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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: NaughtyRa

I was like frm when did radzy became a anya fan :P

Miss bullshit writer that was really evi"ish huh and in writing it was absoultely perfect

Loved it ;)


Shubh!! <3
Good to see you! 🤗
And thank you so much! <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: sajan_kisha

Ha... So finally its here, from the greatest fan of Anya Gujral...😛 Haha, yeah, recently development it is. :P

I loved it sis, you have got it perfect... Whew! I was worried about it...

I was really eager to read this one and its awesome, you have done full justice to the character... Thank you! <3 I'm so glad you think it turned out okay Di! :D

That attitude, the way she admires herself in the mirror, truly Anya, I could imagine them in my head...👍🏼 Really??!! :O Yaayyiee!! :D

The urge. The urge to suddenly strike a pose like the Evil Queen and mouth her famous dialogue, tempting indeed. And compelling too, as she found herself doing just that.

From these lines it seems like she loves to be evil, she doesn't want to be perfect good girl, she wants to be a witch... She ain't a good girl, and she knows that. ;) And neither does she pretend to be one..and that's what I like about her. <3

And Kiya is Snow white huh... Yeah... to Anya at least, she is...

These two just love to fight na, their attitude is what defines their relationship... I'm not too fond of Kiya..but Anya gets to me now..

Well done dear, and kudos for attempting something like this... Thank you so much Di!! :D <3

Love ya...🤗 Love you too!! <3 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ladki, since you haven't edited, I might as well reply. :P

Mugsy.. 🤗
You're finally back!!
I'm so glad. :D (I know I told you this many times yesterday but I can't help it. :P)
Way to come back with a bang!!
I really got a huge shock when you told me your OS is on Anya. By the way, it's your 21st OS and my b'day comes on 21st. (Just a random thing) :P
I can relate myself to Anya a teeny-tiny bit, not too much though. (I'm not evil. :P)
I love Anya anyway, I have some kind of connection with characters who are villains but I don't like characters who are supposed to be good but turn a little villainous. I'm weird that way. :P
Okay, now I'm finally going to comment on the actual OS. :P

Snow White. <3 it. It's one of my favorite fairy tales because it shows how good always overcome evil and any one can become your friend if you are friendly with them. It doesn't matter how long you know each other, it matters how true the friendship is which the dwarfs and Snow White portray and also the fact that any one can change if they truly want to. :)

Asking the mirror truly seems like something Anya would do, being the diva she is.
'Perfect' is the one word a person like her would describe herself so excellent choice of the word there and I agree with Anya on one thing, her eyes are very sharp and striking. She oozes confidence, literally.

Teasing smile, I couldn't imagine Anya doing that basically because she is always giving these greedy or sly smiles in the show. The actress is doing a good job though.

The transition from innocent to Evil Queen was very smooth.
Right then, enters Snow White with just one simple question. That is enough for her change to the facade she puts up.

Her head knows the truth, whether she does or not. I always thought she had nothing in her head but now I feel she has her heart in her head and her brain in her chest. :P She realizes immediately though without any words.

And Kiya, she has to be sarcastic doesn't she? :P Too bad she doesn't know the Anya behind the facade if there is one.

Gone was the pretty lady with the teasing smile, replaced instead by this woman who looked at her with scorn, her face pulled into an ugly expression.

This was the best sentence in the whole OS according to me. Beauty can change in a moment, it only matters what you expression is. The one difference between a lady and a woman. Between Snow White and the Evil Queen. The thoughts.
I felt it was a perfect way to show that it's almost at the end.

she walked out of her room, slamming the door behind her.

Somehow, I feel it would have been much less effectful if you had ended with just closed the door or just walked out of her room. Slamming shows all the anger flowing through her veins just because of a phrase she heard in her head. A true one at that!

Completely mind-blowing OS.
You are back!! I loved it to the core. <3

P.S. I hope you're happy with my comment. :P You better be.
P.P.S I wanted a longer A/N but now you're going to write a long reply. :P

Love,
Ananya. 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
I saw your PM abhi. :P
Sorry! :P

Will reply to the comment now. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ARandKJFan

Ladki, since you haven't edited, I might as well reply. :P Saw your PM abhi. :P

Mugsy.. 🤗 :*
You're finally back!! Yup! ;)
I'm so glad. :D (I know I told you this many times yesterday but I can't help it. :P) You're sweet, y'know?
Way to come back with a bang!!
I really got a huge shock when you told me your OS is on Anya. By the way, it's your 21st OS and my b'day comes on 21st. (Just a random thing) :P 21st what?
I can relate myself to Anya a teeny-tiny bit, not too much though. (I'm not evil. :P)
I love Anya anyway, I have some kind of connection with characters who are villains but I don't like characters who are supposed to be good but turn a little villainous. I'm weird that way. :P I can understand. The Anya here is a glammed up version of me. The bits with the mirror.. that's all me. ( Yes, I'm narcissistic. :P )
Okay, now I'm finally going to comment on the actual OS. :P

Snow White. <3 it. It's one of my favorite fairy tales because it shows how good always overcome evil and any one can become your friend if you are friendly with them. It doesn't matter how long you know each other, it matters how true the friendship is which the dwarfs and Snow White portray and also the fact that any one can change if they truly want to. :)

Asking the mirror truly seems like something Anya would do, being the diva she is.
'Perfect' is the one word a person like her would describe herself so excellent choice of the word there and I agree with Anya on one thing, her eyes are very sharp and striking. She oozes confidence, literally. Isn't my Witch just awesome? <3 ;)

Teasing smile, I couldn't imagine Anya doing that basically because she is always giving these greedy or sly smiles in the show. The actress is doing a good job though. Yeah, I love her expressions. She's such a bitch! <3

The transition from innocent to Evil Queen was very smooth. Thank you! <3
Right then, enters Snow White with just one simple question. That is enough for her change to the facade she puts up. "facade" It's one of my favourite words.

Her head knows the truth, whether she does or not. I always thought she had nothing in her head but now I feel she has her heart in her head and her brain in her chest. :P She realizes immediately though without any words. Yeah, I'm sure Anya is more than just a smirking troublemaker. And if she isn't, I'll make her one.

And Kiya, she has to be sarcastic doesn't she? :P Too bad she doesn't know the Anya behind the facade if there is one. Kiya's plain annoying. -_-

Gone was the pretty lady with the teasing smile, replaced instead by this woman who looked at her with scorn, her face pulled into an ugly expression.

This was the best sentence in the whole OS according to me. Beauty can change in a moment, it only matters what you expression is. The one difference between a lady and a woman. Between Snow White and the Evil Queen. The thoughts.
I felt it was a perfect way to show that it's almost at the end. You put that well, kid. :)

she walked out of her room, slamming the door behind her.

Somehow, I feel it would have been much less effectful if you had ended with just closed the door or just walked out of her room. Slamming shows all the anger flowing through her veins just because of a phrase she heard in her head. A true one at that! Yup! What shows anger and vehemence better than slamming the door? ;)

Completely mind-blowing OS.
You are back!! I loved it to the core. <3 Thank you! <3 You know.. it' people like you who make me feel so much better about my writings.. and make me come back.. or i'd have sacchi mein given up..

P.S. I hope you're happy with my comment. :P You better be. I am. :) 🤗
P.P.S I wanted a longer A/N but now you're going to write a long reply. :P Ahh, hope the reply was satisfactory. :)

Love,
Ananya. 😊 Love ya Ananya! <3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mugsiee an OS on Anya 😲😲
Its a shocked for me..
And look I read it. I'm not Anya fan but still I loved it. 😳
Totally amazing I loved that pt when Kiya peeped in the room n asked for her iPod..
And The way they sisters gave attitude...
Thakati nahi hain By God 😆😆
Overall Nice...
Rads ko dedicate ki OS..
Dobara Rads ko wish nahi karungi bht bar wish kia wo bolegi k mai pagal hogai hoon 😆😆
Btw Love u Mugsiee 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oho what a piece my talented friend...
Had read this earlier but didn't get time to reply!
Each and every character of the show is interesting and you did a fantastic job with this one !
The comparison with the tale of Snow White was a brilliant idea!
Not that I am a fan of Anya, it's just that your writing skills made her character look really interesting in her own way.
Great one, Mugs 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I've seen and read so many versions of Snow White by now that it's tough for me to find something original in each story... though albeit there always is something new in there.

Your idea was very different, even though every TBP fan must have called Anya "chudail" amongst themselves atleast once. Well that's what her character is supposed to be made of. And Anya going all, "Mirror Mirror On The Wall." is something very Anya-ish.

Coming back to the story.

"Lips as red as rose, hair as black as ebony, skin as fair as snow." --> It's all too much pressure to take. 😉

The whole magical air of this piece was breath taking. The constant to and fro between Anya in her room and metaphorical event of Snow White, well written.

I think we can take a spin of most of the fairy tales we have, but then nothing suits Anya better than the Evil Queen.

Loved it.

P.S. Sorry, read before, commented before... commenting again becomes a task. You know it.
Edited by CoffeeAddict - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: krazy4KD

Mugsiee an OS on Anya 😲😲 Yess!! :P

Its a shocked for me..
And look I read it. I'm not Anya fan but still I loved it. 😳 Thank you! <3 Glad you did! :D
Totally amazing I loved that pt when Kiya peeped in the room n asked for her iPod..
And The way they sisters gave attitude...
Thakati nahi hain By God 😆😆 Ah.. i tried to make them sound as less OOC as possible..
Overall Nice...
Rads ko dedicate ki OS..
Dobara Rads ko wish nahi karungi bht bar wish kia wo bolegi k mai pagal hogai hoon 😆😆
Btw Love u Mugsiee 🤗 You too Emmie! <3 And thank you! 🤗

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