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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: tinaswea

I am first one to comment!

Omg! 😊
Uh have written it so beautifully! It was amazing! Panchi ka bday! Aur sbh subh mom ka lecture😛
I loved the proposal!

Your Name is the word I want to say.

Your Image is the view I want to see.

Your voice is the sound I want to hear.

Your heart is the one I want to replace with mine.

I LOVE YOU MOTI...WILL YOU BE MINE?...I REALLY LOVE YOU.




These lines were so beautiful!




You are an amazing writer!

Loved it

Keep writing

Love ew

Tina 😊



P.S. I need to learn a lot from ew!

I loved it from the core of my heart!

You have an amazing sense of humour!

Keep writing and entertaining us!😛


Tina babes🤗
Thanks a lot sweets for ur such a sweet comment😳
Means a lot
I am glad u liked it so
yup me too like those lines😳
after all humara Nonu hai hi itna romantic

will surely write more
Thanks once again
Muahhh

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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: anjali1805


GEET EVEN MY HEART IS DOING SOMERSALTS. THIS WAS SO AMAZING. LOVED EACH AND EVERY PART STARTING FROM THE DIARY TO THE MOM DAUGHTER CONVO INCLUDING LAGTA HAI DONO SATH MEIN BHAAG GAYE. THE PRANK WA SO COOL. AND FINALLY THE PROPOSAL.. HAYYE YEH LADKA TOH MERI JAAN LE LEGA. THIS WAS SO ROMANTIC. THE VENUE THE DECORATION AND THE CAKE WAS JUST PERFECT BUT THE BEST PART WAS...

Your Name is the word I want to say.

Your Image is the view I want to see.

Your voice is the sound I want to hear.

Your heart is the one I want to replace with mine.

I LOVE YOU MOTI...WILL YOU BE MINE?...I REALLY LOVE YOU.

I ALSO LOVED THE LINE.. I can't promise I'll never let tears come in your eyes, But I promise to be there to wipe them off...I can't promise I'll never hurt you, But I promise to make it up to you every time...

AWWW THIS WAS SO PURE AND HEARTFELT...

YAAR YOU ARE SUCH A GR8 WRITER... LOVED THIS OS A LOT AND THANX FOR WRITING..



Anjali My sweetheart🤗
Thanks a lot babes
I am glad u liked it
ur comment makes me smile so wide
Love u so much

I too love theses lines
Nonu par kitna suit karti hai na😛

ye banda sach mein humari jaan lekar rahega

Love u
Mauhhh

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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: diyataarey

Res.. I have to go right now 😔
Will unres before the day ends for sure 😃



Awwiiee Its ok dear
take ur time
will be waiting for ur reviews
muahhh
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Prince6495

⭐️ wow amazing os

Panchi loving Rv and only kiya knows it😳
Rv planning special surprise for panchi
and than proposal was just mind blowing
just loved it👏
plzz do write more
Stavan


Thanks stavan dear
I am glad u liked it
Means a lot
Will surely write more
Muahhh
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: kriti094

Amazing os as always
i loved kiya n panchi bonding
n d whole shaadi drama was nyc
n ranveer is way too romantic
it was indeed a perfect proposal on a perfect day
i m more in love wid rahi now


Thanks Kirti dear
I am glad u liked it sweets
Ranveer toh jaan hai humari
I am glad I make u fall in love with RaHi more
Means a lot
Muahhh
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Finally an OS from Geet:) was eagerly waiting 4 dis. And i LOVED it! The proposing part hayee it was Soo good!<3 write more dear, Thanks 4 the PM:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
wow geet as usually the story was extraordinary ur just a fantastic writer
really I don't now how to appreciate ur work its simply awesome dear 😊 😊 😊
(really I am lose of words reading ur story 😃 )
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Geet...partner...🤗... that was such a perfect os...dil happy ho gaya...
Me was waiting for the Nonu surprise to unfold cause me knew Nonu moti ka birthday bhool jaye is soo not possible and u did not disappoint...
Really found the build up for that moment special..That wedding angle was nice n fun
Panchi Kiya bond was sooo strong...loved it too...
N the best part of course was Nonu proposing to the love of his life...
Perfect dreamlike n eternal...I know that I use these words very often but that's what Rahi is...n that's what your os is too..
Nonu yaar is made of dreams... he is a smasher... n panchi is panchi...so in love yet so clueless...thank god nonu is smarter...
Geet...mast os tha in short babe..
Loved it...
Muahhh
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: priya1101

Hey Geet.
Hats off to u dear,for writing such a beautiful os.
I loved it to the core sweetie.
I loved each and everything about it.
I loved it when Panchi said" hey krishna kahin dono ek saath bhaag toh nahi gaye." 😆
The idea of Ranveer Proposing Panchi in BB court was extraordinary.
Ranveer's proposal to Panchi is awesome and one of the best confessions i have heard till date.
U r awesome sweetheart.
U portrayed it beautifully.
Thankyou for writing such beautiful story.
A tight hug to u dear.


Hey Priya dear
Thanks a lot for ur comment
I am glad u liked it

he he he
yaah,that was indeed funny

Ranveer toh nonu hai hi
Muhaaa
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: s2singh

Balle Balle Te Shava Shava, Geetu i am dancing kya OS hai yaar, Perfect for our Panchi,

I wish Real main bhi Pal ke sath kuch aisa hi ho...

U have shown kiyan bond so perfectly yaar,😳

Aur End main nonu ka proposal hyaeee i am dead, i loved it geetu sachi dil se 😳


Awwiiee Smriti dear
that is so sweet of you
I am glad u liked it

Me too Like KiyAn bond

Ab Nonu toh hai hi My baby
Mauhhh


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