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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Awesome update Sanaya.😊
KD flirting with Kiya.😉
Hayee!Kd deels that Kiya is good in both looks and talent.
And coming to Juhi how dare she speaks rudely to Kiya.Poor Kiya.
Waiting for the next update.
Update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
hiya...!!
i know i am late...!!
but an amazing update...!
KD flirting with Kiya and Juhi jealous...!!
Juhi shouting at Kiya...and Kiya feeling bad!!
OMG!! and awesome update...!!
UPDATE SOOON!!!
love
safrena
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
this is the 2nd part
its a comedy track😛
so i hope you like it😉

PART 2

It is Sunday morning. Juhi applies face pack and relaxes. Kiya comes there offering coffee to Juhi.

Kiya: Kya baat hain Juhi! Aaj kiski baarein mein soch rahi ho?? Hrithik ya Ranbir??

Juhi: Koi nahi hain. Main apna pyaara sa dosth Keshav Desai ke baare mein soch rahi hoon.

Hearing this, Kiya gets sad sa well as jealous as she too likes him a lot, but she stays calm. Juhi doesn't see her expression as she kept a peel on her eyes. Juhi continues " Though he flirts with girls around, atleast he shows some respect towards women while speaking. Very smart. He is my darling. I love him so much. Hmmm''...".

Just then, door bell rings. Kiya opens the door. There is a small kid of age 10, keeps on drooling over Juhi. Kiya plans to play a prank on her and says wantedly " Hey KD!! Andar aao na"

Juhi sprangs up listening KD's name, takes off her peel, feels relieved that its not KD. Kiya laughs at this. She is angry on Kiya as she played a prank on her.

Kid: Juhi!! Mujhe chess khelna hai'.

Juhi: Hey you'. Agli baar aise naatak kii toh main tumhe tumhari parents ko complaint karungi. Jao yahan se.

She shoos him off from there and goes on cursing Kiya, but Kiya laughs at this. Juhi sits on the couch and relaxes. After some time, door bell rings again. This time it is KD really.

Kiya: Hey KD! Ab tum sach mein aa gaye ho'

Juhi thinks as it is also a prank and relaxes. The kid comes from behind and asks " Hey Juhi!! Tum abhi yahan ho. Tum abhi tak gayi nahi'.". Juhi gets angry, gets up and removes her shirt off. 😆😆😲They can see her only under garments. KD gets shocked seeing this and keeps his mouth wide open. Kiya closes KD's eyes with her hands.

Juhi: Hey you!! Are you happy now' dekho dekho'..

Kid: Hey' shame.. shame'

KD: (removes hands and says) Hey Juhi!! Main yeh dekhne nahi aaya. Kya Kiya? Aaj Sunday free show hain kya??

Juhi sees KD there and gets shocked. Kiya and Juhi get embarassed, she goes inside.

KD: Hey Kiya!! Jaldi karo. Late ho raha hain.

Kiya: Yeah.. 5 min.

Juhi: Kiya.. Yeh kya kiya tumne. Mujhe bataa sakti thi na

Kiya: (rolls her eyes) maine bataaya tha Juhi. U only didn't respond.

Juhi: Whatever'

She cleans her face, goes, sits beside KD. He is reading a magazine on which it read " its time to say I Love You"

Juhi: KD! Agar koi ladki tumhe dekhkar I Love You kehdiya toh tum kya karoge??

KD: (keeps the book aside and gently holds Juhi's face) kya girls ke pairon mein hi chappal hote hain?? Hum bhi humhare chappal se use bagaathe hain.😃😃

Juhi: (hits him) KD! Tum na sach mein nahi badloge. Waise kyun keh rahe ho.. gay ho kya??

KD: What d hell! Hey I ll kill you. Stupid.

Kiya: Okay! Im ready..

Juhi: Tum jaoge toh main yahan pe lonely rahoongi, getting bored.

KD: Shall we call that kid for company??

Juhi: Nooo'. You'.

KD and Kiya get out from there as they have some important assignment to do.

Edited by reykriya21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Oh shit awesome ss mann
I loved all 2 chaps
Ohh gossh second chap was sooo funny
Shiit juhi shitt
And kds chappal wala dialogue
🤣
Plzz pm me when u update next if possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Awesome update.
Loved it to the core.
Kiya is jealous when Juhi told her that she loves KD .
And Juhi what the hell she did.😲😆.
And KD 's dialogue for super hilarious🤣
Update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
I m back with my next update
so enjoy reading it😛😉😉

PART 3

It's the day of DIWALI. KD introduces Kiya and Juhi to his parents. Juhi is wearing a casual t-shirt and a jeans. Kiya is wearing a pink color saree. KD's mother gets impressed by Kiya as she is very humble and traditional. Juhi gets hurt by seeing this. She pulls KD's mom aside to a room and locks. When the door is opened, all get surprised as Juhi wears a saree and comes. KD laughs whole heartedly and says " Hey Juhi!! You are so funny in this saree😆."

Juhi gets angry, hits him, says " okay fine KD!! If u laugh on me like this na, then I ….."

KD : Batao !! Kya soch rahi ho…. Awaaz bundh hogaya kya???

Kiya : Juhi… ignore him dear…. U r so gorgeous in this saree.

Juhi: Sacchii??

KD : Mucchi……

Juhi : Thank u………

Whenever KD's mom talks to Kiya, Juhi interrupts them everytime. At the time of fireworks, Kiya gets jealous on seeing Juhi closeness with KD. She cant say anything as she is scared of her. But Juhi is unaware of the matter that KD loves Kiya.

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In the office, the trio are in a meeting. After the meeting, Juhi stops Kiya and asks

Juhi : Hey Kiya! Tum meri ek help karogi kya??

Kiya : yeah, tell me.

Juhi : Kya tum KD ko bataasakti ho ki main uss se pyaar kar rahi hoon?

Kiya : Mujhe kaise karna hain yeh sab. Tum hi use mil kar directly bata sakti ho na.

Juhi : Pls Kiya! Ek baar my dear… pls use bataa do. Okay main ab jaa kar KD ko bhulaake laati hoon tere paas.

Juhi searches for KD in the office but he is nowhere. She then hurriedly goes to the gents washroom. KD is there in the gents washroom.

Juhi : Hey KD! KD ………(she emerges into the washroom)😕😲😲

KD : What the hell Juhi… tum yahan kyun aayi ho….😡

Juhi : KD sorry, wo tumhe Kiya bhula rahi hain. Kuch imp baat karni hain.

KD and Juhi go out. They fight….

KD : Mujhe tum call kar sakthi thi na phone pe..

Juhi : Sorry KD! Maine toh kuch nahi dekha Promise😛

KD : Shut up………waise Kiya mujhse kya baat karna chahti thi??

Juhi : Mujhe nahi pata…. U only ask her.

KD goes to Kiya but Kiya is tensed as what to say to KD.

KD : Hey.. yeah tell me.

Kiya : KD ! Are you free in the evening??

KD : Yeah… Any assignment??

Kiya : Shall we meet up for dinner??

KD : (gets shocked) 😲😲DINNER????????????

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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
loved the character sketch do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
all the chappy are soo amazing yaar
i love the way u write
to the point and so simple yet lovely
jst loved it !!!!!
do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: arhadlove

all the chappy are soo amazing yaar
i love the way u write
to the point and so simple yet lovely
jst loved it !!!!!
do continue soon

thank u so much😊
ll update the last part soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: reykriya21

thank u so much😊
ll update the last part soon


wat only 1 part remained😭
anyway will be waiting for it😊
and hope u'll come back with another kisha work😃

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