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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Kar kar jo karna hai kar update kar
Mein sirf tere liye online aa rahi huu
Aur ha I hav not readed ur ff time nahi hai exams hai sorry but I will try to comment & read
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: shubhraupadhyay

Kar kar jo karna hai kar update kar areee tune toh muje aur bhi confuse kar diya... and like i said... i am not updating untill my frnd coments on this SS ... but u hv to suggest what u think!!😉
Mein sirf tere liye online aa rahi huu awieee hw sweet of u...
Aur ha I hav not readed ur ff time nahi hai exams hai sorry but I will try to comment & read ohhh acha...its kk re... u dnt have to say sryy!! *frndshp mein no shorri and no thanku!!! 😊🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
yup do include safre , specially the hug and kiss day😳
ya ya i knw i m mad for such scenes and specially whn they are on kisha😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arhadlove

yup do include safre , specially the hug and kiss day😳
ya ya i knw i m mad for such scenes and specially whn they are on kisha😳

hehe razzzieee... even i am mad for such scenes just coz of KiSha...
i just hope in reality also they show it fast enough!!!😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Who hav not commented on urs ss pleade yarr u said that u will update on sat
Well I would love all these days in urs ff but how will u include ha kd aur kiya are not with eachother
I hav commented on ur ff check out
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shubhraupadhyay


Who hav not commented on urs ss pleade yarr u said that u will update on sat hehe... i know i had promised but i had also said in my PM ki i wont update untill she coments... MEH hasnt commented... she is my 1st frnd on this forum...sentiments u see! so would lyk her to comment... but she hasnt...i dnt noe if she is busy or doesnt like it !!

Well I would love all these days in urs ff but how will u include ha kd aur kiya are not with eachother
I hav commented on ur ff check out ohh that u leave it to mee...! i read it... and i replied also check it out!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its totally up to you...:D. writers freedom! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ssafi


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Hmmm melon ( meh ) okkk I guess she would be busy but if she comment tom then u hav to update as soon as u can bcoz tom is sat okkk now I m going bye bye meet u tom if.u update 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ssafi

hehe razzzieee... even i am mad for such scenes just coz of KiSha...
i just hope in reality also they show it fast enough!!!😳


yup i m really waiting for that day to come😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 5

"Sometimes when I say I AM OKAY I want someone to look me in the eyes, hug me and say NO YOU ARE NOT"

__________In Royal Academy___________________________

As weeks turned into months everyone got used to KDs presence not being there well everyone except Kiya. Little did the others know that she is living in the world of her dreams. Waiting and thinking maybe this all is just a nightmare and she will wake up soon and find KD just standing in front of her saying "chicklet where are you lost?" People around did realize something was wrong with her but no one was close enough to her anymore to come behind her and talk with her. RV kept trying but Kiya being her bitchy self asked him to leave her alone for a few days. He was upset as he thought he won't be able to full fill KDs promise but he respected her request and left her alone. She was breaking little by little. One day as the buddies were talking about KD Kiya enters the classroom.

Samar: Piddi KD bhai ke bina tuje khali khali sa nahi lag tha kya?

Piddi: haan par kya kare uska future toh acha hoga na. toh aadat dal na hi padega!

Panchi: yaar uske bina thoda incomplete sa lag tha hai

Ranveer: muje kabhi nahi laga ki mein us KD ko miss karuga after all these months I still haven't found a guy who can fight with me like him.

Juhi: OMG ranveer KDs enemy also is missing him what can I say? I better update my FB status.

Samar: Juhi yaad hai na tune promise kiya tha ki u would take matters seriously from now on and not take everything as gossip?

Juhi: samar kya karu? I am trying my best to ignore KDs absence but it's not that easy especially after New Year's party and his letter.

Bobby: haa yaar uske jaise planner bhi koi nahi hai...Plus uske bina hamara gang empty empty sa hai.

Juhi: (finally notices Kiya standing there) Kiya... We are talking about KD you want to join?

No one realizes the hurt in Kiyas eyes as they were busy in their own world expect Piddi who suddenly thinks Kiya doesn't look alright. Something is wrong he thinks as he sees Kiya running out of the classroom.

Mean while Kiya who was standing quietly listening to the conversation realizes how much his absence is affecting them and she starts to feel guilty. She feels her whole world would crumble any moment now. She was in tears before she realized and she ran to her hideout the locker room. She for the first time without her realizing starts shouting the things out loud that were running in her mind.

"God if u exist then why are you doing this with me. His thoughts never fail to leave my mind that to with boards hardly 3 months away. Can't you see how much I love him as well? I just wish once I get a chance to tell him. Where are you stoneface? Kitna time hogaya I haven't seen your smile or heard you call me chicklet. I miss all of it KD please come back. I want you to hold me so I can feel safe. Are you still in love with me or have you found another girl? Each passing day is so hard to survive without you."

She breaks down as she remembers the way she had insulted him and also told him that she hates him. If only he knew that hate is the farthest thing she feels for him. She had just said it so it can hurt him a little as well. That reminded her of her cousin Tina why hasn't Tina called me yet? She thought. What is wrong with that girl... Can't she even do such a small favor for me? (Little did she know her cousin was trying her level best to get KD to fall in Love with her)

Piddi had decided to follow Kiya as he sensed something was wrong remembering KD bhai telling him on the phone to always keep a watch on Kiya and not to let her fall in trouble follows her up to the locker room and hides. He stood there watching Kiya breaking down he was so surprised to see The Kiya Gujral like this he felt like going to console her but knew better and just stood and listened to her crying hysterically. He realized he has to do something as KD bhai is also not in peace out there. He is worried about Kiya and also upset as he thinks Kiya doesn't love him. Piddi thought KD has to know about Kiyas feelings but he can't just tell him that. He needs to find a way out. But what can he do? As he doesn't even talk to Kiya. He just knew that he has to tell KD at least about her state. He owes him that much at least for solving everything between him and Bobby.

_______________________IN DU__________________

Weeks were slowly passing but for KD it was as if time had come to a standstill. Every girl came by and introduced themselves but all he could think about was his chicklet. How was she? Is RV taking care of her? Is piddi good to her? That was all that was running in his mind. Meanwhile Tina has been trying consistently to catch KD's attention but he always seems to ignore all her small attempts. Enough she said its time I go and introduce myself she thought to herself.

She walked up to KD.

Tina: KD please wait!

KD: what do you want? (With full arrogance)

Tina: hi I am Tina Gujral and I am requested to help you out with all the portion you have missed.

(KD deep in thought) did she just say Tina GUJRAL? Is she related to his chicklet? He has to know. Plus she is assigned to help him right so he might as well ask.

KD: you are from the Gujral family? You got to know Kiya right?

Tina (irritated but quickly thinks of a plan): yeah I am her cousin. Her reputation isn't that great. People in the family don't respect her they think she is only behind guys.

KD (angry that someone had insulted his chicklet in front of him): TINA mind your language she isn't a bit like that. She has saved my life and I owe her my entire life.

Tina: So she has got you too with the *oh I am so innocent I don't know what I ever do wrong act* as well?

KD: just shut it. But do you know how she is?

Tina: I haven't talked to her since ages but I'll find out and let you know. So friends?

KD was about to walk away. No way could he be friends with such a girl.

Tina: wait wait look I am sorry but Kiya has never treat me right she always called me a DM chick.

KD (all confused): DM?

Tina: Down-Marketed.But as I still have to help u catch up what wrong can it do to just be friends. I could be off help to you with the Kiya matter as well. I can see you are in love with that spoilt brat am sorry I mean Kiya.

KD (thinking maybe he should give it a try and at least she can help other girls stay away from him): okay friends. But you so have to make sure these girls stay away from me.

Tina starts laughing and thinks to herself *finally became friends. Just wait and watch Kiya Gujral how your KD become mine plus he is damn hot she might as well make good use of his innocence. Help him catching up was a fantastic thought.* "well done Tina Gujral." She says to herself. She walks away thinking *will it be too difficult to get KD to fall for her? whats in that Kiya so much that i can see pain and love for her in him eyes I wonder!*

PRECAP: Tina falls in love with KD as she realizes the actual meaning of love. Piddi calls KD to inform him of Kiya's weird behavior recently and finally Tina calling up Kiya her cousin.

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hi guys... i am sry for the late update shubh...and i want a extra long comment for this chapp... so guys how is it? next update on page 16!

so please comment!!! :)

Edited by safi_kisha - 12 years ago

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