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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 8

Kiya Gujral POV:

I was walking up and down the room as my plan starts from tomorrow and I wasn't sure if it will work or no…..

Tina entered the room. "Kiya what are you doing up so late…?

Kiya: what do mean?

Tina: Its 3 o'clock Kiya. Go to sleep we have long day tomorrow and remember its rose day as well…so KD will get many rose from other chicks as well. As all the girl have the hugest crush on him.

Kiya: what? OMG! Stoneface is this famous? In girl?

Tina: stop getting jealous he never gave anyone attention.

Kiya (jealous): whatever…. I hope everything is set for the plan? Roses…? Chits….? And girls?

Tina: yeah everything is ready…. Now let's sleep we need to wake up early tomorrow remember?

Kiya: yeah…. Goodnight Tina.

Tina: Good night.

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KD entered the college to see it all decorated. He wondered what the occasion was, so he asked one of his class mates who told him it was Rose day. .

"oh god I really hope no girl comes near me as today as I just can't help but miss Kiya" he thought "I wish you were here Ms. Kiya Gujral" he said out loud by mistake (Kiya who was hiding heard about it and smiled.) He was look around and the whole college was filled with roses. He was upset and suddenly a girl appears with a white rose and a note and gives it to him.

"White Rose for peace. Stoneface how can you just leave without even talking to me idiot I am sorry and this rose is to say that I am ready to forgive you if you forgive me

-chicklet"

KD was confused as hell. Who could have played such a joke on him? "Oh who else other than the famous Tina Gujral" he thought and went searching for the girl. On his way another girl came by and handed him a bunch of roses telling him that she loves him and would want to date him. (Kiya who was nearby was angry as hell as she never thought a girl would have so much guts to try and steal her stoneface ) and then sudden he was surrounded by chicks. He was so pissed off he was going to say something but Tina came in and save him. She took him away.

KD: thanks a lot Tina. I don't know what I would have done. How can girls be so desperate yaar? I mean don't they just get I am not interested?

Tina (laughs): Oh I know you are only interested in Ms good-two shoes aka The Kiya Gujral.

KD (blushes): just shut up… but that reminds me I want to ask you why did you play the prank with the white rose?

Tina: what do you mean? I haven't done anything.

Meanwhile another girl passes by and gives him a yellow rose with a note.

"Yellow rose for friendship. I am ready KD to be your friend, your buddy. You were the person I really want as my friend or maybe more. Will you be my friend?

-chicklet"

KD: what the hell is this Tina?

Tina: how will I know? I am just as confused?

KD: this all seems like Kiya but how can it be her. I mean she is in Mumbai and is happy.

Tina: I don't know anything. Please don't talk about her. I don't like it.

KD: but you are my friend so you have no choice but to put up with all this as Kiya is part of my life. Even though she doesn't love me. The most beautiful part I must say.

They went to attend their lecture. Once it was finished another girl passed by but as she was afraid just dropped the rose and note and went ahead. KD went and picked it up as he was curious to see what this has to say and secretly hoped his chicklet was here.

"Red for love. KD you want if you want to find out more just come to the abandoned class room. You will find out what I have to say for this.

-chicklet"

He ran to the classroom as fast as he could as he was now sure that his chicklet was here. He just hoped his heart was saying the truth. As he entered the class room it was decorated and that too with rose and the scene was beautiful. His eyes were searching for the girl who did all this. And suddenly his chicklet came into view. He was looking at her. His thoughts kept changing from how is she here? To she looks so beautiful. Both were just standing and staring. A few minutes passed and this time it was KD to speak.

KD: c-chick-l-let? (He stammered as he was still in a state of shock)

Kiya: haan KD it's me! What did you think? You would just leave without even talking to me? You couldn't even come and say goodbye? What is-'

KD: Kiya it's not what you think-

Kiya: please let me finish, you have said all you wanted in that so called letter. I have a lot to say. How can you think KD that you mean nothing to me? KD what did you think your leaving will make my life easy? No god damn it. It was a lot harder for me to live with it. I used to turn around just in the hopes to see you in the class in the usually place but you wouldn't be there. I tried a lot KD but I could forget you. Everything about you affects me in the worst way KD. Whatever you do I always notice. Why did you think a sorry couldn't make it up for me KD? You think all of the moments we had were my way for time pass? No KD I remember everything. I loved all the time I have spent with. Time goes by fast when you are around. The beach when you defended me for the 1st time against my sister then the jungle where you were there to defend me again and the leap of faith and everything else that had happened between us were the best moments of my life. KD u always thought I hated you but you don't know one thing KD that hate and love have a thin line. Yes, Mr. Keshav Desai I love you so much. I don't know when I fell for you KD all I know is I fell for you hard and when I saw that you were no more around me, something in me died, it was terrible- (Saying all this she finally has tears in her eyes.)

KD couldn't see his chicklet hurt he moved forward and held her. He was the happiest person one can think of. He had his love of the life in his arms and he finally felt complete.
KD: kiya please don't cry. I am sorry for hurting you like this but I really love you and seeing you like this is tearing me apart.

Kiya: KD I am so happy to be with you here.

The feelings of happiness was clearly visible in both of their eyes. They were finally in each other arms where they had always belonged. Kiya was staring at him so cutely. That KD could resist himself anymore his face moves closer to her and Kiya just closed her eyes. He pecked her on the check and she turned pink.

KD: you look so cute when you blush Kiya!
Kiya (blushes): KD please call me chicklet I want to hear it in your voice I have been dying to hear it.

KD chicklet…I love you more than my life.

Kiya: don't get life in between as you should know your chicklet wouldn't let anything happen to you.

KD: how are you here kiya?

Kiya tells him everything right from her family problems to the way her mom insulted her. KD listens to her quietly but he had a burning anger in his eyes. How can a person threat her like that, could a mom do this to anyone? KD hugs Kiya as she weeps into his shoulders in the process wetting his t-shirt.

Kiya: I am sorry KD for crying life a baby

KD: Kiya sweetie get used to me cause now that I know you love me I don't plan on letting you go so easily.

Kiya (blushing): d-di-d you just call me s-s-we-ee-t-t-y-y?

KD: get used to it.

KD : so how long you are in Delhi?

Kiya: for 15 day. (And becomes sad again)

KD: what's wrong Kiya?

Kiya: abhi toh we became one and now again we will be separated

KD: Kiya don't worry please not now atleast. We have 15 days together to discuss it.

Kiya smiles slightly and they sit on the bench nearby talking about all the things that have passed and were laughing at their stupid fights. KD suddenly looks at his watch.

KD: let's go Kiya its 12 at night, before some catches us as then we will be in trouble.

Kiya: oh no it's that late. We better leave.

They rush out on the road. KD gets his Bike and asks Kiya to hold on tight. Kiya being herself just hold him slightly but the sudden jerk on the bike and its speed scared Kiya to death and she hugged him from behind. They soon reach Kiya's place and Kiya is still holding him tightly out of fear. Kiya we have reached he says. No response. Kiya this time he is louder and she finally responds and gets down the bike. KD says his good bye as Kiya is about to leave but Kiya has other plans. She kisses him on the cheek and whispers "I love you Keshav Desai you are finally mine and I won't ever let you go" and runs off blushing.

KD was still lost to realize that she is gone. Smiles to himself and thinks "what am I going to do with myself" chuckles and drives his bike off.

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I AM SORRY GUYS I KNOW IT HASNT COME OUT WELL...BUT I WANTED TO TRY A DIFFERENT KISHA CONFESSION AND I JUST MESSED IT UP...BUT DO COMMENT AS I LOVE TO READ YOUR COMMENTS.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Are u kidding me that u messed it up it was too gud
I just luved it
How kiya gets jealous that kd will get so many roses by girls
I loved the idea of giving roses with letter
Aah tina saved kd from girls
Kd thought tina is doing prank with him
Finally they met
Aah kiya bursted out his feelings
15 days will be of kisha
Aaah bike ride kiya hugged kd from behind
A cheek kiss so cute
U better update it fast 😆
Edited by shubhraupadhyay - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shubhraupadhyay

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Are u kidding me that u messed it up it was too gud really shubh? i am so glad you liked it.
I just luved it i am so glad you liked it.
How kiya gets jealous that kd will get so many roses by girls hehe after all she never expects anything like this to happen
I loved the idea of giving roses with letter i wanted to do something different and suddenly the idea came to me.
Aah tina saved kd from girls
Kd thought tina is doing prank with him
Finally they met
Aah kiya bursted out his feelings
15 days will be of kisha yea after which Kiya will have her boards and the career choices
Aaah bike ride kiya hugged kd from behind
A cheek kiss so cute hehe i always wanted a KiSha scene like this...i am a sucker for cuteness!
U better update it fast 😆 shubh i thought u had exams...about about them? hehe but il try and update soon!! :)😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
OM freakin'G!!!!!
its awesome
mindblowing!!!
I just loved it to d core!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Safi🤗
Such an awesome chappy.
I loved it the core.👏
The letters were just awesome.😳
All the chicks surrounded KD and Kiya getting jealous and angry😆
And their confession.😳
seriously you are such an good writer.
The way you portrayed it was super awesome.👍🏼
KD kissing her cheeks and calling her sweetie .How so sweet.
Kiya hugged KD during their bike ride and she was still holding him tight after coming to her place.😳
Totally a fantabulous chappy.😃
Update soon.
🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kishaforever

Safi🤗aishu🤗
Such an awesome chappy. thanks a lot!!!
I loved it the core.👏 i am really glad u liked it.😊
The letters were just awesome.😳
All the chicks surrounded KD and Kiya getting jealous and angry😆 hehe i have always imagineed KD this ways and even Kiya getting jealous!!😆
And their confession.😳 u liked it? i was so confused...!!
seriously you are such an good writer. you think so? i am so happy to hear it come from you as you urself are an fabulous writer.
The way you portrayed it was super awesome.👍🏼
KD kissing her cheeks and calling her sweetie .How so sweet.
Kiya hugged KD during their bike ride and she was still holding him tight after coming to her place.😳 hehe yea cute KiSha romance

Totally a fantabulous chappy.😃 thanks again!

Update soon.
🤗 ohh i will as soon as i get time🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Saf🤗
This chap was soo awesome👏
Loved each part of it😃
Esp the confession and bike ride😳
Update soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cutiepie0412

Hey Saf🤗

This chap was soo awesome👏
Loved each part of it😃
Esp the confession and bike ride😳
Update soon👍🏼


shwetz *hugs*
I am soo glad u commented finaally...i had been waiting...!
I am really glad u did!!!
Adorable kisha na? This is what i expect future KiSha too be...although much better!
Ohhh i will!:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
The last chapter i read was 2nd and now you reached 8th..WOOOW 😲
Anyways your SS was so damn good that i read it in one go 😉
All your updates were amazing, you're a great writer!
I love how you portray Kd's and Kiya's emotions!!!
Coming to the 8th update just BEAUTIFUL!!
Kiya surprising him with the chits and roses 😳
You say you messed up the confession? :O No dear it was mind blowing!
Can't wait to see how they spend their 15 days together!
KiSha is just <3<3<3
Edited by amiee125 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: amiee125

The last chapter i read was 2nd and now you reached 8th..WOOOW 😲
Anyways your SS was so damn good that i read it in one go 😉
All your updates were amazing, you're a great writer!
I love how you portray Kd's and Kiya's emotions!!!
Coming to the 8th update just BEAUTIFUL!!
Kiya surprising him with the chits and roses 😳
You say you messed up the confession? :O No dear it was mind blowing!
Can't wait to see how they spend their 15 days together!
KiSha is just <3<3<3


thanx a lot yaar...i am reallly glad u liked it so much😳
you thinks so?? i though i had messed up the entire chappy!!
hehe il upload whenever i get time...!! :)
i noe i tooo luv KiSha

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