NonComposMentis thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#1
Aaand I'm back. Yeah, after all of my melodrama, I'm back. It was inevitable, I suppose.
Anyway, I won't tarry around much, it's dedicated to Radsy.
Happy Birthday girl! :D
And well, baki sab baad mein. Here's hoping you like it!

Glimpses

Mirror, Mirror


"Mirror Mirror on the wall, who is the fairest of them all?"


She stepped back to admire her handiwork with the last flourish of her mascara. Striking a pose, she critically surveyed her reflection in the mirror. The short, figure-hugging black dress, the oh-so-high red heels, the hair in waves about her shoulders, the full lips touched up with red, and of course, the eyes. The eyes with the meticulously put kajal, eyeliner, mascara and eye shadow were her best features. She loved how contrasting the black of her eyes was with the rest of her face, but mostly, she loved the confidence which seemed to ooze out of her with the eye-make up. Perfect, she thought, and winked at her reflection.

She let go of her pose then, and straightened out the imaginary creases on her dress. It was an important day for her, and while she felt ready to even conquer the world, she wanted to look like it too.

As she was about to go out of her room after having taken her clutch and phone, she caught a glimpse of herself in her mirror again, and stopped. She raised her eye brows at her reflection, and slowly smiled a teasing smile, "Anya Gujral, you're one pretty lady, aren't you?" Her reflection smiling the exact smile at her, she replied, "Oh yes, you are!"

The urge. The urge to suddenly strike a pose like the Evil Queen and mouth her famous dialogue, tempting indeed. And compelling too, as she found herself doing just that.

"Mirror Mirror on the wall, who is the fairest of them all?"

And the door opened and a head peeped in, almost as an answer to her question, with another question, "Have you seen my iPod?"

She closed her eyes, feeling the anger burning up, and bit her lip in an effort to calm herself, and then turned to face the culprit, hands behind her back.

But on this day, there is one more beautiful than you, she heard in her head. And she needn't even ask who it was for she knew the answer already. Snow White. And who else but her younger sister, Kiya Gujral?

Said younger sister was giving her a bored look, leaning against the doorway, arms crossed against her chest, "Have you seen it or not?"

Anya too crossed her arms now, and putting on her most saccharine sweet smile, answered, "Of course not, dear sister. Why in the world would I know where your iPod is?"

Kiya rolled her eyes, "I don't know. You might just have taken it-"

"Of course not!"

Kiya was a little shocked at the sudden outburst, but didn't show it, as Anya composed herself, taking in a deep breath.

"Look Kiya," she said, "I don't know where your iPod is, and I have someplace important to be and I'm kind of in the middle of getting ready for it...so..."

Kiya raised her eyebrows at that, "You look ready enough to me.", and then slightly turned her head away and muttered to herself, "Like a tart."

I heard that, Anya thought, feeling the anger rise again, but smiled even more sweetly at Kiya, "I still need to touch up once more, so could you please leave?"

"Whatever." Kiya rolled her eyes and walked off.

Anya's smile disappeared as did Kiya, and as she looked at her reflection once again, she felt like smashing the mirror to pieces. Gone was the pretty lady with the teasing smile, replaced instead by this woman who looked at her with scorn, her face pulled into an ugly expression.

She clutched her phone and purse more tightly, digging her nails into the soft leather of the purse. "That bloody Snow White! How I hate her! How I absolutely hate her!"

She heard her mother's voice in the background, "Anya, come quickly! We're getting late dear!"

"I'm coming!" she called and with one last cold glance at the mirror, she walked out of her room, slamming the door behind her.

***


Well, Radsy, my Saviour, hope you liked it! :)

You were, after all, partly the inspiration for this, coz of our fangirling over my darling Witch. <3 So yeah, quite a bit of the credit should go to you, for being my "partner-in-crime". ;)

Gah!! It's 12!! :O

So I guess I'll end it here. A huge hug, Radsy, loads of love and the very best wishes! <3 I won't go on with the "thank yous" coz I'd end up typing and typing then. :P

That's a wrap then! :) Apologies for the crap dedication Radsy! SO very sorry. :/ *smacks forehead*

Oh! And enjoy! :D Love you, always and forever. <3

Yeah, my A/N's done. :P Sorry Ananya. :O

Indebted,

Mugs.



Edited by NonComposMentis - 12 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

31

Views

2.3k

Users

13

Likes

38

Frequent Posters

NonComposMentis thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#2
On behalf of Ananya. ( Seriously kid, I better get a good comment for this. -_- )

"Glad you're back Mugsy and I'm first"

Copy-pasted from FB. :P
.serenade. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#3
The first thing that caught my eye was that it's written on "Anya" xD
Res for now :P
Effervescent_R thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#4
Kidddo. . ❤️
oh my God. .
trust u to make Miss Witchy. . into Pretty Little Woman. .
this was sooo EPIC. . ❤️
the oozing out Attitude. .
that self pride ..
aaah. . this was just amazing. . . !!
and Mrs. Limelight as Snow white. .really???😛
anyways the intrusion definitely gave it a natural touch!!
need less to say. . I love ya. . . ❤️
loads of hugs n kisses
PS
I was half expecting her to be getting dressed up for a date with. . ...😛😉

Edited by -Serendipity- - 12 years ago
NonComposMentis thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: -Serendipity-

Kidddo. . ❤️ Radsy!! <3
oh my God. .
trust u to make Miss Witchy. . into Pretty Little Woman. . Ah, success then. ;)
this was sooo EPIC. . ❤️ Sacchi?
the oozing out Attitude. .
that self pride ..
aaah. . this was just amazing. . . !! I guess i'm satisfied with it then. :)
and Mrs. Limelight as Snow white. .really???😛 Yeah. :P
anyways the intrusion definitely gave it a natural touch!! Ah, good to know. :)
need less to say. . I love ya. . . ❤️ You too! <3
loads of hugs n kisses
PS
I was half expecting her to be getting dressed up for a date with. . ...😛😉 Hahah, noo!! I'm not turning my witch into a cougar, that's for sure. :P

Radsy! 🤗

springkissed thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#6
An os on anya?? 😲
Res!
I will be back with my huge comment later. :P

Unres
Okay, I really like this! Mugzie, wow! You know you really shine when you write on other chararcters other than kisha, not that you don't shine when you do kisha, but I feel like you capture alot of emotions pretty correctly even without being emotionally invested in those other characters. I simply loved this one! Aanya, I never understood the reason behind her hate, I think her hate stems from the fact that she can't tolerate seeing someone else be more happy and be better than her. So, when her younger sister is better than her, or happier than her, she just gets really jealous. She as a person has messed up priorities, people might think she is very self obsessed and she loves her self alot, but in contrary, she doesn't love her self at all, she is insecure and that very insecurity drives her to have a low self esteem and an inferiority complex.

We can clearly see her low self esteem, when she gets insecure with even little success that kiya achieves. This all happens when you don't love yourself and when you are not happy with who you are. Although, you have brilliantly portrayed her as she is in the show, but there is an insecure side to her that I wished you had also tackled, that tangible and softer side other than this devilish side that always wants to up her sister in every situation. Maybe it could also be that she always wanted have her mom's love because as we know kiya's mom switches her affections for whoever does better. Maybe, when she was smaller, her mom did something like that and completely abandoned Aanya whenever kiya started doing good in her school and all, thus her hatred towards her sister now? I don't know why, but I want the reason for her such behavior explored. but, nonetheless, you did a brilliant job! I don't think I even have to say anything more for your writing because no matter what, you always deliver, so right on! 👍🏼
Edited by coolpixie - 12 years ago
..WitchGrave.. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#7
I was like frm when did radzy became a anya fan :P

Miss bullshit writer that was really evi"ish huh and in writing it was absoultely perfect

Loved it ;)
Effervescent_R thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: NaughtyRa

I was like frm when did radzy became a anya fan :P
Ever since Kiddo made me into one😛 to be precise on the day before KiSha date 😆😆
yaaa we're weird n proud of being one too😉

Miss bullshit writer that was really evi"ish huh and in writing it was absoultely perfect

Loved it ;)

..WitchGrave.. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#9


Well thats really nice then miss weirdos 👏 😆
Different choices makes a person different frm the world 🤣
ItsMe_Ammu thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#10

Ha... So finally its here, from the greatest fan of Anya Gujral...😛

I loved it sis, you have got it perfect...

I was really eager to read this one and its awesome, you have done full justice to the character...

That attitude, the way she admires herself in the mirror, truly Anya, I could imagine them in my head...👍🏼

The urge. The urge to suddenly strike a pose like the Evil Queen and mouth her famous dialogue, tempting indeed. And compelling too, as she found herself doing just that.

From these lines it seems like she loves to be evil, she doesn't want to be perfect good girl, she wants to be a witch...

And Kiya is Snow white huh...

These two just love to fight na, their attitude is what defines their relationship...

Well done dear, and kudos for attempting something like this...

Love ya...🤗

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".