RaHi SS: When Love Takes Over..Part 2/Page 9 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Prince6495

Loved the first part ..

Buddies masti at beach awsome ..

Rahi's cuteness .. Nonu so caring for his moti ..

Kisha beach scene yaad agaya .. Stoneface can never say no to his chicklet ..

Thanks a lot for this part ..

It's amazing ..

Plz update soon ..😊

Originally posted by: priya1101

Hey sweets.🤗
Ur writing style is always wonderful sweet-heart.
Wowww...kya wonderful part likha hain yaar tumne,it's superb.I loved it to the core dearie.😃
Right from that Cafe convo to the last part,everything is beautifully written.👏
RaHi and KisHa parts are always a treat to read.
Awwieee...hamara Nonu is so caring for his Moti,he is afraid that she might catch cold.Our Prince charming.😳
Beach part is awesome,Girls enjoying in water,boys sitting and seeing them,then the boys talk interrupted by Panchi's laugh and her song.(Nice song selection)Then the boys joining the girls,their group hug,their masti,everything was perfect.
OMG...Panchi forgot her phone in RV's car and Kiya's phone battery dead and upar se car breaks down and few goonda type boys,teasing them.I want to know who is that boy who stopped the fellow who held Panchi's hand,I am guessing it might be Samar or Piddi.
All in all a perfect part and Great start dear.
Continue soon.

Lots of love.
Priya.

Originally posted by: sneha02

Geet... a rocking start... that was pure fun... 😃
A balanced start truly with equal attention to everyone n loved the way you have held the nerves of all the buddies...they are so much in character... good job.
Panchi in the mood for fun... me loves my fun loving angel n rv is such a sweetheart.. moti ne kaha tob karna hi hai... how cute... out of the world friends.. adorable... kd is soo cool..loved him too... n that little kisha romance was a nice add on... n then the way nonu cares for panchi...omg... miss my perfect two... giving instructions n stuff... aweee... loved girl bonding n the way they have fun with water n then finally boys too getting into the act was osm...
Yea your style is relaxed n more in tune with the way we talk n it suits this piece...making it a fun read...
So yea...its fun relaxed happy n at this point blissful...away from all problems... i love this world...
But then the girls get into trouble at the end... koi nahi the guys are gonna come to the rescue m sure... me waiting... the.knights are gonna save the day... 😃 ...on second thoughts how come the girls are shocked...who is there really😲... wow this is interesting...
N yea waiting for cupid to strike...its such a treat to watch my fave two fall in love all over again.

Thanks a ton for this bestie... me knows the efforts that you are taking n it seriously means a lot...n this is quite a good read...so calm your frayed nerves down cause you've done well...😃... baat toh aise kar rahi hun jaise koi authority hun😆... but sach I enjoyed reading it... ao bataya...
Lots of love for this...muahhh

Originally posted by: Madhuras_Rule

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Love you Geet for giving such a fun at this point (I miss tbp) this was so relaxing to read this piece .I was sure something from you is going to be pleasure to read and see this you did it...It was so good to read something like this it reminded me of good old days of tbp especially the beach scene , I think that both RaHi and KiSha are having many precious memories on beach which will ne cherished for ever ,and you did it.

Buddies convo was soo buddy kind , I mean boys refusing and then finally agreeing when their girls encouraged them . RaHi , yes I will talk about them more because I love them more .I don't need to say that they were cute ( because, c'mon it is universally declared now ) I miss them so much our cute RaHi moments thanks for bringing the RaHi magic back and don't stop this keep writing , because now you have given us the taste of delicious dish now its your duty to serve it daily or we will go wild .

Lots and lots of love
Madhura

Originally posted by: aishu3003

wowwwzzz d 1st part was awesomeee👏

d buddies enjoyingg n d beach

d small part of kisha was cuteee😳😳😳

awww RV worried for panchi that shel catch cold😳

d song part was niceee😊

and d endinggg yusss nonu came to save his moti

beautifully written⭐️⭐️

continue soonish😊

Originally posted by: luv_u_Bharti

Awesm Update Geet 🤗

Soo loved it...

Beach ki masti... I wish I cld go to a beach smtime in my life...

Really mazza aa gaya...

Update Soon 😊

Originally posted by: viagomes

GEET AMAZING UPDATE DEAR🤗

BEECH SCENE WAS JUST LOVELY I ALWAYS WANTED A CUTE BEECH SCENE FOR RAHI AS THEY GAVE FOR KISHA BUT THAT RAHI DATE WAS ARUBT BUT U FINNALY FULFILLED MY WISH I M SO HAPPY ☺️

& OFFCOURSE LOVED CARING NONU YAAR HE WAS SO ADORABLE GIVING INSTRUCTION TO KIYA HOW TO TAKE CARE OF MOTI

& KISHA MOMENTS WERE MAGICAL, KISHA KE BEECH SCENE YAAD AGAYE

NEXT UPDATE RV GONNA SAVE HIS MOTI ⭐️

UPDTE SOON CAN'T WAIT😃

Originally posted by: hangok

oww what a start it was great...
ahhh i cnat understand hindi😔

ufff this hero can be ranveer😳

waiting to read more

great work and thanks for pm

Originally posted by: ..WitchGrave..

Wow I loved the way you are writing BUDDIES <3
Carry on loving it
Sorry for late commenting

Originally posted by: SweetAndSpice

Your late lateef is not very late..I guess😆

Hilaaa😲😲 unexpected

Ok this is my pov 😆:

You included alot of Kiya ⭐️⭐️⭐️

You included Yara

You included Kisha🥳

And KiAn 😳

Ohhhwieee!!!🤗

And Rahi were cute as usual😃😉

The Yara part at the start⭐️ Kiya Mrs. Late (Lateef😆😆😆)

Kisha beach scene soo adorable!

The KiAn scene 😉😉 <3

I loved it a looottt! 😳 Sachi 😉

Update soon😳