Originally posted by: coolpixie
An os on anya?? š²
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I will be back with my huge comment later. :P
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Okay, I really like this! Mugzie, wow! You know you really shine when you write on other chararcters other than kisha, not that you don't shine when you do kisha, but I feel like you capture alot of emotions pretty correctly even without being emotionally invested in those other characters. I simply loved this one! Aanya, I never understood the reason behind her hate, I think her hate stems from the fact that she can't tolerate seeing someone else be more happy and be better than her. So, when her younger sister is better than her, or happier than her, she just gets really jealous. She as a person has messed up priorities, people might think she is very self obsessed and she loves her self alot, but in contrary, she doesn't love her self at all, she is insecure and that very insecurity drives her to have a low self esteem and an inferiority complex. Ah, word to all that you said girl! <3
My beloved Miss Sense and Sensibility, no one can beat you at sensibly putting down your opinions as an observer! <3 <3 <3
We can clearly see her low self esteem, when she gets insecure with even little success that kiya achieves. This all happens when you don't love yourself and when you are not happy with who you are. Although, you have brilliantly portrayed her as she is in the show, but there is an insecure side to her that I wished you had also tackled, that tangible and softer side other than this devilish side that always wants to up her sister in every situation. Maybe it could also be that she always wanted have her mom's love because as we know kiya's mom switches her affections for whoever does better. Maybe, when she was smaller, her mom did something like that and completely abandoned Aanya whenever kiya started doing good in her school and all, thus her hatred towards her sister now? I don't know why, but I want the reason for her such behavior explored. but, nonetheless, you did a brilliant job! I don't think I even have to say anything more for your writing because no matter what, you always deliver, so right on! šš¼ Righto girl! You know.. I meant this to be a series on Anya... you know.. analysing various aspects to her character.. par ab mann nai hai... I think I'll write them only as a personal collection...
Anyway, you come on FB, got to tell ya stuff!! :O
Love always! <3
Mugs.