FF:'Teri Meri Love Story'(Last Part updated Pg19)23May2018 - Page 15

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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely update,.Some awesome time between Thahaan and then their child is also born ... I am feeling sad abt the ff ending part but I am sure u will write a new one and there is also another one that u r already writing.
Waiting for the last part now...


P.S. There was no way I cd have guessed the answer to ur question. But loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
That was the answer. I'm sure that you did not expect anyone to answer it correctly.

Naughty Preeti! I can expect only her to gift someone something like this. Bihaan lost control.

Thahaan are so hot. That scene was so detailed. It must not have been easy to write this with the scene running over and over in your mind.

The last part was really good. Thahaan's baby must be so cute.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: R_Ritz

Wow Saakshi it's awesome... Loved thahaan romance. ..don't worry.. Romantic scenes jitna likhte jaogi utna improve hota jayega... But avi jo likha hai wo v mast hai... And thahaan ka daughter... I guess uska name thahaan kya rakhenge? Aur last part? Means ff khatam ho jayega.. No problem.. Tumne ek new start kiya hai so waiting for that update.

thank you rinka actually mere liye romantic part likhna bahut mushkil tha q k sahi words nhi milte kuch bhi galat na lage Isliye likhne se darti hu pr phir bhi likhne ki koshish ki tumhe pasand aaya ye sunkar accha laga aur haa last part thahaan baby ko naam aur baki bhi sab clear kar dungi thanks once again 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Ahaana_sid

Finally it's a happy ending 4 our thahaan .I know one chapter is left .phir bhi i can feel the joy and happiness in their life .

And we got the answer of ur question also😉
I miss thahaan alot😭
Thahaan's romance were cute and awesome😳
We can expect more from ur new ff he na.
Me too eagerly waiting 4 the final chapter😊

thank you haa thahaan ab bahut khush hai pr abhi last part baki hai joh main bahut jald update karungi

Aur new FF joh maine start kar diya hai koshish karungi K uame aur acche se likh saku 😳
Thank you once again
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Kar_Nan

Lovely update,.Some awesome time between Thahaan and then their child is also born ... I am feeling sad abt the ff ending part but I am sure u will write a new one and there is also another one that u r already writing.

Waiting for the last part now...


P.S. There was no way I cd have guessed the answer to ur question. But loved it

thank you Aisha I am happy k tumhe ye part accha laga
Aur woh Question mujhe laga tha k sab guess kar lenge 😆 aur thank you soo much itna saath dene k liye 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Toulup

That was the answer. I'm sure that you did not expect anyone to answer it correctly.

Naughty Preeti! I can expect only her to gift someone something like this. Bihaan lost control.

Thahaan are so hot. That scene was so detailed. It must not have been easy to write this with the scene running over and over in your mind.

The last part was really good. Thahaan's baby must be so cute.

actually mujhe laga tha koi n koi sahi answer de dega pr shayad kisine itna aage ka nhi socha hoga

Haa ek priti hi hai joh aisa kuch gift de sakti hai warna pandey family kuch jyada hi sanskari Banti hai aur Bihaan ne Control khona hi tha q k akhir thapki itna tadpa joh rahi thi usey 😳

Bahut mushkil tha likhna q k joh soch rahi hu usey words me kaise likhu samjh nhi aa raha tha phir bhi ek koshish ki i hope k sabko pasand aayee 😊

Aur abhi last part baki hai joh bahut jaldi update karungi 😊 thank you upasana is ff ko pasand karne aur Tumhe kya accha laga humesha mujhe ye detail me batane K liye 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 25 Last Part

After 4years

Thapki: avni, avni kaha ho

Thapki poore ghar me avani ko dhoondh rahi hai pr kahi nhi milti

Bihaan ek table K side me

Bihaan: avani aap yaha kya kar rahe Ho beta

Avani:Papa chup Ho jao awaaj nhi Karna nhi toh mamma ko pata chal jayega

B:thik hai mamma se chupna hai toh humare saath chalo

Bihaan avani ko apne saath le jata hai apne room me

Avani:papa ye koi chupne ki jagah hai mumma Hume dhoondh legi

Bihaan:woh ek baar room me Dekh chuki hai ab nhi aayegi

Avani:gazab aap toh bahut smart ho

B:haa akhir hum papa kiske hai

Aur dono hug karte hai

B:ab aap batao q chup rahe they

A:arrey mumma mujhe bilkul khelne nhi deti hai sirf padai padai ab itna koi padta hai kya aur upar se mujhe kuch samjh bhi nhi aata

B:kya samjh nhi aata

A:papa A,B,C mumma padati hai toh kuch samjh nhi aata sb bhul jaati hu

B:batao hum padate hai tumhari mumma sahi se nhi padati hum aise padaenge K tum nhi bhulogi

A:ok

B:toh bolo A for Avani

A:kya

B:haa bs bolo

A: A for Avani

B: B for Bihaan

A:(happy hoker) B for Bihaan

B:C for (thinking) haa C for Chuk chuk gadhi

A:papa chuk chuk gadi

B:haa tumhari mumma ko hum pyaar se chuk chuk gadi bulate hai

Avani hasti hai tabhi thapki room k Bahar se dono ki baate sunti hai

B:ab bolo tum bhi

A:C for c

Avani bolne hi wali hoti hai k thapki aa jaati hai aur avani Dekh leti hai pr Bihaan nhi dekhta usey pata nhi chalta

B:tum phir bhool gai bataya n abhi K C for Chuk chuk gadhi

A:(thapki ko Dekh darte Huey) No papa

B:arrey haa

Avani Bihaan ko shoulder pr pet kar thapki ki aur dekhne k liye kehti hai aur thapki ko Dekh Bihaan chup Ho jata hai

Thapki Gussey se chali jaati Hai uske peeche Bihaan, thapki thahaan room me

Bihaan room me aata hai aur thapki k pass jata hai

B:chuk chuk gadhi

Thapki angry look deti hai

B:thapki woh hum avani ko padha rahe they

T:dekha maine kaise padha rahe the

B:sorry thapki pr woh tumse darr rahi thi humne toh bs usey thoda khush karne k liye

T:bihaan main pareshaan Ho gayee hu tum dono se, pata hai k woh tumhare is laad pyaar se kitna bigad gayee hai bilkul padti nhi aur uska room morning se ab tak 4time Saaf kar chuki hu Main, jab dekho tab toys ko room me bekherti rehti hai

Bihaan thapki ko back hug deta hai

B:sorry thapki pr woh bacchi hai 4yr ki toh hai Masti toh karegi tum bevajh pareshaan Ho rahi ho

T:pr Bihaan

B:chuk chuk gadhi itna bhi stress mat lo ab ek smile do

Thapki nhi maanti tabhi avani room me aati hai

A:mumma I m sorry ab kabhi Masti nhi karungi

avani ko Dekh thapki ka gussa melt Ho jata hai

T:ohh mera baccha I m sorry joh mumma ne aap pr itna gussa kiya

Dono hug karte hai thapki avani K forehead pr kiss Karti hai aur avani thapki k cheek pr Bihaan dono ko Dekh raha hai

B:achaa ab maa beti mil gaye haa Bihaan side me jata hai aur naraj hone ka natak karta hai

B:mujhe toh koi pyaar nhi karta

Thapki aur avani dono hustey hai aur thapki avani ko Bihaan k pass le jaati hai, avani Bihaan ka haath pakrti hai aur usey kneel down hone k liye kehti hai, bihaan avani K pass aur avani Bihaan k cheek pr kiss Karti hai

A:I love you Papa Avani mumma aur Papa dono se bahut pyaar karti hai

Bihaan avani hug karte hai thapki bhi dono ko hug Karti hai

B:aur papa avani aur uski mumma dono se behad pyaar karte hai

Teeno happy bahut khush

Afternoon

Door bell bajti hai thapki door pr aati hai, door pr curior boy hai

Thapki: ji kahiye

Boy:maam Mrs Bihaan Pandey K liye ek gift packet hai

Thapki:main Mrs thapki bihaan pandey hu

Thapki packet leti hai aur apne room me jaati hai, thapki packet open karne hi wali hai k tabhi Bihaan aata hai

Bihaan Thapki k Haath me packet dekhta hai

B:ohh toh Mrs thapki bihaan pandey ko unka gift mil gaya

T:gift matlb ye tumne diya hai, Or q aur aaj kya hai, aur kya hai isme

B:arrey chuk chuk gadi ab Dekh bhi lo tumhe tumhare saare sawalo ka jawaab mil jayega

Thapki bahut happy hai aur curious bhi bhi ye soch K bihaan ne kya gift diya hai.
Thapki packet kholti hai usme ek book hai,book cover pr "Teri Meri Love Story " title hai

T:bihaan ye kya book hai love story hai

B:(chidd se) thapki ek baar dekho toh

T:ok dekhti hu

Book K front page pr writer ka naam likha hai "Thapki, Bihaan

T:bihaan yeh kya hai aur Maine toh koi book nhi likhi

B:chuk chuk gadhi tum bahut sawaal poochti Ho, jab tak dekhongi nhi tab tak tumhe kaise pata chalega K kya hai

Tabhi vasu thapki ko aawaz lagati hai

T:haa maa aai, Bihaan mujhe Jana hoga main aakee dekhti hu

B:ye maa ko abhi kaam tha Thik hai jao

Thapki vasu k pass jaati hai

T:ji maa aapne bulaya

V:haa beta main aaj maaji aur tumhare Bauji K saath Mata K jagran me jaungi toh tum ghar sambhal Lena Waise bhi sabhi summer vacation pr Bahar gaye bs tum aur Bihaan nhi gaye

T:maa agar hum bhi chale jaate toh aap Sabka dhyaan koun rakhta jab bhabhi aur Shradha aa jayegi tab hum bhi chale jayege

V:woh toh Thik hai pr pari K Jane se avani bilkul akeli padh gayee hai, koi khelne wala bhi nhi hai uske saath Isliye thoda ziddi Ho gayee hai

T:aap sahi keh rahi hai pr kuch din me pari (Dhruv ki beti) aa jayegi

V:pr beta tumhe nhi lagta K Avani ko ek aur saathi ki zarurat hai joh uske pass uske saath rahe

T:toh maa hai toh sahi Pari hai Vini aur shanu (priti Suman K baby) hai

V:main kuch aur kehna chahti hu pr shayad tum samjh nhi paa rahi chalo Thik hai hum abhi evening me hi nikal jayenge

T:thik hai maa

Thapki itna kehkar apne kaam me lag jaati hai

Evening

Vasu,Dadi aur Bauji jagran me jaate hai, bihaan apne room me tabhi thapki aati hai pr Bihaan usey room me entry nhi lene deta door lock kr Bahar aata hai

B:kya kaam hai

T:kya hua mujhe ander q nhi jaane diya

B:woh hum kuch nhi, chalo yaha se

Aur uske shoulder pr haath rakh usey le jata hai

Night me

Thahaan dinner kar rahe hai

B:thapki avani kaha hai

T:woh dinner karke soo gayee hai apne room me

B:(thinking) matlb koi disturb nhi karega

T:kya kuch kaha

B:nhi kuch nhi

Thahaan dinner khatm karte hai thapki kichten me aur Bihaan apne room me

Thahaan room

Bihaan ne poora room decorate kar rakha hai tabhi thapki k Payal ki aawaz aati hai aur Bihaan room ki lights off karta hai

T:ye kya hua abhi toh lights on thi, Bihaan tum kaha ho

Thapki room me aur lights on hoti hai room ko decorate Dekh thapki khush hoti hai

T:bihaan ye kya hai

B:surprise

T:kis baat K liye

B:mujhe laga hi tha thapki k tum bhool jaongi aur dekho bhool gayee

T:kya bhool gayee K aajke hi din humne ek dusare se apne pyaar ka izhaar kiya tha

B:tumhe yaad tha

T:haa

B:toh pehle q nhi bataya

T:pehle bata deti toh ye surprise kaise milta

Thahaan hug karte hai

B:I love you chuk chuk gadi

T:I love you too Mere bel buddhi

T:toh batao mere liye kya gift hai

B:wahi joh tumhe mila tha afternoon me

T:woh book arrey haa usey toh main Dekha hi nhi

Bihaan thapki ko shoulder se pakar K bed pr bethata hai aur Haath me book Leta hai

B:toh chalo saath me dekhte hai pr ek shart sirf padte jao, koi sawaal nhi hum sbkuch Baad me batayenge

T:thik hai

Thapki padhna start karti

Thapki Bihaan k school ki 12th class ki Pic ka sketch bana hai aur aage likha hai

29 jun

Aaj mujhe ek alag sa ehsaas hua pata nhi usey aisa kuch lagta hai yaa nhi pr mujhe aisa lag raha hai k hum dono sirf dosti nhi, dosti se badhkar kuch hai, Pr kya hai
Thapki

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12 Oct karwachouth

Aaj maine bhi vrat rakha q rakha pata nhi kiske liye rakha woh bhi Mann manne se inkaar kar raha hai,q main uske liye ye sab Karna chahti hu
2nd jan

Sheena ka Birthday aur mujhe behad gussa aa raha hai ye ladka Bihaan haa Bihaan jab issey mera kisi aur ko dost banana accha nhi lagta toh khud kaise us Sheena ka friend bana firta hai aur usey surprise gift,isliye Meri ladai Ho gayee Bihaan se aur ab main usey baat nhi nhi karungi

14 Feb

Aaj Valentine day aaj school me sb girls and boys ek dusare ko rose aur gift de rahe the, kuch boys mujhe bhi rose aur gift Dena chahte they pr Bihaan bodyguard K jaise mujhse chipka hua tha aur us bel buddhi ne mujhe Payal gift ki aur yellow color ka rose diya kehta hai bestfriend hu main uski pr mujhe lagta hai k hum friends se badhkar hai

(sketch Bihaan thapki ko gift Dete huey)

Thapki padhne K Baad bihaan ki aur dekhti hai aur Bihaan usey aage padne K liye kehta hai

Thapki kuch page skip karti hai

12 may

Mujhe joh baat itne Dino se pareshaan kar rahi thi, mujhe pata chal gaya k mere Mann me bihaan K liye joh feelings hai woh kya hai, pyaar karti hu Main usasey I m in love with bihaan

(Bihaan thapki ki aur dekhta hai aur woh shy feel Karti hai)

Page skip

Aaj maa ne Meri aur Bihaan ki shaadi ki baat ki, joh din mere liye sabse khushi ka din tha wahi mere liye sabse Dukh bhara raha q aaj Bihaan ne maa se ye kehkar humari shaadi K liye mana kiya k woh mujhe pyaar nhi karta woh mujhe sirf apni dost manta hai

(sketch: Bihaan thapki ko forehead kiss karte Huey)

Next page
(sketch:thahaan first kiss)

Finally bihaan ne confess kar diya k woh mujhse pyaar karta hai pr ab ktni problems hai pr Bihaan mere saath hai toh sb thik Ho jayega

(sketch:thahaan love confession scene thahaan hug)

Thapki book band kr Bihaan ko dekhti hai

T:bihaan ye Meri dairy me Maine sab likha tha

B:aur Hume dairy mil gayee aur humne iski book banakar humesha k liye inn yadon ko apne pass save kar liya

T:Pr ye sketch

B:jis tarh tumhe aadat thi n thapki apni yaadon ko dairy me likhne ki Waise hi Hume aadat thi k hum un palo ko joh humare behad kareeb hote they aur khaas hotey they, hum unke sketch banakar rakhte they

B:waise ek baat kahe Hume pata nhi tha k tum humse school time se hi pyaar karti thi aur Hume kabhi bataya nhi

T:school time se pasand Karti thi woh pyaar nhi tha

B:accha ab jhooth bol rahi Ho pr sach me kitne bevkuf they hum apne pyaar ko humesha dosti smjhate rahe aur kitna waqt tumse alag rahe

T:pr ab hum saath hai aur humari choti si family hai (Bihaan ko hug Karti hai)

B:aur hum chahte hai k iss choti si family me ek aur naya mehmaan aaye

Bihaan se alag Ho uski aur dekhti hai

T:matlb (questionable eyes se)

B:matlb K tum ek no ki buddhu Ho

T:bihaan (uske shoulder pr Marti hai)

B:haa aaj maa kya keh rahi thi

T:kya keh rahi thi

B:woh jab tumhe samjha rahi thi k avani ko ek dost ki zarurat hai joh uske pass rahe saath rahe

T:haa toh, Pr tumhe kaise pata

B:q K humne sb sun liya tha

T:toh

B:toh Mrs thapki Bihaan Pandey avani ko ek bhai ya behan ki zarurat hai
(aur hasta hai)

Thapki Sharma jaati hai aur Bihaan k arms pr Dheere se Marti hai

T:tum kabhi mujhe pareshaan Karna chhoroge nhi n

B:nhi kabhi bhi nhi q k tum humari pyaari si chuk chuk gadi ho joh humari biwi bhi hai pr uske Pehle humari best friend hai

Ye kehkar Bihaan thapki ko hug karta hai

T:I love you Bihaan maine kabhi socha nhi tha k hum saath honge

B:I love you too Meri chuk chuk gadhi aur hum humesha saath rahenge iss Janam me hi nhi har Janam me

T:aur tumhara ye gift mujhe behad pasand aaya

B:Gift nhi thapki ye humari yaandein hai q K ye Teri Meri Love Story hai

Itna kehkar Bihaan thapki hug break karte hai,thahaan eyelock aur Bihaan thapki ko kiss karne aage aata hai aur dono kiss karne wale hote hai k door pr knock hota hai

Bihaan irrited hota hai jis pr thapki ko hasi aati hai

T:main abhi aai

Thapki door open karti hai aur avani ko dekhti hai

T:beta kya hua aap soye nhi

A:mumma mujhe aapke saath sona hai

Aur avani tezi se Bed pr jaker so jaati hai

Thapki bed pr aati hai aur Bihaan ko dekhti hai pr dono avani ko forehead kiss karte hai aur good night karte hai
Avani dono K beech me soyee hai

Bihaan thapki se kiss mangta hai pr thapki mana Karti hai q k Avani unke saath hai Bihaan puppy face banata hai aur thapki hasti hai

A:mumma aap papa ko good night kiss de sakte Ho main kuch nhi Dekh rahi

Thahaan shock

T:badmash ladki aur soo jao

B:aa jao hum humari gudiya ko sulange

Aur Bihaan avani ko apne arms me Leta hai

Bihaan bhi avani K saath sota hai aur thapki dono ko thapki deti hai aur dono K forehead pr kiss karti hai

End

OK guys story khtm mera sabse pehla ff aur main nhi likh pati agar aap Sabka support nhi milta thank you soo much

Aur agar aapko Meri stories pasand hai toh please mera new ff "Tera ishq mera junoon" read Karo aur mujhe aise hi support karo

Thanks

😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
It's not right to read someone's diary.

The way Bihaan is making Avni learn abcd is good. But what will D stand for?

Thapki had to hear that Chuk chuk gadi part. Now even she will know about that. what if she says that in public?

Avni is naughty. After all she is Thahaan's daughter.

It was a very sweet update.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Toulup

It's not right to read someone's diary.

The way Bihaan is making Avni learn abcd is good. But what will D stand for?

Thapki had to hear that Chuk chuk gadi part. Now even she will know about that. what if she says that in public?

Avni is naughty. After all she is Thahaan's daughter.

It was a very sweet update.

I know k kisi ki dairy padhna Thik nhi hai pr thahaan husband wife hai aur unka relationship bahut hi jyada strong hai aur in sb formalities se aage hai

And "D" For Dadi aur woh Bihaan hai joh har alphabet ko kaha kaise use karte hai usey acche se aata hai

Thapki ne suna joh bhi Bihaan ne Avani ko sikhaya woh chuk chuk gadi wala part bhi aur woh thahaan ki daughter hai kuch thapki jaisi kuch Bihaan jaisi

Aur baki joh bhi questions hai mujhe lagta hai un Sabka jawaab dene k liye ek aur part likhna padega pr nhi ye last hi rahe accha hai

Thank you upasana ab tak itna support karne k liye 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Aisi sweet story ka aisa hi sweet end hona chahiye tha. U r very gud with words. I like this diary and sketch idea. Bohat khoob likha. Aagay b yunhi likhti rehna. Tumhare andar aik acha writer basta hai usko yunhi hawa lagati rehna. We will keep supporting u 🤗

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