||Season 2 Buddies FF|| I'll b thr 4 U|Part4pg 30| - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
note: I know I have already written a confrontation in part 1 but after watching yest. 's epi I really cudnt help it!!!
Here's an elaborated version of d confrontation
n this time around its Junglee who's confronting so hope u dont mind d bluntness n d aggresiveness!!
n yes this is gonna be a long part so plz dont mind d length
Part 2

JJ looked from 1 face to the other. .. he cudnt believe his Jokers cud stoop so low!!
finally he stopped in front of Panchhi. .
" You are the most sensible out of lot... tell me what happened "
*Flashback*

the NYP " accidental kiss"
The whole Farewell scene
College Race Scene
Narrated by Panchhi

JJ looked @ RanSh... he was filled with tremendous Pain n raw anger he turned toward them
&
* thud*
d sound echoed in the pin drop silent room
JJ had slapped them both hard on their cheeks
The 2 were already too guilty to react anythimg. . they were numb!!
What followed induced Shiver down every1's Spine
" This is not even half of the amt of pain u all have inflicted in me"
Those words n their Impact were Enough!!!
He 1st went upto RV
Held him by his collars. ..
" What do u think you are??!! "
" you placed the money fair enough. . but u doubted his credentials? why? I thought u genuinely wanted to help him. . I was so happy to know that the tuitions idea was urs. .. I was more than happy to see u forget ur grudges n start all over again. . n what did u do? doubted him? not only doubted accused him of a crime he never commited. . agree KD has a bad boy image but u've known him since ages... do u really think he can stoop so low?"
RV was Numb. . he stood like a statue. his expressions pained, guilty

" N U. . KD" those 3 words were enough foe KD to lower his eyes. . he was ashamed of himself!!
" How dare u call RV lonely??!! What were u a few days back KD?? U cudnt see his Genuine concern??! U cudnt see d fact that he genuinely wanted to help u??!" he spoke pointing at RV this whole time!!
tightening his grip wid every word. . KD's eyes were closed. . his expressions Pained
" open ur eyes dammit!!! Look @ me. . . face the reality" JJ held KD's jawline to make him look upn KD opened his eyes n looked straight into JJ's
Their Eyes Met... n KD shuddered
while JJ could very much see. .. the hurt, the pain in KD's eyes!!
which made him turn towards Kiya. ..
" Kiya Gujral, The new pop-star in town. .. how easily u accused KD of spreading an MMS!!! U were d 1 to help me get KD out of the Jail didnt u??! How did u even think he wud spread an MMS??!! U know what Kiya till date I've always . . always taken ur side I've always shouted @ KD, even slapped him... coz I considered u innocent. ... I always thot KD doesnt trust u. .. but atleast he's got the guts to admit his deeds!! The time I saw him tearing ur poster during APC . .. I cud see d hatred. ..I wanted to kill him Then n There itself!!
But he was guilty n wanted a chance to correct himself... he wud have too if RV wudnt have Caught him @ d wrong tym!! I still scolded him. . but then slowly n gradually things started changing u 2 became friends again n I was beyond happy. .. for what? This????!!!!"

" U all wanna know from whr KD got the money? he got it as a reward . .. for exposing a fake entrance exam racket!!!does that strike anything in ur thick heads"
The world was spinning around for Kiya
" I hate u Keshav Desai"
" U've hurt me. . every bloody tym!!"
words echoed around her as JJ gave his last blow
" Look at him Kiya. . look into his eyes. .. what do u see??!!"
No she cudnt . .. she cudnt . ..
but when she finally did
JJ said
" U know what I see? Hurt, pain, I've never seen him as hollow as I see him today"
that was enough enough for her to bear
as she gave a last look @ KD who was looking @ RV guilty. ..
JJ Stormed out n all was blank in front of her eyes!!
Edited by blue_Orchid - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres

Yay im the first to comment
Wow i just loved This confrontation
U described all their emotions perfectly👏
Ah Kiya finally realizes her mistake
My i could feel KD's pain the way u told it
I esp loved the flow of it!
Loved it a lot rads
Update soon
Edited by sweetz1204 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
UNRES:
Partner!!!!!
OMG!!! This is flawless yaar...!!
Amazingly written!!! kya bolu mein...!!!
itna acha intensely u write!!
finally u updated!!!
although im not 1st...i am 2nd!!!😆
luved it...!!! continue soon!!!😆
and i am loving this ff more and more...!!!
love
ur
saf
Edited by safi_kisha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
updated on pg 14
Edited by blue_Orchid - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rads🤗
omg wat an confrontation yaar..i jus totally loved it
the way u explained was beautiful
kiya finally realized her mistake
waiting for next update
Edited by -Haari- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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radsy classic update👏
jj was mind blowing😎
the way he scolded kishara was amazing👏
now finally yara knws KD's truth 😃
and KD guilty on thinking about RV like that
update soon radsy , jst can't wait !!!!!!!
Edited by arhadlove - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rads🤗.
awesome update as usual.
Loved the confrontation a lot.👏
Love you for giving this wonderful chappy. Hope cv's give us something like this.
KiShaRa's emotions were portrayed beautifully.
Hats off to you girl.👍🏼
Update soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it tpo the core Rads superb update!
loved the way he went to each person n scolded them!
their guiltyness was shown perfectly amazing update yaar!
wanna see mo0re common update fast😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gosh wat an update radz that was the bestest update update
Gosh the way u described the emotions were flawless
Amazingly superb u wont beleive I read it 7 tym and still I want to red it once more
Gosh the way u r turning the story gosh its awesome and this line which jj said to kiya" U know what I see? Hurt, pain, I've never seen him as hollow I see him today" gosh this line I just loved it loved it loved dont know why but I loved it
Awesome update
Ps : meine kini bar gosh likha lol mujhe apne upar hasssi arahi hai 😆
Edited by shubhraupadhyay - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww wowww beautifully written rads👏👏
loved ittt😃
finally they came to know about KD's truth😊
waiting for d nxt part😳

P .S yesterday's epi was 👏

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