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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
loved the way T decides to wait and the way TA dashes back to her...but sure missed their convo after...oh so , anand knows the identity...american citizen? wow...so how come deepa? case getting more interesting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gets to be more and more mind-blowing suspense with all the subplots and mainplots ... wow wow wow!!!!...👏👏👏 but T/T episodes are so much more interesting ... 😳 So T is an American citizen ... and no pavam cry baby girl ... from Anand's reaction to her ... mmm... ⭐️

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wondering why so many empty lines above... onnum illa Gisel, peche varala... Got to read 8, 9 10 and 11 all together. WOW... Way to go girl you are a master story teller.

I really loved the way you built TA's attraction toward T.

1. TA being amusingly annoyed at her in the RTO office while she was showing her puppy face (Her innocence)

2. TA admiring her helping the little kid (Her good nature)

3. TA dumb stuck at her looks (Last but not the least her beauty).

Aren't these the 3 main things a man wants in a girl. Nicely put and totally justifies TA falling for T so quickly.

T was rather quick to fall for him. But considering the situation she is in with him being her only knight with shining armor that is so natural. After all a girl always wants a man who protects her and stands beside her in everything.

Loved episode 10 especially 😉.

And about the suspense plot that is blended with the story is at its best. Every episode goes with little romance and a plot. The way you finish the episode make us to eagerly wait for the next one... I really see a seasoned writer in you.

Edited by viswai123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Omggg what can i tell?? 😲 Im soo shockeddd...
WOW Gisel, I just read 10 and 11.. Esp 10 hahhaa beautiful, they way u described the things really superb 😃 The story is getting more thrilling, cant wait...
Anand knows her va? Cool, hope Charu wont come inbetween 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Wow gisel amazing job girl...!!!

U r the best at the description...
Way to go...!!!!
All the best...!!!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86


Episode 12

Tamizh, "So Anand...explain all you know", as he drew the curtains. Thulasi fearful at the stranger who claimed to know her, stood next to Tamizh, while Anand sat comfortably on the chair.
Anand, "Tamizh! Why didn't you tell this earlier? I think we are in a big problem right now."
Thulasi held on to Tamizh's hands, which Anand couldn't help noticing.
Tamizh, "I don't understand...explain."
Just then Anand's phone rang, "Just a minute." and he got up and went out of the tree house to attend the call.
Thulasi, "Tamizh, don't leave me alone. I'm scared."
Tamizh turned to look at her scared face, "Sorry, Thulasi. I never meant to leave you. He came searching for me after he received a MMS of me with your car and he thought I stole it. I had to tell him that the thief ran away and I had to bring it to the tree-house because of the rain. He half believed the story and made the constable to take the car away and told me to accompany him as it didn't make sense for me to stay here alone. I didn't want to tell him about you. But I couldn't stay away for more than 10 minutes and I told him everything and we came back and..."
Thulasi held his collar and brought her lips to his for a quick kiss, surprising an anguished Tamizh, "Thulasi?"
She smiled, "I didn't know you can talk so much."
She rested her head on his shoulders, "I don't want your explanation. I knew you would come back. But now I'm scared. This man...will he separate us?"
Tamizh smiled as he made her look at him, "No one is going to separate us. No one. We are going to live a long, happy life." She started fiddling with his shirt's collar button as he brought her closer to him. She kiddishly asked, "Really?"
Tamizh, "Let me think. American citizen. Green cardholder. But did you know that once you marry a Indian you become a Indian citizen?"
Thulasi smiled, "Really?"
Tamizh, "Yes. So all we need to do is find a handsome, smart Indian groom."
Thulasi blushed more as she looked up to him, "Really?"
Tamizh, "Ya. Tomorrow I'll upload your details on the matrimonial sites.", teasingly.
She mocked anger, "Really?"
Tamizh laughed, "Really!", as he kissed her forehead, "I love you. Will you marry me?", looking into her eyes. A tear escaped her eyes as she nodded, "Yes. I will." and they hugged each-other when Anand came in surprised to see them in an embrace.
He cleared his throat and they let go and they stood embarassed.
Anand, "Tamizh. I want you to see this." and he held out his phone.


Dated : One month back - Archive e-paper!
*Pic of three girls in formal suits showing off their rings. Ruby. Sapphire. Emerald.*
Trio Co. co-founders Shruthi, Deepa and Kalyani, the dynamic successful entrepreneurs in the US have decided to flow in the NRI money into infrastructural development in their home country. Ms. Kalyani, being an American citizen, will take care of the business in the US, while Ms. Deepa in the sub continent of India. Miss Shruthi, the creative head behind the company, will be assisting her friends in both of the countries. After the numerous scams by politicians that are being brought to light, private sector involvement in direct investment and operational control for the development of the state is being encouraged. The company plans to tie up with the famous IF group of companies of the state. The bid on the 2000-crore metro project is going to be a tough one. The very important project of the year; we have to wait and see who gets it.


Tamizh and Thulasi finished reading it and looked up at Anand, who started giving more information, "Ms. Shruthi. She arrived to India one month back on a month's visa. She started visiting sites and gathering labour force. She was a very bold person who tackled all problems. The minister didn't like it, because this is a project to mint money. There was a situation where she slapped me even after she knew that I was a police officer."
Thulasi jerked when she heard it and couldn't believe it was her.
Anand continued, "It was my mistake. And when the visa expiry date was nearing, she had tickets ready for her departure, when her passport was stolen. She reported it to the police but the minister filed a petition saying that she was faking it to be back in India. There was a lot of tension. More than a police man, as a normal person it was evident that her life was in danger. But it was at a higher level. I was just silent witnessing the whole thing. What can a Inspector do when the DSP and politicians are involved. I remember all this, only because of the slap. I know only till the passport was stolen, because it was reported to me but after that what happened, I have no clue."
Tamizh, "Ok. What's her address? Her parents? Where did she stay?"
Anand, "She is an orphan.", it landed like a nail on Thulasi's head when Tamizh patted her hand in comfort, "She was staying with her friend, Deepa. The one who is going to get married tomorrow."
Tamizh, "She is marrying the minister's son. They are rivals fighting for the same bid. That doesn't make sense. There must be something big happening. Some real problem. So what do we do now? Go to the marriage house?"
Anand, "I don't know. You told me that she told you not to go to the police. But I'm sure she didn't have any major problem with the police at the time you were mentioning. So I think it is better if we know what really happened because, in personal experience I'm telling you; that Velayutham has a police record which you don't want to know about."
Thulasi was getting more and more scared. She held on to Tamizh's hands, who was looking equally anxious. He patted her hands and looked out of the window to see the moon rising and the stars shining.


Deepa was getting ready to sleep when Praba entered Deepa's room looking pale, "Deepa! You should go! You will not be safe here."
She had never seen him this impatient, "What are you saying? Tomorrow is our marriage. And?"
He went to the balcony and looked out of it to see guards every where. Frustrated he turned to look at her, "Deepa! Listen! If this marriage happens, your husband gets authority over the company and properties. When you die, it goes to your husband totally and my parents...my parents are...you know what I'm saying...I overhead them."
Both of them held their breath when Deepa realized the implication.

(To be continued...)

Edited by Gisel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
too good gisel...
trio tying with IF group of companies...rofl...still laughing over it! the mod-age trio! but with some basics still intact! anand to get the slap this time! anand's role still remains...of the anchor!
another twist...prabha turning over! waiting for the cops to solve!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Is there any precap gisel...😛
I wonder what will happen when thulasi remembers her past...will she accept Tamil...!!😕
Lol this ff is thrilling and filled with suspense ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yaaayyy Gisel ... the friendly trio ... a trio of successful entrepreneurs... wow ... wow... wow!!!!👏👏👏
Really loved the teasing and konjufying of both T/T ... siiiggghhh ... so romantic!!!😳 ... Anand the gooseberry ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: thendralfan007

Anand the gooseberry ...


Puriyala?!

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