RaHi SS: When Love Takes Over..Part 2/Page 9

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viagomes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

GEET AMAZING UPDATE DEAR🤗

BEECH SCENE WAS JUST LOVELY I ALWAYS WANTED A CUTE BEECH SCENE FOR RAHI AS THEY GAVE FOR KISHA BUT THAT RAHI DATE WAS ARUBT BUT U FINNALY FULFILLED MY WISH I M SO HAPPY ☺️

& OFFCOURSE LOVED CARING NONU YAAR HE WAS SO ADORABLE GIVING INSTRUCTION TO KIYA HOW TO TAKE CARE OF MOTI

& KISHA MOMENTS WERE MAGICAL, KISHA KE BEECH SCENE YAAD AGAYE

NEXT UPDATE RV GONNA SAVE HIS MOTI ⭐️

UPDTE SOON CAN'T WAIT😃

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hangok

@hangok

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

oww what a start it was great...
ahhh i cnat understand hindi😔

ufff this hero can be ranveer😳

waiting to read more

great work and thanks for pm

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WitchGrave

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Wow I loved the way you are writing BUDDIES <3
Carry on loving it
Sorry for late commenting

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SweetAndSpice

@SweetAndSpice

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Your late lateef is not very late..I guess😆

Hilaaa😲😲 unexpected

Ok this is my pov 😆:

You included alot of Kiya ⭐️⭐️⭐️

You included Yara

You included Kisha🥳

And KiAn 😳

Ohhhwieee!!!🤗

And Rahi were cute as usual😃😉

The Yara part at the start⭐️ Kiya Mrs. Late (Lateef😆😆😆)

Kisha beach scene soo adorable!

The KiAn scene 😉😉 <3

I loved it a looottt! 😳 Sachi 😉

Update soon😳

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akshara

@--Akshu--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Loved it
The bond of everyone was so amazing
Nonu-Moti concern
Kiya getting late they all playing in the pool
It was a fun part
The last part let's see who this "he" is

Cont soon :*

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wanderingsoul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

hayee i loved this part the most :::

Panchi excitedly hug him..: you are the best Nonu"...He hugged her back.."Anything for u moti"

good fun with suspense at the end.

how i am missing TBP :(

plz do continue asap.

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kriti094

@kriti094

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Firstly sry for being sooo late
i was super busy with exams
but now i m finally free n i m so glad u r writing an ss on rahi
Just read d intro n first ch
loved d buddies beach masti
i like d way nonu cares for his moti
n yipeee i guess rv aa gaya apni moti ko bachane
plz updt soon

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snowflake..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

hi geet

amazing start

beach toh meri bhi fav hai

kisha were so fun

rahi toh so cute esp rv

pure tym i was smiling

n those guys in the car

par ab no tension 4 kian unka heros jo aaya hai😉

update soon

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Rahi1818

@Rahi1818

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Geeet...i m finally here...bhagwan ka bhala jo yaha ka net chal pada..yippie...
so comin to the update...
it was freakin awesome...sachchi mein amazing...
nonu was cho chweet here...so caring and me totally loved it...
and our angel...as usual amazing...and these to together obviously make the most beautiful pair on earth...
starting from the start till the beach part was so much fun...
yippie all the buddies the beach fun and the perfect song was in total all perfect...
me loved the way u depicted our caring nonu...
hayye yeh ladka jaan le lega meri...sachchi...meri death iske hatho hi honi hai...
and the last part...honesy it was my secret wish ki panchi ko gunde tang kare n rv bachane aye with all dishum dishum n he super tensed...
so thank u for giving us that...
me super duper eager to read the nxt part...
and love u for this amazing part...
muahhh( how i missed this)

P.S. I am very very sorry for being late...kaan pakadti hun..sorry..
pls continue soon..