Panchi Understands-Ranveer's Diary (OS) - Page 2

Originally posted by: tinaswea

OMG!

Uh have written it so beautifully!

👏

Thank you so much! :)

Originally posted by: spicySugar..

Oh. My. God. 😳

This is just..urgh! This is beautiful and so nostalgic! Man! the way you get RV! The way you get in his head and GOD! the way you write! I have this thing for repeating sentences/words. How they are repeated but the meaning behind them changes. The tone changes. Not everyone can get that right and you did that so PERFECTLY! the way his narration changed from strong confidence to doubt creeping in and ending with a lingering hope that she will understand..

Man! this is really one of the best pieces I've read on this forum! Although I don't read much, granted but c'mon! How can I not love this? this made me remember all the beautiful RaHi moments from the camping trip, it perfectly portrayed his struggle and while being totally from HIS perspective, it told the whole essence of RaHi. Like a perfect example of how one is incomplete without the other.

Uff! Gonna bookmark this one and read this sometime in future again...so so so so beautiful! <3

Thank you Maiz :)
Considering your writing was the reason I started watching them, this is a huge compliment :)
I wrote this and mulled over posting it for days just because I seemed to have repeated quite a bit but a friend told me to go ahead and post it. Glad you got what I was trying to convey.
You know this theme of Ranveer knowing that Panchi understands is also how they are right? I feel bad sometimes that Ranveer really has only her end of the day, but then at least he has someone who understands him.

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

aaah diii...ur topic title n our last nite chat...i DO FEEL connection "woman"...😆😉

yes yes n zillion times YES ki Panchi UNDERSTANDS RV more than RV himself do on his own... RV does understand Panchi as well...Thats the BEAUTY na... Love,Friendship,Understanding,TRUST-all these r in ABUNDANCE for RaHi and b/w RaHi......

comin back to OS...it ws PPPEEERFFFEEECCCTTT lik alwz..⭐️...i feel LUCKY to read ur wonderful stories on couples i love in all these 5 years...Its sooo wonderful to c the way u
MANAGE to create tht EFFORTLESS MAGIC via ur stories..👏... The way u wrote this OS-it took me back to evry single RaHi moment of my most fav track of TBP-The Camp Track..!! RV n his thoughts were SPOT ON...!!

Keep writing dii n keep makin me go ALL DREAMY&INSANE with ur writings..😆😉🤗...

PS : What abt my req???MN-RaHi?😆..Am AMUSED u hvnt merged them evn after hvin ZILLION CONNECTIONS which exists b/w these two EPIC couples..😛...Am STILL hopeful of u acceptin my req n plz RV ka uss merger story mein kya karna hai u do knw my wish na..😈

Thank you so much nikki 🤗
Hahaha tere sar pe na moti kitaab girgayee hai!!
Combined ff/OS and mn kids 😆 😆
It's definitely my favorite bit too this whole track. That shift from friendship to love was so effortlessly shown. Also woman :)) thank u for always loving my work!

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

wow

Its awesome yaar

written so beautifully

u describe RV's feelings so well

plz do write more on RaHi

Take acre

Geet

Thank you so much:)
Always happy to write more on them 😃

moti kitab?nahiii...

DIL KE ARMAAN AASUN MEIN BEH GAYE...

Originally posted by: --Akshu--

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Divya Di👏👏👏
wow i freaking loved this!

I so love it when stories are from RV's point of view,may be cuz i like knowing what he feels about every situation.

It was a like a small road-trip down the memory lane!

you just reminded all of us of that camp that changed RaHi's life!

Gosh i so miss those months😭😭😭

Loved the way after every part he knew that no matter what happens?Panchi will understand ,she will and she does understand.

it was just brilliant i have no words to describe it every part be it with he thinking that falling in problem is fine with him since Panchi is with him?

The way he knew that she will always there for him and understand him!

He dint think,in this wole trip just did what came naturally!

every scene was described so beutifully

Be it the dance,the getting lost in the jungle and night or the pushing her or the kiss...it was just perfect!

and as i said i always love reading things from RV's side,i always wanted to see this in the show,always wanted to know what was in his mind when he forgot everything that he had a girlfriend and ended up kissing his bestfriend,which he only regretted cuz he kinda cheated on his girlfriend?

anyway,thanx alot for this,just as the previous one,this rocked too.

Keep Bringing more Divya Di</font>

Thank you so so much :)
I am so glad you enjoyed their journey through Ranveer's eyes. It's always fascinating to get into the mind space of one of the characters. There was so much going on in Ranveer's head during that period it was interesting to try and figure out what he when through.
I think he was not upset about the kiss.. His entire problem was that he had cheated on his girlfriend albeit unintentionally.
Thank you for your encouraging words ! :)

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

moti kitab?nahiii...

DIL KE ARMAAN AASUN MEIN BEH GAYE...
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Drama queen 😆 😆😆

Originally posted by: kriti094

This was simply fab
u r simply an amazing writer
hats off
i m in love wid this os

Thank you so much :) :)

Originally posted by: myownarea

Drama queen 😆 😆😆

dost dost na raha...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭...

mera ITTU SA wish u bhi u cudn do n u r givin me BABAJI KA THULLU...!! 😡😡😡😡😡

Originally posted by: sanjanamishra

Ok, dis is the first FF/OS i have read on RaHi and all I can say is BRILLIANT and AWESOME.👏

Dis is so freaking heart touching. If RV wud have been in habits of diary writing, dis is wat he would have written. D way u have written, it seriously looked as if d real RV has written it. While I was reading dis OS, dere was a moment i felt i was actually reading real RV's words. U have actually poured real RV in the OS. Hats off.

Would really like to read more from u😃

Thank you so much, it's a great honour that mine is the first raHi OS that you've though I do recommend you read some others too, there are some lovely writers here!
Really thank you so much for your kind words :)