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alcantaranjr

@alcantaranjr

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Mais,God Bless You !! Amazing OS <3 Beautifully Written <3

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@RKDramebaaz

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

I was seriously grinning from the start to the last line through out this OS. It is magical and amazing! Dynamic!

The first thing that I would LOVE to appreciate is the way you write to capture my attention! I never drown into books, unless its Pride & Prejudice, the way I did in this OS. It started off so well, with amazing description of the Two Lonely Men. You kept the character so intense and - I am at loss of words - amazing.

You vocabulary, flow of sentences, structure. Everything was perfect. The descriptions were not so deep that it would bore the reader, neither were they so - how do you say it - formless? It was simply a beautiful read!

Okay, I will shut up with the literary analysis! Basically, I LOVED THIS OS! It was just so BEAUTIFUL!!! I read it last night, and yes, I WAS JUMPING ON MY BED!! It was so good! It was actually better than the Kiya-Panchi one! Because this was superb! And because its on KD and RV! And because it has dialogues! I LOVE IT!

I love how they started off with sad talk, and then ended laughing! The moon winking was adorable! It even told off that the girls were trying to make them jealous by dancing with others, and when they were gone, they were lonely without them! It was mindblasting woman! And that is why all he anger for not telling me! LMAO!

I loved the "nahhh" Part the MOST!

They are such teenagers with intense hormones! 😆

See, I commented! Ab khush hoja! And am SORRYYY for all the drama I did! I was just playing around. =\ Mujhe nahi pata tha mazzak karna allowed nahi hain!

Khair! Wrte more soon :)

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

"Shouldn't you be the one saying that?"

"Yeah, like you should be the one telling her that you actually love her and not the other thousands of girls you date!"

KD gave it back to him and they looked at each other in silence.

"Naaahhh!" They said together and looked back at the moon, laughing while they did so.

^^ As usual brilliant. Just how RV-KD are... this time, no arguments on what you think and what I think. Loved it!!

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Lekha Ishwar

@-Destiny-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Mr moon is the common antidepressant for me KD and ranveer.

I loved it maisuu

Lekha.

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akshara

@--Akshu--

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Mais

Aww! Akshi! 🤗 Thank you so much for this adorable comment! 😳 And a happy belated birthday! Seeing birthday siggies in your dabba, that's why! 😃

ur welcome mais shahiba

and tu kuch jyada hi belated hogai

actually not ur fault i got my b'day siggy 12 days after my b'day

anyways thank ku

m gone crazy

@prach-abe yaar!!!!kya drama karthi hai tu???

teach me yaar dude!!1 mean i am a drama queen (friends call me thAT!!!!)par seekhne se u becum more perfect man

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@RKDramebaaz

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: dmg_mjht_d3_rox
ur welcome mais shahiba🤣 and tu kuch jyada hi belated hogai🤣🤣🤣 actually not ur fault i got my b'day siggy 12 days after my b'day🤣 anyways thank ku🤣🤣🤣 m gone crazy🤣🤣

@prach-abe yaar!!!!kya drama karthi hai tu???🤣🤣🤣teach me yaar dude!!1 mean i am a drama queen (friends call me thAT!!!!)par seekhne se u becum more perfect man

🤣 🤣 🤣 *Takes a bow* Thank you!!! I dont tutor for free! Mujhe badle mein kya milega? 🤣 🤣