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MY PERFECT BIRTHDAY

Dear Diary,

How r u?...Must be angry...right?...aur hona bhi chahiye...Is this the way?...huun...tumhe toh mein bilkul bhi time nahi de pati...but what to do yaar?you know na collage and My work load...I really didn't get tym ...But Hey...Aaj toh aana hi tha...after all its my birthday yaar...and is this possible ki aaj ke din mein tumhe yaad na karun...nahhh...So Here I am to share My birthday with My Most Precious Possession...My Diary... Like every year Kiya Wished Me first...She is such a sweetheart...aur ho bhi kyun na After all she is MY best friend yaar...I am so excited but u know what..Sabne wish kar diya Except HIM...Kahin wo bhul toh anhi gaya hoga...Nahi nahi...must be busy with something...yaah..aa jayega call...

"Panchi, Come and have ur breakfast ''

"Ooppsss Gotta go dear...Mom Calling...you take care ok...I will meet you at night...Pakka.."

Byeee

Panchi

Nonu's Moti

Yess I am Panchi Rasotgi and today is My Birthday...Everyone wished me except HIM...My Childhood best friend whom I am Madly in love with...The Ranveer jerk Shergill...Stupid, idiot, jerk...But still I Love him...

"Panchi...come fast..Otherwise u will get late to collage...Phir mujhe blame mat karna..."

And here Come My Morning Lecture...Oh God My mom Na...Typical Mother...extra caring, protective but world's best Mom...

"Chill Mom...aaj JJ sir ne kaha hai ki I can reach collage little late..Birthday Advantage u know"...I said happily and wink at her.

"Ohhkk Panchi toh aaram se baith kar breakfast kro beta...roz toh jaldi jaldi mein kuch kha hi nahi pati meri bacchi"...Mom said to me while caressing my hair loving.

"Awww Mom, u know u r the world's best Mom"..I said hugging her very tightly... "And u r world's best daughter...So ajj ke kya plans hai?...She asked me happily.

"Don't know mom" I said while munching on my toast.."Abhi Kiya se baat nahi hui hai"

"What????...usne tumhe abhi tak Wish nahi kiya? She asked me with shock expressions..I laughed Seeing My Mom's face and said ..."chill Mom..like every year she is the one who wished me first...par subah se uska phone switched off hai...May be busy ho"...I said matter of factly.

"What about your Nonu.". Mom asked me casually.

After listening his name My smile converted into a frown and I said irritably..."uska toh naam bhi mat lena..Ek toh abhi tak wish nahi kiya upar se phone bhi switch off hai...Arrgghhh my Both best frnds gone mad...hey Krishna kahin dono ek saath bhaag toh nahi gaye"..I said dramatically.

"chup kar badmash,kuch bhi kehti rehti hai"..My mom said while giving me a light smack on my shoulder "Buzy hoga...Kar dega wish"

"Yaah yaah...ok Mom...Gotta go...you take care ok."

"Ok baccha...HAPPY BIRTHDAY Once again...And May u have the best day of ur life today'."

"Awww Love u mom"..I said while hugging her tight and after giving her a peck on her check I ran outside..

As I was about to take a cab, suddenly My Phone rang and I got a call from the Most important person in my life...No No its not Nonu..I so wish that it was him...SIGH...anyway so It was from My another bestest friend Kiya who is with me in every situation of my life...she Is the only one who knew how much I love Ranveer...and only god knows how difficult its for me to convinced her to not to tell this secret of mine to him...I excitedly picked up the call...but before I can say a hello...she started off...as always..

Kiya: "Hey Birthday girl, where are u yaar..I was trying ur number from past 30 min,why are u not picking up ur Daam phone"...Frustration clearly shown in her voice, Then I realize that I put my phone on silent mode...I bite my lips and tried my best to calm my Kiya who are all ready to eat me alive.

Panchi: "Actually Kiya wo hua ...

But before I can give her any of my lame excuse she cut me in between and said

"Panchi can u plzz meet me at coffee cafe day ar 3pm..I want to tell you something very important"..I can sense the urgency in her voice...I immediately got alarmed and asked her very calmly.

Panchi: "everything is fine na Kiya?

Kiya: "Yes and no"'...She said absentmindedly..

Panchi: Hun????...Care to Explain??

She left out a Sigh and said : "tum mujhe 3 pm milo to I will tell you everything'"..I know ki agar Kiya ne decide kar liya hai ki wo mujhe phone par kuch nahi batayegi toh no one in the world can do anything...so I agreed to her and said:

"OK Kiya...I will be there ar 3PM...you take care of urself ok"

Kiya: "thanks yaar Panchi and Happy Birthday once again...Love you.

R: Love u to my Kiya...Byeee

"God Please sab kuch thik ho"...I pray to god for Kiya's well being and left for My office.

I reached Coffee cafe day exactly at 3 PM'...Aur mujhe Kiya ko locate karne mein jayada pareshani nahi hui...because she is already there at our daily meeting point,,Our Corner wala table...and by just one look I can bet that She is tensed...Very Tensed.

"Hey Kiya"...

I called her and wave at her direction from the entrance only..She waved me back and forced a week smile.She got up and give me tight hug,as if try to find some peace in my embrace..I reciprocate the hug and Asked.."What happened Kiya?..She broke the hug and said very hesitantly "actually I feel so wired yaar',aaj tumhara Birthday hai aur meri wajah se tumhe aaj ke din...

I cut her crap in between and said

"Kiya what are u talking yaar...you are My best friend'...aur Agar meri best friend kisi pareshani mein hai toh wo mujhe nahi batagi toh kise batyegi?... haan..So what agar aaj mera birthday hai?...For me you always come first ok...Now tell me fast...kya hua hai?

Muki': "Actually Panchi Mom & Dad wants me to meet a guy for Marriage..

"WHAT"...I said with shock expressions on my face...I mean come on yaar..I know that She love KD and he also love her madly..Infect they both are made of each other..

"But Kiya, why can't you just go and tell ur parents abt you and KD...I am sure they will understand."

"I will Panchi,But you know na ki Rahul need some time to set up his business...aur tab tak mein Mom Dad ko kuch nahi bata sakti...Tu toh unko jaanti haina..How over protective they are about me..

Panchi: "yaah..so now wt u want to do My dear"...I asked her giving her My Tell-me-what-in-ur-mind- look, because By her look I surly bet that kuch toh khichdi pak rahi hai uske dimmag mein...after all she is Kiya yaar.

"yaar wo kya hai na ki mom aur dad ko mana karungi toh they will ask me 100 of questions..toh I was wondering ki us ladke se milne mein haz hi kya hai...saadhi thode hi karni hai...ek baar mil aaungi aur keh dungi ki mujhe wo pasand nahi aaya...kam se kam mom kuch dino ke liye shanth toh ho jaayeenge"...She said all in one go and I looked at her with My Mouth wide open...

"Kiya ki bacchi...jab sab planning kar hi lit hi toh mujhe heart attack dene ki kya jarurat thi...Sidhe Sidhe phone par nahi bata sakti thi"..I said while showing her fake anger.

"Awww My Innocent Panchi..agar tujhe phone par sab bata deti toh tu yaahaan kaise aati,aur yahaan nahi aati toh HUM evening mein us ladke se milne kaise jaate.?

"HUM"

"Yess My Love Hum.Ab see saaari planning toh meine kar li hai par ise execute karne ke liye teri help toh chahiye hogi na mujhe:.She said and wink at me.."aur waise bhi issme tera bhi faayeda hai:...Accha ji mera faayeda wo kaise"..I asked her thinking wt comes next...

"dekh Panchi..agar wo laka Smart hua to we will choose him for you na ...Simple...wt say? And before I can register her words,she gives me peck on my cheeks and ran frm there...After realizing wt she mean I said "Kiya ki bacchi...tu rukh abhi" And I also follow her to give her a piece of Mind...

At around 8PM we were Standing outside the BB court...Yes A Basket Ball Court...I mean who on this earth will fix his meeting with his hone wali wife on BB court yaar...When Kiya told me first I was like...what the heck men ,this guy is for real or what...but unfortunately we have to come here to meet this so called Accha laka because of Kiya's Parents...At BB Court...And for my bad luck this is just not a ordinary BB court...this is the place where Ranveer and I used to play Basket ball like there is no tomorrow, this the only place where I realize my Love for him when that good for nothing Ayesha tried to flirt with him..This place contains so many memories of Me and Ranveer..and right now all those memories were giving me hard time to control my feelings...Ranveer...where are you?...tumne mujhe subah se wish bhi nahi kiya..kya sach mein tum mera Birthday bhul gaye?'...I feel My eyes got watery...Suddenly a nervous voice broke My chain of thoughts, and that voice belong to none other than My bestest friend Kiya,who are hell nervous and I don't know why.

Kiya: "Chalien Panchi"

I somehow control my feelings and give her the best smile of mine and said excitedly': "Of course dear...But why are you so nervous ...see its Our BB court...remember hum yaahaan kitni masti karte the...Ranveer ke saath...I said last line like a whisper.

Kiya: "I know Panchi...but IDK ye ladka dekhna n all...I feel so wired yaar...agar usne mujhe pasand kar liya toh...agar mom dad ne meri shaadi zabardasti is lake se karadi toh"..All of sudden she got really panic.

I am so amused to see this side of My Kiya...I mean kon kahega ki ye wahi Kiya hai jo kabhi koi kaam karne se nahi darti...But its My turn to calm her so I said very calmly : "Relax babes...I am there na with you...And look whose talking..din mein toh bada keh rahi thi ki dekh lenge jo hoga..ab kya hua meri jhanshi ki raani...chill yaar..."MEIN HUN NA"...I said imitating the SRK dialogue frm the movie Mein hun na...

Kiya glare at me and said: "Is this a tym to joke?"

"Ok my dear,ab no majaak...ab chalien ya yahi rehne ka irada hai.

"haan haan toh chalo meine kab mana kiya hai"...She said nervously.

As we reach at the entrance of BB court suddenly Kiya said: "OMG Panchi mein apna purse toh car mein hi bhul gayi.Tu chal mein abhi aayi"

Panchi: "mein...Par mein akle jaakar kya karungi...tu jaa apna purse lekar aa...I will wait for you here only.

Kiya: "nahi yaaar Panchi..waise hi hum late hai...usse aur intejaar karvaya toh accha nahi lagega..tu chal bus mein abhi aayi"...And before Panchi could say anything Kiya ran from there to collect her so called purse.

Kiya is gone,Panchi is all by herself, However there is someone else in presence...She is getting worried and scared now...she enter the BB court,all of a sudden different colored Lights go on,red,white,blue...petals falls down on her...She was shocked seeing all the decorations...balloons, Happy Birthday Banner ,and a lot of things just for her, Finally she spotted a big heart shaped Birthday cake placed on the large table at the corner of the BB court which Said "HAPPY BIRTHDAY Love of my life""

She was Speechless, she wanted to know who did all this..Suddenly she saw a shadow, she looked up and saw a person coming towards her, she was dumbstruck to find out the Person who was none other then Her Best Friend, Her love,Her nonu..."Ranveer Shergill"

Panchi: Nonu..Tum Yahaan...Aur ye sab?

"Happy Birthday Moti"...He whispered

I looked at him and the look on his face made me curious to know what was cooking? Because the way he is looking at me I knew something was fishy...he looked really determined for something.

And before I could give another thought to it he bent down on his knees which make me feel nervous...what was he up to? He brought his hands forward with full of love in his eyes...I was scared yet excited.

Panchi: Ranveer ye'.

Ranveer: "uummm Panchi,I know u were confused what am I doing? But I am doing what my heart wants me to do...aur wo bhi humesha se...and today Its not a joke or prank which we used to play on each other,Its Love Moti, Its LOVE..and I know you must be wondering ki ye sab Achank se...Achanak se nahi Moti...Achank se nahi...The truth is I always Loved you...The time I used to fight with those big boys because they tease you, that was My duty to protect you ,,,,The time I used to do funny and stupid things just to make you laugh ,that was my sadness to see you sad, Our Small small fights over stupid things, our late nights talks, My yelling at you, our patch ups,our text msges,That was all My Love for you...I'm Madly, Crazily head over heel in love with you..I can't promise I'll never let tears come in your eyes, But I promise to be there to wipe them off...I can't promise I'll never hurt you, But I promise to make it up to you every time...And today I just want to say one thing

Your Name is the word I want to say.

Your Image is the view I want to see.

Your voice is the sound I want to hear.

Your heart is the one I want to replace with mine.

I LOVE YOU MOTI...WILL YOU BE MINE?...I REALLY LOVE YOU.

OMG...Ranveer loves me...My Nonu loves me...I hope its note a dream...My hear wants to do somersaults...I so want to scream aloud..Ranveer Loves me...Yes Yes Yes.

Ranveer: Moti say something yaar...My knee is hurting Man.

I chuckles at his cute face and simply Nodded my head,and say excitedly "I love you too Ranveer...Yes I will be yours...Only yours.

And then we hugged each other for so long, I really don't want this day come an end...This was indeed " My Perfect Birthday"...




So this is it..I hope its worth reading...will be waiting for ur reviews guys...don't forget to press like button.

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tinaswea thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am first one to comment!
Omg! 😊
Uh have written it so beautifully! It was amazing! Panchi ka bday! Aur sbh subh mom ka lecture😛
I loved the proposal!

Your Name is the word I want to say.

Your Image is the view I want to see.

Your voice is the sound I want to hear.

Your heart is the one I want to replace with mine.

I LOVE YOU MOTI...WILL YOU BE MINE?...I REALLY LOVE YOU.




These lines were so beautiful!




You are an amazing writer!

Loved it

Keep writing

Love ew

Tina 😊



P.S. I need to learn a lot from ew!

I loved it from the core of my heart!

You have an amazing sense of humour!

Keep writing and entertaining us!😛

Edited by tinaswea - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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GEET EVEN MY HEART IS DOING SOMERSALTS. THIS WAS SO AMAZING. LOVED EACH AND EVERY PART STARTING FROM THE DIARY TO THE MOM DAUGHTER CONVO INCLUDING LAGTA HAI DONO SATH MEIN BHAAG GAYE. THE PRANK WA SO COOL. AND FINALLY THE PROPOSAL.. HAYYE YEH LADKA TOH MERI JAAN LE LEGA. THIS WAS SO ROMANTIC. THE VENUE THE DECORATION AND THE CAKE WAS JUST PERFECT BUT THE BEST PART WAS...

Your Name is the word I want to say.

Your Image is the view I want to see.

Your voice is the sound I want to hear.

Your heart is the one I want to replace with mine.

I LOVE YOU MOTI...WILL YOU BE MINE?...I REALLY LOVE YOU.

I ALSO LOVED THE LINE.. I can't promise I'll never let tears come in your eyes, But I promise to be there to wipe them off...I can't promise I'll never hurt you, But I promise to make it up to you every time...

AWWW THIS WAS SO PURE AND HEARTFELT...

YAAR YOU ARE SUCH A GR8 WRITER... LOVED THIS OS A LOT AND THANX FOR WRITING..


Edited by anjali1805 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res.. I have to go right now 😔
Will unres before the day ends for sure 😃
:-Edited-:
OMG..!
Lets start...
I love it when you make Kiya and Panchi best friends...
I love their bond ^_^
I sorta found the arranged marriage part funny xD
Proposal 😲
It was one of the best proposals I have ever read...!!
It was romantic and at the same time very cute ^_^
Do please keep writing!
It was superb!
Edited by diyataarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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⭐️ wow amazing os
Panchi loving Rv and only kiya knows it😳
Rv planning special surprise for panchi
and than proposal was just mind blowing
just loved it👏
plzz do write more
Stavan
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing os as always
i loved kiya n panchi bonding
n d whole shaadi drama was nyc
n ranveer is way too romantic
it was indeed a perfect proposal on a perfect day
i m more in love wid rahi now
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Geet.
Hats off to u dear,for writing such a beautiful os.
I loved it to the core sweetie.
I loved each and everything about it.
I loved it when Panchi said" hey krishna kahin dono ek saath bhaag toh nahi gaye." 😆
The idea of Ranveer Proposing Panchi in BB court was extraordinary.
Ranveer's proposal to Panchi is awesome and one of the best confessions i have heard till date.
U r awesome sweetheart.
U portrayed it beautifully.
Thankyou for writing such beautiful story.
A tight hug to u dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Balle Balle Te Shava Shava, Geetu i am dancing kya OS hai yaar, Perfect for our Panchi,
I wish Real main bhi Pal ke sath kuch aisa hi ho...

U have shown kiyan bond so perfectly yaar,😳

Aur End main nonu ka proposal hyaeee i am dead, i loved it geetu sachi dil se 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Geetu itna badiya OS aur proposal tu hi likha sakti hain,kyuon ki tu apne nonu ko aache se jo jaanti hain.Loved it & love Kiyan bond.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww wht a wonderful RaHi-licious OS...ws totally lost in RaHi land aftr so long...all thnx to u geet..n thnx a ton for pm,otherwise i wud hv missed it..!!

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