deepa is Thulasi's sister? Who is Sruthi? So Deepa and Prabha are going to get married but they do not want to right?

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Gisel

@Gisel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Smiles-20
I'm a little confused reading the last part.

Deepa is Thulasi's sister? Who is Sruthi? So Deepa and Prabha are going to get married but they do not want to right?

Hm...the part is badly written, Gisel😡. Take a note!😛

Deepa is Thulasi's sister? NO..friend.

The man in the subway...his sister is Shruthi, who is Deepa's friend.

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JAYASHREE

@vjayam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

is the part 9 cmng now gisel?

if so then waiting for it!

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Gisel

@Gisel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Episode 9"What does that ring mean? Do you think she is my sister? Maybe that's why, you know..same ring..and..blah..blah..", she went on talking.Oh my God, How much she talks? The RTO guy had told him that the car was stolen. Did it mean that she might have stolen it? It didn't make sense. He had to call Anand. He went to the PCO box, put a coin in it and dialed in Anand's number, "Hello Anand!""Tamizh! Where are you? That car. Remember the one that was parked near your house? Your next assignment is to find out that car. That car was actually a stolen one and it's our bad luck because when we saw it, that time it had to be with the thief. There is a state wide search for that car and the thief.""But why? Why is it such a big issue?""That's the home minister's car. Obviously there will be a hype.""Home minister?", trying to figure out what was happening. The RTO had told something else. Police reporting was something else. Maybe he will find some answers if he goes to the wedding. But should he go with the girl?"Where are you now? Buy a mobile soon.""Ya. I will. Let's meet at our tree-house.""Tree-house? Why tree-house? It's been ages since we went there.""Come there. I'll meet you there in half an hour.""Wait. I can't come. I'm in-charge of security for the minister's son's marriage tomorrow. I have to be there. Why don't you also come here?""I don't think, I can come right away but sure, I'll come in a while.""It looks like you are still in mood out. Has it something to do with Charu?""What? No", for the first time in 12 hours thinking about her and realizing he hadn't missed her."I'll call you soon. Bye."Tamizh cut the call and turned to look for Thulasi. To his shock, she wasn't there. Panic struck him, "Thulasi!"He turned to the shopkeeper, "Did you see the girl here? Where did she go?""That side", pointing ahead.He mumbled a thanks and ran towards that side. He looked around everywhere calling out, "Thulasi!"He came to a complete halt. With astonishment, he saw Thulasi holding a 5 year old kid in her hands. The kid was semi clothed with messy hair and dirt all over. She was feeding the kid making the kid laugh and tickling, "Don't beg. Study. Study well. It is this country's law that every child should get free education till 12th standard. Do you understand? Your house is there only, right? I'll come again to visit you. You should fight for your life. Fight with your parents and attend school. Only you can do it." She continued feeding the kid.Tamizh went back in time remembering Charu's attitude, "See Tamizh. This is why I want to leave this country. You turn anywhere. Beggars. Crooked roads. Mosquitoes...hm..if only my visa gets cleared". He slowly went near Thulasi admiring her. Thulasi turned to look at him, "Hi. Phone call done? What's the plan next?" She finished feeding the kid and put her on the ground and turned to take a water bottle and washed her hand and the kid's face and gave the bottle to the kid to drink. The kid took it and ran away."Tell me. What's the plan next?", she insisted again."First you tell me. Where did you get money to buy food and water?""Your purse!" and she stylishly took it and handed over his purse to him."Hey! When did you take it?"She just laughed and made way to the car."Wait", remembering the stolen car story. He held her hand. She stopped. She slowly turned to look at him. He looked into her eyes and said, "Never leave me. Do you understand?" She blinked her eyes at his authoritativeness. She liked it. For half a second, he was lost in her eyes. Then, "There is more danger than you think. Be careful and never leave me until the problem is over." and then he made way to the car. "Never leave me until the problem is over.", she imitated him after he left, "Can't he say, 'never leave me at all in this life'?", being cutely annoyed.

They stopped at a cell phone shop and Tamizh bought a smartphone and put in his sim; that Anand had given him the night of the accident. As they walked out of the shop, he saw a man looking keenly at the car. He sensed it wasn't safe to be in this car any more and to wander in the city and most important; with the girl. He got into the car and they drove off; but not before the man took a picture of both of them and sent a MMS to someone.

"Wow! What place is this?""This is our play slash fun slash tree house. We used to come here when we were young. We built this.""This place is so beautiful", looking around in awe and following him up the stairs to the tree-house, "This place is so huge. This place is so nice. This place is right in the middle of the woods. So mysterious. So adventurous. I love it." He smiled. She looked at him, "Hey! This place is dusty too.""Ya. It's been ages since we came here.""We?""Ya. Me and my friends. Every weekend we used to come here and play and enjoy. But now we are grown up. Work. Tensions. and the concept of chilling out has changed. Now every Saturday we go to bars and stuff.""Bar?", she exclaimed.He stopped dusting of the cushion and realized maybe he shouldn't have told it, "Well..not all Saturdays..whenever we feel like.""So, you drink?", looking out of one window to see the greenery and a waterfall flowing in a distance.He cleared his throat, "..hm..yes..I do, occasionally.""hm..so what's for lunch?""Lunch...hm...I guess I should go buy something.""No, wait", as she took two large fishing rods from behind a cupboard full of books, "Will you teach me how to fish?""Sure", and they chatted, smiling, laughing, spending some good time together, gradually growing with friendship; fishing the noon away.

"It's been one hour and we haven't caught even one fish", Thulasi exclaimed, disappointed."I told you. You don't get fishes in monsoons.""It's getting more cloudy and colder. Let's go in."Tamizh got up with a 'I told you so' expression. The wind was blowing hard on them as they carried the fishing stuff back."What are we going to eat?", Thulasi asked."I could have gone and bought food and we would have eaten by now and we could have had our afternoon nap.", Tamizh replied irritablyThulasi sulked, "Fine. Go now."The sky became darker, though it was just 2. It steadily built up to a thunderous growling. The storm broke. The rain fell like an ocean thrown from the sky. It was sudden.Both of them hurried towards the tree-house and got in, but they were wet from head to toe. Tamizh turned to her, "Stay hungry. I'm so not going in this storm to buy food and that too with everyone searching for you and your stolen car."Thulasi retorted back,"I told you not to keep repeating 'stolen'."(To be continued...)

Edited by Gisel - 12 years ago

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JAYASHREE

@vjayam

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

i m lost for adjectives now...

so i'll say...its too too good! the way u r building up the suspense and the gradual developing of the relationship--lovely...can just go on and on reading it!

waiting for the next now...(cant come soon enough!)