'life is not fairytale 'RAHI/KISHA part3 updated - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
I liked it a lot update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
woww oww
its full of RAHI n KISHA
no vichi michi veeni
thnxxx a lot 4 this
excited 4 next part
this part was awsmm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nsranade

woww oww
its full of RAHI n KISHA
no vichi michi veeni
thnxxx a lot 4 this
excited 4 next part
this part was awsmm


thnks dear
i am gonna update next part soon
this FF is going to be all about Rahi and kisha avantika has important role but she has no love connection with ranveer or KD
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome story Sneha👏😊
Loved d way u portrayed Panchi differently😃
Panchi may hv had bad heart-break😭
Wat happened between RaHi?😲
Loved KiyAn bond😊
KiSha scene was cute😳
Wats Panchi's reason to talk wid Ranveer again?
Update soon n pm me
😊


thnks a lot
ya panchi is quite idfferent here
u'll get answers for your questions abut wht happnd btwn rahi and panchi's heart break in next updates
😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: joshyalbinaAlBz

Woow dis was so awesum. . .
Wow panchi in such a bold attitude bt am a sweet panchi lovr bt here i lykd it. . .n panch-kiya bond seems to b realy cute n i always lovd der combo. . .
Wtz up wid RV n avantika?
KiSha i always do lov dem. . .
KD's concern for panchi datz a swt part. . .
Al d way i lovd dis FF ❤️

thnks a lot for appreciationg this character of panchi
RV and avantika ka akahir hai kya u'll get answers for this soon 😉
i'll update tonight for sure
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
hey guys i am back
thanks a lot for your comments and thanks for loving Panchi's character Panchi's charcter is really hard for me to describe i am working hard not to make it confusing, panchi is a next to door girl in my story who feels everything she is not perfect she is just herself with all flaws and good things about her. i just hope i could write the way its in my mind.
WEll coming to update


PART 2
They talked casually for sometime and at the end they decided to meet.
An hour later :
As she opened the glass door smell of dark brown chocolate from starbucks filled her in a small restaurant located at a far end of city. She loves the smell, but this reminds her about the last encounter with this guy that left a ping in her heart but no more she is not hurt, he can't hurt her any more now. She pressed a little smile on her lips and ignored the memories of past and thought today you gonna pay Mr.shergill. She looked around to find him as he texted her that he is already at the place, and i next fraction of seconds her eyes got glimpse of his handsome face, she has to accept he is handsome. but then she remembered someone has written " Beauty is not in the face; beauty is a light in the heart. " and if a heart can break a innocent heart then don't fall for that face again. Ranveer saw her coming towards him wrapped in a black knee length dress, giving her perfect body a perfect shape, He forgot to blink looking at a perfect figure standing in front of her from bottom to top in red high heels, her sexy legs visible from her knee length dress having a thin red belt on dark black sexy dress around her waist. Her silver chain around her bottleneck adding to her decent hot looks. Her straight shoulder length hair falling over shoulder. He never noticed she could look so stunning. Hello !!! Ranveer she said waving her hand breaking his gauze on her.
Ohh hiee
he managed to say coming out of trance gathering himself back " indeed he was smitten by her beauty today".
May i have a seat, "she asked coldly."
ya ofcourse ranveer replied.
Hot Chocolate your favourite right? Ranveer asked her as he got up to order for coffee.
No black coffee; she replied cutting him in between and i'll order for me, you don't need to pay for me she taunted him as she remembered. (ranveer: I can pay for you avantika and kiya my sis i not going to pay for everyone here pointing towards panchi her tears thretned to fall at the time) RV's flashbacks.
Ranveer getting her taunt, "i thought someone forgot about the past".
Panchi, "oh i never thought u remebr that ..well anyways i don't want you to pay for me end of story."
RV, "so whts up?? whts going on in life?"
Panchi, " at its best "
RV, " you are changed"
Panchi, "RV ,"someone said that when people say you are changed that simply means you have stopped living your life their way" ans winked
RV, " shaking his head in disbelief, ..somethings can never change you and your qoutes "
Panchi "ofcourse that's real me i love qoutes and that defines life" IN btwn i must thank you for this change its indeed bcz of you"
RV, " look panchi, i said sorry for whatever happend now can you please stop taunting me"
Panchi, " I am not here to taunt you like you did , but don't you dare to think i am same oanchi and i am here to tell you that inncoent heart panchi is dead and you and me killed her togther you hurt her to an extent that she was all broken and i killed her to have me back.
RV, "panchi...she didn't let him complete
Panchi," Not yet mr.shergill, i am not done and let me complete. I am here to tell you that panchi tried to hate you, tried not to love you with all those broken pieces of heart but failed miserably. And the last thing she wanted to tell you was that she never expected you are going to hurt her to such an extent. She never expected anything from you except your time and care. She just wanted that you hold her hand in front of people but you humiliated her there. She wanted that you tell i love panchi infront of her freinds just the way you said her when she was alone. , but no you betrayed her , broke her heart you called her...she was not crying today rembering all past or may be this was the last time she was letting it go. He was dumbstruck what she said. He tried to figure out what she is feeling, her emotions from her eyes, Yes her deep brown eyes used to speak volume of emotions, her heart could be felt in her eyes but to his disappointment today her eyes were calm like never before. he could feel nothing is effecting her when she tried to touch her hand and she snatched it like this disgust her. You made her loose her friends and her that innocent lofe but today look at me i got everything and i thought to thank you for this.
RV, " Don't you create a scene here panchi" (indeed he was hurt bu her damn blunt attitude he never ever expecetd this in his worst nightmare panchi talking to him like that)
PAnchi," YOu did same "
RV, "at least that was not in public damit and i wasn't that rude. you just made a little thing such a mess "
Panchi, " oh plz RV no one is hearing you here atleast none of your random GF's" anyways cam here to let you know don't you ask about me from kiya"
Good bye
RV, " PAnchi !!!!!! he almost screamed and that made people sitting around them look towards them.
Panchi, "Ranveer are you ok i mean don't embarrass me like this"
(she very well knew what RV must be thinkg her fighting with him at the top of her nerves but no mr. RV that would be exactly what you expected no ways you gonna get panchi in your expectation this time. Someone truely qouted, " If you can't make them understand just confuse them" )
RV, : he was shocked at his own imagination oh GOD that was dream and he looked around shw was enjoying her black coffee with no anger no emotion like nothing happened.
She could have reacted the way he was dreaming, but no she is much strong now, she can't let anyone control her emotions neither her emotions have strength to control her at least not infront of anyone she is mature now.
Panchi, " RV its getting late i gotta go now i have appointment. well i just came you to invite for party.
RV, "party ??"
Panchi " ya a sort of party actually i am planning to surprise visit kiya for this Christmas and her b'day as well so i am ust inviting all of her old friends if you want to join...just let me know i'll update you about when and where abouts but yes this is a surprise you are not supposed to leak this to anyone i mean no one means NOONE i'll invite myself who should be there."
RV, "hmmm "
RV, " Panchi, "wohh i am really sorry for...
Panchi, "RV chill i told you i am moved on"
RV, " ok i won't" Freinds now he forward his hand towards her"
she shook it and smiled but said nothing he was little confused.
Panchi said bye to him and left.

Panchi's PV : I know ranveer you never expected panchi like this well thats me now. and trust me i am proud of me and i love myself. You must be expecting me to react after meeting you. you would be expecting me to ask for why you did that or feeling something but...yes i wanted answers a long back but then i accpeted and moved on and now i don't want any answer. Neither i have any complains from you nor any exectations. you are just another guy i know just bcz you are my best friend kiya's cousin nothing more nothing less.
Ranveer's PV
Was that girl panchi ? he was questioning herself. Panchi i knew her t least i thought so..she was not that panchi for sure. she was so calm, no anger, nothing she didn't asked me anything, she didn't asked for answers, she didn't even once talked about that she jsut said i am moved on !! how can she?? i mean she loved me she said so and for her love was like once in a lifetime thing but then...what i am expecting her to cry over me? i asked for that only. NO Ranveer shergill don't care about any girl. NEVER ranveer cann get anygirl he give a damn ! but Really ?? no Panchi was always different since the day one. wheteher it was her innocence or her boldness today. Wait ranveer thinknig innocent panchi he never accpeted this in past.
now this was going all beyond his control he couldn't control himself anymore. his mind was going back to past and then present and this was making him restless or Say Panchi's indifference hurt him or hurt his Male ego.
He took his car and drove back to the loudest club in the town to relax himself got drunk danced and was with some randon dancers. but today he was disturbed by panchi's beahviour but his ego would never let him accept that PAnchi rastogi can affect him.
At midnight he called avantika and he told her about everythng expct surprise thing he odn't know what made him accpetng to panchi's demand for not discolsing this surprise but he don't wat to think atleast not now. Avantika and RV at the end of discussion concluded that yes panchi is a drama queen and doing all this bcz she wants to be in a i am good girl image for kiya and KD. This discussion calmed him or may be his drinks took over his mind and he fell sleep may be just to woke up with a hangover.
Avantika was sitting in a room at a farther corner of another city. she never expected panchi's comeback in their lifes at least not in Ranveer's life as like everone she thought panchi would never be able to talk to RV casually after that but today PAnchi proved her worng and she was a little upset. Avantika yes panchi we were freinds but...
She looked at the time and got ready to go for her work leaving behind the thoughts about their changing lifes.(ok guys whosever is getting confuse its just avantka is having night shift wherever she is working).
Kisha's apartment :
Kiya was cooking in kitchen and KD was not showing up on her calls
Kiya, "KD last time bol rahi ho aake help krdo otherwise u gonna cook for urself i am done with mine"
KD, " Oh my Kiya baby cominggg
Kiya, "don't you KD i am nt going to do all this alone if you want me to cook for you have to help me and thats all"
KD, " packing her cheecks cutely ok baby now don't get hyper " you look so hot when you re hyper
Kiya, "glared at him"
KD, " who needs food to eat when somone has a hot gf i would rather spent whole night kissing you" Kd was in full naughty mood but this was making her more furious and she left half cooked noodle on gas and left kitchen showing KD His way to complete cooking dinner.
Today madam is really in bad mood uff mr. KD lag jayo aab and yes you have to work hard to manofiy her today.

0Precap : more about panchi's life
RAHI's unexpected meeting
More about avantika may be 😉
Nodoubt something cuteyy about kisha


So how was it guys
Please leave your comments that inspire me to write and just let me know . All types of comments are welcome
Love sneha
Edited by snehamaanvirman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ohh goshh just loved itt
i want RAHI
thnk u sooo muchh
i have no words👏👏
loved it
plzz post next part soon
n thnxx lot 4 PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow Sneha this is an amazing update...lovely👏👏👏
i just loved Panchi's way of taunting RV 😎
and damn i m liking this attitude of her's😃😃
but gosh!! this is just RV's imagination😆
her boldness, loved that👍🏼
and is Avantika RV's girlfriend in this???😲
and cute cute KiSha scene...lovely😳😳
thanks for the pm dear and update next soon😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
nice start ...loved it ...continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
awesome ...
its superb continue ssoon ..pls...

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